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I swear to tell the truth the hole truth and nothing but the truth so help me god
 
Chicklet said:
<groan> I think that it IS going to kill me (not this story, but the whole zillion stories to finish thing)

love the new av
 
Chicklet said:
Hey All,

I've recently started a story about a young woman who hears her brother and his girlfriend having sex in the room next to hers, which starts a curiosity that I want to develope into the girl eventually involving herself in a threesome with the brother. I hope you could follow that, I'm a little bit sleepy. So, do you think that this is a good idea? I asked my boyfriend and he just shrugged, he's not much help sometimes = p Does anyone have any suggestions on how I can get this story from point A to point B?

Chicklet

Are you still working on this? Does it need to be brother/sister? How about two women, college roomates. One brings a date to their room and the two of tem get noisy enough to waken/arouse the roomie. You lose the incest but it makes it easier to get them into bed together.

Unless you believe, as I have been told, that only women understand women...and they don't like each other.
 
as far as i got with this idea

Hello my name is Eve I am an 18 year old student from Any town University I am studying law and I have been struggling to cope since the death of my parents almost a year ago as it was the holidays I decided to return to my home town and see my brother, his name is Adam he has always looked after me if I ever had a problem he was the one I would talk to. when we were growing up I would often jump into his bed if I was scared or if there was a thunder storm and to be quite honest I think he liked me doing it as we always were cuddled together when we woke up or his arm would be wrapped around me or my head would be on his chest, it was nice.

Now things were different Adam is living with someone there would be no way that I would be able to talk my problems through with my brother until I fell asleep in his arms, safe till the morning but never mind it will be nice to see Adam happy. the train pulled into the station bang on time it had been a pleasant journey and I had been talking most of the way with a African couple that were retracing there routes from the slavery of there family’s to the present day it was very interesting to find out about the hardships that there forefathers endured to make the world a better place for there children.

As we said our good byes I wished them good luck with there journey and as I picked up my bag the woman grabbed my free hand and said. "Good luck with yours." and thrust something small into my hand. I didn’t look at what was in my hand it just was small and hard that’s all I could tell, I got of the train and shoved my hand in my pocket letting go of the object before pulling it out again.

The platform was busy and I could not see Adam anywhere but as the crowds cleared I felt a tap on my shoulder, as I turned around I was amazed at what I was looking at. if I had not known better I would have sworn I was looking at my own reflection in a mirror it was early seeing someone that looked so similar to me that we could pass as sisters, her hair was darker and longer but that was all.

She grabbed my arm and my bag and we walked to the end of the platform as if we were sisters, she said my names. “Emma by the way.” My mind was thinking how come that this woman was the spiting image of me but only older? What was I to think all the times that we slept together when we were younger he wanted me and this was the result a clone no it was just a coincidence and they do say that the person you end up with in life will be someone that resembles your parents and she looks like me and I resemble my father so the choice was a natural one.

We got to the car park and there was Adam stood by his car smoking a cigarette I ran up to him and hugged him tight the realised he stunk of cigarettes and let go of him saying. “You Stink.” By this time Emma caught me up and said the same as me Adam had stubbed the cigarette out on the floor.

“Ok Ok, now what would my two favourite ladies’ want to do for dinner? I am starving.” Adam said. Emma whispered something into Adams ear then looked at me as Adam laughed. I was going to ask what was so funny but I was pre-empted by Emma saying the name of the restaurant she wanted to eat at and we all got into the car and drove off. We drove for about 10 minute’s and pulled into a small restaurant got out and walked in Adam was asked where we would like to sit Smoking or non smoking as he opened his mouth to speak both Emma and I belted out “Non-Smoking.” To Adam’s annoyance he agreed then we were shown to a nice table by the window as we ordered Emma and I found out our tastes were similar music and dress all along the same lines as each other and by the time we had finished our meals it felt like we had grown up with each other.

I was feeling tired by the time we got home so I asked if they would mind if I turned in. Emma showed me to a room she said that the bathroom adjoined there room and showed me where every thing was and asked. “If I wanted any help unpacking?” I replied. “No thanks.” She left through the bathroom and I put my clothes away and found my toiletry bag where I knew my small vibrator was putting this under my pillow I put the bag in the bathroom noticing the she had left the door ajar that led to there bedroom I peaked around the door to see if she was still there but she wasn’t so I returned to my room tacking my tee-shirt off on the way allowing my breasts free I was about to slip out of my jeans when there was knock at the door “Its only me.” Said Emma as the door opened and she walked in I tried to grab my tee shirt but it was too late she was in and had seen me before I could cover my self so I didn’t bother trying. “I am sorry.” She said and she put some towels on the bed.

I sat there and asked her to sit with me for a second I explained my reason for the visit and she said I could stay as long as I wanted she gave me a hug saying. “If you get cold there’s another quilt in the cupboard.” Pointing to the tall cupboard in the corner of the room then as she left the room I undid the button on my jeans and slipped under the sheets on the bed and reached under my pillow and reached for my automatic lover turning it on I started to work on my body first my neck then my breast playing with my nipples till they were both hard I made my way down over my stomach till I found the hood of my pussy inserting it into my petal lips I soon became aroused I pulled it out and started to circle my clitoris using my other hand to finger my sex as a orgasm began to build, I closed my eyes and bit my lip as the orgasm flooded my very sole I slipped my toy back into sex hole proceeding to bash hard at my sex sending me over the edge I arched my back lifting my ass of the bed trying not to scream or make any noise that would alert Adam or Emma to my masturbation which added to the lust that was flooding my body and adding to the intensity of my orgasm. I must have fallen asleep after this as the next thing I woke up feeling thirsty as I normally do I after an orgasm I looked around my room to get my bearings then noticed that my quilt was not messed up and my vibrator was on the bedside table I looked at it thinking how did that get there I got out of bed and the cool of the night air hit my breast my nipples became erect and goose bumps formed across my breasts I walked to the bathroom by the light of the bedside lamp trying not to make any noise I found a glass and turned the water on it hit the bottom of the bowl as the cold water splashed my naked body I stepped back sharply as I did I noticed the door to my brothers bedroom was still a jar and the light was on I filled my glass then turned the tap off as it became quite again I could hear muffled moans coming from there bedroom I tried to peak and see what was going on but this was difficult without giving my presents away looking at the edge of the door I noticed a mirror hanging on the wall as I looked at it I realised what I was looking at was the reflection of the room moving my position in the bathroom changed my view of the room. I soon found the beds reflection in the mirror and the cause of the moans Emma was gagged and bound she was tide up into a ball type shape something like a butcher would tie a ham, her legs were pulled into her chest and I could see wear the ties were cutting into her delicate skin her arms went through the centre of her legs so her hands and feet were under her in her hand was an enormous dildo or vibrator that she was pushing in and out of her pussy as she hung there was also hanging from four ropes tide to the ceiling keeping her about 1 foot off the bed Adam was behind her hanging on to her hair pulling her back on to his member that was imbedded in her ass she was being rocked forward and back and let out a moan each time his member buried itself deep into her ass.
 
Linnet, my love, before you post it on Lit I suggest you try to break down some of those paragraphs. It's a problem I have, too, but Lit's format makes it a little awkward to read those long paragraphs. Some people will vote you down, or stop reading, because of them.

xoxo
Chicklet
 
Chicklet said:
Linnet, my love, before you post it on Lit I suggest you try to break down some of those paragraphs. It's a problem I have, too, but Lit's format makes it a little awkward to read those long paragraphs. Some people will vote you down, or stop reading, because of them.

xoxo
Chicklet
Hi chicklet I got the Email frome Lthismorning saying the same thing it was an error on my part and a few other things I make mistakes when I write with my eyes shut thanks for your comments and dont forget it was based on your Idea.
OXOX
 
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Chicklet said:
don't make me pull out my cattle prod! BEHAVE!

Now that reminds me of a story about a ranch that abuse ran through the family the problem was it included younger than 18 year olds but not in a sexual way so I don’t know it I would be able to post it on lit E but will put it up on my own site in the next few days it would make a great RPG if others would like to contribute we will see:D
 
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