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[EroticBengali]

Hi all,

New here!

I was wondering what everyone's thoughts were reading stories on hijabi women breaking social and cultural taboos and venturing away from their conservative nature and norms?

I've never written before but would love to start writing about this topic. Just wondering everyone's thoughts ideas suggestions?

Thanks All

 

[sirhugs]

Welcome. I hope that you enjoy your vsit, and feel encouraged to return often.

Have you tried reading some similar stories over on the story side, and in particular any comments? That might give you a sense of what readers think.

Here, you might get useful opinions and suggestions from writers or forum regulars (looking at you, @Brandnewbuddy)

 

[Rob_Royale]

Any story about a woman who grows out of situations that restrict her sexuallity or self expression will be received pretty well around here. We have a writers challenge every year called the Pink Orchid that is specifically about female empowerment.

I was wondering what everyone's thoughts were reading stories on hijabi women breaking social and cultural taboos and venturing away from their conservative nature and norms?

This sounds like a fine idea. I could see this sort of thing happening when a family moves to a more liberal location and the woman sees the freedoms other women have there and wants that for herself.

It's getting the conservative husband on board that's the problem. Or perhaps, he's moved to a more liberal country for a reason. Maybe he wants to see his wife on a beach in a bikini, being admired by other men. After a lifetime of cultural conditioning, he has to convince her?

 

[Carnevil9]

I have a bit of a kink for that. I'm probably not the only one. It can be hot in porn, that's for sure!

 

[BeechLeaf]

If you want to read a really good story on this theme, I recommend bi_cathy's I Take It off For You. It's very sensitively done, complex, slow, and beautifully erotic.

 

[EroticBengali]

Love it all thank you. Just written my first story (pending review) regarding a hijabi woman whose gone through a divorce and had her first sexual encounter.

Hoping to use this a platform for her to explore all kinks and taboos from race play to wearing outfits culturally forbidden to everything else I can think off.

 

[dirk2024]

Love it all thank you. Just written my first story (pending review) regarding a hijabi woman whose gone through a divorce and had her first sexual encounter.

Hoping to use this a platform for her to explore all kinks and taboos from race play to wearing outfits culturally forbidden to everything else I can think off.

I like the thought of a man or woman falling for her just based on her eyes. How alluring they are and the potential lover becomes enraptured. Then, the discovery when it comes time to remove the hijabi. The lover does the removal, instructing the wearer to remain in place while he/she does the unveiling. That can be very erotic/romantic.

 

[EroticBengali]

That's hot. For me as I've always grown up I've always loved the focus on the face and the make up. How the make up can be applied to give off different looks..modest...pious...slutty.

My focus will be on a Bengali lady called "Rana". Newly divorced. Comes from a sheltered family/upbringing.had always been reliant on her husband. Now alone. Exploring life in the UK and all the taboos and forbidden pleasures the UK and western life have to offer.

My first story is about her experiencing her first sexual encounter post divorce...with her husband's nephew (sons best friend).

Contemplating either writing losing her anal v next (very taboo) or her first experience with a white man.

Love to hear your thoughts on all.

Thank you all for such a warm welcome to the community as well.

 

[dirk2024]

That's hot. For me as I've always grown up I've always loved the focus on the face and the make up. How the make up can be applied to give off different looks..modest...pious...slutty.

My focus will be on a Bengali lady called "Rana". Newly divorced. Comes from a sheltered family/upbringing.had always been reliant on her husband. Now alone. Exploring life in the UK and all the taboos and forbidden pleasures the UK and western life have to offer.

My first story is about her experiencing her first sexual encounter post divorce...with her husband's nephew (sons best friend).

Contemplating either writing losing her anal v next (very taboo) or her first experience with a white man.

Love to hear your thoughts on all.

Thank you all for such a warm welcome to the community as well.

Depending on how many stories you want to write...or one very long one...

I'd have her break one taboo at a time. So sleep with a white guy first, then later lose her anal V card to him on their second tryst. Just make sure he's gentle for her first time. I've read some stories on here where the men are rather...abrupt. It's no wonder so many women don't want anal.

I'm not familiar with the culture, but you could get a series of stories where she breaks one taboo at a time, with titles like:

1. "Rana Comes Into Her Own"
2. "Rana Takes Charge"
3. "Rana Does Dallas"

Sorry...got off track with that last one.

 

[Carnevil9]

Depending on how many stories you want to write...or one very long one...

I'd have her break one taboo at a time. So sleep with a white guy first, then later lose her anal V card to him on their second tryst. Just make sure he's gentle for her first time. I've read some stories on here where the men are rather...abrupt. It's no wonder so many women don't want anal.

I'm not familiar with the culture, but you could get a series of stories where she breaks one taboo at a time, with titles like:

1. "Rana Comes Into Her Own"
2. "Rana Takes Charge"
3. "Rana Does Dallas"

Sorry...got off track with that last one.

I did that with my recent incest series. I had a sister gradually seducing her bother, one sex act per story. First story she strokes him off, second she blows him, etc. I thought it worked well and made it easy to write.

 

[EroticBengali]

https://www.literotica.com/s/rana-the-hijabi

My first work is live!!! Please please please give it a read and let me know your thoughts. Thanks

 

[EroticBengali]

https://www.literotica.com/s/rana-the-hijabi

Please let me know your thoughts

 

[sirhugs]

Congratulations.
Now that you're no long a "virgin", keep writing.
What will you write next? A sequel? A prequel? Another story set in the same setting/"world"?
or something quite fresh and a bit different but still in your wheelhouse?
For the same category or try another?
What fresh kinks or sex acts might you try so as to not be accused by readers of just repeating yourself? Though thee are a few prolific Lit writers that basically rewrite the same story with a few new details over and over, fresh "twists" generally make it better.

this thread is here to help.

 

[Rob_Royale]

https://www.literotica.com/s/rana-the-hijabi

Please let me know your thoughts

I'll check it out sometime this weekend.

 

[Reshbod]

https://www.literotica.com/s/rana-the-hijabi

My first work is live!!! Please please please give it a read and let me know your thoughts. Thanks

First of all, you're putting so many writers on here to shame for getting a story out so quickly. Second, I love this idea since I know almost nothing of that culture other than a lot of stereotypes you hear from the media. Also, I love a taboo or forbidden fruit type story where a person goes against what is considered the norm.

I'll post my comments on your story shortly, but not here since this isn't a critique board.

Good job of gettng your first story up!

 

[EroticBengali]

First of all, you're putting so many writers on here to shame for getting a story out so quickly. Second, I love this idea since I know almost nothing of that culture other than a lot of stereotypes you hear from the media. Also, I love a taboo or forbidden fruit type story where a person goes against what is considered the norm.

I'll post my comments on your story shortly, but not here since this isn't a critique board.

Good job of gettng your first story up!

Thank you so much for your kind words. Im hoping to push her boundaries for what's considered the norm hopefully in the next few stories.

Looking forward to your comments. Thanks again.

I was so worried I'd get laughed off but everyone's been so nice.

 

[dirk2024]

Thank you so much for your kind words. Im hoping to push her boundaries for what's considered the norm hopefully in the next few stories.

Looking forward to your comments. Thanks again.

I was so worried I'd get laughed off but everyone's been so nice.

I have it flagged to read later, but one thing I observed with this one that you'll want to add to future submissions is Tags. Tags help people find your story when they search for similar subject matters, plus they help potential readers decide whether or not they want to read your story.

For instance, say you're writing a cheating wife story, or some other kink, that turns some people off. They might vote your story at a 1, which you don't want, or leave a negative, unconstructive comment, which won't be fun to read either.

Constructive comments, positive or negative, are fine. But some folks here will leave ugly comments that leave you with nothing to learn from.

Here is the field below from the submission page. Type in something from your story. MF (for male-female sex) and hit
the "add" button. People use tags like, "lesbian", "siblings", "noncon"....all of which will either draw a reader in, or tell them to click away.




Then, when readers arrive at your story they see the Story Info box on the right and click on the tags button (see below) and the story tags will appear. You might see something you REALLY want to read about...or see something that will steer you away before you get invested in the story, then frustrated when you squick.