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[EnglishEm]

No problem, Em...I believe in fair and honest critiquing too.

I only have one story on Lit, and know it wasn't my best work....would much rather get a genuine 2 or 3 with some constructive criticism attached, than an automatic 5 with no comment. The former helps you aspire and grow as a writer, the latter, not so much. I do like your writing style, tho....you have a lot of strong qualities, and have a great knack for description.


~Wyld

Send me the link to your story, I'd love to read it. As for what you said regarding the honest critique...I totally agree with you And if you keep on complimenting me, I'm going to have trouble fitting my head through the door lol!...but thank you...it means a lot to get an honest but praiseworthy comment...

 

[1sweetlover]

yea some times but its just part of who I am

We are who we are hun.....

 

[deadpoolit]

wow the good morning one was a turn on very nice

 

[EnglishEm]

I think I'm starting to lust you

You should be lusting after sweetlover...she has perfect boobs!

 

[deadpoolit]

that we are sweets that we are

 

[deadpoolit]

perfect boobs and a dirty mind perfect combos in women

 

[brickroadray]

You should be lusting after sweetlover...she has perfect boobs!

I agree and I already do!

 

[tonythom]

You should be lusting after sweetlover...she has perfect boobs!

i'm lusting over something much lower on sweetlover's body.... that i think is the "sweet" part...

now I'm licking my lips wishing i was licking hers hehehee

 

[deadpoolit]

great stories em I might have to make a tirp to the gas station lol

 

[1sweetlover]

i'm lusting over something much lower on sweetlover's body.... that i think is the "sweet" part...

now I'm licking my lips wishing i was licking hers hehehee

Awwwww...you guys are just too much!!

Tony, you never pm'd me back!!! Hmph!!

 

[1sweetlover]

You should be lusting after sweetlover...she has perfect boobs!

Thanks Em...I kind of like them myself

 

[deadpoolit]

you know something that just poped in to my mind some times when women see the ring they have become the agressors any guys notices that

 

[omnivour]

indeed...the ring seems to bring out the beast in some women

 

[1sweetlover]

you know something that just poped in to my mind some times when women see the ring they have become the agressors any guys notices that

We want what we can't have....makes us aggressive <---did I spell that right?

 

[brickroadray]

Awwwww...you guys are just too much!!

Tony, you never pm'd me back!!! Hmph!!

I'll pm you.....

You on Yahoo this morning by any chance?

 

[1sweetlover]

indeed...the ring seems to bring out the beast in some women

It brings out something...

 

[tonythom]

Awwwww...you guys are just too much!!

Tony, you never pm'd me back!!! Hmph!!

now that i've got my pm box under control I promise i will dear

 

[EnglishEm]

great stories em I might have to make a tirp to the gas station lol

Haha, I'm glad you liked them!

Thanks Em...I kind of like them myself

My boobs are too big...you can't find that many sexy bras for large cups

 

[1sweetlover]

I'll pm you.....

You on Yahoo this morning by any chance?

No sweetie, I'm at the hospital with my mom this morning...I managed to get on here with my iphone...I can't get on yahoo with my phone...yet...

 

[1sweetlover]

now that i've got my pm box under control I promise i will dear

Is the rest of you "under control"???

 

[deadpoolit]

well Ive got a good story if any one is intrested

 

[1sweetlover]

Haha, I'm glad you liked them!



My boobs are too big...you can't find that many sexy bras for large cups

You have pics up yet??

 

[brickroadray]

No sweetie, I'm at the hospital with my mom this morning...I managed to get on here with my iphone...I can't get on yahoo with my phone...yet...

Aww, I'm sorry - hope everything is OK.

 

[deadpoolit]

same here sweets but I would like to find out more about em boobs

 

[deadpoolit]

also could use some friends on yahoo only got like three any more