OOC: The Price of Freedom

[Wolfsister]

hope my posts arn't a bit too dry.

Dry? What do you mean by that?

 

[Wolfsister]

Ummm... Ren? What you mean by a mansion? I thought it was a warehouse?

 

[Jedi_Khan]

Dry? What do you mean by that?

I think he means horrible, not very good, not much content, etc. If only he could work on his spelling, then there would be a noticable improvement in his posts, but all in due time, of course.

 

[rengadeirishman]

Ummm... Ren? What you mean by a mansion? I thought it was a warehouse?

Is it? i had never really been clear on what it is. Ill edit

 

[Jedi_Khan]

I was under the impression that it was an office building. Why not ask Angelus? He came up with it,

 

[Wolfsister]

Yeah, I'm pretty sure we're in an abandoned district of warehouses. I'll check with Angelus.

Yep. Warehouses

 

[rengadeirishman]

edited.

 

[let3us2be1free0]

I think he means horrible, not very good, not much content, etc. If only he could work on his spelling, then there would be a noticable improvement in his posts, but all in due time, of course.

Nailed it jedi.

 

[Jedi_Khan]

Dude, Freebie, I just read your last post to New Era. Could you have been any dryer? Take your bloody time and come up with something good. It's not a race to post, you know. It's not like you're getting paid by the post.

 

[Wolfsister]

Um Freebie, I didn't go in the elevator. I just simply walked out of the cafeteria into the hall way which is on the same level. And now I'm standing by the banks of the monitors which Samuel looks after.

Also, the cameras most likely wouldn't be able to tell that Draco could use camoflauge.

 

[let3us2be1free0]

sorry to both of you. It is kinda a race for me. I got three charecters, and i like to post for them all. Ill edit the posts later if i get around to it, to make them more detailed, but respond to them nonless. And i figures that eve would go greet draco, thereby taking the elevatior?

 

[let3us2be1free0]

And ken can read energy enen through a camera will you allow that angelus?

 

[Wolfsister]

sorry to both of you. It is kinda a race for me. I got three charecters, and i like to post for them all. Ill edit the posts later if i get around to it, to make them more detailed, but respond to them nonless. And i figures that eve would go greet draco, thereby taking the elevatior?

If I had've wanted Eve to go greet Draco, I would have actually put it in my post. If I don't put things in a post, Freebie, then it doesn't happen. That's the whole reason for posting isn't it?

Why is it a race? If you know that people won't respond immediately (most of the time) they why race? Why not take some time and make it something enjoyable to read and post to?

I've something like fifteen characters plus the twelve more players that I have to keep track of in IV as well as about six other characters in other threads I'm doing. It doesnt' have to be a race.

But if its what you want, then I won't say anything. I was just curious

 

[Wolfsister]

And ken can read energy enen through a camera will you allow that angelus?

I just talked to Angelus and he said that that's pretty impossible. Ken should be at least able to physically be around a person to read their auras and sense them.

 

[Jedi_Khan]

sorry to both of you. It is kinda a race for me. I got three charecters, and i like to post for them all. Ill edit the posts later if i get around to it, to make them more detailed, but respond to them nonless. And i figures that eve would go greet draco, thereby taking the elevatior?

Don't assume anything when RPing, especially when what you're assuming involves another character. That leads to godmoding, and in the RP world, that's a massive NO.

As for posting for three characters, here's a challenge, try doing it in one post, and blend it so you don't have to separate them. Or better yet, just write your posts from the point of view of one character. A whole hella lot easier to do.

I'll use your Ken and Bay dialogue as an example.

Ken was leaving the med bay when he noticed that Bay was awake. He ran out, ignoring Bay's shouts of "You bastard! Come back here!" as the medics tried to restain him.

He was back in the hallway and he noticed a dragon or something on the camera. Its energy was concealed somehow, and he guessed it could use camouflage.

He saw Eve and Luise run by, and waved to them. He walked over to Josh and waited for the conversation to start, when Bay came in.

"What the hell did you do to me! I wanted to fight! Im gonna knock you flat!" cried Bay

Ken looked at Josh. "Can I please knock him unconsious again?"
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Well, that's a whole hella lot better, but it still needs work. And slow the bloody hell down when posting, so you can put up good quality work!

 

[let3us2be1free0]

sorry sorry. at home its a bit of a race, and im a fast paced dude you seem to have the talent of friendly cursing. thats teasing insn't it? I don't mind then. ill edit.

 

[Jedi_Khan]

sorry sorry. at home its a bit of a race, and im a fast paced dude you seem to have the talent of friendly cursing. thats teasing insn't it? I don't mind then. ill edit.

What makes you think I'm teasing? And why are you a fast paced person? Are you hyped up on some drug like Speed or Crack?

 

[rengadeirishman]

and watch the emoticons lad, in your immortals post before last, there was four emoticons. Emoticons have absolutely no place in an IC post, none. under any circumstance. Your spelling is improving slightly, but id like to see more. and if its hard for you to do three characters then dont do three characters. Two is hard for me, but i keep One-eye in case hes important later on, but you'll notice there has only been one or two posts just for One-eye the whole time. also about your spelling. I am willing to spellcheck any of your IC posts for threads that i'm in. just pm them to me and ill send them back corrected. The spelling is a big problem for many people, myself most definitely included. Im gonna to say the same to JD whose spelling is so atrocious that i dont even care to interact with anything he writes.

 

[let3us2be1free0]

What makes you think I'm teasing? And why are you a fast paced person? Are you hyped up on some drug like Speed or Crack?

I was refering to wolfsister. I can tell im being irritable and i appoligize. im hooked on the computer, it's my drug.

 

[let3us2be1free0]

Don't assume anything when RPing, especially when what you're assuming involves another character. That leads to godmoding, and in the RP world, that's a massive NO.

As for posting for three characters, here's a challenge, try doing it in one post, and blend it so you don't have to separate them. Or better yet, just write your posts from the point of view of one character. A whole hella lot easier to do.

I'll use your Ken and Bay dialogue as an example.

Ken was leaving the med bay when he noticed that Bay was awake. He ran out, ignoring Bay's shouts of "You bastard! Come back here!" as the medics tried to restain him.

He was back in the hallway and he noticed a dragon or something on the camera. Its energy was concealed somehow, and he guessed it could use camouflage.

He saw Eve and Luise run by, and waved to them. He walked over to Josh and waited for the conversation to start, when Bay came in.

"What the hell did you do to me! I wanted to fight! Im gonna knock you flat!" cried Bay

Ken looked at Josh. "Can I please knock him unconsious again?"
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Well, that's a whole hella lot better, but it still needs work. And slow the bloody hell down when posting, so you can put up good quality work!

Ok, ill try it. i guess i just need to take my time. Im not that much of a details guy.

 

[Jedi_Khan]

Ok, ill try it. i guess i just need to take my time. Im not that much of a details guy.

Good boy. Now, go and take your time editing your posts. If you have to, write them in a word processor that has spell check. Then, after checking the spelling and fixing it, cut and paste into a post.

 

[Wolfsister]

sorry sorry. at home its a bit of a race, and im a fast paced dude you seem to have the talent of friendly cursing. thats teasing insn't it? I don't mind then. ill edit.

Teasing? How was I teasing you?

I admit that I'm a friendly person and I don't really like paying out on people. But at the same time, I just want to help you, freebie. There's alot of people out there that would just either ignore you or curse you (definitely not in a teasing way) and I'm not the kind of person that could allow that to happen.

I'm the kind of person that will help someone out of the way of a speeding train but at the same time call them stupid for getting in the way in the first place.

That explain it for you?

And I would think that Lit is a place to get away from the home? From where ever you are and escape into a world thats definitely not your own.

 

[let3us2be1free0]

So much work... and the keyboard im using isn't helping that much either, but ill deal. Meybe i have spell check on this computer...

 

[Wolfsister]

If you hadnt' wanted work, then why bring out three characters?

Trust me, if you take your time, you won't get bored as quickly. How's that?

 

[let3us2be1free0]

all recent posts spell chacked. ill do the work, and i like alot of charecters. but prehaps ill drop the girl.