Friday writing prompt - Slap

EmilyMiller

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Interpret this how you will - mantis-shrimp porn is apparently a thing 🤷‍♀️ - but I’d be grateful if we could stick to scenarios where the person (or thing, or inanimate object) being slapped (regardless of where they are slapped, regardless of what is slapping them, regardless of gender) has actively consented, or it’s obvious that such a thing is customary in their relationship.

Please be creative. But me? I’m gonna stick to the classics.

Please try to be less than 500 words!

Other writing prompts here.



There is a perfect moment. A moment of almost stillness. A moment when even the knowledge of what is to come, the anticipation - or even longing - for what is to come, can weirdly morph into a calm, Zen-like state.

I feel like that now. Lying face down on the couch, my middle across his lap. His feelings are obvious from the hardness pushing against my stomach. My eyes are open right now, I’m staring at my hands. My fingers are spread on the leather surface. Its smell and its crinkles are familiar. I’ve stared at them in this position so many times. At least until I’ve had to scrunch my eyes tight shut in an effort to cope.

I’m already prepared. My skirt has been lifted and the material now lies over my blouse, I can feel its slight weight against my back. My panties have been pulled down to around my knees. The crotch was sticky, maybe he’ll put them in my mouth later if I’m a good girl.

Calmness, serenity, centeredness. And yet my heart is racing. And yet my nerves are in an elevated state. And yet my breathing is deep. I’m a ball of contradictions; body expectant, mind accepting.

It’s beginning. Soft caresses first. His palm traces the contours of my butt. His fingertips trail lightly over my skin, making me tingle. I move my knees a little further apart and he takes the hint. His digits stroke my outer lips. I want them to part my inner ones. I want them thrust inside me. But there is an order to things, a protocol to be followed.

Again he strokes my ass-cheeks. I murmur as electricity races through me. I know the routine, I know the sweet transition from gentle to severe is approaching. It’s going to be soon.

“You ready, honey?” he whispers quietly.

He’s such a sweetie. And I know this is for me much more than for him. It’s him indulging me, a treasured tribute for his princess. I know he’d do anything for me. I nod, and with that movement suddenly my calm is displaced by surging arousal and tremulous desire. It’s going to be now. Now.

I close my eyes. I hold my breath. I fancy I can feel the breeze of his arm swinging before the crack of impact. Before the jolt of pain that makes me gasp. Before the shock that makes me flinch. Before the ache that thrills me and never gets old. Before that first, heavy, stinging, loving slap. A slap that has me craving more.

A slap that has me saying, once I get my breath back, “You can go harder, darling.”

He never goes hard enough at first!
 
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A student recalls her audition for her University’s sex team:

"I remember when I auditioned for the team, I saw a situation that completely got under my skin. It still does, in fact. Way beyond anything I had imagined before. It was a couple that just graduated this summer, so they seemed quite grown up to me. The girl - Bea was her name - was wearing a cotton summer dress and she was sitting on a chair in the middle of the room and she'd pulled up the skirt of it so everyone could see she had her hand down her pants. But her hand was still, completely still, and she was looking up at her partner with this extraordinary look. It was a mix of such longing and, not shame exactly, but I don't know how to describe it, maybe a uselessness. Like a look that acknowledged her uselessness, you know what I mean. And it was so astounding and kind of thrilling to see someone who seemed, to me at least, to be so sophisticated and competent have that look. She was exactly the kind of woman you can get kind of obsessed with. Because she was so cool and, you know, you just wanted her to be your friend. And she had that look on her face because the game was that she could only rub herself after her partner had slapped her. I mean, he wasn't, you know, really clocking her or anything. He wasn't hurting her. But it was a definite slap in the face. It was a shock, it stung. She felt it. And after she was slapped she'd desperately rub her pussy for, like, 5 seconds and then she'd have to stop until the next slap. And so she didn't want it but also she was just waiting for the next slap, waiting for the permission to make her pussy feel good again - and she knew everyone was seeing her in that situation. But her pussy felt too good. She accepted it because of her pussy. You could tell by the way she rubbed herself, it was so kind of feverish and desperate, like she was trying to get the most out of her 5 seconds of pleasure. Of course the more he slapped her, the closer she got to her orgasm...it was so fucking hot I agreed I would masturbate for the team right after they finished. It was one of the quickest times I've made myself cum.”
 
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In his dream he was behind Dani, on his knees. His thighs slapped against as he thrust at her, again and again, with a wet, meaty sound. Slap, slap, slap. It shouldn't have sounded sexy, but it did.

"Spank me!" Dani urged. Or maybe she didn't. It was hard to tell, because it was a dream. Maybe he decided it by himself. She'd never asked to be spanked when they were together, after all. But somehow the idea was there, and his hand was rising and falling, making the same slapping sound each time it struck her arse.

The sound was the realest part of the dream. As his mind realised that he was dreaming, Dani's naked body seemed to become more ephemeral. He thought that maybe the spanking was too much, maybe that was why she was vanishing. But he couldn't stop. Slap, slap, slap went the sounds. Flesh against flesh. His thighs against hers. His palm on her arse. Slap, slap, slap.

He came awake with a sudden start. The dream slipped away, taking Dani's warmth with it. All that was left was his aching cock, the lonely darkness all around him, and the slap, slap, slap of the wind blowing a big palm leaf against the window.
 
A slap that has me saying, once I get my breath back, “You can go harder, darling.”

He never goes hard enough at first!


I find this to be a very truthful part of your little scenario.

I've been told this often enough... that I need to quit being so cautious, that it's SUPPOSED to sting!

I think I even referenced it in my new story... with a little reference to an almost sub-audible whisper of "harder"
https://www.literotica.com/s/alice-meets-pinky
 
"Meg! Meg, there you are! He's coming here. He's coming here Meg. What do I do? I'm-- I don't know what to do! What will he say? What will *I* say? Oh my god, I can't breathe. Meg, I can't breathe, he's coming here and-- and-- What should I do? Tell me what to do, Meg! Say something! You have to think for me, Meg, I can't think, I can't breathe, I can't--"

*SLAP!*

"Ow! Thanks, I needed that."
 
I find this to be a very truthful part of your little scenario.

I've been told this often enough... that I need to quit being so cautious, that it's SUPPOSED to sting!

I think I even referenced it in my new story... with a little reference to an almost sub-audible whisper of "harder"
https://www.literotica.com/s/alice-meets-pinky
Yeah - TBH, I prefer to say harder than the opposite 😬.
 
A glittering jewel, a kaleidescopic dream. Mandi flitted across the dance floor with all the grace and ease of the dancer she was. Her dress sparkled under the low lights as her piercing gaze settled upon me, her face inscrutible as ever. The music pulsed in dark polyrhythms. Her hand settled on my arm, cold as she stroked along my burning skin.

"You're back," she said. "Couldn't get enough, eh?"

I bit back a snarl. "You caught me unawares."

"Sweetie, I did warn you..." Her antennae twitched as what I could only describe as bemusement flitted across her alien features. "So, what, you want another try?"

"Yeah."

"Dude, c'mon. Let's just dance instead."

"No."

She pressed a claw to my abdomen and snickered as a hiss escaped me. "I was holding back."

"Nah, bitch, I can take it."

Her smile evaporated. Her freaky pupils danced before settling; her lips barely a line. "What'd you call me?"

Despite the courage now rapidly escaping me, I puffed up. I was a man. She was, what, maybe 5'4"? Couldn't weigh more than 100 pounds. Her sucker punch had fucking hurt, but it had been a sucker punch. Really, how much worse could it be? Besides, Thad and the gang were watching, and there was beer on the line.

"Bitch?" It came out almost as a question, mealy-mouthed and dry. I cleared my throat. "Bitch."

Mandi nodded. She took hold of my shoulders and nudged me to the side. I glanced behind me. Everybody had cleared out of the way, the whole place watching. The wall was maybe twenty feet behind me. The music kept going, but the place was otherwise deathly silent. Save for a couple snickers from my bros.

"You want full strength?" I didn't like how calm her voice was. Especially the way her antennae were twitching like crazy.

"Yeah."

"M'kay."

When I woke up five days later, my world was pain.

And that, kids, is why you don't call mantis shrimp bad names.
 
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A glittering jewel, a kaleidescopic dream. Mandi flitted across the dance floor with all the grace and ease of the dancer she was. Her dress sparkled under the low lights as her piercing gaze settled upon me, her face inscrutible as ever. The music pulsed in dark polyrhytmns. Her hand settled on my arm, cold as she stroked along my burning skin.

"You're back," she said. "Couldn't get enough, eh?"

I bit back a snarl. "You caught me unawares."

"Sweetie, I did warn you..." Her antennae twitched as what I could only describe as bemusement flitted across her alien features. "So, what, you want another try?"

"Yeah."

"Dude, c'mon. Let's just dance instead."

"No."

She pressed a claw to my abdomen and snickered as a hiss escaped me. "I was holding back."

"Nah, bitch, I can take it."

Her smile evaporated. Her freaky pupils danced before settling; her lips barely a line. "What'd you call me?"

Despite the courage now rapidly escaping me, I puffed up. I was a man. She was, what, maybe 5'4"? Couldn't weigh more than 100 pounds. Her sucker punch had fucking hurt, but it had been a sucker punch. Really, how much worse could it be? Besides, Thad and the gang were watching, and there was beer on the line.

"Bitch?" It came out almost as a question, mealy-mouthed and dry. I cleared my throat. "Bitch."

Mandi nodded. She took hold of my shoulders and nudged me to the side. I glanced behind me. Everybody had cleared out of the way, the whole place watching. The wall was maybe twenty feet behind me. The music kept going, but the place was otherwise deathly silent. Save for a couple snickers from my bros.

"You want full strength?" I didn't like how calm her voice was. Especially the way her antennae were twitching like crazy.

"Yeah."

"M'kay."

When I woke up five days later, my world was pain.

And that, kids, is why you don't call mantis shrimp bad names.
Bravo 👏
 
"Meg! Meg, there you are! He's coming here. He's coming here Meg. What do I do? I'm-- I don't know what to do! What will he say? What will *I* say? Oh my god, I can't breathe. Meg, I can't breathe, he's coming here and-- and-- What should I do? Tell me what to do, Meg! Say something! You have to think for me, Meg, I can't think, I can't breathe, I can't--"

*SLAP!*

"Ow! Thanks, I needed that."
A rom-com classic.

Occasionally spiced up with a pause, a frown, and, "Again!"
 
I am enjoying creating second person POV micro fiction


You brace yourself as she inhales. "You're not listening," she says. Her words slapping your face hard. Your whole body goes rigid. Your eyes tear. Your cheeks burn. Shame crashes through you.

You gasp. Your eyes sting. There's that grumbly feeling in your belly, that sickening drop when you realize she's been right along and you've been wrong.

She waits, letting it land hard. You asked for this truth. This moment of reckoning. Now it's settling into your bones, your soul, and finally you understand you needed to feel this.
 
Sadly, my mantis-shrimp spanking story ideas are... well, non-existent, so I leave it to @anthrodisiac .

But I thought I'd give it a shot anyway, even if it's a tad more 'traditional':

He couldn't believe he was doing this. She was his analyst after all, and sure, the mistake was massive, at least 7 figures, but to spank her. Ludicrous.

Yet there she was, standing right next to him, looking like she was going to cry again. There was only one thing to do, shock her out of it. The fact that she thought it was OK to suggest a daily morning spanking to 'Keep her focused' was insane.

Never mind the HR implications.

"Well then, if you're going to do this, stop wasting time. Let's go, strip, then get over my lap!" he said, surprised by how loud he got.

Now to wait for her to realize how ridiculous this was. Then he could get her back on track, and they could get to work on a possible solution to her error.

Before he could speak, she pulled down her slacks, the thong going along with it, finally stepping out of her heels so she could get her feet out.

He gawked at her, and before he could form words, her sweater and bra followed. Then she leaned over his lap, letting out a breath she'd apparently been holding.

"Well?" she said.

He struck. The motion wasn't conscious, it was as if her snarky 'Well' lit something in him. God-damn this woman, he'd been getting chewed out for her mistake by the higher ups all morning...

WHAP. He struck again. And again. By the fourth or fifth time, he noticed the way her ass rippled when his hand came down. Again, that ripple. He'd have called it delightful, except he was in a bonkers situation and words like that hardly fit. Nuts, career-ending, stupid. Those fit.

He was pulled from his thoughts as he realized that she was starting to squirm around. Looking down, her entire bottom was glowing red.

And that is when the scent hit him, she was turned on!

"I'm sorry, I--"

"God dammit, again! Don't stop now, I'm so close!" she snarled.
 
The gasp impossible to stifle...
My hand subconsciously covering my gaping mouth.
The confession hurt, it stung far harder than any slap or punch.
My love shredded and cast asunder, revoked, my body giving up, standing a task no longer possible.
Collapsing into a crumpled husk of the person I used to be.
Everything I thought I knew, I now realised had vanished, evaporated or dissolved.
That one snarling caustically corrosive admission... Yes a slap would have been less painful.
 
Ace sprinted to the bed and shoved his cheek against the duvet, ass raised as high as his spine would allow. His alabaster cheeks practically glistened, a ray of sunlight piercing the window to illuminate the curve and swell of his buttocks as if God Himself had declared it necessary to spotlight such an eminently spankable booty.

I've been a bad, bad boy, Daddy!" Head turned, Ace glanced back at his Daddy and gave his ass the most adorable wiggle. "Such a bad boy."

Gerry grunted and pinched his brow. "Were you really, Ace? Last time you were 'bad,' all you'd done was forget to load the silverware right-side up."

"I was Daddy! And, and, and wasn't it bad that the spoons were slightly less clean than they woulda been?" Ace stuck a finger in his mouth, his visible eye the perfect picture of innocence.

With a sigh, Gerry plopped onto the bed beside Ace, the other man quivering in excitement at his Daddy's proximity. "So," said Gerry, "what did you do this time? Forget to turn the page on the calendar again? Or, let me guess, you forgot to water the plants."

"Nooooo. I was really, really bad, Daddy!"

"You burped and didn't say excuse me."

"I embezzled $44 million dollars from your company."

SPANK!
 
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