Is there a way to make a mother-son incest story plausible?

[Beandip478]

I have read many accounts of real sexual relationships of this kind. Just did over on Reddit. It's amazing for how many people this is normal. For me it's the mother and son living together for a long time. She feels lonely and unloved, undesirable, and yes has noticed her son's cock. He, being young, and not having a sexual outlet at the time, has sex on the brain. One day somebody bumps into somebody. Somebody sees somebody naked in the shower. It's late and they're sitting on the couch watching Netflix in a darkened room. It happens.

 

[VerbalAbuse]

I've heard some presidents were mother fuckers.

 

[live4thebj]

I've heard some presidents were mother fuckers.

I’m a MF’r just they weren’t my mom.

 

[Noor]

Make it a father daughter one?

 

[God_Above]

It shan't be.

 

[Deleted member 1215945]

I used to have a popular sex blog, and through that blog a guy asked me to write a mother-son story for him. Incest is something I would rather not think about, so I offered a older woman - young guy story. He wasn't interested, but I was curious if I could accomplish just what you are asking about. I only wrote one chapter. A link to that chapter is in my signature, so you can decide for yourself if it is plausible or not, but I decided that the only way to make it plausible was if the "mother-son" had a long-established and very close relationship. The relationship had to be something more than your typical mother-son. It had to be outwardly platonic, but internally, they both struggled with inappropriate thoughts. And then something throws them together, and lust takes control.

That was my take, and I gave it a shot just for the fun of it.

I hope this helps, but in all honesty, this is not a genre in which normally write.

Very nice post. I can say that this happened to mother and I. Let me say there is nothing else in the world like cumming hard in your mother's soft, wet, hot, delicious pussy. Nothing. I am still her Oedipus boy.

 

[Deleted member 1215945]

It shan't be.

Yo Yo God! wud up? Stay cool Bruh.

 

[Helgamite]

Genetic sexual attraction. That is a thing. And it has been noted to be a big cause of incest.

 

[Rodion2024]

Have the story take place in Norwich, UK.

 

[Silas_Noct]

I'm a little late to this conversation, but I wanted to chime in since I have been given positive comments on the plausibility of my stories.

I have a M/S series (with a small B/S side plot) that focuses on a story of two very flawed people-- a scrutinizing, social climber of a mother and an overconfident, selfish son. Mom needs to pay off a debt, and the son is business savvy enough to provide the means to do so. The stories are heavy into emotional manipulation, obsession, guilt, and alternating doses of self restraint and erotic impulsiveness. I like to categorize my stories as psychological thrillers, or Erotic Noir.

The reason I think I have been told the stories are plausible, as well as spicy, because I hint so much into the personal histories both characters in over time in alternating perspectives. I try to be vague enough to allow the reader to read between the lines in their own way, which I hope allows for a more personal, nuanced interpretation of the stories for each person.

I try to make my characters bad people, but human ones nonetheless that are as much a product of their upbringings and uncontrollable circumstances as they are of their own bad decisions.

Have a read and tell me if you agree! I'd like to hear if people have any other ideas for what makes a plausible taboo story.

Debt: The Novella Adaptation

 

[Britva415]

Make there be a cyclical family history of manipulation and abuse, that seems to be where all the real life incest happens.

Title it "Don't Break The Cycle"

What is your goal, with regard to making it "plausible?" Readers in the T/I category probably don't really want it realistic.

 

[Brandnewbuddy]

Since this got revived, I’ll chuck in my two cents from a reader and occasional Roleplayer of the topic (though not as much as I used to)

So plausible means a few things here:

1. Could you make a plausible story that feels authentic. Easily. But you ain’t posting it on this site cause it will get you banned cause if you want authentic well real life incest is either straight up rape or the result of some severe abuse or neglect.

2. Can you make it plausible and authentic, following the site’s rules? Yes, though again, you’re going to have to go to some dark places. I have seen stories that toss in vague references to abuse or they’ve had it as the result of a shocking event. YKN4949 wrote “Choices” which has a group of siblings forced at gunpoint to have sex and then they meet up a year later and have sex again to process the emotions from that event.

I can’t remember if it was them or another writer but there was also a story about siblings raised on a religious commune where any talk of sex was severely suppressed so they start experimenting as adults. There was also a story which was effectively a deconstruction: it starts with a silly occurenc: siblings had sex just cause they were both hot but then it slams on the brakes and has the father of the story use his power over his daughter in a very realistic way to take advantage of her to the point he impregnates her and the final part is the daughter (who does escape the situation and gets an abortion) reflecting on the whole situation.

Now that leads to the 3rd one:

Can you make it plausible, following the rules, and still keep it arousing and entertaining?

And that’s a lot tougher.

Honestly, when I read it, I like some absurdity, I like the sex and eroticism to just be the exploration of taboo feelings, with the incest just making that feeling higher than any other way. But I still want to be entertained so I prefer some silliness and break from reality.

Can you come up with a situation that is possible but improbable and is still entertaining? Yeah: mom and her son get stuck on a desert island no help comes and son grows up, he’s an adult now and mom notices he’s feeling attracted to her so she decides it’s not fair to make him abstain when no help is coming so they start fucking. Possible? Sure in the “more likely to win a lotto ticket” way but plausible? No.

 

[switchersm]

A woman, named Helga, I've chatted very long told me her story.
I try to repeat as best in my memory.
H elga was 19 when she married a man of 32. His name was Justus Karl. He was straight, strict and dominant. She liked it, because she was sexual submissive. He had her outer labias let pierced with 5 small golden Rings each. Because of his business he traveled a lot. When away from home he pulled a thin golden chain through the rings and joined the ends with a golden heart shaped lock. He wanted her to be chaste without masturbation until his return.
At age of 23 she gave birth to a son. They had choosed the second name of his father's first name, Karl
Justus Karl died in an accident when Helga was 34.
She never married again. Her husband didn't left much money, so she had to work hard as a nurse in hospital to raise her son alone. She mostly worked in nighttime to take care of her son in daytime, although she often was tired. Helga and Karl were always very close.
He had only few friends. His only hobby was skateboarding.
Shortly after graduating from high school in age of 19, he received his acceptance letter for a place at the university in his city. He celebrated this success with a friend, drinking heavily. The next day, he went skating and fell badly. The result: complicated fractures of both arms, surgery, and both arms in casts for at least three months.
Karl needed help with everything. When eating, when dressing and undressing, during personal hygiene and of course when going to the toilet. He was very ashamed, but his mother just said, I know all this from my work. I don't mind.
The first time she showered him and washed his penis with a washcloth, Karl became aroused. He turned away bashfully. Oh sorry mom. No reason to be ashamed, my darling, said Helga. That's completely normal at your age. And I see that the girls will be very happy. You take after your father. He was so big too. Really mom? But yes, my darling. Your penis looks very beautiful and is very big.

When Helga had finished Karl showering, her clothes were almost completely soaked. She resolved to wear a bikini next time and get in the shower with him. She thought wistfully of her late husband, who had always fucked her so wonderfully with his large cock, especially when he returned from his business trips.
The next time she showered Karl, he got an erection again, partly because his mother was wearing a bikini that probably came from a time when she was a little slimmer. Now, shortly before her 43rd birthday, she had full breasts, a small tummy and a well-shaped round ass. Karl had never seen his mother like this before. She always dressed casually. He was no longer embarrassed. He asked, is my penis really big, mom? He's beautiful, don't worry my darling. Do you like it too, mom? But yes, I would have to be lying if it were otherwise.
Thhank you and by the way, you look very good too, mom.
After showering, Helga dried her son and dressed him. Then she went to her bedroom and took off the wet bikini. She was excited. Her son's hard cock had twitched so nicely when she washed him. She lay down on the bed and pleasured herself with her hands. She wasn't just thinking about her husband. She was ashamed of it, but her orgasm was stronger than it had been in a long time.

I will continue , if there is interest in this thread.

 

[SusanHoward]

I don’t know. Doesn’t sound far-fetched to me!

 

[Waiter519123]

I don’t know. Doesn’t sound far-fetched to me!

I agree

 

[Barbara1962]

I'm a little late to this conversation, but I wanted to chime in since I have been given positive comments on the plausibility of my stories.

I have a M/S series (with a small B/S side plot) that focuses on a story of two very flawed people-- a scrutinizing, social climber of a mother and an overconfident, selfish son. Mom needs to pay off a debt, and the son is business savvy enough to provide the means to do so. The stories are heavy into emotional manipulation, obsession, guilt, and alternating doses of self restraint and erotic impulsiveness. I like to categorize my stories as psychological thrillers, or Erotic Noir.

The reason I think I have been told the stories are plausible, as well as spicy, because I hint so much into the personal histories both characters in over time in alternating perspectives. I try to be vague enough to allow the reader to read between the lines in their own way, which I hope allows for a more personal, nuanced interpretation of the stories for each person.

I try to make my characters bad people, but human ones nonetheless that are as much a product of their upbringings and uncontrollable circumstances as they are of their own bad decisions.

Have a read and tell me if you agree! I'd like to hear if people have any other ideas for what makes a plausible taboo story.

Debt: The Novella Adaptation

Authors might want to make it plausible by just making it a real life scenario. For example her husband has been working away for a few weeks and she is not only horny but has a very attractive 20 year old son at home who always gives his mum a hug before leaving for work in the morning. Work it out for yourselves but please do not send me PMs.

 

[Barbara1962]

I have read many accounts of real sexual relationships of this kind. Just did over on Reddit. It's amazing for how many people this is normal. For me it's the mother and son living together for a long time. She feels lonely and unloved, undesirable, and yes has noticed her son's cock. He, being young, and not having a sexual outlet at the time, has sex on the brain. One day somebody bumps into somebody. Somebody sees somebody naked in the shower. It's late and they're sitting on the couch watching Netflix in a darkened room. It happens.

Yes it does happen and sometimes on the couch thigh touches thigh and a short silk dressing gown rides up a little higher than normal. Eyes meet and the message, while unspoken, is very clear. NO PMS

 

[CharlotteKurai]

Could be like a month didn't know she was having sex with his son she give to a private adoption when she was a teenager mom.

 

[iluvmaturewmn]

Yes it does happen and sometimes on the couch thigh touches thigh and a short silk dressing gown rides up a little higher than normal. Eyes meet and the message, while unspoken, is very clear. NO PMS

Mmmhh what a beginning... please go on ;-)

 

[nudeblaqgirl]

I used to have a popular sex blog, and through that blog a guy asked me to write a mother-son story for him. Incest is something I would rather not think about, so I offered a older woman - young guy story. He wasn't interested, but I was curious if I could accomplish just what you are asking about. I only wrote one chapter. A link to that chapter is in my signature, so you can decide for yourself if it is plausible or not, but I decided that the only way to make it plausible was if the "mother-son" had a long-established and very close relationship. The relationship had to be something more than your typical mother-son. It had to be outwardly platonic, but internally, they both struggled with inappropriate thoughts. And then something throws them together, and lust takes control.

That was my take, and I gave it a shot just for the fun of it.

I hope this helps, but in all honesty, this is not a genre in which normally write.

I think you hit the nail on the head: "something throws them together."

For immediate-familt incest stories, the plot problem is that they've known eachother over a period of decades. If they have sexual attraction, they've been managing it for a long time, and they have every reason to keep it hidden.

The reader needs to see a "big reason" why things suddenly changed. It could be sudden physical proximity, but i believe there needs to be an INTENSE emotional trigger (other than simple lust) that sets things off.

Personally not a big fan of parent/child incest stories; I've read a relatively few sibling stories here that did it well.

 

[LegendInMyOwnMind]

The key is to keep it real - - things that actually happen in life.

For example:
A man in his early 30s is left financially devastated after a bitter divorce, and can only afford a one room apartment in a run-down neighborhood.

A widowed mom, who is financially well off, can’t stand to see her only child living in these conditions; however, she knows that he is too proud to ever ask to move back home.

In the pretext of her son doing it for her, she tells him that since his dad died, she is tired of living alone in her big old house, and needs someone to help out around the house. And having company again would be wonderful.

Subconsciously, he knows why his mom is asking him to move back home, but he also knows that she is lonely, and really would like the company. So, he swallows his pride and moves back home.

Things don’t happen quickly in real life, it may be months, even a year or two before anything happens. His mom has been a housewife and mother for her whole life, and naturally, she assumes her traditional role as mom, doing the cooking, housework, laundry, etc.

This her house, and she has never felt like she needed to knock on a door before entering the room. One evening after he thought his mom had gone to bed, she opens the door and walks into the room with an armload of his clothes to hang them in the closet. And there her son sits in all his glory, laptop open to porn, pants around his ankles, with his dick in his hand, and he is embarrassed to no end! He quickly grabs a pillow from the bed and covers himself.

And mom being mom, sarcastically says: “I don’t know what you’re embarrassed about, I know men jack off, I’ve seen your father do it enough!”

She realizes that didn’t help much, so she softens her tone and says: “I know you are lonely and it’s OK.” Then leaves the room, still carrying the laundry.

This isn’t enough for the son, so he pulls his pants up and follows her to apologize; however, her statement about seeing her husband jack off has opened up some old wounds, and it makes her sad.

Before he can apologize, she says: “I miss your father!”

She has had no one to share her feelings with since her husband died, and now she unloads all of those pent up feelings on her son.

Not a sexual conversation, just all of the hurts and disappointments she has felt over the years. (The family is reasonably wealthy) Then she says: “Don’t misunderstand, your father was a good man, and I loved him deeply. He gave me everything I ever wanted, including a wonderful son, but I feel that I have missed so much in life!”

Confused, the son asks what she meant.

She suddenly becomes uncomfortable, and stammers. Not satisfied, the son pushes it and asks again what she meant.

Stuttering and stammering, she says: “Well….. uh…… sexually, uh, your dad wasn't exactly everything he could have been.”

And the son responds: “uh…” looking like a deer in the headlights. To which mom uncomfortably responds: “Well…. Uh, for one thing…. I, Uh, I’ve never had oral sex.” And an awkward conversation follows about the sex she never had. Nothing arousing, just an awkward conversation, and afterwards, both went to their own bed room for the night.

The son dismisses the conversation for what it was, and goes to sleep - - HOWEVER - - the next morning, he awakens with a raging hard. He has been dreaming about his mother all night! He dismisses this as just one of those things - - unfortunately - - for the next two weeks, and much as he swears he isn’t going to do it again, he opens his laptop every night, clicks on Mom/Son porn and strokes, fantasizing about his own mother.

This goes on until it affects their relationship, and frustrated, she corners her son and demands: “What’s wrong, what have I done?” To which the son responds: “Nothing is wrong.” to which the mother demands: “You’re the only person I have that cares about me, and I’m not going to have barriers between us, now WHAT’S WRONG?”

The son sheepishly confesses that he has been having fantasies about her and masturbating, to which she responds: “Is that all?” And continues: “It’s my fault, I guess I shouldn’t have told you about sex between me and your father.” “Don’t worry about it, I don’t mind if you have fantasies about me, I just don’t want any barriers between us.”

And she goes on about her daily chores, but dismissing his fantasies only encouraged him. With common sense starting to go out the window, he follow his mother. (I never said he was too bright)

He hugs his mom, looks into her eyes and says: “I love you.” She looks at him and their eyes lock. When there is an attraction between a man and woman, and their eyes lock in a certain way, their emotions change. And they start thinking as one.

Mom staring deeply into her sons eyes, says: “We shouldn’t do this.”

And here is the key, she said: “We shouldn’t do this”, not “We can’t do this!”

They kiss and embrace as any lover’s first kiss. Getting up his courage, he takes her hand, and starts to lead her toward the bedroom, thinking, any minute she is going to stop me, but she follows him.

In the bed room, they continue to kiss and embrace. After a while, he lays her on the bed, sure that any second she will say no, but she doesn’t resist. His heart pounding like it is going to rip out of his chest, he pulls up her dress, and tries to pull down her panties. Her legs lock, and he freezes, sure he has fucked up his relationship with his mom.

She looks him in the eye and says: “Are you sure about this?”, and he sheepishly nods. She relaxes and raises her butt, allowing him to pull down her panties.

And they are white cotton panties! Moms don’t wear stockings and garter belts around the house! They wear white cotton “mom” panties, cotton bra, if a bra at all, usually without makeup. And a cotton house dress to do household things. She is in her late 50s, and may be a little overweight, but not obese! She is well beyond menopause and doesn’t even consider a condom or contraception. And when a man or a woman starts getting older, they start to look at life differently - - you can’t apply an younger person’s morals to a older person’s morals in a story. Life has a way of changing your thinking as you grow older!

And with her panties down, there before him is the vagina that gave him life! He kisses her on the stomach, then on her pussy, and she gasps! She is soaking wet! This is the first sex she has had since before her husband had his stroke years ago.

He moves between her legs and gives her oral sex. This is their first time, so nothing kinky or elaborate, just oral sex and an orgasm. She has a strong orgasm because it has been so long! He can feel her tremble as the orgasm builds.

After the orgasm subsides, he cuddles against his mother like a little boy again. She turns over and kisses him. This is the first time she has tasted herself.

She pulls him close and whispers in his ear so softly, “love me son.”

He doesn’t know how he got out of his clothes, they just seemed to disappear, and he found himself between his mother’s legs. And any morals or common sense that he may have had left just went out the window! Soaking wet, his cock slid so easily into his mother’s pussy, and he made love to his mother for the first time! Sex with his ex-wife was always good, but there was never anything like this!

They made love, not fucked! This is the love they both so badly needed!

The next morning when he awoke, she was already up, and he could smell bacon cooking. He put his clothes back on that were laying by the bed and went down stairs. When he walked into the kitchen. She was putting the food on the breakfast table. When he started to speak, her eyes turned hard, and she put her finger on his lips. And her eyes said: “DON’T SAY A WORD!” Then her eyes softened, she smiled and said: “Let’s have breakfast.”

The reason her eyes turned hard is because she didn’t want him to spoil it by saying the wrong thing.

After breakfast, she put her hands on his hips, looked deeply into his eyes, and said: “I love you, and I don’t regret anything we have done, and I don’t want you to regret it either.”

They kissed, and it was at this point that mother and son became lovers, and a son took his father’s place in his mother’s bed.

At this point, you can go as kinky as you wish, because the mother is experiencing all of the things she missed while being married to his father.

Sorry to go into so much detail, but I needed to make the point, that for a story to be believable, you have to build the foundation on the emotions that the reader, (whether male or female), might experience if they became involved in this situation in real life. To understand these emotions, mentally, put yourself in the role of the son, and imagine the emotions you would experience. If you are not sexually attracted to your own mom, then create a fantasy mom. To write emotions, you have to experience the emotions yourself, and the reader has to be able to identify with the emotions.

Experience the emotions yourself, then build the emotional foundation of the story, and let the reader identify with the story.

Just my thoughts…………..

Good grief, if you don't write this, somebody needs to. I'm healed enough now from the emotional incest trauma with my mother that I can read mother/son. But I still can't write mother/son--otherwise, I might try to write this one myself.

 

[BrandDickens]

The key to writing any story is achieving the suspension of disbelief. When someone like Stephen King does it, we believe all sorts of "impossible" things. Some of the writers on here get close, too.

 

[y=mx+b]

Son and his wife are swingers
Unknowingly to him, so are his parents.

There is a hotel takeover event where their respective secret lives intersect.

It's weird. Awkward.
But it's all out there now.

Perhaps they don't fuck then and there that night. Perhaps they don't fuck at all? But the notion is there.

Perhaps as the story develops an interest and attraction develops between the father and daughter-in-law. But there's a dilemma. The dilemma being both couples respectively agreed to only swing as couples

The story could go a number of ways where its just a fantasy or the mother and son adopt a voyeuristic roll watching the father and daughter-in-law begin the process of romancing each other.

In the fantasy route where there's no fucking but the thought is a turn on, the father could say things like... "Do you suppose his ejaculate tastes the same as mine?" While they are having sex. A good author might be able to develop this idea further to where the mother becomes fixated on the thought until she absolutely has to find out.

The voyeuristic route a good author could maybe fleshout the curious discomfort both the mother and son are feeling as they watch the father and daughter-in-law cautiously begin the process of making out and getting a feel of the situation and at hand. And as the daughter-in-law begins to make her way down to expose the fathers cock she looks to the son and her mother-in-law for both encouragement as well as for the exhibitionist thrill, further forcing the mother and son to face what they are witnessing as well as their growing want to participate


I imagine the story would have to be a slow burn in order for a reader to become invested in all the individuals and their feelings in order for it to seem remotely plausible

 

[TheDubbs]

There’s a fairly infamous thread on Reddit about a guy who supposedly developed an intimate relationship with his mom and swears it was a real thing that happened. He gave lots of details answered tons of questions, and even if it wasn’t real, it definitely felt authentic, which is the most important part for a story.

Basically it started when he accidentally broke both of his arms in an accident. His mom was taking care of him and noticed his constant and painful erections since he couldn’t take care of himself, so she grudgingly offered to help. At first they were both kind of mortified, but it became a normal occurrence after a couple more times and they continued their sessions even after he healed. It progressed until they were regularly having sex for several years.

The interesting thing about it is that the mom was still married and the dad knew about it the entire time and allowed it to go on. That in particular was a really erotic twist I didn’t expect.

Seriously, go look it up if you want some great and hot reading. Just do a search for “Reddit IAMA Mom Son” and it should be near the top.

 

[Barbara1962]

Son and his wife are swingers
Unknowingly to him, so are his parents.

There is a hotel takeover event where their respective secret lives intersect.

It's weird. Awkward.
But it's all out there now.

Perhaps they don't fuck then and there that night. Perhaps they don't fuck at all? But the notion is there.

Perhaps as the story develops an interest and attraction develops between the father and daughter-in-law. But there's a dilemma. The dilemma being both couples respectively agreed to only swing as couples

The story could go a number of ways where its just a fantasy or the mother and son adopt a voyeuristic roll watching the father and daughter-in-law begin the process of romancing each other.

In the fantasy route where there's no fucking but the thought is a turn on, the father could say things like... "Do you suppose his ejaculate tastes the same as mine?" While they are having sex. A good author might be able to develop this idea further to where the mother becomes fixated on the thought until she absolutely has to find out.

The voyeuristic route a good author could maybe fleshout the curious discomfort both the mother and son are feeling as they watch the father and daughter-in-law cautiously begin the process of making out and getting a feel of the situation and at hand. And as the daughter-in-law begins to make her way down to expose the fathers cock she looks to the son and her mother-in-law for both encouragement as well as for the exhibitionist thrill, further forcing the mother and son to face what they are witnessing as well as their growing want to participate


I imagine the story would have to be a slow burn in order for a reader to become invested in all the individuals and their feelings in order for it to seem remotely plausible

I would imagine if mother and son were watching this happen one or both would start to touch the other in some way. Maybe mum wants to make sure her son is not feeling unhappy and so offers some hand relief? Maybe that encourages the son to touch mum somewhere. Maybe they just share a kiss that unleashes hidden feelings and they leave father and DIL to it while they go and explore themselves. I think we fool ourselves if we think that formal relationships always get in the way of lust/need/desire. It gets in the way of taking action on those feelings of course. NO EMALS or PMs.