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Oops. Just realized I changed perspective in this. Will have to fix that when I edit it
 
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You removed everything I wrote? This was the only place I kept it!
 
I have to admit, I get a chuckle out of a 20-year-old thread entitled "newbie."

Bashfull, if you want to reconnect with the old timers you'd probably be better off starting a new thread and calling it "Fogey."
 
You removed everything I wrote? This was the only place I kept it!
That's unfortunate, but avoidable. The forum software often freezes, and if you don't take a copy of a long post every minute or two, you can lose it. You've been here twenty-two years, with nearly 10,000 posts - surely you noticed that before?
 
That's unfortunate, but avoidable. The forum software often freezes, and if you don't take a copy of a long post every minute or two, you can lose it. You've been here twenty-two years, with nearly 10,000 posts - surely you noticed that before?
This didn't happen before. And all of my postings of my musings for the last week were removed by a mod. It wasn't a software glitch. Since I've returned, it appears that LIT has become merely superficial conversation on the forums. I've seen posts removed because of playful banter between posters, etc. And now this. And if you look at the beginning of this thread, this is where I've always posted my musings.
 
I've copied the contents of the removed posts and sent them to you via PM. You should consider keeping a local copy of your work, or at least utilizing the Drafts feature of the submission form that allows you to save work without submitting it.
 
I have to admit, I get a chuckle out of a 20-year-old thread entitled "newbie."

Bashfull, if you want to reconnect with the old timers you'd probably be better off starting a new thread and calling it "Fogey."
Lol. I started this thread many years ago. And it was titled that because I was a newbie at writing any of my erotic thoughts for anyone
 
Maybe you could switch to Tumblr for your longer musings or post in several posts here. Sorry I didn't get to read more of the most recent ones.
 
Maybe you could switch to Tumblr for your longer musings or post in several posts here. Sorry I didn't get to read more of the most recent ones.
That's why the long posts were removed. The site has a "three paragraph" limitation, to prevent un-vetted content being published in threads. The site also has a 750 word threshold, which is where the content could have been published in the first place.
 
That's why the long posts were removed. The site has a "three paragraph" limitation, to prevent un-vetted content being published in threads. The site also has a 750 word threshold, which is where the content could have been published in the first place.
Thanks. I didn't know about it. I should not have snipped and pasted them all into one post.
 
Thanks. I didn't know about it. I should not have snipped and pasted them all into one post.
Weren't the posts an exchange between you and someone else? You should post them as a story - work on it a bit, maybe - but surely you'd have more than the minimum word limit?
 
Weren't the posts an exchange between you and someone else? You should post them as a story - work on it a bit, maybe - but surely you'd have more than the minimum word limit?
Nope. I left some thoughts here and then eventually put them into one post when I out the finish on. Just a couple of people left notes saying they liked it
 
Anyone else ponder things like this?

Before bed, I want her before me. Her bindings, my will. Her actions, my words. Her pleasure, my touch, my kiss, my breath. I want her whimpering, wanton with desire, writhing with extasy, lost in my eyes. I want her aroused to feel each drop of moisture as it trickles down her skin, feeling the air flowing across her body, shivering with sensation, pleading for more, begging for orgasmic release until I take her, our bodies merging. Frantic, passionate, mounting, building...faster. deeper, more primal until we collapse in exhausted post coitus bliss in a slumbering lovers embrace, her head and arms draped over my chest. I want to watch her sleep, feel her dream as I run my fingers thru her hair, feeling her breath, her body atop mine as I hold her dear.

I want to wake before her. Wondering what she is dreaming. Admiring her naked beauty, I run my fingers over her body, millimeters from her skin so as not to wake her. Then I want to lay atop her, start slowly with soft, lingering kisses, feel her legs wrap around me, pulling me in. Slowly...ever so slowly do I enter, not giving entirely in to her demands....
 
Anyone else ponder things like this?

Before bed, I want her before me. Her bindings, my will. Her actions, my words. Her pleasure, my touch, my kiss, my breath. I want her whimpering, wanton with desire, writhing with extasy, lost in my eyes. I want her aroused to feel each drop of moisture as it trickles down her skin, feeling the air flowing across her body, shivering with sensation, pleading for more, begging for orgasmic release until I take her, our bodies merging. Frantic, passionate, mounting, building...faster. deeper, more primal until we collapse in exhausted post coitus bliss in a slumbering lovers embrace, her head and arms draped over my chest. I want to watch her sleep, feel her dream as I run my fingers thru her hair, feeling her breath, her body atop mine as I hold her dear.

I want to wake before her. Wondering what she is dreaming. Admiring her naked beauty, I run my fingers over her body, millimeters from her skin so as not to wake her. Then I want to lay atop her, start slowly with soft, lingering kisses, feel her legs wrap around me, pulling me in. Slowly...ever so slowly do I enter, not giving entirely in to her demands....
Beautiful and passionate!
 
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