Hypnosis story character feedback

[Fuzzy_Pig00]

writing a story and need help with character design

Scenario is in an office and the sleezy boss is hypnotizing women under pretense of training seminars.
Hes picking women based on who he thinks would fit the role best
In this one her is making the woman an Anal lover, what would work best?

A tough girl that can handle the punishment with a plump ass.
Vs
A small sweet and innocent type that he thinks would be a great irony begging to be fucked in ass
I dont think a plump ass would work on the sweet girl


Note already have
an elegant, beautiful, professional type, Chosen because of her face and lips to give blowjobs
a bubbly friendly receptionist to be a all rounder slut/training assistant

 

[Rob_Royale]

For me, the office matriarch would fit that role. The oh-so-proper 45-year-old office manager that everyones a little scared of.
She's tough and in charge, takes no crap from anyone not recieving a six figure salary. As sweet as a cherry tart as long as you are doing your job and making her look good. Get crosswise of her and you'll wish you hadn't.

 

[Roamme]

IDK for ME, I'd want at least one of the women to fake being hypnotized, for kicks, and the sleazy boss never knows.
I want this because once I was brought up on stage in Las Vegas at a Hypnotists show. I didn't get hypnotized but faked it for the sake of the show. Afterwards everyone, especially the hypnotist, clearly thought I was fully hypnotized, but I never was.

 

[Reenigam]

writing a story and need help with character design

Scenario is in an office and the sleezy boss is hypnotizing women under pretense of training seminars.
Hes picking women based on who he thinks would fit the role best
In this one her is making the woman an Anal lover, what would work best?

A tough girl that can handle the punishment with a plump ass.
Vs
A small sweet and innocent type that he thinks would be a great irony begging to be fucked in ass
I dont think a plump ass would work on the sweet girl


Note already have
an elegant, beautiful, professional type, Chosen because of her face and lips to give blowjobs
a bubbly friendly receptionist to be a all rounder slut/training assistant

I don't quite get this. A guy hypnotises women. Big deal. For what? You haven't explained anything, including whether the women have any realisation of what's happening - something rather important...

 

[Dwbackup2023]

I think the tough girl would be better with anal. For the small girl make he submissive but dominant vs other females and very eager to help her master.

 

[shewantsmore]

writing a story and need help with character design

Scenario is in an office and the sleezy boss is hypnotizing women under pretense of training seminars.
Hes picking women based on who he thinks would fit the role best
In this one her is making the woman an Anal lover, what would work best?

A tough girl that can handle the punishment with a plump ass.
Vs
A small sweet and innocent type that he thinks would be a great irony begging to be fucked in ass
I dont think a plump ass would work on the sweet girl


Note already have
an elegant, beautiful, professional type, Chosen because of her face and lips to give blowjobs
a bubbly friendly receptionist to be a all rounder slut/training assistant

i would say an experienced member of staff who is known for her strict attitude but known too as hating anything anal so that would be more believable, and have a stronger emotion,

 

[33RPMVinylPants]

IDK for ME, I'd want at least one of the women to fake being hypnotized, for kicks, and the sleazy boss never knows.
I want this because once I was brought up on stage in Las Vegas at a Hypnotists show. I didn't get hypnotized but faked it for the sake of the show. Afterwards everyone, especially the hypnotist, clearly thought I was fully hypnotized, but I never was.

You should check out 'Kayfabe' by SomeoneBlue:

https://www.literotica.com/s/kayfabe-1

one of my favorites on here.