About Cristian being pushed over the edge. The goal is to regain the balance-not make good win out in the end. And, if you want to go that way, Isolde would be honored bound to go after him and try to kill him because she would never leave her master to do the bidding of an evil person-no matter what caused him to become evil.
That is why I hope that Barnabus comes around soon as he seems to be the wisest mage in this thread and he will probably know how Cristian can shut the voices off in his head.
Just a thought....
Angelious, if you want Garath to sort of adopt Garret's little sister Rana, I think it would make for some good plot twists being pulled in later.
I mean, since we are all finding our little ways to drive our characters insane, I might as well put my two cents worth in.
I wanted to write it myself, but I have tried doing that before, and I really don't like it. One good character and one bad character, it's too involving...
Right now I need Ambrosius' character, Barnabus for this one for he seems to be the wisest one of the character, the teacher so to speak. He could be alerted to what is happening with Cristian and help him out.
Sorry people, but I had to do it. Seeming as all the interest has been lost in the thread then I asked for it to be closed down. If you feel that I have done something wrong then tell me.
You didn't do anything wrong. It's a good story, with a good premise, I guess people just lost interest. I know I would post more if more people were in there, sometimes threads die, you count your losses, nod your head and work harder on your other ones.
Sorry guys, its partly my fault. I have been ill lately and my posting has gone to hell. I totally missed it and you were waiting for Isolde to take you into the village. If you want to open it back up than I will post again. Up to you.
Sorry to hear that you were ill.... but I think that it is something that doesn't lay with just one person. And poohlive is right, we do need more people to help it run along. If you can think of anyone that would like to join then tell them to write here and I'll ask for the thread to be opened up once again.
No, it's good. It's out of my hands, whateve you do is fine, as long as she's on the bad side. Don't make her too powerful though, I don't think my character would win if she was.
Someone feel free to take control of Barnabus and write him well. I am way too busy with a book the publisher wants on his desk yesterday, a poetry project, and trying to impregnate the Fantasy Goddess. I am impressed by the talent here, you guys have taken a good idea and made it brilliant. KUDOS!
OK, got the book done, it was a simple re-write. If no one has Barnabus, I'll be happy to lead him. I see that a war is brewing, and it only took over 200 posts to get there! If someone has Barnabus, it's ok. I have two other threads starting, so I can keep myself busy. Oh, hell, someone let me know, and I'll stop babbling.
All that I have to say is Morgoth- I bow down before you as that has to have been the best bit of writing that I have seen in a while to get rid of my character. I couldn't have come up with a better way in a million years so I have to say a million thanks.
The char I wish to use is a char by the name of CHAOS...he is a strong warrior and powerful mage(for those of you who have played FF7...imagine sephiroth.in looks and in skill..only a whole lot more powerful..)....
Join in anytime that you wish to. The only thing that I have to say is please don't make your character too powerful as it would be too easy for the character to destroy everything.
well diff is he's not very viloent..he's level headed..but if you do piss him off...
IC:chaos walked from the alley as he lit a smoke..he looked around surveying the scene...new day..new place..he didn't know his way around yet so things were a bit weird to him..
"time to find a place to stay"he muttered as he walked down the street the smoke wafting around him as he goes..