Mama, just killed a man

I knocked a few guys off in my Dark Fairy Tales entry last year. Five men go to confront a trio of witches, four of them don't make it. This being an erotica site the fifth has a better time than the others...
 
On Lit, my first on-screen death was Red Callum. It wasn't quiet, it wasn't clean, and he felt plenty, but if you're going to have sex with a strange lady in a haunted crypt on Halloween you have only yourself to blame.
 
I've written several deaths, mostly natural deaths of older secondary characters mentioned but not described.

I've had an FMC die a natural death, the story told 1P by MMC, years later, during his final illness.

I've detailed my only violent death earlier in this thread--a police-assisted suicide.

No deaths planned in either of my WIPs, which are actively being written.
 
I had my second kill in the same story (it's a romance, btw), and I'm starting to get a taste for it.

The Netflix special's gonna open up with "AH all knew something was wrong with her from her very first story about an intercollegiate blowjob league ..."
 
Huh, never thought about it. I believe it must have been that foolish traitor Dymon, shivved in the back by Aechus after having delivered up the town to him. Much reviled story by readers, but because of the verse, not the murder.

Though Aechus hadn’t yet decided what to do / with princess fair, he never, with this turncoat, had / the least intent to share. So, loomed a-back of grin- / mugged fool, he twice or thrice in kidneys shivved. Man fell / face-down—to hide one last, condemnatory glare.
 
I just realized that I did kill a (hu)man, not once but twice with free verse. The first free verse is titled The Lucky Plate Club. It is a dark dystopian fairy tale with a Soylent Green twist. The second time is for my non-erotic free verse titled Seventeen, which has to do with capital punishment. I also wrote another non-erotic free verse where society does the killing called Click
 
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