Nightscream89
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Mark expresses his concerns about being a partner in a large company without experience. But Harold explains that all the partners of the firm hand down their positions to young individuals within their own family and the other partners guide and mentor the young new guy to success. It's their way of guarenteed success and security for their families and heritage.
Mark accepts and not long after he marries Chelsea and Harold dies. He then finds out that 'taking care of his family' means actually taking care of all three of them Financially, emotionally and Sexually.
At this point Mark would be 24, Chelsea 24, Bailey 18, Joanna 48.
Storypoints I thought of so far would be handling the dynamic change in the household. Since Chelsea is now 'the Wife' and sort of 'Outranks' the other's. Joanna struggles with no longer being the wife, Bailey refuses to listen to Chelsea and still listens to her mother Joanna and Chelsea tries to enforce her new authority. Up to Mark to handle this.
Other storypoint could be something like that Mark had a girlfriend in college that he broke up with because they were both moving far apart, but now she shows up saying she can't be without him. Only finding that he is now married to Chelsea (who is his true love).
So some things in this idea still feel a bit too 'convenient' (like the coincidence that he happened to get a business degree.) So if anyone has some ideas how to improve this or add scenario's too it, it would be much appreciated.
I do plan on writing this, but it will be a while before I start it. (Want to finish my current series and just started another story that will probably have 3 long parts, so those come first.)
But yeah any ideas are welcome.
Mark accepts and not long after he marries Chelsea and Harold dies. He then finds out that 'taking care of his family' means actually taking care of all three of them Financially, emotionally and Sexually.
At this point Mark would be 24, Chelsea 24, Bailey 18, Joanna 48.
Storypoints I thought of so far would be handling the dynamic change in the household. Since Chelsea is now 'the Wife' and sort of 'Outranks' the other's. Joanna struggles with no longer being the wife, Bailey refuses to listen to Chelsea and still listens to her mother Joanna and Chelsea tries to enforce her new authority. Up to Mark to handle this.
Other storypoint could be something like that Mark had a girlfriend in college that he broke up with because they were both moving far apart, but now she shows up saying she can't be without him. Only finding that he is now married to Chelsea (who is his true love).
So some things in this idea still feel a bit too 'convenient' (like the coincidence that he happened to get a business degree.) So if anyone has some ideas how to improve this or add scenario's too it, it would be much appreciated.
I do plan on writing this, but it will be a while before I start it. (Want to finish my current series and just started another story that will probably have 3 long parts, so those come first.)
But yeah any ideas are welcome.