please help

[ace1234]

just keeping it alive its still up for grabs

 

[Chicklet]

Someone take it!!! we'll draw straws...

 

[penguindance]

 

[Guest]

... we'll draw straws...

"WE" did and you got it Chicklet. That's two new stories in one week!

 

[penguindance]

 

[Chicklet]

"WE" did and you got it Chicklet. That's two new stories in one week!

<chicklet shoots herself in the head>

Ah Ha! Idea problem solved! Now I don't have to write anymore!

 

[penguindance]

 

[Chicklet]

= p

 

[Axeltheswede]

Chicklet's story

You have set up an outline any writer would find difficult. Multiple POVs are hard to keep straight, for both writer and reader. I have never seen their use add anything to a story.

Keep your thread alive, Ace. Good luck finding someone to take on this story.

 

[Chicklet]

= p;

(that's a raspberry, with spittle and all)

I know that multiple POV's are hard, I just sort of spat out something quick quick quick!

Chicklet

 

[Guest]

Re: Chicklet's story

... Multiple POVs are hard to keep straight, for both writer and reader. ...

That's why I prefer, and recommend to any new writer, using third party fly-on-the-wall, and incidentally past tense.

 

[penguindance]