How Lindsay Got Her Groove Back.

[Chicklet]

Re: Tate

Well, we are just talking about a story, fiction, right? It's just words. Bitch, Slut, Whore, Dumb ass, etc... I don't think that's good when its real.

it's not about her actual experience; it's putting her into a fictional situation and trying to guide her "character" through it like she would in her real life.

Even if the story was only entertaining to tiggs, that would be enough.

As for no story having any real feeling, i'm very unhappy that you didn't like End Game, which was very hard for me to write. I put a lot of myself in there, but, apparently, not enough.

Chicklet

 

[Guest]

Re: Re: Tate

it's not about her actual experience; it's putting her into a fictional situation and trying to guide her "character" through it like she would in her real life.

Even if the story was only entertaining to tiggs, that would be enough.

As for no story having any real feeling, i'm very unhappy that you didn't like End Game, which was very hard for me to write. I put a lot of myself in there, but, apparently, not enough.

Chicklet

Feeling. Let met up it to you like this, since I'm a member of the USCF.

When you look down at the board figuring 4 to 6 moves to checkmate and you are studying your oponent. You watch his eyes tracing the movement of every peace. You see his eyebows rise as he focus on the piece inwhich you have tired to hide. The peace that will seal his doom. You figure that he has seen the moves you've planned through his minds eye. You raise your eyebrow and sigh heavily as your oponent's attention changes to the sacrefical peace you have laid as offerings. You are wondering if he will take the bate, but you are doubting as he leans back in his chair, folding his arms, and rubbing his chin. A chuckle from your oponent as he leans over the board holding his hands under the table. He is studying your attack peaces, but he is silent now. You figure he knows your moves, so you begin quickly planning counter measures. You see something else that you can't believe that you have overlooked. Your King is trapped save two moves. You begin to feel a wave of heat flow from your brow to your arm pits. You are motionless now, nearly holding your breath. He moves. You sigh. You call "game". He has taken the bate. He acknowledges your win without finishing the moves. You have won.

The winner still lost the game. It may not seem like it to others, but you really have lost.

I still think it's a bad idea to do this story.

 

[BlackSnake]

Re: Re: Re: Tate

Feeling. Let met up it to you like this, since I'm a member of the USCF.

When you look down at the board figuring 4 moves to checkmate and you are studying your oponent. You watch his eyes tracing the movement of every peace. You see his eyebows rise as he focus on the piece inwhich you have tired to hide. The peace that will seal his doom. You figure that he has seen the moves you've planned through his minds eye. You raise your eyebrow and sigh heavily as your oponent's attention changes to the sacrefical peace you have laid as offerings. You are wondering if he will take the bate, but you are doubting as he leans back in his chair, folding his arms, and rubbing his chin. A chuckle from your oponent as he leans over the board holding his hands under the table. He is studying your attack peaces, but he is silent now. You figure he knows your moves, so you begin quickly planning counter measures. You see something else that you can't believe that you have overlooked. Your King is trapped save two moves. You begin to feel a wave of heat flow from your brow to your arm pits. You are motionless now, nearly holding your breath. He moves. You sigh. You call "game". He has taken the bate. He acknowledges your win without finishing the moves. You have won.

The winner still lost the game. It may not seem like it to others, but you really have lost.

I still think it's a bad idea to do this story.

Wasn't logged in. This is my post.

 

[sirhugs]

leaving aside whether doing a story about BB is smart, you show a lack of respect in dissing the ability of the writers here to be sensitive. Leaving aside my work, which I hope always respects women, especially the wanton ones, many of Chiclet's stories ( see Megan and Julie, for example) are sweet happy erotic tales of women discovering themselves.

 

[BlackSnake]

leaving aside whether doing a story about BB is smart, you show a lack of respect in dissing the ability of the writers here to be sensitive. Leaving aside my work, which I hope always respects women, especially the wanton ones, many of Chiclet's stories ( see Megan and Julie, for example) are sweet happy erotic tales of women discovering themselves.

I certainly enjoy the stories I have read here and will continue to read. I mean no disrepect to the writters here. I, however hope that this story will not be written. This medium, I feel is not the place for the one that is requested.

 

[Diane Marie]

Re: Tate

I'm against this because real, not fictional truma has occurred, and maybe continuing. I've seen women who have been treated badly for so long that they begin to believe that they deserve to be treated that way. Battered wives, etc. If you hear a woman say, "treat me badly, I love it" do you think that's a good thing?

I may just have to change my opinion of you BlackSnake. That is if you truely believe what your saying.

 

[BlackSnake]

Re: Re: Tate

I may just have to change my opinion of you BlackSnake. That is if you truely believe what your saying.

I'm sorry if you have a bad opinion of me, but I can deal with it. I'm a black man under the biblebelt. I've delt with more than you could imagine.

This situation is to serious for an erotic tail.

 

[Guest]

Finally, the thread starter is back...

Blacksnake, I appreciate your thoughts here. I really do. But, this is who I am. (And I fear it's something you can't comprehend.) I am a submissive masochist. Yes, I've been dealt some tough cards in real life, but I'm a survivor, not a victim. Fact still remains, I can't help what I enjoy. And, with my lovers (past or present) I am consenting to what I enjoy.

Some people may not grasp this, but I need "kink" to cum. 'Nilla sex doesn't do it for me. I need to have my nipples and clit pinched or bitten. I need to have my ass, tits, and cunt spanked/slapped. I need bondage. I need (sexual aspect only) humiliation.

When I wrote up this request, I thought it would be fun to see "who" others at Lit think I am. I thought it would be fun to see their interpretation of "my character" baised on what I've shared at Lit.

Also, since I'm not having sex at home, I wanted an erotic story with me as the main character. I wanted to read dirty, naughty lil' things "about" me.

Hopefully you, and others, can understand.

 

[BlackSnake]

For kicks, grins, and giggles the fiction is fantastic entertainment.

The reality, yes its difficult for me to understand. Anything done to hurt, humilate, or otherwise to cause a woman surfering, I'm frimly against. In reality, it is difficult for me to understand how pleasure can be derived from physical pain.

Off my soap box.

I will read this story.

 

[Guest]

In reality, it is difficult for me to understand how pleasure can be derived from physical pain.

Anyone who is not a masochist or Sadist will never know. Unlike D/s, one cannot "become" a Sadist or masochist. Either you are or you're not. And, it's certainly not for everyone.

 

[BlackSnake]

Anyone who is not a masochist or Sadist will never know. Unlike D/s, one cannot "become" a Sadist or masochist. Either you are or you're not. And, it's certainly not for everyone.

I've changed my view. Not about seeing women in pain, but about this story being written. Fictional, of course. I will make an attempt myself.

Great authors of Lit. do your thing.

 

[MsLinnet]

Hello all. It is I, the moody one. lol Obviously a great deal of you know about my life currently. First of all, let me say thank you to those who have expressed concern lately. Ya'll are much appreciated.

I am wondering if anyone here would be interested in crafting a story *about* me. It would be a work of fiction with little limitations for the author. I grant permission to use my real name. (Lindsay, for those of you who don't know it yet.)

If there are any details about my personality or life you'd want to know for the story, feel free to ask here or PM me. I'm really curious to see if anyone would like this "challenge". Theme and content are completely up to you!

I know you don’t rate my writings but I will have a crack at you if you don’t mind but please don’t take offence if you don’t like it. I am glad you are happier in you self now.

I await you reply

Love Linnet

 

[Guest]

This request is open to anyone who wants to try.

 

[MsLinnet]

This request is open to anyone who wants to try.

In my to do list

Love Linnet