OOC and comment thread for Fatal Attraction

BLACK BART

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Please post your characters descriptions, yourcomments, questions and flirts in this thread.... the thread of course, being......


~ Fatal Attraction~

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A female profiler and detective tracking down a serial killer :updated 1-21-12: taken by Sweetly (thank you Hun)

Female victim(s) who fall to the killer, finding a fatal flaw in their hopes for a memorable one nighters

A male bartender who comes under suspicion and makes himself look guilty when he tries to run :Taken by wildxfire:

A male killer who has grown weary of easy prey and now sets his eyes on greater challenges :Taken by Black Bart:

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Thank you to those who have joined me in this idea :), I appreciate the trust and look forward to exploring the thoughts and actions of our characters. I'd like to keep it as realistic as we can (in fantasy RP) and will take my time making posts that give the other writers both something to write off of, as well as glimpses into the mind and actions of my character.

I realize this is just fantasy, and though it is a titillating subject don't wish anyone to think any of what we write is real, either in event, person or place, I'll use a city as a reference, but beyond that nothing I describe is linked in reality to any place.
 
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Joe(y) Herne

Owner and Nighttime bartender of the Lonely Heart Lounge

age 24,

stands 5 foot 11

weighs 175 pounds

has worked there for 5 years
 
Detective Rio Anderson is a fifteen year veteran of the the force, she started as beat cop and quickly made her way into detective. Fighting against the establishment and the good ole boy's club she quickly made her way to detective.

Today, her petite 5'5" body was dressed in a severe grey pant suit that she had chosen deliberately to hide the feminine curves. She twisted her dark curls into a tight bun at the back of her head, securing it with several fasteners to make sure not a strand escaped.
 
Current name used : Dan Charming

Occupation: Investment Counselor

Height: 6 foot 3

Weight: 225

Eyes: Light Blue

Hair: Sandy Brown cut short

Skin: Tanned golden, no visible scars

Dan obviously works out, his body well balanced and toned, walking easily on his feet he is graceful and quick, giving the impression he was an athelete in college or high school

Dan appears to be a well educated and wealthy businessman, soft spoken, well mannered and dressed, he presents himself as an attractive, honest and trust worthy man that is invited easily into your home and life
 
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Welcome Sweet and wild, it's good to see you both and I', looking forward to writing with each of you:)
 
uh HUH!!!!:D

hey sweetlady what does you little gal look like or will you tell us all in th main thread?
 
Nope, there would be far fewer things to smile and giggle at. ~looks down at both of your zippers~ for instance...~wicked giggle~
 
I've pm'd CB twice and hope she soon has time to post her bio character here, lets say by the weekend if we don't hear from her we find another victim and move forward with the thread
 
Elizabeth Holden: 5.7, very slim.

She's 21 years old, and since her recent break-up with her high school sweeatheart, she spends many nights at the Lonely Heart Lounge enjoying the attention she gets from the older men. After drowning her sorrows in a few drinks that are bought for her, she occasionally leaves with a man if he's good looking enough, and she's drunk enough.

Elizabeth is still a very naive girl at her age, and she never really thinks twice about her actions. She acts on impulse, wanting to just enjoy her youth and beauty while she still held it. No wonder she falls victim to a serial killer.
 
Welcome to our group lonelycollegegirl, it's a pleasure to have you with us:rose:

I'll create the main thread and post the link to this OOC :)
 
Link to the main thread

Fatal Attraction

We've begun, the setting for our thread, first scene...

Elizabeth Holden has been kidnapped and now held by Dan Charming:eek:

Joey Herne is under suspect as his club seems to be the last known location for too many innocents;)

Detective Rio Anderson is on the hunt, and about to gain be noticed by another hunter:devil:

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Thanks once again to all who join in this, let's keep communication open, ask questions if we're not sure, debate it all in this thread.... and most important have FUN:D
 
Thanks for all the great posts! :D I'm enjoying how we're all using the Lonely Heart to begin the plotting:devil:

Dan has sprung his "trap" the drink he so anonymously and genouresly bought drugged, setting up poor Liz to be taken home where he'll soon find her:devil:
 
posted, not much to it but guess we'll get buisier once the story is mivin, hope all is well for everyone:D
 
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