rydia57
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Eve.... the way you walk everyone into the story, it's like I was there, and I felt everything. I just didn't expect you to snatch Cap up to room so fast! I dunno if it's a good thing or not... but it didn't feel as uncomfy as the thought of incest makes me feel. It was just all so visual. I read all three chapters one after the other last night... loved the disgusted woman at the front desk. When Vis entered and the girls held the twig up to show he'd been seen....For a moment, with all the sceaming and stuff upstairs, I had this strange feeling she might...join in. Well, I can't wait to read the rest!


