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[Soyoulikemystory]

My first ever submissions "Michael & Kayla" and "Michael & Kayla Pt. 02" are up! Please be nice to this newbie! I have already gotten some feedback on making my stories longer, and I will definitely consider this in the future. I modeled this story into shorter chapters and I already have up to Pt. 06 on the way. Comment if you like 'em and tell me what you like!

https://www.literotica.com/s/michael-and-kayla

https://www.literotica.com/s/michael-and-kayla-pt-02

 

[Mastered_again]

My first ever submissions "Michael & Kayla" and "Michael & Kayla Pt. 02" are up! Please be nice to this newbie! I have already gotten some feedback on making my stories longer, and I will definitely consider this in the future. I modeled this story into shorter chapters and I already have up to Pt. 06 on the way. Comment if you like 'em and tell me what you like!

https://www.literotica.com/s/michael-and-kayla

https://www.literotica.com/s/michael-and-kayla-pt-02

The first two parts should have been one. Both are essentially Kayla's flirting and growing desire to seduce Michael. His final remark in part 2 would make for a better read it were all just part 1.

I'm sure you're trying to generate interest and suspense, but by making each part so short, you may lose readers who give up in frustration

I'll have to wait for part 3 to see how it progresses.

 

[Soyoulikemystory]

The first two parts should have been one. Both are essentially Kayla's flirting and growing desire to seduce Michael. His final remark in part 2 would make for a better read it were all just part 1.

I'm sure you're trying to generate interest and suspense, but by making each part so short, you may lose readers who give up in frustration

I'll have to wait for part 3 to see how it progresses.

Thanks for the feedback, definitely noted for future stories.

Big news to any small gathering of fans I've amassed thus far: starting tonight (Saturday into Sunday) after midnight part 3 will be coming out, followed by three ADDITIONAL parts every 24 hours thereafter!!

The first six parts of the story will be out by then, and perhaps even more the following days if I get more completed! Please look out for them and like, comment, and vote!!!

 

[Salirophilia]

My five part story "Fun at the Village Fete" is complete!

In Chapter 1: Arrival, Johnny is dropped off at his aunt Sally and cousin Tabitha's house. He soon learns that they have an usual bedtime routine...

In Chapter 2: Dessert Dispute, the fete begins and Sally gets into a pie fight with some of the village women.

In Chapter 3: Shepherdess Showdown, Tabitha gets into a messy situation with some of the village daughters.

In Chapter 4: Taming the Wild Women, Johnny is told that the only cure for his relatives' delinquency is to fuck them. The villagers enjoy the show, and an orgy ensues.

Finally, in Chapter 5: Epilogue - Summer's End, we learn the consequences of the fete (hint: there has been no mention of birth control in the previous chapters).

 

[Titsandclits]

My first story, and would appreciate the feedback: https://www.literotica.com/s/thirst-20

of course, I’ve read it a million time, and realize now there’s a word missing in the very last sentence!

Oh WOW, I loved this story, every last syllable. It is an entire fantasy of mine that I would love to fulfil. Did you write it from experience or desire to experience it? Oh please go back and visit the club again, maybe join in with another couple, watch others for longer. Tell us more about your night in the hotel. I can just imagine you walking back with your BF's cum leaking from your pussy. Well done and 5 stars even though there was a missing word. I would hate that.

 

[Mastered_again]

Part 3 of my series Proclivities is up. Please have a look and give your assessment

https://literotica.com/s/proclivities-pt-03-the-bikini

 

[NolaNM]

Oh WOW, I loved this story, every last syllable. It is an entire fantasy of mine that I would love to fulfil. Did you write it from experience or desire to experience it? Oh please go back and visit the club again, maybe join in with another couple, watch others for longer. Tell us more about your night in the hotel. I can just imagine you walking back with your BF's cum leaking from your pussy. Well done and 5 stars even though there was a missing word. I would hate that.

You’re so kind! Thank you! The bar is very real. The club, not so much, although the activities inside are loosely based on an experience at another club. I am slowly working on a second installment. Your encouragement is greatly appreciated!

 

[Titsandclits]

You’re so kind! Thank you! The bar is very real. The club, not so much, although the activities inside are loosely based on an experience at another club. I am slowly working on a second installment. Your encouragement is greatly appreciated!

Can I come (cum) with you next time?

 

[GrushaVashnadze]

After a long pause due to technical reasons, Alison Goes to London Ch. 02 is up on Literotica. Readers who have read the full novel elsewhere have called it

"a masterpiece from top to bottom"
"a brilliant, wonderfully constructed story"
"a one-of-a-kind series"​

It is a love story - a romantic-comedy-cum-dystopian-satire inspired, inter alia, by Jane Austen, George Orwell and C. S. Lewis - an exploration of love and lust, youthful idealism and disillusionment, the transcendent and the temporal, freedom and societal control - oh, and, er, filthy anal fucking...

It has also been short-listed for "Best Erotic Story by a New Author" on the Clitorides Awards - where you can login/register to read the whole thing and vote:
https://clitoridesawards.org/vote.php?d=s&cat=6

Hope you enjoy it!
Grusha

 

[AWhoopsieDaisy]

Identity Crisis: In The Closet 01

Amazing Spider-Man and Venom take place in the same universe. Venom taking place in California while Spider-Man goes on in New York. Meaning that Peter 2 finally gets to meet an alien. The story itself is a farce of secret identity in which everyone has their secrets and the romance gets messy. Follow these bisexual disasters as they get themselves caught up in a web of lies.

 

[dmallord]

Red-Thong Girl in the Elevator is my first 750 word story. One of my bucket list items to create in one-at-least-each of Literotica's various categories and contests. This didn't get into the recent 750 Word contest - couldn't write and send it in from the hospital at the time! It is a snapshot of Walter meeting a beauty and her grandpa entering an elevator and going up to the twelve floor. It captures his thoughts on the ride up. No sex - just possibilities. Penny for your thoughts.

https://literotica.com/s/red-thong-girl-in-the-elevator

 

[JuanSeiszFitzHall]

https://literotica.com/s/dees-journal-to-be-not-lonely

Posted today in Letters and Transcripts: “Dee’s Journal: The Not-Lonely Goal.” Mercedes Campanella, a young American single woman, begins a handwritten journal to work through various stressors in her life, including a two-year drought in partner sex. Non-spoiler: She ends the drought, on her terms. This is a standalone story with a clear ending, but she will continue to journal (yes, that’s a verb). Future installments will be sequential, but also standalone, and not published on a set schedule. Enjoy!

 

[Mastered_again]

https://literotica.com/s/dees-journal-to-be-not-lonely

Posted today in Letters and Transcripts: “Dee’s Journal: The Not-Lonely Goal.” Mercedes Campanella, a young American single woman, begins a handwritten journal to work through various stressors in her life, including a two-year drought in partner sex. Non-spoiler: She ends the drought, on her terms. This is a standalone story with a clear ending, but she will continue to journal (yes, that’s a verb). Future installments will be sequential, but also standalone, and not published on a set schedule. Enjoy!

It was an interesting read. I must admit, I was not fond of Mercedes at the outset of the story. To me, she was overly self centered and not very likable, perhaps explaining her two year drought. However, as the story progressed, she became more human, showing she could possibly develop feelings for others. I enjoyed her evolution. Whether she actually achieves a more balanced and loving personality remains to be seen. I'd encourage you to write another installment to answer that question.

 

[JuanSeiszFitzHall]

It was an interesting read. I must admit, I was not fond of Mercedes at the outset of the story. To me, she was overly self centered and not very likable, perhaps explaining her two year drought. However, as the story progressed, she became more human, showing she could possibly develop feelings for others. I enjoyed her evolution. Whether she actually achieves a more balanced and loving personality remains to be seen. I'd encourage you to write another installment to answer that question.

Thanks. I expect that there will be more entries in Dee's journal.

 

[CurvySassyAJ]

I really like this thread idea. Thanks to the OP and the other thread they refered to.

Currently I am working on a Cuckquean story, with one chapter up so far. I am currently working on the fourth chapter and plan to release a chapter every two weeks or so. Depending on how long it is in the approal que.

Here is the link. This chapter introduces the three main characters, to provide a little background. I did put in a preface to help explain the kink, but in talking to a few friends, they still had some trouble understanding where the story is going. Chapter 2 will most definitely show that

https://literotica.com/s/princess-kris-ch-01-how-it-began

 

[Aliceiii]

Just wanted to say thanks, too

 

[dmallord]

I really like this thread idea. Thanks to the OP and the other thread they refered to.

Currently I am working on a Cuckquean story, with one chapter up so far. I am currently working on the fourth chapter and plan to release a chapter every two weeks or so. Depending on how long it is in the approal que.

Here is the link. This chapter introduces the three main characters, to provide a little background. I did put in a preface to help explain the kink, but in talking to a few friends, they still had some trouble understanding where the story is going. Chapter 2 will most definitely show that

https://literotica.com/s/princess-kris-ch-01-how-it-began

Having read this one...I didn't vote or leave a comment, yet. This is a totally off the wall story for me. The content, I mean. I'll let it stew for a while and get back to it. You certainly have a good style of writing. It has a few mechanical things that jarred me as I read it. I didn't feel too put off by them, though.

Dmallord

 

[Mastered_again]

I really like this thread idea. Thanks to the OP and the other thread they refered to.

Currently I am working on a Cuckquean story, with one chapter up so far. I am currently working on the fourth chapter and plan to release a chapter every two weeks or so. Depending on how long it is in the approal que.

Here is the link. This chapter introduces the three main characters, to provide a little background. I did put in a preface to help explain the kink, but in talking to a few friends, they still had some trouble understanding where the story is going. Chapter 2 will most definitely show that

https://literotica.com/s/princess-kris-ch-01-how-it-began

Out of curiosity, I gave this a read. Although unfamiliar with the kink/story concept, I had no trouble following its path.

That said, some of the writing was at times a bit too terse, resulting in some jarring head snapping double takes where I'd have to reread a part to grasp the intent of the sentence.

On the other hand, the descriptions of the sexual encounters between Sean and Beth were in invigorating, and despite my better Angels, turned me on. Thank you (I think).

 

[MrsDelicia]

https://literotica.com/s/queens-wish

A mother/son incest tale. It's the first time I reduced the...mm...femdom elements and erotic nastiness and upped the sugar levels.

https://www.literotica.com/s/of-love-and-lust-2

A mother/daughter incest affair. My first lesbian tale. Would love some new thoughts on it.

 

[Aliceiii]

 

[Mastered_again]

Proclivities Parts 6 and 7 have posted. The adventures of George and Linda continue

https://literotica.com/s/proclivities-pt-06-back-to-work

https://literotica.com/s/proclivities-pt-07-its-love

 

[CurvySassyAJ]

Chapter 2 of my cuckquean series is up.

https://literotica.com/s/princess-kris-ch-02-the-new-quean

 

[wolfgrl_petplay]

I'm new to Literotica and happy to be here!

The first story I've posted is right here: A Cold Caress
It's a medium-length piece about a brave monster hunter accepting a vampire's invitation into his home, where he proposes an unusual offer to her.

All feedback is very appreciated!

 

[CurvySassyAJ]

Congradulations on your first story. I look forward to reading it later.

 

[Mastered_again]

Proclivities Part 8 has posted.
Some role reversal in this one

https://literotica.com/s/proclivities-pt-08-the-experiment