Gangbang vs Train (Lineup)

[Monazwx]

Based on a thread in BDSM Talk, I'm inspired to write a story about a 'nice girl' tutor who gets it on with the football team at an end of year party. However, I'm not so sure whether to make it an all out gangbang or a lineup. I understand the appeal of the gangbang, where everyone gets to see the action, but not the lineup so much. Guys waiting outside the door to go in one by one doesn't do it for me, but may make for a more believable story. Anyone what to help me out here?

 

[lovecraft68]

Based on a thread in BDSM Talk, I'm inspired to write a story about a 'nice girl' tutor who gets it on with the football team at an end of year party. However, I'm not so sure whether to make it an all out gangbang or a lineup. I understand the appeal of the gangbang, where everyone gets to see the action, but not the lineup so much. Guys waiting outside the door to go in one by one doesn't do it for me, but may make for a more believable story. Anyone what to help me out here?

Personally I prefer the train. The action gets tough to describe in gang bangs and as for a little realism the good girl may not be up to taking 4 at once but could be convinced to get into the "line up" method at that point it's nothing she hasn't done before it's just one after another. Honestly I have never written either but from a reading standpoint the line up is preferable and more believable.

 

[Monazwx]

That's what I was thinking as well. But I'm wondering from the guy point of view, what makes guys stand in line, outside the door for cooter? Is it a privacy issue? or to make it seem less homo erotic? Just trying to justify their side, and make the story sound like sense. Thanks for responding. Anyone else?

 

[emap]

Honestly there really isn't a difference between the two. They are just two different ways to say the same thing.

Even if everyone is in the same room unless she is willing to say blow one, and take one up her ass at the same time it's going to be one guy at a time. We're not talking about a porn scene here, a real group sex scene unless the guys are into guys as well as women is going to be one at a time. Forget the guys stroking off on her while she's getting fucked. Forget the guys getting a hand from her during the sex.

It will be one guy coming to her and getting his rocks off then is replaced by a new guy. I know it's kinda boring to write that way, but it is literally how it works. The guys who have not had a turn yet watch and stroke to stay hard. If they stroke too much they get off fast, which is only a problem if he's not late in the lineup.

Now if they are not all in the same room I'm calling that odd honestly. Part of the hotness involved in being a part of the group sex is seeing all those guys being hard and ready to jump you. Seriously, what can be better than seeing all those guys ready to jump your bones?

 

[RicoLouis]

though neither or my cup of tea I thank the line up is more appealing because in a gangbang the girl is just a prop. the most she is doing is blowing a guy while two other guys bang her in the ass and pussy. some of the guys don't even make it in her as they jack off to the side and cum forward and cum on her. In a line up she would be more involved at least until she gets tired and they just keep coming. Plus in a line up the guy in front of the line could be well rested by the time his buddies are done. Dosen't have to be private neither. Kind of do it like a sex show with the guys sitting around drinking beer, playing poker for who goes next.

 

[lovecraft68]

That's what I was thinking as well. But I'm wondering from the guy point of view, what makes guys stand in line, outside the door for cooter? Is it a privacy issue? or to make it seem less homo erotic? Just trying to justify their side, and make the story sound like sense. Thanks for responding. Anyone else?

To me it's porn versus reality. As e-map was saying shit just don;t work like in the movies. I have never actually seen three guys on a girl at once. To be honest in my opinion an actual gang bang screams rape or violence. I think the chain is sexier and honestly the girl enjoys each guy individually and gets more out of it. The guy does as well as he doesn't feel as if he is being stared at or rushed, and also although not homophobic I really don't want to be that close to another guy. Never mind those guys that just try to desperately get close enough to spill their load on her because he jacked himself off to much and he's cumming. Just not an attractive scene. I'd wait my turn.

 

[Texguy84]

I'd go for the train, because it's easier to get the girl into that situation. Maybe she just meant to have sex with one guy, but maybe she's drunk or gone lust-crazy or something, and doesn't object to a second guy joining when the first finishes, then another comes in, and another and another and before she knows what's going on, she's The Little Slut That Could.

 

[Carnevil9]

I agree, the train is much sexier. But I would not have them waiting outside the door! Everyone should be watching the whole time, getting hornier and hornier. You might even consider writing it from the perspective of one of the guys (way back) in the line, watching each guy doing her and getting more and more horned up.

Another twist: maybe she tells the guys, I'll do as many of you as want to, but you each have to do it in a different way. The first few go for the obvious ones (mount her from the front, from behind, do her in the mouth, do her ass), but the rest have to get more creative. (Inverted blow job, reverse pile driver, etc.)

 

[Monazwx]

To be honest in my opinion an actual gang bang screams rape or violence. I think the chain is sexier and honestly the girl enjoys each guy individually and gets more out of it. The guy does as well as he doesn't feel as if he is being stared at or rushed, and also although not homophobic I really don't want to be that close to another guy.

Thanks so much for this, as I was wondering whether guys would feel pressure to perform based on other people being in the room with them. And since it's a team, I don't want the story to feel 'forced'.

I'd go for the train, because it's easier to get the girl into that situation. Maybe she just meant to have sex with one guy, but maybe she's drunk or gone lust-crazy or something, and doesn't object to a second guy joining when the first finishes, then another comes in, and another and another and before she knows what's going on, she's The Little Slut That Could.

Thanks, but no thanks. It's situations like those that seem more like rape to me, because the girl may feel pressured to do all of them since its all against one. Not saying no isn't an automatic yes. In this scenario, I'm thinking about is pre-planned with a fixed number of participants.

Another twist: maybe she tells the guys, I'll do as many of you as want to, but you each have to do it in a different way. The first few go for the obvious ones (mount her from the front, from behind, do her in the mouth, do her ass), but the rest have to get more creative. (Inverted blow job, reverse pile driver, etc.)

I like this! A new encounter, a different position, this story is really cumming along.

Great inputs, thanks everyone!!! Let's keep in going. *nods*

 

[Texguy84]

Thanks, but no thanks. It's situations like those that seem more like rape to me, because the girl may feel pressured to do all of them since its all against one. Not saying no isn't an automatic yes. In this scenario, I'm thinking about is pre-planned with a fixed number of participants.

I wasn't so much thinking that she didn't say no, but that she said yes because of the heat of the moment, that is, as horny as she had gotten, she decided to go for it (could be a long time fantasy of hers).

And now I've got this funny mental image of a dozen guys bringing her breakfast in bed.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

I just remembered this one joke:

a woman has sex with this guy, for quite some time. From time to time, the guy leaves the room to refresh himself and then they have more sex for a long time. After some time, the woman says "wow, Joe, you are really horny. I think this is the 8th time that you fuck me"
"I am not Joe, my name is Paul. Joe is outside, selling tickets"

 

[NASCARaddicted]

now for a real story idea:

like usual, incest came to my mind. So what about this: it is some kind of frat party. The girl is in the room, having sex with one guy after the other, train style. After some time, she wants to do a triple, so she asks for 2 guys together. However, when they come in, she is surprised - one of them his her brother ...

 

[lookingfor_ruth]

no quite sure why I'm posting this...

.....

 

[Carnevil9]

""Lisa Sparxxx is a noted American pornographic actress. She had sex with 919 guys in a single day, setting a world record. Specifically, it occurred during Eroticon 2004, a Polish convention that celebrates exactly what its title suggests, as part of the Third Annual World Gangbang Championship. This wasn't just some publicity stunt either; the coveted “World Gang Bang Record” had changed “hands” back in 2002 and 2003, when the number reached was 646 and 759, respectively""

This could be converted to a bunch of college kids doing a fund-raiser. It's like a Walk Against Cancer or something; the girls get pledges of donations for every guy they fuck in a day, and a bonus if one of them breaks the world record.

 

[avallone]

I prefer train. But I don't mind if the others watch. Actually it's nice to have an audience.

 

[soflabbwlvr]

How many guys, and where is this taking place? If you are talking about an entire football team, there aren't many rooms that can hold 30 or so guys standing around a bed.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

""Lisa Sparxxx is a noted American pornographic actress. She had sex with 919 guys in a single day, setting a world record. Specifically, it occurred during Eroticon 2004, a Polish convention that celebrates exactly what its title suggests, as part of the Third Annual World Gangbang Championship. This wasn't just some publicity stunt either; the coveted “World Gang Bang Record” had changed “hands” back in 2002 and 2003, when the number reached was 646 and 759, respectively""

This could be converted to a bunch of college kids doing a fund-raiser. It's like a Walk Against Cancer or something; the girls get pledges of donations for every guy they fuck in a day, and a bonus if one of them breaks the world record.

This reminds me on a story that I once read in a magazine, submitted by 3 girls. They spent their time at a Youth Club (they were underage for Lit). One of them suggested they could do a competition: who can fuck with the most guys. The youth club was full of horny guys ...

I think the first one dropped out early (after about 8) but the other 2 girls kept on fucking. Even though it was like 20 years ago, I still remember some details. Like for example: in the beginning they used condoms, but after some time, their pussies got dry, so they continued without condoms ..

In the end, one girl had around 35 guys, the other even got around 51. Now try to imagine, underage girls doing a train with like 51 guys ... just the thought of it made me sick.

 

[Monazwx]

I wasn't so much thinking that she didn't say no, but that she said yes because of the heat of the moment, that is, as horny as she had gotten, she decided to go for it (could be a long time fantasy of hers).

I like this part of the idea. *nods*

And now I've got this funny mental image of a dozen guys bringing her breakfast in bed.

I like this too. Being f*cked and pampered; now that's life.

I just remembered this one joke:
"I am not Joe, my name is Paul. Joe is outside, selling tickets"

Joe's a complete bastard. A smart, rich, utterly terrible bastard.

now for a real story idea:

like usual, incest came to my mind. So what about this: it is some kind of frat party. The girl is in the room, having sex with one guy after the other, train style. After some time, she wants to do a triple, so she asks for 2 guys together. However, when they come in, she is surprised - one of them his her brother ...

Oh, Nascar, you and this incest. *shakes head grinning* I'm tempted by the idea though. At first, the brother is shocked to see his 'baby sis' in that kind of position (going along with the college frat party, she's a high schooler, and this is some pledge initiation) but they both go along with it. Now you've got my creative juices flowing.

eta: I'll post on the rest of the comments after work

 

[Monazwx]

""Lisa Sparxxx is a noted American pornographic actress. She had sex with 919 guys in a single day, setting a world record.""

I couldn't imagine 919 in a lifetime, much less an entire day. Kudos.

This could be converted to a bunch of college kids doing a fund-raiser. It's like a Walk Against Cancer or something; the girls get pledges of donations for every guy they fuck in a day, and a bonus if one of them breaks the world record.

I could see it now, "but mum, it was for charity . . ."

I prefer train. But I don't mind if the others watch. Actually it's nice to have an audience.

Very cool. I may re-think this waiting outside the door thing. Just trying to see how various effects play out.

How many guys, and where is this taking place? If you are talking about an entire football team, there aren't many rooms that can hold 30 or so guys standing around a bed.

Well, I was actually thinking about 10/11 guys maximum. I think that's how many play at one time anyways. She tutors a few of the guys, and gets to know the team, who happen to win the championship, and she rewards them something along those lines.

One of them suggested they could do a competition: who can fuck with the most guys. The youth club was full of horny guys ... In the end, one girl had around 35 guys, the other even got around 51. Now try to imagine, underage girls doing a train with like 51 guys ... just the thought of it made me sick.

Sounds as if they were Messalina's in the making from a young age. It makes you wonder what they're doing now . . .

 

[donkey789]

from what ive heard

ive never been in a gb but the two that i have heard about, the guys were basicaly losers who didnt get any other pussy. one of the gangbangs a rumor was spread that the girl was a virgin.

 

[xssve]

Depends on how many guys there are, I don't know what the rules are, but there are three holes, so three guys makes a foursome, and that's all you're gonna get in action at any one time, unless she can fit two in her ass, that's the most I've ever seen, and at least one of the guys has to have a pretty long cock to pull that off, the simple logistics of the thing means that four at once is the limit.

Four in bed at once is the most I've ever experienced, MFMF and MMMF, and I don't remember any particular attention being paid to protocol - "believable" is going to depend on character development and how many characters you have time and skill to develop - with a train, you can focus on the chick, the guys can all just be cocks, except for one or two, like Joe, or alternately, taking them one at a time give you a chance to deal with each one separately.

So, technically, a gangbang is different from a threesome or a foursome, though I've heard those called gangbangs too, more than one girl would make it an orgy, though how many it takes to qualify for orgy status I have no idea, but that means that for practical reasons, turns would have to be taken: how many at once, and what holes would probably depend on the characters themselves - taking them one at a time might allow a more leisurely narrative, i.e., focusing on successive sensations instead of everything at once, and the guys laying out could potentially supply a more interesting narrative, dialogue wise - one foursome, one guy was too drunk to get it up, and ended with the nickname, "Droopy", poor fucker.

We used to laugh at this one guy in boot camp, a good ol' boy from Mississippi, every story he had started out: "me and these ol' boys was fucking this one girl this time...", lol.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

Depends on how many guys there are, I don't know what the rules are, but there are three holes, so three guys makes a foursome, and that's all you're gonna get in action at any one time, unless she can fit two in her ass, that's the most I've ever seen, and at least one of the guys has to have a pretty long cock to pull that off, the simple logistics of the thing means that four at once is the limit.

I guess, a woman getting fucked by 3-4 guys is already pretty busy, but don't forget her hands. Depending on your definition of sex - do handjobs count?

But I think anything beyond this is impossible. I mean, I have seen women who stretched their holes, like: 3 dildos in the pussy, 2 in the butt. But real guys are more then just dicks ...

 

[NASCARaddicted]

I could see it now, "but mum, it was for charity . . ."

Great idea. And then the daughter continues: Mum, what have you done for charity lately? There is this sex club who is searching for women taking part in a gang bang. For every woman taking part, they pay $500 for charity ...

 

[Reshbod]

For some reason, the idea popped in my head of a Playboy After Dark kind of party.

You have your typical party, with clusters of people chatting, someone gets up and sings for the group, then everyone goes back to there own thing. At some point a couple starts making out then before they know what is going on, there naked with a few people watching while others continue chatting. When the first guy is finished and goes for a drink, the woman grabs the closest guy (or gal) and they go at it.

The sex gets no more notice than if it were just another conversation. People join, fuck the woman, then go to the next group.

So it's not really a gangbang nor is it a train where the guys wait in the hall.

 

[RicoLouis]

I guess, a woman getting fucked by 3-4 guys is already pretty busy, but don't forget her hands. Depending on your definition of sex - do handjobs count?

But I think anything beyond this is impossible. I mean, I have seen women who stretched their holes, like: 3 dildos in the pussy, 2 in the butt. But real guys are more then just dicks ...

Maybe a lesbian toy gangbang, kind of like catfightgangbang.

If she is on her back, a guy below her in her ass, another guy between her legs in her pussy, One guy on her stomach his dick between her tits, another above her neck his dick between her tits just the opposite way. (double tit fuck) one or two cocks in her mouth. Two guys to the side sliding there dicks between her arm pits, two guys helping her storke the two dick in each hand. And two guys holding her ankles and rubbing there dicks with her feet between her toes. Thats 12.