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[Racoonteur]

I'm telling you that the order of operations there, Sex > Liv turned 18 in June > More sex, is easily misconstrued if you establish in chapter 1 that the story is happening in July. I don't know why this is causing you to go even more nuclear, because I also keep saying "This is an easy fix"

Also, you did notice that the first sex you mention happened before Liv is even mentioned in the chapter, right? Or did you want me to insert a random "Liv is 18" statement before I say a single other word about her in the story? How about a nice general disclaimer?

I hope people who are reading this thread realize that you're just grasping at straws trying to sound like you have a clue what you're talking about. You're just making this up defensively as you go.

 

[AwkwardMD]

Also, you did notice that the first sex you mention happened before Liv is even mentioned in the chapter, right? Or did you want me to insert a random "Liv is 18" statement before I say a single other word about her in the story?

I hope people who are reading this thread realize that you're just grasping at straws trying to sound like you have a clue what you're talking about. You're just making this up defensively as you go.

The first sex scene does not involve sneaking around Liv. It's the "things progressed, which was hard to do with Liv around" section that is getting you tripped up since you then, in the middle of that, establish when Liv turns 18 without any proximal explanation of when now is.

 

[Racoonteur]

Your disclaimer at the beginning does not trump the story doing or saying otherwise.

I say she's 18 in the story!

 

[Racoonteur]

The first sex scene does not involve sneaking around Liv. It's the "things progressed, which was hard to do with Liv around" section that is getting you tripped up since you then, in the middle of that, establish when Liv turns 18 without any proximal explanation of when now is.

You just keep changing your bullshit arguments. Now you're attempting to drill down into "proximal explanations" when I can go out to pull a hundred stories off this site that have been approved that do exactly the same thing. Again, I established the date in Chapter 1.

 

[AwkwardMD]

All characters in this story are 18

Judy was 17 the first time she had sex, and it was super hot. She and her teacher did all of the positions.

Do you see why a disclaimer is not trumped by story content?

 

[AwkwardMD]

.Again, I established the date in Chapter 1.

This is not good enough. Chapters have to stand on their own.

 

[Racoonteur]

Do you see why a disclaimer is not trumped by story content?

Did you see where I replied that I say she's 18 in the story?

 

[Racoonteur]

This is not good enough. Chapters have to stand on their own.

Bullshit. Do you state the age of every character in your story in every chapter?

 

[AwkwardMD]

Bullshit. Do you state the age of every character in your story in every chapter?

You will not find me aging a character from 17 to 18 in proximity to sex.

 

[Racoonteur]

Here's a good example of the fallacy of your "proximal explanations" argument.
This story is rife with underage innuendo and "proximal" issues.

https://www.literotica.com/s/rough-sex-defense-teen-vs-teacher

 

[Racoonteur]

You will not find me aging a character from 17 to 18 in proximity to sex.

How do I know unless you state it in every chapter?

 

[AwkwardMD]

Did you see where I replied that I say she's 18 in the story?

What you wrote only fits the rules if your chapters are taken as a whole, and the submission process is not looking at your previous works. The chapter you sent me can be misconstrued, and the site wants you to clear that up. This is not complicated. All you have to do is remove part of one sentence.

 

[AwkwardMD]

Here's a good example of the fallacy of your "proximal explanations" argument.
This story is rife with underage innuendo and "proximal" issues.

https://www.literotica.com/s/rough-sex-defense-teen-vs-teacher

Other stories breaking the rules is not an excuse for you to not abide.

EDIT: i didn’t read that, and I don’t need to because it doesn't matter. If it does break the rules, though, you should report it instead of trying to use it to justify your own submissions.

 

[Racoonteur]

What you wrote only fits the rules if your chapters are taken as a whole, and the submission process is not looking at your previous works. The chapter you sent me can be misconstrued, and the site wants you to clear that up. This is not complicated. All you have to do is remove part of one sentence.

Again, just making shit up.

I state at the beginning of the chapter no characters are under 18. I state that a character who is not even involved in sexual innuendo, let alone a sexual act is 18 in the story, and you say it can be misconstrued? Do you realize how deep you're digging here?

 

[AwkwardlySet]

Holy shit. I must admit I feel motivated to read the story just to see what's all the fuss about.

 

[Racoonteur]

Other stories breaking the rules is not an excuse for you to not abide.

EDIT: i didn’t read that, and I don’t need to because it doesn't matter. If it does break the rules, though, you should report it instead of trying to use it to justify your own submissions.

Nope, just again proving that my story doesn't warrant being returned for underage content.

 

[Racoonteur]

Holy shit. I must admit I feel motivated to read the story just to see what's all the fuss about.

I just shared my experience and some nard feels they know better.

 

[AwkwardMD]

Holy shit. I must admit I feel motivated to read the story just to see what's all the fuss about.

He just needs to change one sentence. You would think I took a dump on his story.

 

[Racoonteur]

He just needs to change one sentence. You would think I took a dump on his story.

Again, minimizing a situation that has been ongoing for two months now.
As if it's all about him? LOL!

 

[Racoonteur]

Do you see why a disclaimer is not trumped by story content?

Did you see that is not my story?
Did you notice in my story that I say Liv had turned 18 in June? Past tense?

 

[AwkwardMD]

Did you see that is not my story?
Did you notice in my story that I say Liv had turned 18 in June? Past tense?

The whole story is in past tense, so I don’t know what you think that changes.

My brother in Christ, you and I are not having an argument. I liked your story. I think changing one line that doesn't matter (unless Liv being 17 at some point was important) is a simple fix, and that gets your story published. Your misconceptions on how the site should work or should behave are not just unconvincing, they're meaningless.

You either conform or your work doesn't get published. This is a reality all of us are operating within.

 

[Racoonteur]

The whole story is in past tense, so I don’t know what you think that changes.

My brother in Christ, you and I are not having an argument. I liked your story. I think changing one line that doesn't matter (unless Liv being 17 at some point was important) is a simple fix, and that gets your story published. Your misconceptions on how the site should work or should behave are not just unconvincing, they're meaningless.

You either conform or your work doesn't get published. This is a reality all of us are operating within.

The line reads, "Fall was approaching. Liv had turned 18 in June..."
Again, what part of that makes her underage?

 

[Racoonteur]

The whole story is in past tense, so I don’t know what you think that changes.

My brother in Christ, you and I are not having an argument. I liked your story. I think changing one line that doesn't matter (unless Liv being 17 at some point was important) is a simple fix, and that gets your story published. Your misconceptions on how the site should work or should behave are not just unconvincing, they're meaningless.

You either conform or your work doesn't get published. This is a reality all of us are operating within.

Also, had Laurel come back with "I liked your story. I think changing one line that doesn't matter gets your story published." do you honestly think I'd be having this conversation with you? I was not asked to conform to anything. I was given a generic "underage material" blurb and left to guess. Looking at the passage "Fall was approaching. Liv had turned 18 in June..." does not leave me thinking Liv is 17.

 

[AwkwardMD]

Also, had Laurel come back with "I liked your story. I think changing one line that doesn't matter (unless Liv being 17 at some point was important) is a simple fix, and that gets your story published." do you honestly think I'd be having this conversation with you?

Why do you think I'm engaging with you? It is widely known that the site gives boilerplate rejections. They are unhelpful. I am trying to be helpful.

The site can afford to not care about us. There will always be more people who try their hand at writing. Literotica does not care about you, and will not examine your previous work to establish a timeline.

 

[AwkwardMD]

The line reads, "Fall was approaching. Liv had turned 18 in June..."
Again, what part of that makes her underage?

It means that she was 17 before her birthday, which is underage by site rules, and chapter 2 does not clarify when the previous sexy Rand/Abby interactions were happening. In isolation, it reads like they are sneaking around an underage character, which is what I said.