Little Hearts Club

[MichaelS101662]

I would like to see this story take off as part of a long series of stories (the longer and more descriptive, the better). I wish I were capable of doing it myself, but it seems to be sorely lacking in description (since i'm not female, i can't describe how things actually feel to a female in the sexual point of view). Not to mention not knowing how they would vocalize things as they happen. i can give generalizations, but that's the best I can do.

 

[snooper]

... since i'm not female, i can't describe how things actually feel to a female in the sexual point of view ...

Why ever not? Lots of us do that, including me.

 

[emap]

Michael your shy a few brain cells there, really must lay off the daytime TV, hmmm you know actually you really must lay off TV.

Your on a forum with many women posting, not hard to ask one of us. Besides alot of the guys are married and can ask their wife.

Oh bad snoopy bad, my words are not all that short. Besides THIS is my longest to date, at least until I get my last one back from my editor, something like 3 times as long.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Ummm snoopy your a tad off on the lit page size, I have a three page story and the first page is 4033 words. Though I think it's not so much the word count as the line count, it shows up as 292 lines, but I am not sure if it is counting the blank lines between paragraphs, and I remember reading what seemed to be longer stories on one page with no blank lines.

Huh, do you realize, this is the first time I've caught you being wrong? I swear I think maybe your starting to get a little old, long ways behind sirhugs though so don't feel bad.

A Lit page DOES count blank lines. Depending on the amount of dialogue one Lit Page ranges between 2600 and 3500 words. That makes 7500-9000 words for each Lit chapter. So we have 15 to 18000 words. If you look at my original post. I mis-spoke. My thinking was for each chapter, not for the entire story. Very few stories go for the entire 3 Lit pages so 5-6000 wordes is about2-2-1/2 Lit pages or 5-6000 words per chapter.

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

I would like to see this story take off as part of a long series of stories (the longer and more descriptive, the better).

You certainly have a tendancy to be free with other writer's time and efforts. Personally my feeling is with your attitude either write it yourself or go bugger your self. You keep making this a bigger and bigger project for someone else. That's rude and cruel. I'm terribly sorry YOU have no life but I for one have no plan to spend the rest of my life trying to please some conceted moron with big ideas and little or no respect.

Bye

 

[RisiaSkye]

My, people certainly do get hot under the collar over some little things.
I would hope that everyone would try to keep it friendly.


RS
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[MichaelS101662]

I didn't reply because I firgured it was best not to fuel the pending fire. it's only a story...not worth getting upset over.

 

[MichaelS101662]

is there a way to get this thread removed since it is not going anywhere?

 

[Texguy84]

Well, the thing is, each time you reply to it, it gets kicked straight to the top of the list, while if you ignore it, it will fall off the bottom of the page and into obscurity.