Professor_Chaos
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- Apr 10, 2018
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Newfound Lake
https://www.literotica.com/s/newfound-lake
Newfound Lake is my first self-contained short story (though it’s a little longer) I wrote for the Summer Lovin’ contest but was unable to finish in time. There’s quite a bit of sex going on and while I enjoy buildup, sex is added throughout. My writing has come far from my first submission and I love constructive criticism so I can make future works better. Also, I’m hoping for some contest feedback. Could it have placed?
Evan & Jane have known each other since first grade. Neither have a great opinion of the other until Jane becomes desperate for a summer job. Evan helps her out, they become friends on the lake and eventually it turns into much more.
https://www.literotica.com/s/newfound-lake
Newfound Lake is my first self-contained short story (though it’s a little longer) I wrote for the Summer Lovin’ contest but was unable to finish in time. There’s quite a bit of sex going on and while I enjoy buildup, sex is added throughout. My writing has come far from my first submission and I love constructive criticism so I can make future works better. Also, I’m hoping for some contest feedback. Could it have placed?
Evan & Jane have known each other since first grade. Neither have a great opinion of the other until Jane becomes desperate for a summer job. Evan helps her out, they become friends on the lake and eventually it turns into much more.