And the award for derpiest mistake of the night goes to... ME! Shit, forgot his eyes were supposed to be completely violet even though I was literally talking about it. Welp. I think it's time for me to go to bed.
Nice! That’s great. It looks like a long story, you must have put a lot of work into it. I’ll have to give it a read at some point. Congratulations though!
Dude nice! I gave it a quick glance over, it looks interesting. Once or if you get a few more chapters up I'll give it a proper read.
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So I'm thinking of, instead of moving the women, they go upstairs to get her some blankets, and when they come back down and Cora goes to drape it over her, that's when she gets bit. What you think?