Fuck You!!!!

[smoothg103rd]

Lately I been pouring my heart out. I always knew I was ignorant but never expected no one to match it HERE. Every thing I said was the truth if u don't believe it. FUCK YOU I'm drunk and a lil emotional so what. I'm not the smartest I don't even know how to write a sentence. But I love who I am I just want u to accept me and understand the fact that I'm different.

 

[Que]

Fuck you too. ~grin~

We are all different.

Saw your post about commas. Commas are over-rated. I usually have extra ones in my sentences.

Seriously though, find a good place to get books cheap, or the library of course and just read what interests you. As you read and are exposed to sentences with good structure you will start to "hear" what sounds to be correct in your head. I am guessing speaking in a conventionally correct way is not common and encouraged in your immediate environment.

The biggest difference between you and I is that I had a mom that grew up in the country on a little dairy farm that became the city. She was embarrassed by her country flavor and worked very hard in school to speak properly. She then talked to me from the time I was a baby as an adult talks, so my vocabulary grew and I had an ear for correct speech patterns. My older sister has a masters degree in English; I don't know most of the names for rules of grammar, or sometimes why one way is "wrong" and one way is "right." If it sounds wrong when I read it back, I move the words around till it sounds right.

Just put in a little effort and time and it will come around. There's nothing about the way you express yourself now that isn't understandable. This is as good a place as any to practice. Aim for "job interview" tone and don't worry when authenticity shines through.

Sometime, for fun, I could "correct" a post or two of yours to give you examples of how you can still be you, just better. I will, of course be goofed on for doing so because editing is as much art as grammar. The grammar part I would probably make mistakes, that others would catch.

I tend to get a little over-invested in the idea that things happen for a reason and people that cross your path were meant to for better or worse. It seems like this place is good for you because it is different from your environment which you wish to change. There are probably many places you could go online or offline to interact with other people in ways that will help you grow into the man you want to be.

That isn't an age thing. I'm a lot different person than I was even 5 years ago. Growth is good. It's just awkward.

 

[smoothg103rd]

Fuck you too. ~grin~

We are all different.

Saw your post about commas. Commas are over-rated. I usually have extra ones in my sentences.

Seriously though, find a good place to get books cheap, or the library of course and just read what interests you. As you read and are exposed to sentences with good structure you will start to "hear" what sounds to be correct in your head. I am guessing speaking in a conventionally correct way is not common and encouraged in your immediate environment.

The biggest difference between you and I is that I had a mom that grew up in the country on a little dairy farm that became the city. She was embarrassed by her country flavor and worked very hard in school to speak properly. She then talked to me from the time I was a baby as an adult talks, so my vocabulary grew and I had an ear for correct speech patterns. My older sister has a masters degree in English; I don't know most of the names for rules of grammar, or sometimes why one way is "wrong" and one way is "right." If it sounds wrong when I read it back, I move the words around till it sounds right.

Just put in a little effort and time and it will come around. There's nothing about the way you express yourself now that isn't understandable. This is as good a place as any to practice. Aim for "job interview" tone and don't worry when authenticity shines through.

Sometime, for fun, I could "correct" a post or two of yours to give you examples of how you can still be you, just better. I will, of course be goofed on for doing so because editing is as much art as grammar. The grammar part I would probably make mistakes, that others would catch.

I tend to get a little over-invested in the idea that things happen for a reason and people that cross your path were meant to for better or worse. It seems like this place is good for you because it is different from your environment which you wish to change. There are probably many places you could go online or offline to interact with other people in ways that will help you grow into the man you want to be.

That isn't an age thing. I'm a lot different person than I was even 5 years ago. Growth is good. It's just awkward.

I would really appreciate if u could correct some of my posts to let me know how it should be. I dropped out in the 10th grade and after I came home from jail. ( the youth house) I went to this college program that bill gates gave scholarship too. It was to attain your HSD but still be able to collect college credits. I took a survey and found out I'm a kentic ( don't know if I spell it right) learner. Meaning I have to do something first hand to understand it. Long story short I drop out of there got back into the streets again and got locked up again. Being that I'm a kentic learner I would really appreciate it if u correct some of my posts for me. So I can learn first hand

 

[Que]

I would really appreciate if u could correct some of my posts to let me know how it should be. I dropped out in the 10th grade and after I came home from jail. ( the youth house) I went to this college program that bill gates gave scholarship too. It was to attain your HSD but still be able to collect college credits. I took a survey and found out I'm a kentic ( don't know if I spell it right) learner. Meaning I have to do something first hand to understand it. Long story short I drop out of there got back into the streets again and got locked up again. Being that I'm a kentic learner I would really appreciate it if u correct some of my posts for me. So I can learn first hand

I have no background in education, so I wouldn't know the terms. I was thinking maybe "kinetic" which has to do with energy in motion...which would fit with what you say learn in a hands on way. I looked that up and Google suggested kinestheitic which has the same latin root, so I'm guessing that's what they meant.

What I read briefly gives tips and tricks for a small child that just kind of needs to move instead of sitting still. THAT part I get, I am heavy ADHD. Likely you are too. I was a little guy and could sit still, but I ran my mouth. Still do. Teachers don't mind that, it keeps class interesting. Getting out of your seat they mind.

Somebody with an education background could tell you more about what that means to you as an adult who is motivated to learn.

My guess? Really short study sessions with freedom between and study thinks that naturally interest you.

For example you are good at dice and numbers. Read a book on counting cards for black jack. Practice that.

It isn't necessarily hands on to have someone red-ink your stuff. But the hands on part is to read what you wrote aloud and then read the "correct" version and listen for the differences.

I sent you a couple of versions of your OP (original post) to try on for size.

I gave you what I changed, why I changed it and so on. I think (but don't know) that for you it would be better if I just slipped in changes and you had to play hide and seek to figure out what you could have done better.

I learn best when I take a test and struggle. If I think, "dammit, I know this!" when I go back and look it up it sticks because my brain is craving that one piece of information and I have spot in my memory bank read to accept it.

 

[Laurel]

Lately I been pouring my heart out. I always knew I was ignorant but never expected no one to match it HERE. Every thing I said was the truth if u don't believe it. FUCK YOU I'm drunk and a lil emotional so what. I'm not the smartest I don't even know how to write a sentence. But I love who I am I just want u to accept me and understand the fact that I'm different.

You know you're in the Gee Bee, right?

 

[CandiCame]

If you're a kinetic learner, you shouldn't need your posts corrected. You're typing them out. You retain and explain information better when you're performing an action, like writing, than when you're speaking. You would communicate better via writing than via talking.

 

[smoothg103rd]

I have no background in education, so I wouldn't know the terms. I was thinking maybe "kinetic" which has to do with energy in motion...which would fit with what you say learn in a hands on way. I looked that up and Google suggested kinestheitic which has the same latin root, so I'm guessing that's what they meant.

What I read briefly gives tips and tricks for a small child that just kind of needs to move instead of sitting still. THAT part I get, I am heavy ADHD. Likely you are too. I was a little guy and could sit still, but I ran my mouth. Still do. Teachers don't mind that, it keeps class interesting. Getting out of your seat they mind.

Somebody with an education background could tell you more about what that means to you as an adult who is motivated to learn.

My guess? Really short study sessions with freedom between and study thinks that naturally interest you.

For example you are good at dice and numbers. Read a book on counting cards for black jack. Practice that.

It isn't necessarily hands on to have someone red-ink your stuff. But the hands on part is to read what you wrote aloud and then read the "correct" version and listen for the differences.

I sent you a couple of versions of your OP (original post) to try on for size.

I gave you what I changed, why I changed it and so on. I think (but don't know) that for you it would be better if I just slipped in changes and you had to play hide and seek to figure out what you could have done better.

I learn best when I take a test and struggle. If I think, "dammit, I know this!" when I go back and look it up it sticks because my brain is craving that one piece of information and I have spot in my memory bank read to accept it.

I really feel like what u said is true to me. ( is true towards me) is that better? I'm really trying to educate myself. English and social studies was my weakest points. Math and science whats my strongest. I really want to learn and I really appreciate all the help u all are giving me.

Spelling was also a weak point for me.
If spell check wasn't on my phone I'll be fucked

 

[smoothg103rd]

If you're a kinetic learner, you shouldn't need your posts corrected. You're typing them out. You retain and explain information better when you're performing an action, like writing, than when you're speaking. You would communicate better via writing than via talking.

True and my writing did get better from my first post here, am I'm right? I still got a lot more learning to do, but certain stuff won't get me to where I wanna be. That's why I ask you writers for help

 

[smoothg103rd]

You know you're in the Gee Bee, right?

Don't know what this means

 

[Que]

I would really appreciate if u could correct some of my posts to let me know how it should be. I dropped out in the 10th grade and after I came home from jail. ( the youth house) I went to this college program that bill gates gave scholarship too. It was to attain your HSD but still be able to collect college credits. I took a survey and found out I'm a kentic ( don't know if I spell it right) learner. Meaning I have to do something first hand to understand it. Long story short I drop out of there got back into the streets again and got locked up again. Being that I'm a kentic learner I would really appreciate it if u correct some of my posts for me. So I can learn first hand

In this post you have a lot of pieces of information that you are trying to get across, so the sentences get crowded.

I would do things here to de-tangle this, but that is more an editors job than because the grammar is that bad. I think it is interesting that other than things like u instead of you sometimes, your spelling is pretty good.

I would really appreciate it if you would correct some of my posts to let me know how they should be.

I dropped out in the 10th grade after I came home from jail. (The youth house.) I went into this college program on a scholarship that Bill Gates funded. The program was to attain your HSD, while still being able to collect college credits. I took a survey and found out I'm a kinetic learner. Meaning, I have to do something first hand to understand it. Long story short, I dropped out of there, got back into the streets, and got locked up again.

Since I'm a kinetic learner, I would really appreciate it if you would correct some of my posts for me, so I can learn first hand.

There are a couple of places that I would have added "that" but that would make it sound like me, not you.

If I were an editor it's a fine line between cleaning it up and writing it in a voice that is not authentic for the writer.

As far as commas, sometimes its a choice. I am debating whether there should be a comma between "it" and "if" in the first sentence.

 

[4est_4est_Gump]

10K


~woot~ ~woot~

 

[Laurel]

Don't know what this means

It means that, if you'd looked around at the other threads/discussions taking place here before posting, you're probably notice there's not a ton of unconditional love and support. You will find a whole lot of snark, flames, and lulz. And banal uninformed political discussions.

It doesn't mean the Gee Bee doesn't have a heart. It means you have to earn a place in it.

If you want effusive unconditional support and lots of and and , you should go here:
http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=27

 

[Que]

Don't know what this means

The Gee Bee (GB?) is General Board. On this site, this sub-fora is know for snark. Kindness is there but it's more a tough-love crowd, then a hand-holding crowd.

In "How To" for example, you will find more Florence Nightingale types.

You could start a thread there like, "How can I improve my grammar?" They will likely give you good advice similar to the suggestion Noor gave, and would be more patient with giving help.

Another place on the site for help is in the various authors spots. I am not sure which one fits your needs best, but they are more geared towards helping someone with a story, not necessarily editing for grammar and such.

Writing a story and having someone edit it would be a good way to identify your strengths and find areas that you need work on.

Could be a story about anything. Something that happened, something that almost happened, something you dreamed, something you want to dream.

Another thing you could consider is starting a blog on blogger or word-press. (word-press is better, I am more familiar with blogger.)

There, kind of as you have done here, you could sort of journal your day, your life, kids, whatever. It would give you more practice.

As you have noticed your posts are improving. A lot of adults write very little and get rusty. Even participating here as you have will, over time, improve your writing.

Especially if you avoid emulating my verbosity. I tend to run a lot of thoughts into a sentence which leads to all sorts of subordinate clauses, (those phrases that could be cut, signified by a comma on each end, because they add but are not necessary) and parenthetical asides, leading, at some point, into a garbled mess, that, by any objective standard, is actually a run-on sentence.

Do as I say, not as I do.

 

[Que]

It means that, if you'd looked around at the other threads/discussions taking place here before posting, you're probably notice there's not a ton of unconditional love and support. You will find a whole lot of snark, flames, and lulz. And banal uninformed political discussions.

It doesn't mean the Gee Bee doesn't have a heart. It means you have to earn a place in it.

If you want effusive unconditional support and lots of and and , you should go here:
http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=27

^^^ this.

You can see why I need an editor with experience mucking stalls.

 

[Que]

What I think would be fun (for me) is to sometimes edit your post when we are conversing, and sometimes not. If I change nothing, it either means there was nothing to change, or I skipped it.

If I do change, you have to figure out if I changed it and why. If we don't discuss it, the entire "lesson" is sub-rosa, and I avoid having my ass handed to me by either actual grammarians, or people that think they are.

If you aren't in the mood for an exercise at that moment, you just skip over it and look at a different post another day.

If you want to know why I changed something, send me a pm. You really are not far off from passable grammar when you type what sounds "right."

There are, I think, two English professors posting in the BDSM area. I am not sure if they have said so, or if I just assumed so. Their prose is a delight to read. Succinct, correct, effortless.

 

[Que]

True, and my writing did get better from my first post here. Am I'm right? I still have a lot more learning to do, but certain stuff won't get me to where I want to be. That's why I ask you writers for help.

I think it has improved as you have put time and thought into choosing your words.

 

[subdued_passion]

As Candi suggested, as a kinaesthetic/kinesthetic learner you are more inclined to learn and recall things better by doing rather than looking or reading. But I've never put much stock in the theory that any one person follows only any one particular learning style. You may favour one style over the other but exposure to all mediums is what will help build long term memory.

query spoke about how he learned the language and how he can tell when something is not right but may not be able to explain why. Grammar is the inner mechanics of machine, you may not be able to pin point what's wrong but you can tell that the device isn't working.

So, ideally for you to learn you should do lots of writing exercises and also read and listen to proper usage of the language.


Also,


FUCK YOU!

 

[Que]

^^^
See? you can hardly tell she lives in a hut in the third world and learned to read from scraps of newsprint she found blowing in the wind. That's what almost 10,000 posts in a year or two will do for you.

 

[unregistered]

 

[Que]

Yeah, spell check was no help on that one. Oddly, it has no problem with the word vernacular even though its own lexicon is limited.

 

[unregistered]

 

[Que]

Pesky spellcheck!

It couldn't help you all here because kinetic is a word.

I also had kinesthetic but spelled incorrectly. I googled "kinetic learning" and it suggested that. Shoulda snipped it from there.

In my edit I left it because it is a reasonable layman's bastardization of the correct word.

My spelling has gone downhill since getting Pale Moon (Firefox)...now, I just throw alphabet soup up there and hope its close enough to pull down the right word!

 

[subdued_passion]

^^^
See? you can hardly tell she lives in a hut in the third world and learned to read from scraps of newsprint she found blowing in the wind. That's what almost 10,000 posts in a year or two will do for you.

Hey, don't be looking down on my hut- it has wifi!

Also the way real estate prices are in my city, a hut can cost anywhere from a quarter of to a million dollars.

Subdued Passion, thank you for spelling kinesthetic properly. I was going a little bonkers.

The spellcheck keeps drawing red lines under both kinesthetic as well as kinaesthetic but I keep ignoring it. Ever since spell check came into existence I feel like I've lost confidence in my ability to spell words correctly independently.

 

[4est_4est_Gump]

Just do not let it correct you.



Keep going back and repelling it until its rite.

 

[ms_ann_thrope]

I could always use a good fuck.