Invisible girl

[LastLostIdols]

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[Sean Renaud]

An episode of Buffy the Vampire Slayer does this.

 

[Mello_SixtyNine]

I don't remember that episode. 0.o

In any case Buffy sadly never had any nude or hardcore sex scenes. As much as I'd kill to see Buffy, Willow, Faith, or Cordelia in those scenarios.

I don't know about that. I remember the episode where Buffy & Spike first fuck. They are in a condemned building and Spike is pressed up against a pillar while kissing Buffy forcefully. You can distinctly hear the sound of his zipper being unzipped followed by Buffy's distinct facial expression of being penetrated. Then they fuck so hard the building comes down around them.

Here's the specific clip on Youtube. Unfortunately the quality is really shitty. You can still hear the zipper at the beginning of the video though. Considering that this was on primetime tv, that was pretty hardcore for the time.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Oh there was a definite lack of nudity but it was quite clear what she was doing to Spike after the trio made her invisible. I do find the concept interesting by the by.

 

[Strangebuddy]

Back to the OP's idea, maybe she finds out that a girl she has a crush on is really into ghosts, so she starts rumors about haunted parts of the school, or an abandoned house she has access to. Kids go there, with her moving a few things around to give them a scare. When the girl's there though, she kisses on the cheek, runs her hand over her and then leaves a doctored journal which belongs to the "ghost"

The journal details the struggles of a closeted lesbian who only wanted to make love one time with her one-sided crush, who of course looks exactly like the girl she's crushing on. A few subtle hints and the invisible girl is having sex with her crush on top of a oujia board.

Of course, she could also sneak into the locker room and find ways to get alone with a specific player...or towel manager.

 

[hashtag45]

Excellent idea, speaking from a reader's pov.
What if there are more elements of danger/thrill in it, in that her powers waver on rare unexpected occasions? So that she might become visible for a sec./her real identity potentially revealed to her 'victim'? And that she is unaware of the fact that she's been revealed, whilst her victim plots his/her revenge? etc

 

[Sean Renaud]

Oh, I was unclear. I do that sometimes. First to Mello. Oh there were a fair amount of scenes that it was obvious what Buffy was doing. Buffy's first time with Angel is about as hardcore as you could get at the time, you mentioned the combat sex, there's an entire episode dedicated to Riley and Buffy literally not noticing the world trying to end because they were to busy fucking eachother's brains clean out.

On subject. I brought up Buffy because I think whehter the girl is close to the guy or not that a playful invisible woman is interesting. Our boy is trying to give a report (if he's school aged) or a presentation if he's an adult. While he's at it she's grinding against his crotch, nibbling on his ears, gripping his ass. He's sitting someplace and she slips her hand into his trousers. Maybe she's whispering in his ear all the things she's going to do to him. She's giving him head as he drives home.

Nothing really malicious but she just doesn't give the poor guy a break.

Or alternatively she helps out some guy, perhaps in honor of lit, her baby brother. She knows he want's Cindy, the head cheerleader or what not (and she wouldn't mind a roll with her either) so she spends x amount of time basically contriving situations that make her brother look good. Cindy's paperwork mysteriously flies away without any wind and he manages to catch it before it falls in a puddle. Cindy trips over her own clumsy feet and falls into his arms. A mysterious voice informs the brother that Cindy is actually a huge WWE fan (or insert anything you wouldn't automatically assume a female was into. Certainly not in the casual walk up out of the blue "Oh my god did you see how Jon Stewart totally screwed John Cena out of becoming a 16 time World Champion and tying Ric Flair?!) Cindy misplaces her keys and needs a ride home.

 

[subwannabe]

I was also thinking about the ghost angle. Shy very horny girl who never had sex had the hots for these guys but never let them know how she feels because of her shyness. After dying unexpectedly she realizes that she hasn't moved on yet and has some time to cleanse her sole and finally show them how she feels and what a horny slut was trapped in that physical body.

 

[SuperWill19]

Yeah, I remember that bit.

I really loved Spike & Buffy together, far more than the brooding Angel.

Oh I hAve a former coworker who would kill because of a statement like that. Okay maybe that's over exaggerating a bit. But she would fight that statement till her dying breath. That's not an exaggeration.

 

[SuperWill19]

Interesting idea. Hope to read it some day. Please let us know if you post it.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Oh I hAve a former coworker who would kill because of a statement like that. Okay maybe that's over exaggerating a bit. But she would fight that statement till her dying breath. That's not an exaggeration.

It's okay that she's wrong.

 

[SuperWill19]

It's okay that she's wrong.

Oh man I'd love to see her reaction if someone told her that.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I'll do it! I have learned both the Shadow Clone and Flash Step techniques. They are very useful for when you tell fans things they may not like. For example Spuffy being superior to Bungle just out the gate.

In all fairness I want Cordy anyway.

 

[SuperWill19]

I'll do it! I have learned both the Shadow Clone and Flash Step techniques. They are very useful for when you tell fans things they may not like. For example Spuffy being superior to Bungle just out the gate.

In all fairness I want Cordy anyway.

Interesting how you fit Naruto into that and I know the name Flash step from some place. Was if Bleach?

 

[SuperWill19]

I'll do it! I have learned both the Shadow Clone and Flash Step techniques. They are very useful for when you tell fans things they may not like. For example Spuffy being superior to Bungle just out the gate.

In all fairness I want Cordy anyway.

Interesting how you fit Naruto into that and I know the name Flash step from some place. Was it Bleach?

 

[Nuff_Said]

You could search better. There is a story about invisible girl.
https://www.literotica.com/s/lisa-invisible-ch-01

 

[Sean Renaud]

Interesting how you fit Naruto into that and I know the name Flash step from some place. Was it Bleach?

I believe Flash Step is Bleach, Shinigami specifically since Quincy, Hollows and Full Bringers can all do it but they all have different names (and sound effects) for it however most martial arts based anime have something similar to it.

And yeah I work in random references.

As for searching better yeah it doesn't hurt but you don't always find things that are there. Search engines are finnicky beasts at times. Besides if they are rarish there is good reason to create more just so they are more common floating around the world.

 

[MatthewVett]

It's okay that she's wrong.

"Everyone's entitled to their own, stupid opinions."-Danny, Game Grumps

 

[MatthewVett]

As for the story idea, I like it a lot. Definitely a lot of voyeuristic potential. Maybe she goes into the guy's locker room and just enjoys watching everyone, and when someone especially hot ends up alone, she starts playing with him and teasing him...

 

[Strangebuddy]

One setting that might be fun to explore is a pool party. She runs around the outside stealing tops from sunbathers and untying drawstring bikinis, then slips into the water and starts letting her hands wander

 

[Sean Renaud]

I do kinda like the the idea of her stripping sunbathers, it kinda ties into my earlier idea just this is en masse as she hooks up her brother and his friends and gets vengeance on some snooty girls who only showed up because nobody else has a pool.

I'm uncertain she would remain invisible in the pool though. I mean even if we ignore splashing and wake wouldn't there be a woman shaped void in the pool? If I was too drunk to be curious about a woman shaped void in the pool someone should probably get me home before I drown.

 

[Strangebuddy]

Fair point though if people are moving around in the pool, her own wake would be covered and if she spent as much time as possible underwater, her presence wouldn't be too noticeable (aside from a quick dip appearing when she poked her head out to breath) I figured she would only stay in long enough to cause some chaos and then slip out when no one was looking

 

[Sean Renaud]

That's why I said to ignore teh splashing and wake. Lets just assume she's smart enough to move slowly and not cause either of them at least not enough to draw attention to herself. I guess she could spend a lot of time underwater. I think she'd probably be visible if she did that though. She'd essentially be a woman shaped bubble. And you can sure as fuck see bubbles underwater. Of course all this partially hinges on how precisely her invisibility functions anyway. Sorry I do get hung up on mechanics at times.

I like the idea, might steal it if I have some spare time.

 

[Strangebuddy]

Got ya. I think it would be fun if a climax was her getting caught and the person she wasp ranking tries to get her to turn visible (a swim captain catching her in the showers and then giving her a dose of her own medicine is my personal head vision)

 

[Hypoxia]

Being detectable and getting caught is good for a closed tale. But if the story line is to keep going, don't let that happen. Since the invisibility thang is magickal fantasy and all, she can shrink (or grow) to any desired size when she's invisible. Or she does not merely become more or less opaque but is partially de- and re-materializing across dimensions so her 'invisible' self isn't here to occupy space. Or her invisibility is psychic, not physical -- she wills others not to see her. Does her control slip if she sneezes?