Literotica Orgy!!! (A chain story.)

Eve.... the way you walk everyone into the story, it's like I was there, and I felt everything. I just didn't expect you to snatch Cap up to room so fast! I dunno if it's a good thing or not... but it didn't feel as uncomfy as the thought of incest makes me feel. It was just all so visual. I read all three chapters one after the other last night... loved the disgusted woman at the front desk. When Vis entered and the girls held the twig up to show he'd been seen....For a moment, with all the sceaming and stuff upstairs, I had this strange feeling she might...join in. Well, I can't wait to read the rest! :D :D :D
 
rydia57 said:
Eve.... the way you walk everyone into the story, it's like I was there, and I felt everything. I just didn't expect you to snatch Cap up to room so fast! I dunno if it's a good thing or not... but it didn't feel as uncomfy as the thought of incest makes me feel. It was just all so visual. I read all three chapters one after the other last night... loved the disgusted woman at the front desk. When Vis entered and the girls held the twig up to show he'd been seen....For a moment, with all the sceaming and stuff upstairs, I had this strange feeling she might...join in. Well, I can't wait to read the rest! :D :D :D

I'm glad to hear that my chapter was vivid and you were able to place yourself there visually (as well as not "grossing you out" with the incest role play! lol). :)
 
OneLustyWench said:
Rydia, How do you feel about your roles so far?


Well most of it was as if someone found out I had an addiction to cocksucking and worked with it! I really enjoyed it so far... well except for one small thing....I guess I fantasized about getting to do a DP with Tex and Sean too... I haven't the slightest why but reading it gave me a huge... well, I had to relieve. But this is an orgy, so anything could happen. I don't usually read continuing stories cos I have a short attention span. In this case, it's different.
 
Well I hope you like my Chapter. As soon as it is edited I will submit it and let everyone know.
 
Alright peeps... Chapter 3 has been submitted and waiting for approval. I hope everyone enjoys!
 
Dunchad said:
Alright peeps... Chapter 3 has been submitted and waiting for approval. I hope everyone enjoys!

Hot damn! I'll keep an eye out for it so I can list it in my sig line. ;)


Pressure's on baby bro!
 
Hallowed Eve said:
Hot damn! I'll keep an eye out for it so I can list it in my sig line. ;)


Pressure's on baby bro!
hehe great to hear that all's going well with everything thus far!

I will be working on my next chapter from late tomorrow afternoon, so should give me a week or so, and then I'll probably have mine submitted - barring any unforseen travesty, knocking on wood ;)

Capt
 
TheCaptain said:
hehe great to hear that all's going well with everything thus far!

I will be working on my next chapter from late tomorrow afternoon, so should give me a week or so, and then I'll probably have mine submitted - barring any unforseen travesty, knocking on wood ;)

Capt

If you knock on your wood that might hurt a bit. Or are you into some pain too? :devil:
 
Hallowed Eve said:
If you knock on your wood that might hurt a bit. Or are you into some pain too? :devil:
depends on who's doing the knocking? ;) though I rather you do somethin else to my wood, to be sure :)

Capt
 
Whee....and after Capt it's my turn!! :) I'm hoping it'll make my writer's block go away.
 
Hallowed Eve said:
Yikes! It better! lol
heheh :)

well just a quick update for those that are interested, I'm aproximately halfway through my own chapter now, having almost wrapped up a one-on-one scene between myself and 'Aunt' Minxy, with a little nod towards the rest of the gang off doing their own buziness :cool:

I'm thoroughly enjoying this, and within the next day or two I hope to have my work done and dusted, submitting it before I must leave again on Tuesday for yet another horrid work conference :(

Capt
 
TheCaptain said:
heheh :)

well just a quick update for those that are interested, I'm aproximately halfway through my own chapter now, having almost wrapped up a one-on-one scene between myself and 'Aunt' Minxy, with a little nod towards the rest of the gang off doing their own buziness :cool:

I'm thoroughly enjoying this, and within the next day or two I hope to have my work done and dusted, submitting it before I must leave again on Tuesday for yet another horrid work conference :(

Capt

Sounds good, Capt. :) In the odd chance that the site has not accepted Dunchad's chapter by the time you're submitting yours, just add a little note that yours is chapter four and that chapter three is still pending! (It seemed to light a fire under Laurel when Vis wrote that in his notes about my chapter! ;))

As for the conference, you're on your own there! :eek: lol Think dirty thoughts to help it breeze by! :kiss:
 
Well, I ship out for Basic next Monday, does anyone want me to jump ahead in line, or will this story still be going strong in June?
 
Texguy84 said:
Well, I ship out for Basic next Monday, does anyone want me to jump ahead in line, or will this story still be going strong in June?

*cries* No go!!!!!!


I'd like to think we could be going strong in June. Tomorrow starts the second week in April and we have the third chapter pending. It seems we may have to skip your original chapter and add you to the tail end of the story.

So this brings me to an interesting question. Depending on where we take the story line, do any current authors want to take on a second chapter in this saga?

Right now we'd only have 10 chapters, 11 if I took on a second one to wrap up the tale at the end. In the event that we can't work Tex back into the rotation then we'd be looking at 9/10 chapters respectfully.

Input, please?
 
Hallowed Eve said:
*cries* No go!!!!!!


I'd like to think we could be going strong in June. Tomorrow starts the second week in April and we have the third chapter pending. It seems we may have to skip your original chapter and add you to the tail end of the story.

So this brings me to an interesting question. Depending on where we take the story line, do any current authors want to take on a second chapter in this saga?

Right now we'd only have 10 chapters, 11 if I took on a second one to wrap up the tale at the end. In the event that we can't work Tex back into the rotation then we'd be looking at 9/10 chapters respectfully.

Input, please?

I might be talked into writing another depending on where the story goes and which characters are still active by the end.
 
im_invisible69 said:
I might be talked into writing another depending on where the story goes and which characters are still active by the end.
Echoes my sentiments exact-a-mundo :)

Capt
 
Hallowed Eve said:
Yikes! It better! lol

Ha! Well I just completed the story that'd been holding me back for awhile so yay on that! I'm going to start jotting down some stuff to get me started on my chapter so once it's my turn, I'll have a springboard. :) Would I be correct in assuming that I could get the chapter via PM or email while it's pending? Sorry I've been so MIA lately.
 
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