Indian_angel
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- Oct 7, 2016
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Hi all,
I’m currently working on an Two part erotic story and I’m looking for an editor or beta reader who can help me refine it.
The story is set in India about a Married Female and focuses navigating desire, guilt, and manipulation as she gets pulled into a situation she can’t easily walk away from. It leans heavily on internal conflict, slow-burn tension, and character dynamics, alongside the more explicit elements.
I’m mainly looking for feedback on:
I’m writing purely for enjoyment (not commercially), so I’m not looking for paid services at this time—just someone who enjoys this kind of story and is willing to give honest, constructive feedback.
If this sounds interesting to you, feel free to message me.
Thanks!
I’m currently working on an Two part erotic story and I’m looking for an editor or beta reader who can help me refine it.
The story is set in India about a Married Female and focuses navigating desire, guilt, and manipulation as she gets pulled into a situation she can’t easily walk away from. It leans heavily on internal conflict, slow-burn tension, and character dynamics, alongside the more explicit elements.
I’m mainly looking for feedback on:
- Flow and pacing
- Sentence structure and readability
- Grammar and overall flow
- Consistency in tone and character voice
- Overall tension and buildup
I’m writing purely for enjoyment (not commercially), so I’m not looking for paid services at this time—just someone who enjoys this kind of story and is willing to give honest, constructive feedback.
If this sounds interesting to you, feel free to message me.
Thanks!
