how about some CUM drinking stories?

[MsLinnet]

I don't know if I was that important

You know what I think of that arsehole you live with.

The way he treats you is not to my liking, but you told me that it is what you want so I respect you wishes.

You could have come with me to the UK as you know, and it would have changed your life.

I feel that self-respect has to be part of a relationship as well as respect for each other but I am not trying to preach.

live and let live is part of my life’s philosophy but I do hope you have a life to look forward to.

Love Linnet…

 

[Guest]

Sounds like your "master" needs to take a lesson or two in BDSM and D/s.

 

[Global Carol]

Cum Eater

I have a close girlfriend who is very oral, cum tasting being her number one thing . I’ve been writing my first story based on her, quite similar to one of the women described here. When and if I complete it I will post again on this thread for those interested in reading it.

I don’t have much in the way of expectations for it since I’ve never written anything for publication before of any sort. However, I hope getting some feedback will help. At the very least it will let me know if I should pursue working on a second.

 

[Guest]

Re: Cum Eater

I have a close girlfriend who is very oral, cum tasting being her number one thing . I’ve been writing my first story based on her, quite similar to one of the women described here. When and if I complete it I will post again on this thread for those interested in reading it.

I know I, for one, cannot wait to read it. Like I've told many others here... Write for yourself! If other people don't like your work, fuck 'em. If they do like your work, that's an added bonus!

By the way, welcome to Lit! I hope you enjoy a long stay here!

 

[MsLinnet]

Re: Cum Eater

I have a close girlfriend who is very oral, cum tasting being her number one thing . I’ve been writing my first story based on her, quite similar to one of the women described here. When and if I complete it I will post again on this thread for those interested in reading it.

I don’t have much in the way of expectations for it since I’ve never written anything for publication before of any sort. However, I hope getting some feedback will help. At the very least it will let me know if I should pursue working on a second.

BlessedBe hits it on the head. Write your story and see what you think of your work, if you like it thats all that matters.

the rest is a bonus...

Linnet

 

[MsLinnet]

Sounds like your "master" needs to take a lesson or two in BDSM and D/s.

You are not wrong there but it is what she wants,

I see no joy in being in pain for hours after he has gone to far with his fun.

Linnet

 

[Guest]

If he is as bad as you say, I'm surprised she's allowed to go to Lit. Especially since she's been taking pics of herself for avatars.

Anyway, the man is no Dom. He's a psychopath.



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(Enough of that now, back to the story idea of cum drinkers.)

 

[Global Carol]

"Constance - A Recent Tasting" has been posted

I appreciate the comments from several about writing for myself. However, it seems that a forum such as this does create a focus on writing for others. Hence, any feedback would be appreciated.

 

[Guest]

Congrats!! I'm going to check it now.

 

[Guest]

Well, I'm back fast.

Carol, right now your author's page is blank. Did you recently submit your story or has it recently been accepted?

 

[Global Carol]

BlessedBe,

Pardon my naiveté. Be a “virgin member” (Now who coined that suggestive term?) I made the incorrect assumption that submitted stories are posted in very short order.

To answer your question: I just submitted the story yesterday afternoon.

Thanks for the clarification.

 

[Guest]

Well, no worries! It should be up soon.

 

[sweetnpetite]

or she might get revenge; during each blowjob, although it may appear that she is swallowing, she is spitting out each load into a bottle she keeps. After a dozen or so loads, she ties up the boyfriend one night and pours the whole bottle down his throat, perhaps taunting him, and making it last 30 minutes or so as she gets his revenge - stroking his throat to help him get it down. Then she blows him to get another load, and puts that one down him too.

I love this idea! Its fantastic!!!!!!

 

[sweetnpetite]

could you freeze it? make "cum-sicles?" you can buy novelty icecube trays with a penis shape. maybe someone could use those? I just don't know if it would hold shape when frozen, never tried, lol.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

could you freeze it? make "cum-sicles?" you can buy novelty icecube trays with a penis shape. maybe someone could use those? I just don't know if it would hold shape when frozen, never tried, lol.

well, cum is a liquid that mostly consists of water - so I guess it would hold it's shape.

 

[Global Carol]

Thanks for the responses

I want to thank all who provided feedback on my story about Constance and evening with Gil. To my ear it was a little too wordy, but if some of you enjoyed it that pleases me.

Never having written anything in the realm of erotica, it was an intimidating task. In addition, Constance, with her unusual proclivities, is not exactly a mainstream character.

On the other hand, it seems there are more than a few men, those noble souls, who would rise to the challenge of satisfying this lady. Bless 'em.

Your feedback has encouraged me to write another story about Constance. This one will fill in some background about her initial personal discoveries. (I’ll make no promises about when this will be, however. I may not have the time to put another story together for a few months.)

Once again, thank you so much for the warm welcome.

Global

 

[Guest]

Very erotic story. I liked it.

 

[litdude]

hey good stuff!

Carol,

That was a well written piece. Your pace and description of the sex scenes were excellent. The part about meeting near the mailboxes and the dinner appointment seemed a little stiff, but you have to get them to meet somehow. I think you could do without some of the guy's thoughts like "He decided that the gods were smiling down upon him" seemed forcing the issue. Let the reader be brought along without giving it away.

Sexwise, you threw a lot in there. Initial eating on chocolate, mention her learning about eating cum (needs more details here) and the tf and glass routine. Mentioning the Eurocum contest, personally, I'd rather her be a homspun gal who liked cum, not some almost-pro.

Big boobs? That lead to a tit fuck. If you do a story with small boobs, like on a blind date, maybe the guy is initially turned off until he learns she loves to suck.

Nice writing. Not trying to be critical, just constructive.

 

[litdude]

cum cicles

I was thinking (actually) of finding some mini ice cube trays, or something which would make penny size mints.

The wife likes doing things on the sly, so I think having a cool frozen cum 'cicle that she could pop in her mouth discretely..might work with her. We'd have to keep it in a cooler if were out in public.

 

[UC_Gav]

Just to throw in my thoughts.

One idea that could lead to a mass of Cum Drinking and Cum baths could be the old Curse trick.

Ie, a young college slut is caught sucking down some guys load. The guys girlfriend/parents curse her that the only thing she can eat without vomiting is Cum. So she basically needs it to survive, preying on the local college/university campus?
I dunno, it sounded better in my head.

 

[MsLinnet]

Let me throw this in to the pot on cum drinking.

A group of nurses are so hooked on drinking cum they set them selves up a sperm donation, clinic all is going well until they start getting requests for sperm for insemination, and they realise that there is money to be made but they have a sperm shortage, as they have been drinking and playing with it so much.

What they do to increase there sperm banks could make a good story.

Linnet

 

[Screaming Grace]

Let me throw this in to the pot on cum drinking.

A group of nurses are so hooked on drinking cum they set them selves up a sperm donation, clinic all is going well until they start getting requests for sperm for insemination, and they realise that there is money to be made but they have a sperm shortage, as they have been drinking and playing with it so much.

What they do to increase there sperm banks could make a good story.

Linnet

I am always up for a good drink sweetie as you know...

SG

 

[NASCARaddicted]

Let me throw this in to the pot on cum drinking.

A group of nurses are so hooked on drinking cum they set them selves up a sperm donation, clinic all is going well until they start getting requests for sperm for insemination, and they realise that there is money to be made but they have a sperm shortage, as they have been drinking and playing with it so much.

What they do to increase there sperm banks could make a good story.

Linnet

yeah, great idea. A story about that, could contain all the usuall spearm bank jokes.
For example, the nurses offer a special donating service ....
Usually, a guy takes a porn mag and jerks off to it. Well, in the beginning, a nurse could make a striptease while the guy jerks off .... and later the nurses also jerk the guys off ....

 

[MsLinnet]

yeah, great idea. A story about that, could contain all the usuall spearm bank jokes.
For example, the nurses offer a special donating service ....
Usually, a guy takes a porn mag and jerks off to it. Well, in the beginning, a nurse could make a striptease while the guy jerks off .... and later the nurses also jerk the guys off ....

Ok how is it set up ?

 

[litdude]

starts at nurse's school

Perhap the nurses first meet in nurse's school and they find out they are wild kinda girls. Maybe like a sorority at a nurse's school. They all share there love of blowing and sucking. One of them beigns dating a doctor and sucks him down on each date. As it so happens, he is soon to be starting a fertility clinic and will be needing to staff it. So the girls from nursing school get hired, and the clinic opens.

At first some of the nurses just sample the fresh deposits. But when one day they discover not enough is left, they decide that they will get 2 samples from each patient (on different days), that way they can eat one and keep the other for offical business.

As far as getting the samples, they offer their services instead of porn mags, but when the guy blows, it has to be in a vial. A few minutes later after he leaves, the blowing nurse gets to down the vial.

On Fridays, if it's been a busy day, there may be a marguerita glass full of sperm with a little umbrella and straw that they are pouring the vials into. This they can keep available at the nurses station for a quick taste for any of the staff wandering by the desk.