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Two new updates to my Deep in the Dark series :)

First, Deep in the Dark: The Adventure

The last of the prequel stories (for now at least), Avilane’s time with her first adventuring party

And the follow up to Deep in the Dark: The Treasure (formerly just Deep in the Dark, title edit still pending),

Deep in the Dark: The Claiming - Daven takes Avilane and makes her his, completely.

Thank you for your attention <3
 
Chapter 01: The Awakening

A story from a long time lurker, first time poster.
It's a interesting first story I got to admit.
A young woman's first time masturbating to some smutty stories (bit meta I know).
It really captures the first time we all done it, I highly recommend it.
 
The first "Book" of a 3-part series was posted last night. The title is Claire & Jonathan: Book 1. The other two parts are scheduled to be posted tomorrow and the next day. I call these "Books" because they were originally sold on Amazon. It's been a few years so I've unpublished them and decided to share them here to a much broader audience. These were the first erotic stories I ever wrote, and the only changes I made for Literotica were to fix some remaining grammar errors.
The main characters are engaged and their wedding is approaching. They decide to live out a shared fantasy. In Book 1, the main characters have a threesome with another man. In book two they have a threesome with another woman. Then in Book 3, they have group sex with their wedding party.

Claire & Jonathan: Book 1
 
The Double Life is out. It may be the last entry for the Pink Orchid Event. I am glad that I was barely able to finish it in time. It's also my longest story so far with 47.4K words.

Comments and Feedback are welcome.
 
FINLEYDIXON said:

“Nightingale - Mormon Brothers Anthology”​

Chapters 1, 2 & 3 published, final chapter available March 6th, 2025

Category: Gay Male

#gayincest #firsttime

Why I wrote the story​


Inspired by the fun I had writing “Silence Between Brothers” and the positive feedback it received, I decided to explore more brother-to-brother stories. This particular idea was sparked by the concept of the “Florence Nightingale effect,” where caregivers develop deep emotional connections with those they care for. Unlike my first story, the disability here is only temporary, yet poses more severe challenges. Through this narrative, I wanted to examine how thrusting characters out of their comfort zones can dramatically transform relationships, family dynamics, and personal desires.

What do I like about this story?​


Above all, the unconditionally supportive dynamic between the brothers. Their bond is what makes everything else work—the tenderness, the tension, and the deeper emotions beneath it all.

On a more personal level, I’ve always been drawn to the fantasy of getting someone off when they can’t do it themselves, and vice versa. That sense of control (or lack thereof), care, and mutual trust excites me. The fact that they’re brothers, combined with the lingering repression from their upbringing, only adds more depth and spice to their journey.

I also loved weaving in specific personal memories, like my first encounter with The Rocky Horror Picture Show. That was a fun vignette to include, and I hope it blended seamlessly into the story.

And of course, the more intimate (and sometimes ridiculous) moments—like Frank helping Timmy go pee—were a blast to write. Hopefully, they were just as fun to read!

What criticism do I expect?​


I anticipate some readers may take issue with the minimal character description. However, this was a deliberate choice. My goal was to make the story feel more inclusive, allowing readers to envision the characters in ways that resonate with their own experiences and perspectives.

While much of the Mormon population in the U.S. is often associated with whiteness, the global Mormon community is far more diverse. By keeping physical descriptions minimal, I wanted to give readers the freedom to imagine the brothers however they see fit.

Since Timmy is the protagonist, I intentionally provided the least description for him, encouraging readers to step into his shoes and experience the story through his eyes. As for Frank, his muscular build is highlighted primarily to emphasize a personal and widely shared fantasy, while leaving other details open to interpretation.

Another potential critique is my choice to write in third-person rather than first-person, which some readers prefer in erotica. Personally, I don’t have a strong preference, but I chose third-person here to give myself more flexibility in exploring multiple perspectives. It was also a personal challenge, and while I’m not entirely sure it paid off, I stand by the decision. I hope it enhances the story rather than detracts from it, but I understand it won’t be everyone’s cup of tea.


https://lh7-rt.googleusercontent.com/docsz/AD_4nXfYLe-5iTK24qlSCPKaqo2Fao839GgDF17mzf_FeBjzcrUrMGN62W2a3GWgMjRxvcV_C3Q_INKi9gLYRrSrRq9Qe92n0RRIQ6uk3-zTrw2C9n6sk3OJoDsRpfFRGtMcvwiiPbyywg?key=_nhg06ccP9DfqWUH6whKwOyO https://lh7-rt.googleusercontent.com/docsz/AD_4nXfIsmL02Nttqi1ESbw5ppx-Wn-E3zHFsmAjxBASJWtuIVYPgc96QhIvc_o3Chqk7ohlTQbwjY3NGoukFOasL1qxMuzORwBC0POcCUPqbyo3WCLIFA01_5zkF1wVj-MJyw8pTRJiAA?key=_nhg06ccP9DfqWUH6whKwOyO https://lh7-rt.googleusercontent.com/docsz/AD_4nXfA0y2LK95DR-uUlWVABVW3JoNWr_TdMuhzQP6p_tfSI7KtQaAnVBLigF89hqO7MwuyeeGh-UqDlKl-fq2fyPHx8EEuvNuRPuvMZrLykT6vfYJ5sCnUUnSTINp9vlUYkiPEWq4X3A?key=_nhg06ccP9DfqWUH6whKwOyO https://lh7-rt.googleusercontent.com/docsz/AD_4nXeGgBcf7PNLtK7fdQIGI2FI5QtYwuBlmbzZLWYAUuqd5nbZmFa9ibrf72xayS0AJkTnbDVfA8qy-3dB5fKDDNbBvWAX6sYT34oC0VOtT0OeQMdoUWqWH6TrEmIhc-TwkzdyIG5vCQ?key=_nhg06ccP9DfqWUH6whKwOyO https://lh7-rt.googleusercontent.com/docsz/AD_4nXc-cag-eQQF0j2hDUf8Foz9HITW0pVBJBMl6v5Zv8ZZnlsNxCT72Lgo5XXUiBY7mKFBkoWqeA_f5YT4WT_gj8404tQ25a7zV37ACbSS0igN3yUrNeD1BtOXln1VFrNZCz3Z2vKWMw?key=_nhg06ccP9DfqWUH6whKwOyO https://lh7-rt.googleusercontent.com/docsz/AD_4nXfI5Rvy7bkMBNUOZ4CQ1oRQtH7roHQCAtQmy4wCvkCiQn1yrypQuz_qnuTTRYo2zN6bxkmEyhhj1hueDbg8U64DoT8jDqYHMiOeJ_4j-SEj19TrmuLVzCgXQ3JjC65RZXMeRfASDw?key=_nhg06ccP9DfqWUH6whKwOyO https://lh7-rt.googleusercontent.com/docsz/AD_4nXcZzq9PPUsMmY2ql6WAxYh-VcA7DUM0ayKkcOowudA7mfiDle6CY8KohPIz-39XmPEyWxVl4xrXOsUqP872ZMoybcj0rV6c5zysT2-BYjhynVJkElEsO4CWKEvq65o84wUzPZrMDw?key=_nhg06ccP9DfqWUH6whKwOyO
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The fourth and final chapter of Nightingale is up: https://www.literotica.com/s/nightingale-ch-04
 
Published today in Erotic Couplings is “My Neurodivergent Lothario.”

https://www.literotica.com/s/my-neurodivergent-lothario

It’s a very quick read—fewer than 1500 words—on a fully-consensual tryst involving a neurotypical woman and a man on the autistic spectrum. Their bodies click, in a way that their minds don’t. They meet like this every two weeks, but this time there’s a surprise. Enjoy!
 
PennyThompson said:
My new short story went from nothing to completion in about 12 hours over the weekend, a sad sex-filled little piece about a werewolf who gets nostalgic and makes an ill-advised visit to her ex. Full Moon Blues 🥰
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I commented on the story, but I'm not sure whether her visit was ill-advised. If she wanted to prove to herself that she needs to let go of the past, then hot sex on a moonlit night before learning that he's moving on to a new love might not be the worst thing in the world for her? And she left him alive, so possibly one of the more virtuous werewolves that we've met! It's a very nicely written piece.
 
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https://literotica.com/s/thursday-morning-4-27am

This is my first posting in the forum; hope I’m going about this in the right way!

This is my latest story and it’s very different to my usual style (which is D/s, BDSM etc) and tells the story of an insomniac’s encounter with a woman from his past.

I’d appreciate any feedback etc as I’m new to the game.

Thanks
JTB
 
Actingup said:
I commented on the story, but I'm not sure whether her visit was ill-advised. If she wanted to prove to herself that she needs to let go of the past, then hot sex on a moonlit night before learning that he's moving on to a new love might not be the worst thing in the world for her? And she left him alive, so possibly one of the more virtuous werewolves that we've met! It's a very nicely written piece.
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That is such an interesting perspective that I genuinely wasn't even thinking about when I wrote it! You're totally right that there's a closure and a resolution there that might be for the best for both of them...

Maybe the saddest part of their relationship wasn't that it ended, but that it was left unresolved for too long, leaving both of them in emotional limbo, unable to truly move on :cry:

I love it when somebody points out something in one of my stories that I didn't even realize I was doing, but that seems so natural and clear in hind sight!

@THBGato did that to me on Bob's Furniture Barn, and I was almost mad that I wasn't conscious enough of what I was doing to capitalize on the social critique more obviously 😅
 
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FINLEYDIXON said:

“Nightingale - Mormon Brothers Anthology”​


Category: Gay Male

#gayincest #firsttime

Why I wrote the story​


Inspired by the fun I had writing “Silence Between Brothers” and the positive feedback it received, I decided to explore more brother-to-brother stories. This particular idea was sparked by the concept of the “Florence Nightingale effect,” where caregivers develop deep emotional connections with those they care for. Unlike my first story, the disability here is only temporary, yet poses more severe challenges. Through this narrative, I wanted to examine how thrusting characters out of their comfort zones can dramatically transform relationships, family dynamics, and personal desires.

What do I like about this story?​


Above all, the unconditionally supportive dynamic between the brothers. Their bond is what makes everything else work—the tenderness, the tension, and the deeper emotions beneath it all.

On a more personal level, I’ve always been drawn to the fantasy of getting someone off when they can’t do it themselves, and vice versa. That sense of control (or lack thereof), care, and mutual trust excites me. The fact that they’re brothers, combined with the lingering repression from their upbringing, only adds more depth and spice to their journey.

I also loved weaving in specific personal memories, like my first encounter with The Rocky Horror Picture Show. That was a fun vignette to include, and I hope it blended seamlessly into the story.

And of course, the more intimate (and sometimes ridiculous) moments—like Frank helping Timmy go pee—were a blast to write. Hopefully, they were just as fun to read!

What criticism do I expect?​


I anticipate some readers may take issue with the minimal character description. However, this was a deliberate choice. My goal was to make the story feel more inclusive, allowing readers to envision the characters in ways that resonate with their own experiences and perspectives.

While much of the Mormon population in the U.S. is often associated with whiteness, the global Mormon community is far more diverse. By keeping physical descriptions minimal, I wanted to give readers the freedom to imagine the brothers however they see fit.

Since Timmy is the protagonist, I intentionally provided the least description for him, encouraging readers to step into his shoes and experience the story through his eyes. As for Frank, his muscular build is highlighted primarily to emphasize a personal and widely shared fantasy, while leaving other details open to interpretation.

Another potential critique is my choice to write in third-person rather than first-person, which some readers prefer in erotica. Personally, I don’t have a strong preference, but I chose third-person here to give myself more flexibility in exploring multiple perspectives. It was also a personal challenge, and while I’m not entirely sure it paid off, I stand by the decision. I hope it enhances the story rather than detracts from it, but I understand it won’t be everyone’s cup of tea.


https://lh7-rt.googleusercontent.com/docsz/AD_4nXfYLe-5iTK24qlSCPKaqo2Fao839GgDF17mzf_FeBjzcrUrMGN62W2a3GWgMjRxvcV_C3Q_INKi9gLYRrSrRq9Qe92n0RRIQ6uk3-zTrw2C9n6sk3OJoDsRpfFRGtMcvwiiPbyywg?key=_nhg06ccP9DfqWUH6whKwOyO https://lh7-rt.googleusercontent.com/docsz/AD_4nXfIsmL02Nttqi1ESbw5ppx-Wn-E3zHFsmAjxBASJWtuIVYPgc96QhIvc_o3Chqk7ohlTQbwjY3NGoukFOasL1qxMuzORwBC0POcCUPqbyo3WCLIFA01_5zkF1wVj-MJyw8pTRJiAA?key=_nhg06ccP9DfqWUH6whKwOyO https://lh7-rt.googleusercontent.com/docsz/AD_4nXfA0y2LK95DR-uUlWVABVW3JoNWr_TdMuhzQP6p_tfSI7KtQaAnVBLigF89hqO7MwuyeeGh-UqDlKl-fq2fyPHx8EEuvNuRPuvMZrLykT6vfYJ5sCnUUnSTINp9vlUYkiPEWq4X3A?key=_nhg06ccP9DfqWUH6whKwOyO https://lh7-rt.googleusercontent.com/docsz/AD_4nXeGgBcf7PNLtK7fdQIGI2FI5QtYwuBlmbzZLWYAUuqd5nbZmFa9ibrf72xayS0AJkTnbDVfA8qy-3dB5fKDDNbBvWAX6sYT34oC0VOtT0OeQMdoUWqWH6TrEmIhc-TwkzdyIG5vCQ?key=_nhg06ccP9DfqWUH6whKwOyO https://lh7-rt.googleusercontent.com/docsz/AD_4nXc-cag-eQQF0j2hDUf8Foz9HITW0pVBJBMl6v5Zv8ZZnlsNxCT72Lgo5XXUiBY7mKFBkoWqeA_f5YT4WT_gj8404tQ25a7zV37ACbSS0igN3yUrNeD1BtOXln1VFrNZCz3Z2vKWMw?key=_nhg06ccP9DfqWUH6whKwOyO https://lh7-rt.googleusercontent.com/docsz/AD_4nXfI5Rvy7bkMBNUOZ4CQ1oRQtH7roHQCAtQmy4wCvkCiQn1yrypQuz_qnuTTRYo2zN6bxkmEyhhj1hueDbg8U64DoT8jDqYHMiOeJ_4j-SEj19TrmuLVzCgXQ3JjC65RZXMeRfASDw?key=_nhg06ccP9DfqWUH6whKwOyO https://lh7-rt.googleusercontent.com/docsz/AD_4nXcZzq9PPUsMmY2ql6WAxYh-VcA7DUM0ayKkcOowudA7mfiDle6CY8KohPIz-39XmPEyWxVl4xrXOsUqP872ZMoybcj0rV6c5zysT2-BYjhynVJkElEsO4CWKEvq65o84wUzPZrMDw?key=_nhg06ccP9DfqWUH6whKwOyO
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Dear readers, thank you so much! The response to Nightingale was amazing!

Nightingale Ch. 01 (4.77)
Brothers bond over family's rejection.

Nightingale Ch. 02 (4.75)
Frank and Timmy start to fall for one another.

Nightingale Ch. 03 (4.81)
Timmy and Frank invite a third.

Nightingale Ch. 04 (4.92)
Frank and Timmy go all the way.

I'm planning an anthology of gay, Mormon brothers stories
  • Homecoming
    Two brother navigate their feelings, leaving the church and the home they grew up in. Exploring their attraction to men, first with each other.
  • Endowment
    One brother receives more than the temple usually offers when his older brother performs his endowment.
  • Lagoon
    After his wedding is called off, two brothers go on the prepaid honeymoon trip together
  • Big April Fool's Mistake (probably for 2026 competition)
    After an April-Fool’s-Day blind date for his supposedly straight twin brother starts a serious relationship, Reid, our prankster, grows deeply jealous.
Let me know which one you look forward to reading most!
Stay tuned and follow me.

Sincerely,
Finley
 
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After a long spout of writer's block from pushing myself to write my novel, I've finally completed a new short story: Part two of "Chasing Selma"!

I wrote part one because I have had similar fantasies, but I have never met anyone I felt safe exploring CNC scenarios with. Even though fleeing through a forest and being hunted by a stranger sounds very exciting in theory, I'm not sure I'm quite as brave as Selma :oops:
 
New Lesbian slow-burn romance up: "Twenty". Single mum Poppy has to deal with her own low self-esteem and internalised homophobia, not to mention the pressures of parenthood, before she can open up to the girl she can't stop thinking about. For fans of Nellymcboatface.
 
A new chapter about a brief love affair at a New York college.

https://classic.literotica.com/s/the-unexpected-girlfriend-ch-05

Most of the locations are real and once looked like these. The 133rd Street and Convent Avenue gate that Paul and Nora used to enter the South Campus in the summer of 1974. This photo was taken during an earlier student protest.

https://s3.amazonaws.com/files.comm...tumblr_nnuwcbEjPv1qzhoqfo1_1280-1-768x673.jpg

The demolition of the the Third Avenue el as described in the opening scene. This is about two blocks north of the party location.

https://erausa.org/img/publication-sales/mel2-p183-1800x1200.jpg
 
Dalliance in Hammond Farmstead

A one-off from my ongoing series I couldn't really place anywhere in my narrative so it's a standalone.
For some reason it ended up in Celebrities and Fanfiction while I swore I placed it in SF and Fantasy...
Anyway, it seems to be getting a decent amount of views compared to my series so....let's see what happens next.
 
Published today, "Forty" (it's novel length at just under 82k words - takes about 7 hours to read). It's my lesbian love letter to local radio and the Bristol music scene of the 00's. At its heart it's a mystery story as the narrator, Liz, a broadcast journalist, slowly works out why her new friend Ram is as she is. But it's also a lot more, covering themes of friendship, family, social pressures, trauma and love. I'd hope that fans of Broken Spokes and CareyThomas would enjoy it.
 
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