Period Cross Dressing Fantasies

[SophiaY]

I “started” nearly at the same time (knew much earlier). My route, with some bumpy detours, was as a flower child – Renaissance Faires, The Grateful Dead, womyn commune, some Dianic witchcraft.
There are still some traces of a lippie in me.
Leather was a very short moment – enough to appreciate it, enough to know that wasn’t for me.

 

[Stella_Omega]

yeah, we seem to have followed somewhat the same paths.
Once I found it, I took to leather like a duck to water- but good old ordinary humping is still the best- although for me, it's always, always about power transfer...

 

[cpicass0]

beginnings

Great beginning to your story! I really enjoyed it. Keep it coming!!!

 

[Stella_Omega]

Great beginning to your story! I really enjoyed it. Keep it coming!!!

second chapter is up, yay!
I got the most upset private feedback for the first chapter. The reader said;

The terrible narrative and jokey feel to the piece ruined any chance of me enjoying it. Most of the time it felt like you were taking the piss out of anyone who enjoys such themes and also me as a reader. Such a bizarre style left me unable to get into the story at all, I am afraid.

which proves you really can't please 'em all. And it's made me think about a couple of sentences- a little snide, honestly, on the subject of faire visitors. I don't like generalisations, and I think I should edit just a tad more.
Even negative feedback is useful.

 

[SophiaY]

"Even negative feedback is useful."

As long as the critique comes from trying to be helpful, inside of being snide or patronizing.