Gang Bang

[Guest]

Tiggs just don't read my stuff!

It's a free country. At least, the United States, where I live and where the owners of this Adult site live, is. Sorry "Sally Ann".

 

[lexium]

It's a free country.

Sorry,

I haven't found anything that comes without a price, in our so called capitalist society. However, I do believe that Tiggs' comments maybe helpful to the development of the story.

I think that writers coming together to discuss story ideas is what this thread is about. Putting some of the rough draft for the story here allow other writers to provide helpful suggestions to make the story better.

 

[Guest]

Tiggs you are a boring. Really boring!


SallyAnn

 

[lexium]

Re: inspiring

...I will do the research and bring the results to this board.



SallyAnn

Hi,

Have you written your story yet? I, for one, am interested in reading your story. As a rape victim, I don't find the subject amusing, but I don't live in a vaccum. Write your story and post it here on Lit.

 

[juicygirl]

rape isn't funny except for the perps

Rape isn't funny except to the perps. It might be interesting though, but largely for therapeutic reasons I think. By definition the woman, or man, really isn't into it. Statutory rape strikes me as a bit of a grey area in many cases. Also, telling someone that particular ideas are offensive is fine. That's the point of freedom of speech, you don't have to respect what anyone else is saying. Especially, the government. Either way, Tiggs and Sallyann should rock on.

 

[juicygirl]

Sallyann might, however, avoid the homophobic comments. Also, if you are going to use faggot, spell it correctly.


Best Wishes all

 

[Guest]

Sallyann might, however, avoid the homophobic comments. Also, if you are going to use faggot, spell it correctly.


Best Wishes all

Again two points:

One IF (deliberate capitals) Sallyann were homophobic (s)he has a right to state that opinion.

Two I am sick and tired of people who criticise spelling and grammar. I am constantly criticised by net users for expecting orthography on the net.

Every board on here, and on many other sites, has many contributors who tell me I should not expect people to use (as a minimum) a spell checker before posting their offerings.

So I have learned that I should accept their smelling pistakes as a natural part of the use of this medium.

So an old man is always wrong.

 

[Guest]

I am sick and tired of people who criticise spelling and grammar.

Well, this is a LITERATURE site. Sure, we have the BB, chat room area, and amateur pics offered here, but first and foremost this is a literature site. Come on, the site is named Literotica. (A clever mix of literature and erotica, the backbone of the literature found here.)

I've always been a firm believer that the net should NOT be an "excuse" to become ignorant or lazy. If you're coming to a literature site, you should at least make an effort on your spelling and grammar. Lord knows I'm not the best speller in the world. I struggle with words here or there, BUT I use my spell checker a lot. Why not? Would you rather look ignorant or semi-intelligent?

Sure, this may be only the BB, but ignorance seems to find its way to the stories as well. And, nothing will make me click the back button faster than an ignorant author who can't spell. Sorry.

 

[Guest]

Please do not be sorry for using your spell checker. I would bet that more than 50% of the stories on Literotica are not subjected to a spell checker before submission. (And I do make allowances there for people for whom English is not a first language.)

P.S. Glad to see you are back; this is the first posting from you I have seen for a week or more. ;-)

 

[Guest]

P.S. Glad to see you are back; this is the first posting from you i have seen for a week or more. ;-)

Back? I didn't leave. In fact, the Story Ideas board is one of the few boards I continued to check. I just chose to stay clear of this thread. (Which I am back since I felt I had something to say here.)

 

[Ezzie]

hay tigg's wut u look like pic


lol

 

[Guest]

hay tigg's wut u look like pic


lol

Yo Momma! intrested

 

[Ezzie]

I would type some other famous bad grammar but, it took everything out of me to type that first one. I even had to go back and edit it just to make it look bad.

 

[Guest]

I even had to go back and edit it just to make it look bad.

lol

I guess to others it comes much more naturally. lol

 

[Ezzie]

What about things other than bad grammar? What about things like "I C" and "R U into this or that?" and "TTYL"

There's even a scene in "Urban Legends" where the girl about to get killed types "What room R U in? or something like that.

You can't even watch a cheesy horror movie without having to deal with "cyber talk" anymore.

Is it shorthand for the computer? I guess I'm not lazy enough to type like that.

 

[juicygirl]

Jeez, I was just criticizing a mispelled insult, so sorry. I did compliment both of them. So, so sensitive, jeez. Why isn't it justified to make fun of an insult. Like I have to be sensitive to bigoted language, talk about a weird turn from the pc crowd. I just don't know why she didn't say het. motherfuckers or pissed off father rapers. You know Attourny General Ashcroft was terribly insulted that he was being profiled as a white male christian -- man those folks sure are oppressed! So once again, Sallyann and Tiggs may rock on you guys who are so sensitive to the plight of male heterosexuals can kiss my ass! Don't get me wrong there's nothing wrong with being male or het., I even like most of them, its just that they are not a group that is terribly oppressed.

Beware the silliness,
And my poor grammar

 

[Guest]

I believe you mean Attorney General Ashcroft?

 

[juicygirl]

Oh Tiggs you badass!

Actually I meant Attourney which I believe is also a correct spelling.

Kiss kiss

 

[Guest]

Actually I meant Attourney which I believe is also a correct spelling.

If that is what you believe, then stick to your faith ...

 

[lexium]

Now this sounds like a real gang bang story idea....writers coming together to see who can gang up on whom ever with an opposing view.

If the readers don't like the bad grammer and mispelling then they want read it.

Some of the authors on the board are willing to lean a hand. Stay positive and helpful to make Lit. a better place to post and read stories.

 

[MsLinnet]

Great Story

Hi there loved the story please continue when you can you deserve the prase you have got and more

 

[lexium]

Story results

SallyAnn,

What's the status of your story?

 

[Guest]

Did it ever occure to anyone that "SallyAnn" was a man and was simply getting off on stringing you all along? I've seen this a lot on AOL in the chat rooms that develop "regulars".

 

[KJGirlie]

Didn't have time to read through all the posts to see if anyone else has pointed this out but..

You started your waiter off as having a soft length of "about 10 inches". Then when he got hard, it was "much longer". About a paragraph later he was down to 10 inches again. I would just like to point out that 10 inches is QUITE enough cock for most women and "much larger" might make sex painful..

Also, "Jamacin" would be "Jamaican". Thanks
KJ

 

[Guest]

Also, "Jamacin" would be "Jamaican". Thanks

I'm sure if you were to skim the whole thread you'd find a lot more misspellings!