i would like a story done about me with 3 girls i like from school
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deliciously_naughty
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mead you've been inconsistent with the ages of the girls...first you said you were one age and the girls were another age, but the second time you posted you changed the girls ages.
My call is that you're still IN high school and are too young to even be on this site.
If you want a quick story write it yourself...otherwise you need to wake up and realize what a gesture it is for a complete stranger to write a story for you. When you harass them they will tell you to go to hell just as if a complete stranger asked you to do them a favor and then harassed you about it.
Keep in mind, we authors here on lit have jobs, have lives and have other projects we're working on. You have to be patient and wait your turn
And no...I have no interest in writing anything for you. not only b/c you're an underaged nuisance but b/c you were also rude to one of the nicest people on this board Chicklet.
My call is that you're still IN high school and are too young to even be on this site.
If you want a quick story write it yourself...otherwise you need to wake up and realize what a gesture it is for a complete stranger to write a story for you. When you harass them they will tell you to go to hell just as if a complete stranger asked you to do them a favor and then harassed you about it.
Keep in mind, we authors here on lit have jobs, have lives and have other projects we're working on. You have to be patient and wait your turn
And no...I have no interest in writing anything for you. not only b/c you're an underaged nuisance but b/c you were also rude to one of the nicest people on this board Chicklet.
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Chicklet said:
Grin...now that sounds like a great story chick
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ok Meads, here is an lesson to get you started...
Write down the names of the participants,
Decide where they meet, write a few sentences about that.
This is called an opening.
Add some words from each.
Move the story to a second location.
Write it as YOU see it happening in your head.
Go back and reread what you've written.
Add some dialog.
This is the middle.
Think about how you'd like it to end.
Write your ending.
If you feel you can't write it then record it. Talk into a tape recorder and then make a transcript of what you've said.
PLEASE remember that:
THERE is a place (it is over there)
THEIR refers to a person it is posessive (Their car, their house)
THEY'RE means "they are"
They're going to their house which is over there.
TWO is a number
TO refers to a place
TOO means also
I'd like to go to the store to buy two flowers too.
YOUR refers to you
YOU'RE is "you are"
You're going to have to pick up your clothes.
Now sit your body down and do your homework and use spell check. See hoe long it takes YOU to write a story worth reading. Flunking out in school is no excuse. If you are adult enough to be here you are adult enough to learn how to write a story for yourself.
Write down the names of the participants,
Decide where they meet, write a few sentences about that.
This is called an opening.
Add some words from each.
Move the story to a second location.
Write it as YOU see it happening in your head.
Go back and reread what you've written.
Add some dialog.
This is the middle.
Think about how you'd like it to end.
Write your ending.
If you feel you can't write it then record it. Talk into a tape recorder and then make a transcript of what you've said.
PLEASE remember that:
THERE is a place (it is over there)
THEIR refers to a person it is posessive (Their car, their house)
THEY'RE means "they are"
They're going to their house which is over there.
TWO is a number
TO refers to a place
TOO means also
I'd like to go to the store to buy two flowers too.
YOUR refers to you
YOU'RE is "you are"
You're going to have to pick up your clothes.
Now sit your body down and do your homework and use spell check. See hoe long it takes YOU to write a story worth reading. Flunking out in school is no excuse. If you are adult enough to be here you are adult enough to learn how to write a story for yourself.
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get a clue..you have alienated all of us...none of us are going to write it for you.
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*If* that were true (which we know it's not), then why did you "bump" up both of your request (harassment) threads in Story Ideas?
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