TightsDude
Virgin
- Joined
- May 1, 2017
- Posts
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Story link-https://www.literotica.com/s/hosiery-holiness-ch-01
I'd like to get some feedback on this story since I'm planning on turning this into a series and I want to improve. This is the first story I've been able to complete in several years. It's both a mother-son incest and fetish story. For the most part, I'm happy with how it turned out, other than forgetting to remove some parts from the Word document and a few minor details (I've already sent an edited version to correct those). However there's a big info dump at the end that I'm unsure on. I know that too much exposition can be bad, but I needed to provide some character context for the mother and I didn't want to make the story too much longer than it already was, especially after the sex scene.
I'd like to get some feedback on this story since I'm planning on turning this into a series and I want to improve. This is the first story I've been able to complete in several years. It's both a mother-son incest and fetish story. For the most part, I'm happy with how it turned out, other than forgetting to remove some parts from the Word document and a few minor details (I've already sent an edited version to correct those). However there's a big info dump at the end that I'm unsure on. I know that too much exposition can be bad, but I needed to provide some character context for the mother and I didn't want to make the story too much longer than it already was, especially after the sex scene.