Mmf

[Carlos 74]

I wouldn't mind writing a mmf story, but I suck as a writer. Maybe somebody can use my experience with the matter:
I've had the same best friend since around the 4rth grade. Actually, he's like a brother. We did the typical buddy shit during and after high school, like hooking up with some chick at the bar one after the other, but when he got married that all stopped. Not that getting married was bad because he wife was really cool, but I'm not gonna get my married buddy laid now that he's all grown up. Well, that all changed not too long ago. He admitted to me that he likes to watch his wife get fucked, and she would do me if I was cool with it. I said hell yeah I was cool with that, since I had wanted to drill her since we were introduced. I came over, we all did some X, and I went to work. Now you know that when you do enough X, you're open to just about anything, so I invited my friend to join in on his wife. Now we have an arrangement, we're gonna keep doing it until they're ready for kids, I certainly don't want to knock up my best friend's wife.

 

[GreenEyedGodess]

I wouldn't mind writing a mmf story, but I suck as a writer. Maybe somebody can use my experience with the matter:
I've had the same best friend since around the 4rth grade. Actually, he's like a brother. We did the typical buddy shit during and after high school, like hooking up with some chick at the bar one after the other, but when he got married that all stopped. Not that getting married was bad because he wife was really cool, but I'm not gonna get my married buddy laid now that he's all grown up. Well, that all changed not too long ago. He admitted to me that he likes to watch his wife get fucked, and she would do me if I was cool with it. I said hell yeah I was cool with that, since I had wanted to drill her since we were introduced. I came over, we all did some X, and I went to work. Now you know that when you do enough X, you're open to just about anything, so I invited my friend to join in on his wife. Now we have an arrangement, we're gonna keep doing it until they're ready for kids, I certainly don't want to knock up my best friend's wife.

Wow! That's really hot! You could turn that into a story and post it here, I know everyone would love to read it. And there is no judgement on your writing abilities.

 

[Carlos 74]

I'm glad you liked it. I have a hard time writing because basically, All I can give you is the facts. You guys write great stories, and when I read them I guess I get intimidated. I read your stories and I feel like I'm actually there, but when I try to put mine on paper, it just looks like a police report. "Just the facts, ma'am."

 

[sirhugs]

I'm glad you liked it. I have a hard time writing because basically, All I can give you is the facts. You guys write great stories, and when I read them I guess I get intimidated. I read your stories and I feel like I'm actually there, but when I try to put mine on paper, it just looks like a police report. "Just the facts, ma'am."

1. Read poetry
2. Read a craft book. I haven't read it yet, but Stephen King's On Writing ( a slim volume) is highly recommended.
3. Find an editor. Ask them not just to proof read, but top suggest how to embellish ( put back those emotive words your technical writing instructor made you take out).