New Story for Feedback

[Eros5150]

I just published Seasons of Discovery. https://www.literotica.com/s/seasons-of-discovery It is a gay male story, but my first through the lens of a "top."

I always find the feedback helpful and something to build on. It seems like there are fewer comments posted to the stories these days, so I thought I would add here to see if anyone had feedback. Thanks.

 

[annabellebrito]

I just published Seasons of Discovery. https://www.literotica.com/s/seasons-of-discovery It is a gay male story, but my first through the lens of a "top."

I always find the feedback helpful and something to build on. It seems like there are fewer comments posted to the stories these days, so I thought I would add here to see if anyone had feedback. Thanks.

I liked it a lot. I left a comment. Very well written. Great mix of hot steamy male on male sex with the sweet sentimental spirit that made me care about Tom and Jack. Those early encounters were great between the two. I do have one little complaint, but it's really nothing. Good story. Enjoyed it.