Fiasco (OOC)

Perhaps it seems a tad obvious, but I think I'll start with a Romantic relationship with Yeishia.
 
Recorded Last Rider. I will post our character details in the third post on the first page of this thread as we pick them.

Five 6's

Four 5's

Two 3's

Three 1's

Relationships

1 Partnership

3 CRIME

5 SECRET

6 SHOWBIZ
 
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Apollo dropped out, so it's just the three of us now.

I hope you don't mind, Yeishia, but I'm going to cut ahead of you just this once so that I can establish a Rivalry relationship with Last Rider's character.

Now it's your turn, Yeishia, to pick your relationship with my character.

You can choose:

Partnership

Criminal

Secret

or showbusiness.
 
I'm thinking that my rivalry with Rider should be contenders for the same heart.

I would like my criminal relationship with Yeishia to be me blackmailing her over a drug addiction.
 
Hi I got your message Ravenloft . I haven't heard from Rider in a while I have no idea what he has written. Your idea sounds good.

Do we. Have an IC thread? Or did I miss it.

I suggest you begin and tell me what the senerio is and I'll jump in.

I am. On vacation ATM not on Lit to much..I haven't written a word..I cannot.

I will give this my best shot.

Link me when it's starts.
 
I just saw the post you madE

A drug addiction? MY character? Really?

Shoot..what drug are you thinking ?

I back read should of done that first

So I'm in a romantic thing with Riders char and in a rivalry with yours . Your blackmailing mine over some drug addiction

Sounds fine though I warn you I haven't a clue about drugs.:eek:
 
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I looked for IC thread but couldn't find it Raven. Link me when it's up please someone.:rose:

Shell be addicted to coke.! I'm thinking she allied him to feel her up for a line at one point.:D
 
I have not set up the IC thread yet, we are still developing the story actually, so everything is still being posted to just this thread.

I don't have any experience with drugs either, just what I have seen in the movies.

How about a drug you have to inject? (Morphine perhaps) So, your character can be 'innocent' about how its done, because my character has always set her up with what she needed, going so far as to give her the injection and just let her lay back and enjoy the high. So, the feeling of 'providing' for her lead him to grow feelings for her. But now she wants to go straight, and has stopped visiting his shitty little flat. That motivates him to go out and look for her, thinking that maybe he can draw her back.

So, if you're good with a criminal relationship between my character and yours, then it goes back to Last Rider.

Rider, now you get to define your romantic relationship with Yeishia. It can be:

1 One’s beloved, one’s oblivious
3 Husband and wife, for now
5 Someday soon. Maybe tonight.
6 Estranged and you both hate it

And the current dice pool is as follows:

Five 6's

Four 5's

One 3

Three 1's
 
Noted back in the third post on page one, Rider.

Okay, Yeishia, it's back to you. There are the following choices left:

Five 6's

Four 5's

Three 1's

Which means you can chose the following for our criminal relationship:

1 Dealer and buyer (Yeah, I edited this one to fit better.)
5 The muscle and the mouth
6 Criminal accessories, both

OR you can chose a NEED:

1 To get in...
5 To get even...
6 To get High...

OR a location for the story to take place in:

1 PRivate
5 HELLHOLES
6 Showbiz

OR an object relavent to the story we tell:

1 PERSONAL item
5 MISPLACED object
6 Disco related (Seedy sort of items)
 
Lol I should point out that I have not chosen anything yet Raven...you have.

So please continue...

You wanted

Dealer and buyer... so I will go with that :rose:

No 1

P.S. what is hellholes ?
 
Noted: Yeishia is buying drugs from me .

I will forego picking my rivalry definition until I can use the last die in the pool which will let me pick I want it to be.

Instead, I will take my need as To Get Even...

That leaves:

Two 1's

Three 5's

Five 6's

For Last Rider to use on Needs, Objects or Location.

Needs:

1 To get in...

5 To get even... (Suggestion, on my next pick I would like to pick "in a way that everyone can see." for a 6.

6 To get high... (Suggestion for Last Rider, "On something true and real, for a change" for a 6. Suggestion for Yeishia, "where someone will help you get straight" for a 5.)

Objects:

1 Personal
5 Misplaced (Suggestion for Last Rider "Wedding ring inscribed "Forever and ever after." for a 5)
6 Disco

Location:

1 Private
5 Hellhole
6 Showbiz
 
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Now, if you don't manage to define a relationship, need, object or location, it is considered undetermined and therefore, we can decide what they are during the story. So, say we do pick a hellhole as the central location that the story takes place in, we could determine that it's my characters shitty rented appartment or something. Also, the entire story does NOT have to take place there. Only the climax is supposed to happen at the determined location.

So, each of us gets a turn to set up a scene. Last Rider would go first... Lets say he wants to have the scene in a nice restaraunt with Yeishia. Then you pick up and play the scene as though the two of you are having a nice meal and talking about... Well, whatever you would like to talk about. That scene comes to an end when you WANT it too, but don't force it, if it feels like it's at an end, end it and pass the 'scene setup' to the next person, Yeishia.

Yeishia then could set up any sort of scene she would like and whoever she picks to play it with interacts with her in character. That would come to an end then I would take a turn. In this way, no one gets left out of the story for too long.
 
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Yeishia, Hellholes are:

1 Cramped and dirty cell in the station house
2 Burned-out building in Hell’s Kitchen
3 Parking lot, broken glass, flecks of blood
4 In a teeming, fleeing crowd
5 The back row of a smoky porno theater
6 “Let’s call it what it is: my grave.”

(Basically any place you DON'T want to be stuck in.)
 
I like the suggested wedding ring with inscription, plays very well into Yeishia's need for money for drugs.
 
Oh wow, I didn't even think of her character potentially doing something like pawning it for drugs... Ouch! Was that what you were thinking? If so, I think we could let you take the two fives to lock that in.
 
that works for me, I just kind of imagine her trying to hide it from my char but when that goes missing it's kind of the catalyst.
 
Okay, I've noted that, and that will allow Yeishia and I to make two picks in a row as well, just to keep things fair.

That puts it back to Yeishia with these availiable dice (You get to pick the catagory AND definition this time, to balance up with Last Rider's double pick):

Two 1's

One 5

Five 6's

1 To get in...

5 To get even...

6 To get high... (Suggestion for Last Rider, "On something true and real, for a change" for a 6. Suggestion for Yeishia, "where someone will help you get straight" for a 5.)

Objects:

1 Personal
5 Misplaced
6 Disco

Location:

1 Private
5 Hellhole
6 Showbiz

And if you need the definitions for any of the options, let me know and I will copy/paste them from the first page of the thread.
 
5 & 6. ( Misplaces & to get high

Er ...in hellhole ?

I also like showbizz as she's a dancer getting high what you think.

There you go.:rose:
 
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Showbiz, how would you like to define it?

You can pick

1 Inside a celebrity’s stained white Cadillac
5 A peep-show booth in Peacock’s off Times Square
6 In the spotlight, on the big night

Or just leave it blank and fill those details in during the story.

Celebrity's cadillac makes very little sense to me.

Being stuck in a peep show booth would be extreemly tragic, and very interesting to play off of. I like this personally because you'd have room to paint a beauty with flaws, fears, ambitions. A real diamond in the rough.

Having you being in the spotlight on the big night would be quite interesting too. I like this one too, its not as inherantly rough, but you could definately paint a beautiful woman on the cusp of greatness Sort of like a Marylin Monroe.

Which do you think would give you the biggest pallet to pain your character on?

If those don't appeal to you though, we could all brain storm together what the showbiz location is. I'd love to hear your ideas.
 
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I dunno this is the part of this I do not care for, being stuck in a box with things Ii am not familiar with.

What is a peep show exactly?

.This will be the stretch for me writing something that I would never in a million years write as a rule...part of growing as a writer I'm hoping.

Lol I haven't a clue what we are doing really :eek:

So far you have chosen everything so I guess you can continue Raven.
 
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