Roland Gilliad
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I am a rebel! I am fighting against the Masses!
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MY ANTI PERSPERENT IS BREAKING DOWN!
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MY ANTI PERSPERENT IS BREAKING DOWN!
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OOC. Good vs. Evil
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LAVA GODDESSS
Goddesss of Eruptions:, Too Hot for T.V.
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It Starts.
LAVA GODDESSS
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hiya sweetp4u,
what do you have in mind? humans and angels are direly needed, actually so are bad guys....no matter. A human would be nice, but...no, nevermind..
just go ahead and post a bio here adn I'll ok it....or not ok it.
welcome in though.
what do you have in mind? humans and angels are direly needed, actually so are bad guys....no matter. A human would be nice, but...no, nevermind..
just go ahead and post a bio here adn I'll ok it....or not ok it. welcome in though.
Sweetp4u
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ok here goes
It took me awhile to find something interesting. I do hope this is acceptable.
ic:
name: too hard to pronounce so she calls herself Eve
description: 5'10" 140 built for a female. Waist length black hair, green eyes. Amazon Preistess while living. Now just an angel of no importance. until now that is.
Skills: hand to hand combat, spears, long swords, daggers.
intro: She was lounging in her room, alone and a little upset, when a letter was dropped into her lap. Looking down she recognized the script. Sitting up and setting her drink aside, she eyed the letter. She had been watching the world below, shaking her head at the distruction and chaos. She had been watching as each era came and went to keep up with the times. She knew what was happening below and it worried her. She looked again at the letter. She wondered why she was sent this? She wasnt a high ranking angel. She was merely.. well her. She read the letter her eyes widening in surprise as she read.
Eve
You are being summoned to earth. You are to go down and assist in any and all ways possible to achieve our goal. You are needed to guide and protect man. You will be given two gifts to aid you.
1. Ability to hide your wings
2. Ability to mask your thoughts from your enemies
You are an unknown, that is why you are sent in to aid. No one will know who you are except for those that are chosen to.
Report often as possible to those you can trust to relay the message. Be safe. To Assure man is safe as possible use any and all means to protect.
The letter wasnt signed, but she knew who's orders she followed. She shook her head a little, not understanding why she of all angels, was called forth. She gathered her weapons and made her way to the gates. She watched as the clouds parted and revealed to her earth below.
"New York City! Be ready for Eve."
Her decent was smooth and quick. The moment her feet hit pavement, she concealed her wings and sought out shelter.
occ: well thats what i could come up with, other than a weakling of a human thought this might be fun. Let me know ill just copy and paste my intro into the thread when I get the go ahead.
It took me awhile to find something interesting. I do hope this is acceptable.
ic:
name: too hard to pronounce so she calls herself Eve
description: 5'10" 140 built for a female. Waist length black hair, green eyes. Amazon Preistess while living. Now just an angel of no importance. until now that is.
Skills: hand to hand combat, spears, long swords, daggers.
intro: She was lounging in her room, alone and a little upset, when a letter was dropped into her lap. Looking down she recognized the script. Sitting up and setting her drink aside, she eyed the letter. She had been watching the world below, shaking her head at the distruction and chaos. She had been watching as each era came and went to keep up with the times. She knew what was happening below and it worried her. She looked again at the letter. She wondered why she was sent this? She wasnt a high ranking angel. She was merely.. well her. She read the letter her eyes widening in surprise as she read.
Eve
You are being summoned to earth. You are to go down and assist in any and all ways possible to achieve our goal. You are needed to guide and protect man. You will be given two gifts to aid you.
1. Ability to hide your wings
2. Ability to mask your thoughts from your enemies
You are an unknown, that is why you are sent in to aid. No one will know who you are except for those that are chosen to.
Report often as possible to those you can trust to relay the message. Be safe. To Assure man is safe as possible use any and all means to protect.
The letter wasnt signed, but she knew who's orders she followed. She shook her head a little, not understanding why she of all angels, was called forth. She gathered her weapons and made her way to the gates. She watched as the clouds parted and revealed to her earth below.
"New York City! Be ready for Eve."
Her decent was smooth and quick. The moment her feet hit pavement, she concealed her wings and sought out shelter.
occ: well thats what i could come up with, other than a weakling of a human thought this might be fun. Let me know ill just copy and paste my intro into the thread when I get the go ahead.
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poohlive
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You gotta let her in Lava. You're the only female in here, we need someone else to play with, lol.
Seriously, if you need a voucher for her, I'll do it. I've been in several threads and she's always pulled through.
I didn't come here to ask that though, I wanted to do everyone a favor, that is, if you'll allow me.
I know, as well as most, that NightRay isn't the best when it comes to spelling and grammar. I want to help ease some of the tension, so, if it is ok with Ray, and Lava, of course, I'd like to use my powers as a Moderator to edit his posts and make them a bit more up to par.
I don't want to in anyway change what he wants to say, in truth I'll only be adding some grammatical things and fixing a few spelling errors. Just so that everyone else can have an easier time reading what he has to say. I believe I have worked with Ray enough to translate for everyone else, so I feel confident with his posts, but I know others have a hard time understanding. I just want to ease the tension a little bit.
So, if you'll allow me, I'd like to at least try.
Seriously, if you need a voucher for her, I'll do it. I've been in several threads and she's always pulled through.
I didn't come here to ask that though, I wanted to do everyone a favor, that is, if you'll allow me.
I know, as well as most, that NightRay isn't the best when it comes to spelling and grammar. I want to help ease some of the tension, so, if it is ok with Ray, and Lava, of course, I'd like to use my powers as a Moderator to edit his posts and make them a bit more up to par.
I don't want to in anyway change what he wants to say, in truth I'll only be adding some grammatical things and fixing a few spelling errors. Just so that everyone else can have an easier time reading what he has to say. I believe I have worked with Ray enough to translate for everyone else, so I feel confident with his posts, but I know others have a hard time understanding. I just want to ease the tension a little bit.
So, if you'll allow me, I'd like to at least try.
Angelus
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I have an idea..... would Lucifer send minions to find and destroy Cristian because he did not destroy Ambrosia when he had the chance?
I was thinking of putting him in the middle, with both sides out to destroy him and he is also having a fight with himself.
I was thinking of putting him in the middle, with both sides out to destroy him and he is also having a fight with himself.
poohlive
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Here's a riddle for the day...
Why would Gabriel spend so much time following Michael's specific orders of finding and killing Wrathlance, and going into hell with a small group of angels, if Wrathlance has been hovering over everything the entire time?
It makes absolutely no sense.
Everyone, (including myself) thought that you were in hell Morgoth, and now just suddenly you are out, hovering above everything. Why would Gabriel go into hell, for the sole purpose of killing your character, if you were hovering above him the entire time?
It makes no sense.
You didn't even acknowledge him or his angels at all. One post you're smelling angels, the next you simply spot my character. As if, Gabriel had just overlooked you. It's hard to overlook a twenty foot evil demon, you know.
You are undermining Bobo's credibility as a writer, and your own without posting reasonably. Here, let me tell you exactly what I mean. According to your posts, Morgoth, here's what happened:
A. Gabriel did not notice you or your other Tarasque friends. (twenty foot tall demons that can fly, I mean they are sticking out like a sore thumb in New York's skyline)
B. You smelled, but did not see any angels.
C. Gabriel went into hell, assumuing you were there. (he had to go on more than just a hunch, if he was so convinced you were in there)
D. Thirty seconds after he leaves, you close up hell, and then look down to spot Michael.
I'm sorry if this sounds angry, but I am a little concerned. I'd like to see this thread succeed for once, and I'd like to ask everyone if they can hold up the integrity and validity of other peoples posts. If this thing starts falling apart, people start leaving, and then it'll be just like all the others.
Why would Gabriel spend so much time following Michael's specific orders of finding and killing Wrathlance, and going into hell with a small group of angels, if Wrathlance has been hovering over everything the entire time?
It makes absolutely no sense.
Everyone, (including myself) thought that you were in hell Morgoth, and now just suddenly you are out, hovering above everything. Why would Gabriel go into hell, for the sole purpose of killing your character, if you were hovering above him the entire time?
It makes no sense.
You didn't even acknowledge him or his angels at all. One post you're smelling angels, the next you simply spot my character. As if, Gabriel had just overlooked you. It's hard to overlook a twenty foot evil demon, you know.
You are undermining Bobo's credibility as a writer, and your own without posting reasonably. Here, let me tell you exactly what I mean. According to your posts, Morgoth, here's what happened:
A. Gabriel did not notice you or your other Tarasque friends. (twenty foot tall demons that can fly, I mean they are sticking out like a sore thumb in New York's skyline)
B. You smelled, but did not see any angels.
C. Gabriel went into hell, assumuing you were there. (he had to go on more than just a hunch, if he was so convinced you were in there)
D. Thirty seconds after he leaves, you close up hell, and then look down to spot Michael.
I'm sorry if this sounds angry, but I am a little concerned. I'd like to see this thread succeed for once, and I'd like to ask everyone if they can hold up the integrity and validity of other peoples posts. If this thing starts falling apart, people start leaving, and then it'll be just like all the others.
LAVA GODDESSS
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valid points love,
um, my post is lacking, I know, but for now, I am bringing hell up to earth, so I tried to solve a few problems. It wasn't the most creative, but I am up to my ears in probs, even one of my posts got ignored, it happens....
lets try to work around this then, and get some action, ambrosia is on her way to try to make peace, she basically is going to defy God and (she thinks it is the right thing to do, she has no idea she is defying God) she is going to take all of Lucifer's evil, then let Michael Kill her,
There are flaws in her plans, she doesn't know that, it is up to you angels to find them, michael won't let her do that, besides, they won't know they took lucy's evilness....she will still look the same, and who would kill the angel of peace? especially michael?
ok, so this is complicated, you'll get it....carry on...and NO MORE STEPPING ON TOES.
um, my post is lacking, I know, but for now, I am bringing hell up to earth, so I tried to solve a few problems. It wasn't the most creative, but I am up to my ears in probs, even one of my posts got ignored, it happens....
lets try to work around this then, and get some action, ambrosia is on her way to try to make peace, she basically is going to defy God and (she thinks it is the right thing to do, she has no idea she is defying God) she is going to take all of Lucifer's evil, then let Michael Kill her,
There are flaws in her plans, she doesn't know that, it is up to you angels to find them, michael won't let her do that, besides, they won't know they took lucy's evilness....she will still look the same, and who would kill the angel of peace? especially michael?
ok, so this is complicated, you'll get it....carry on...and NO MORE STEPPING ON TOES.
bobo_daclown
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Heya guys, just curious about my Gabriel character. To my knowledge, I entered Hell to seek out Wrathlance. That first mystery is explained above, so I'm a tad less confused.
Second, the Angel Ambrosia mentioned that a familiar angel bumped into Satan and I just noticed that it may have been I. If so, I am sorry that I overlooked that fact. At the time I read it, it seemed she meant someone else but now, I cannot tell.
If there are any good ideas from those who interact with this character in the main storyline, I'd love to hear them. If not, here are the remedies I have planned:
1. Gabriel was at the entrance to Hell with his angels and when he tried to enter, Wrathlance moved the gateway (now Gabriel is in a tunnel maze.
2. Gabriel is about to find that out and then try to escape from the tunnel maze and (if he was supposed to bump into satan) he will bump into satan on the way out.
3. The story will continue with my other unmentioned plans and hopefully all will be good.
So. Feedback, please.
--Bobo
Happy Hannukah
Second, the Angel Ambrosia mentioned that a familiar angel bumped into Satan and I just noticed that it may have been I. If so, I am sorry that I overlooked that fact. At the time I read it, it seemed she meant someone else but now, I cannot tell.
If there are any good ideas from those who interact with this character in the main storyline, I'd love to hear them. If not, here are the remedies I have planned:
1. Gabriel was at the entrance to Hell with his angels and when he tried to enter, Wrathlance moved the gateway (now Gabriel is in a tunnel maze.
2. Gabriel is about to find that out and then try to escape from the tunnel maze and (if he was supposed to bump into satan) he will bump into satan on the way out.
3. The story will continue with my other unmentioned plans and hopefully all will be good.
So. Feedback, please.
--Bobo
Happy Hannukah
Morgoth
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I've tried to PM LAVa to help out, but her mailbox was full. So here's what's up:
1. Wrathlance was given command of New York City. Therefore, as any good commander would do, he phisically went there. I thought I made that clear. If not, it's my mistake.
2.Not in the literal sense of smell. He smelled their holiness, which stuck out distinctly as they were higher ranking angels. He did not see them as they were traveling too fast.
3.Read 1. Sorry if what I wrote was unclear.
4. Wrathlance lives for the moment. I thought Wrathlance closed up Hell before you entered. Wrathlance also thought Michael was the holiness that Wrathlance smelled, and so attacked him.
OCe again, I am sorry if there was confusion. I take the blame for it.
1. Wrathlance was given command of New York City. Therefore, as any good commander would do, he phisically went there. I thought I made that clear. If not, it's my mistake.
2.Not in the literal sense of smell. He smelled their holiness, which stuck out distinctly as they were higher ranking angels. He did not see them as they were traveling too fast.
3.Read 1. Sorry if what I wrote was unclear.
4. Wrathlance lives for the moment. I thought Wrathlance closed up Hell before you entered. Wrathlance also thought Michael was the holiness that Wrathlance smelled, and so attacked him.
OCe again, I am sorry if there was confusion. I take the blame for it.
bobo_daclown
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I haven't noticed anyone.
The last three pages minus my new posts are you and "C(h)ristian". I was wondering if anyone was gonna post. It looks like it might be time to close our eyes and see if the thread killing fairy comes?!?
Hopefully, people are just slack. But, I have been wondering for a while. Nite, guys.
The last three pages minus my new posts are you and "C(h)ristian". I was wondering if anyone was gonna post. It looks like it might be time to close our eyes and see if the thread killing fairy comes?!?
Hopefully, people are just slack. But, I have been wondering for a while. Nite, guys.
poohlive
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Well, most of the last three pages have been done in the last three days. That's close to 20 posts a day, and most of that being on SweetP and Angelus.
The only important plot things are now being done by Lava herself, so she holds the cards. I know I can't do anything until she posts. She has her characters both fighting each other, which is the main story line. So, until she ends the fight, everyone else can just watch and wait.
Or create their own sideplot, which you two have already done.
The only important plot things are now being done by Lava herself, so she holds the cards. I know I can't do anything until she posts. She has her characters both fighting each other, which is the main story line. So, until she ends the fight, everyone else can just watch and wait.
Or create their own sideplot, which you two have already done.
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