NYPD cadets

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great job, DN. But now, we expect Part 3! Have you got that plotted, or do you want suggestions?

 

[deliciously_naughty]

I'm curious to know who my readers want Zoe to end up with

 

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either would be just soooooo conventional. A poly 3some centered on her might be fun, or introduce another contender in part 3 who wins her in pt 4. As a twist, make it a girl, who she brings in to try to take the surplus guy- Zoe thinks if Chris fals for Yolamda, her issue goes away. Until she sees them having sex, finds herself jealous- but about Y!

 

[deliciously_naughty]

either would be just soooooo conventional. A poly 3some centered on her might be fun, or introduce another contender in part 3 who wins her in pt 4. As a twist, make it a girl, who she brings in to try to take the surplus guy- Zoe thinks if Chris fals for Yolamda, her issue goes away. Until she sees them having sex, finds herself jealous- but about Y!

LOL...this is why I adore you hugs

I don't know...I'm kinda rooting for Adrian...but I was also thinking of having the "innocent" cadet steal her away from both of the guys...I'm not sure yet. We'll see....but I guess there does have to be a chapter 3 and maybe 4...I screwed up zoe's life, now I guess I have to fix it

 

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but I liked the idea that the cute guy gets deflowered by Zoe's experienced friend after a double date with Zoe , Adrian and ( Brigitte?). Then, you could have Zoe fall for him either at the end of the series, or before Yolanda. But that leaves Adrain and Chris fighting for Brogitte, so polyandry seems a solution in any event. Five chapters, methinks?

 

[deliciously_naughty]

but I liked the idea that the cute guy gets deflowered by Zoe's experienced friend after a double date with Zoe , Adrian and ( Brigitte?). Then, you could have Zoe fall for him either at the end of the series, or before Yolanda. But that leaves Adrain and Chris fighting for Brogitte, so polyandry seems a solution in any event. Five chapters, methinks?

you and I need to have a long talk, hugs

edited to add...let's plan a phone conference in the next few weeks.