Mother\Daughter series feedback

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Hi,
I had a bit of a mad idea, about a girl meeting her mother out with an unknown boyfriend and it turning into a wild night, which I turned into a story a few years ago. After a bit of feedback, I kind of turned this into somewhat of a series.

The story is Catching Mom on her night out.

I'm just looking on any feedback ideas, were the series may go. I know one chapter, is a bit below good grammar standards, but I always look to work on things.

So if you have any feedback, please let me know.

Thanks