Okay, I've taken to writing my own erotica lately and I've been loving it. I have finished 3 stories that I'm very proud of all of them about 6000 words. While I have a million stories like this and I think I have my pacing for them down.
Introduce characters
Build tension
Sex
Lately I've been thinking of telling a more long form story. here is a quick outline (Warning mom/son Incest)
Mother is a famous television star, her, her son, and her agent boyfriend go on a vacation together to the Bahamas to celebrate an Emmy win and show renewal. While there the agent is just too preoccupied with work and his other clients that he barley pays attention to her. He leaves the vacation early to go take care of some work leaving the mom and son alone.
Mom is pissed, she has all these couples activities planned out and paid for that are going to go to waste now. Son decides to take her up on them and they spend a few days just having fun together. Nice Dinner, a massage, wine tasting,
One night they come back to their room to find out that a pipe busted in it and it got flooded so they have to move up to the only vacant room in the hotel, the honeymoon suite. This is just as they are coming back from a wine tasting that the mom had a bit to drink from so they are both feeling a tipsy and more relaxed. They see the the hot tub in the room and decide to go for it. One thing leads to another, BOW-CHICA WOW WOW
Normally that's where the story would end, but i want it to go further
After the sex caps off what has become a beautiful romantic vacation together the pair begin a secretive relationship, she fires her agent and says that her son is her agent now to give them an excuse to jet around the world together.
As there relationship gos on a nosy tabloid reporter following her stats to get suspicious of how close there relationship is and she will laugh off these "sick" rumors in public as the reporter starts to investigate.
On one of their romantic escapades the unthinkable happens and he impregnates her.
She announces her pregnancy and says that she used some frozen sperm from her late husband in the press release. Unfrotunately that tabloid reporter does more research, finds that there is no record of any perserved sperm, puts them together in a resort acting very inanimately together. and pretty much makes a HUGE story proving that they are having a relationship. They deny and deny but realizing how much they really love each other and how they shouldn't be ashamed of there relationship so they come out on the cover of a People-like magazine. (not sure if you can use the real one, but i want it to be like when a celebrity comes out as being gay)
then we basically get a montage of the worlds reaction too it, but slowly, people start to accept it, she goes on a show to talk with other women and they joke about how good "young men" can be in the sack, and hollywood loves celebrity pregnancies so they just eat this up.
Soon incest becomes the new "fad" in hollywood, more incest couples coming out, more and more announcing pregnancies by family members.
I have an insane ending in mind but I never reveal my ending in a pitch, but it does have a shocking but happy ending.
Sorry for a long pitch but here are my questions
Usually my stories are about the one sex scene happening, the build up being establishing the taboo and slowly shaving away at it before we get our climax by having the family members cross that line. but here they cross it at the end of the first act. The story after that will be about them hiding it, and then them deciding to come out with it.
Heres the twist, I want to sell this to non-incest fans. I know its a bit underhanded but I would like to "trick" the women reading this (as most erotica is read by older mature women) They would be able to put them selves in the wish fulfillment of the worlds hottest milf with a neglectful hsuband in an island paradise. I'm going to set it up and promote it as her looking for a sexy young beach man to fool around with. give her some scenes with a sexy towel boy, you know a standard fantasy.
The sons story at first would look like a subplot for women to get some scenes with a sexy young man. I'm going to have other women complimenting and hitting on him. Sexualizing him though the eyes of other characters so the character that the woman is relating too, the celebrity, wont feel odd because a mother isnt oogiling her son, other women are. So that way it establishes how sexy the son is when he starts to get closer to the mother and crosses the wires in a way that when the mother and son begin to fall for one another the reader will see the sexy young man that they have become attracted too though the eyes of other women characters starting to come on to the character that they have connected themselves too.
My goal is to get that perfect feeling incest should devliver, they know that this isn't right, somethings is wrong here, but at the same time they are turned on and curious enough to turn the page.
Introduce characters
Build tension
Sex
Lately I've been thinking of telling a more long form story. here is a quick outline (Warning mom/son Incest)
Mother is a famous television star, her, her son, and her agent boyfriend go on a vacation together to the Bahamas to celebrate an Emmy win and show renewal. While there the agent is just too preoccupied with work and his other clients that he barley pays attention to her. He leaves the vacation early to go take care of some work leaving the mom and son alone.
Mom is pissed, she has all these couples activities planned out and paid for that are going to go to waste now. Son decides to take her up on them and they spend a few days just having fun together. Nice Dinner, a massage, wine tasting,
One night they come back to their room to find out that a pipe busted in it and it got flooded so they have to move up to the only vacant room in the hotel, the honeymoon suite. This is just as they are coming back from a wine tasting that the mom had a bit to drink from so they are both feeling a tipsy and more relaxed. They see the the hot tub in the room and decide to go for it. One thing leads to another, BOW-CHICA WOW WOW
Normally that's where the story would end, but i want it to go further
After the sex caps off what has become a beautiful romantic vacation together the pair begin a secretive relationship, she fires her agent and says that her son is her agent now to give them an excuse to jet around the world together.
As there relationship gos on a nosy tabloid reporter following her stats to get suspicious of how close there relationship is and she will laugh off these "sick" rumors in public as the reporter starts to investigate.
On one of their romantic escapades the unthinkable happens and he impregnates her.
She announces her pregnancy and says that she used some frozen sperm from her late husband in the press release. Unfrotunately that tabloid reporter does more research, finds that there is no record of any perserved sperm, puts them together in a resort acting very inanimately together. and pretty much makes a HUGE story proving that they are having a relationship. They deny and deny but realizing how much they really love each other and how they shouldn't be ashamed of there relationship so they come out on the cover of a People-like magazine. (not sure if you can use the real one, but i want it to be like when a celebrity comes out as being gay)
then we basically get a montage of the worlds reaction too it, but slowly, people start to accept it, she goes on a show to talk with other women and they joke about how good "young men" can be in the sack, and hollywood loves celebrity pregnancies so they just eat this up.
Soon incest becomes the new "fad" in hollywood, more incest couples coming out, more and more announcing pregnancies by family members.
I have an insane ending in mind but I never reveal my ending in a pitch, but it does have a shocking but happy ending.
Sorry for a long pitch but here are my questions
Usually my stories are about the one sex scene happening, the build up being establishing the taboo and slowly shaving away at it before we get our climax by having the family members cross that line. but here they cross it at the end of the first act. The story after that will be about them hiding it, and then them deciding to come out with it.
Heres the twist, I want to sell this to non-incest fans. I know its a bit underhanded but I would like to "trick" the women reading this (as most erotica is read by older mature women) They would be able to put them selves in the wish fulfillment of the worlds hottest milf with a neglectful hsuband in an island paradise. I'm going to set it up and promote it as her looking for a sexy young beach man to fool around with. give her some scenes with a sexy towel boy, you know a standard fantasy.
The sons story at first would look like a subplot for women to get some scenes with a sexy young man. I'm going to have other women complimenting and hitting on him. Sexualizing him though the eyes of other characters so the character that the woman is relating too, the celebrity, wont feel odd because a mother isnt oogiling her son, other women are. So that way it establishes how sexy the son is when he starts to get closer to the mother and crosses the wires in a way that when the mother and son begin to fall for one another the reader will see the sexy young man that they have become attracted too though the eyes of other women characters starting to come on to the character that they have connected themselves too.
My goal is to get that perfect feeling incest should devliver, they know that this isn't right, somethings is wrong here, but at the same time they are turned on and curious enough to turn the page.
