Looking for Beta Readers for Part Two of My Exhibition/Submission & Edging Series

[Offeredup]

I’m looking for beta readers for the second installment of my series (7000 words).
While the first part leaned too much toward ENF, I received some great feedback and am shifting away from that toward a deeper exploration of submission—Mia’s surrender, the slow, unbearable build of edging, and the hands guiding her there. Stripped, bound at the ankles, and at their mercy, she’s brought to the brink.
If the story description appeals to you, I’d love to hear from you. I can send it as an email. Looking for feedback on character depth, pacing and what works (or doesn’t). I'd like to get at least one female and male reader.

 

[Intelectual81]

I’m looking for beta readers for the second installment of my series (7000 words).
While the first part leaned too much toward ENF, I received some great feedback and am shifting away from that toward a deeper exploration of submission—Mia’s surrender, the slow, unbearable build of edging, and the hands guiding her there. Stripped, bound at the ankles, and at their mercy, she’s brought to the brink.
If the story description appeals to you, I’d love to hear from you. I can send it as an email. Looking for feedback on character depth, pacing and what works (or doesn’t). I'd like to get at least one female and male reader.

Are you still looking?
I'm available for proofreading.

 

[sussisub]

I’m looking for beta readers for the second installment of my series (7000 words).
While the first part leaned too much toward ENF, I received some great feedback and am shifting away from that toward a deeper exploration of submission—Mia’s surrender, the slow, unbearable build of edging, and the hands guiding her there. Stripped, bound at the ankles, and at their mercy, she’s brought to the brink.
If the story description appeals to you, I’d love to hear from you. I can send it as an email. Looking for feedback on character depth, pacing and what works (or doesn’t). I'd like to get at least one female and male reader.

Nooo, we need more ENF

 

[Offeredup]

Are you still looking?
I'm available for proofreading.

Thanks so much! The story is published. I may still seek out beta readers for future chapters. Less for proofreading and more for general vibe. I'm getting more confident now though since both of my stories got the hot rating. Can I reach out when I'm looking in the future?

Is this kinda story your cup? https://www.literotica.com/s/pt-02-dressed-and-denied

 

[Offeredup]

Nooo, we need more ENF

@sussisub Fair! I'm hoping to still keep my ENF readers. Can you tell me honestly, does it lose you?

https://www.literotica.com/s/pt-02-dressed-and-denied