Pregnancy Stories

[Guest]

Stories I would like to see primarily deal with pregnant women, happily married and sexually satisfied, however, ends up being slowly seduced. Gradually she looses control and ends up being gang banged. Afterwards she is surprised she does not feel any or much guilt about loosing her self.

I have tried writing such stories myself, but am not satisfied with the results. Also, I would like to see others spin on this type of story as well.

What I enjoy about the above scenario and similar is that the women are "unattainable". Rather than having women be or become "sluts" or be forced, it is a slow process where the women are slowly worn down, against their better judgment, until they loose their inhabitions. It is even more so for pregnant women, who seem even further away, which is what makes this fantasy appealing so interesting.

 

[Tatewaki]

Rather than having women be or become "sluts" or be forced, it is a slow process where the women are slowly worn down, against their better judgment, until they loose their inhabitions. It is even more so for pregnant women, who seem even further away, which is what makes this fantasy appealing so interesting.

Slow anything doesn't play in short fiction. For that kind of thing you need page space. It would work well in a novella or novel, though. In short erotica sexual tension without release simply frustrates and doesn't entertain.

-T

 

[Guest]

Slow anything doesn't play in short fiction. For that kind of thing you need page space. It would work well in a novella or novel, though. In short erotica sexual tension without release simply frustrates and doesn't entertain.

-T

I agree with the above, however slow can be relative. On some of the better stories I have read (and hopefully will write someday), the author adds a few extra paragraphs soley for character development, motivation etc. One does not necessarily need turn it into a novella or novel. What makes a good story in my opinion is if we can get a glimpse into the inner workings of a character and understand that character as a person not a stereotype, i.e. the shy wife who becomes a slut, horny cheerleader etc. So While I agree that sexual tension without realease does not entertain, stories without any tension can be just as frustrating (again, in my opinion). For a perfect example of what I am talking about is the story "Cueing Up" at
jakeswonderland (hope it is ok to include name of site). This story provides enough characterization without getting sidetracked with unnecessary detail.

 

[lexium]

I agree that a story should give a little insite into the character and the character's mindset, but it shouldn't be a biography, in my opinion. You don't what to bore you readers.

 

[Guest]

I agree that a story should give a little insite into the character and the character's mindset, but it shouldn't be a biography, in my opinion. You don't what to bore you readers.

Yes, that is exactly what I am talking about, just a quick glimpse into a character, but not a full life story. Personally, I get bored if a story is much longer than the type that are generally posted here. On this we agree.

 

[Tatewaki]

What is more stimulating; the act of impregnation, or the act of trying to bed a pregnant woman? I'm speaking from the point of view of a potential sexual partner, and not a longtime partner.

For example: Would you rather read a story about a guy trying to pick a girl, he manages to do so, gets her pregnant and the story deals with the aftermath, or a story where a pregnant woman is seduced and bedded by the same fellow, and the repercussions of said relationship?

-T

 

[Guest]

Speaking for myself, I would have to say the act of seducing and bedding a pregnant woman would be more stimulating.

First, because there are already numerous stories and sites that deal with impregnation, whether it is forced, adultery, interracial etc. While enjoyable, if done right, they are more than well represented.

Second, pregnancy stories are rare and seem to be a standard screw story with the word pregnant thrown in a few times. They do not seem realistic and the fact that she is pregnant has no other role than she just is.


finally, more than being pregnant, I think it is the process of seducing someone that seems unattainable is what I find erotic. And who is more unattainable than a happily married, pregnant wife?

 

[Tatewaki]

Speaking for myself, I would have to say the act of seducing and bedding a pregnant woman would be more stimulating.

First, because there are already numerous stories and sites that deal with impregnation, whether it is forced, adultery, interracial etc. While enjoyable, if done right, they are more than well represented.

Second, pregnancy stories are rare and seem to be a standard screw story with the word pregnant thrown in a few times. They do not seem realistic and the fact that she is pregnant has no other role than she just is.


finally, more than being pregnant, I think it is the process of seducing someone that seems unattainable is what I find erotic. And who is more unattainable than a happily married, pregnant wife?

You've mirrored my own thoughts on the subject. Thanks for giving me that final push to write something on this subject.

Regards,

-T

 

[Guest]

Cool, I have started a few stories of my own, but never finished them. I will try to complete one up as well.

Thanks,

 

[Reshbod]

Interesting idea and a challenging story, might be worth tackling. I have a story in mind but am at a loss on how to start it. I have a few scenarios, but getting from the introduction to that point seems to be particularly difficult. Do others have this problem, where you have an idea but you are unable to fill in an important gap?

 

[Chicklet]

Interesting idea and a challenging story, might be worth tackling. I have a story in mind but am at a loss on how to start it. I have a few scenarios, but getting from the introduction to that point seems to be particularly difficult. Do others have this problem, where you have an idea but you are unable to fill in an important gap?

I *always* have that problem. A bit of advice I got was that you don't have to write the whole thing at once, go ahead and write the parts that make you excited about the story. If you have a great sex scene in mind, go ahead and write that scene. You can fill in the blanks later.

Chicklet

 

[Reshbod]

I *always* have that problem. A bit of advice I got was that you don't have to write the whole thing at once, go ahead and write the parts that make you excited about the story. If you have a great sex scene in mind, go ahead and write that scene. You can fill in the blanks later.

Chicklet

Thanks, good advice, maybe I will put it away for a while and attack it later.

 

[Bug Eyed Monster]

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[Reshbod]

I'm a guy and have definately wanted to hit on pregnant women and nursing women

So have I, but would not have the guts to approach one, so I look for stories about it. Unfortunatley, there are not many out there, so know I have to try to write my own.

 

[penguindance]

 

[Chicklet]

there's just something about curvy women. lotsa curves.

 

[penguindance]

 

[Chicklet]

Saturday evenings are over-rated.

 

[penguindance]

 

[Monazwx]

Originally posted by Chicklet
Saturday evenings are over-rated.

So true, so true.

I have an idea for a story where a woman wants to get pregnant, but not by artificial insemination. She wants to select the man herself without him knowing that she wants a kid out of hte deal. However, I'm not sure how to introduce the fact that she wants to have sex without a condom without getting the unsuspecting male suspicious. Any suggestions?

 

[penguindance]

 

[Chicklet]

She could flat out lie and say she's on the pill.

Have you seen the big lebowski? Maud Lebowski and The Dude have sex, Maud wants a baby but doesn't tell him. She just doesn't mention it. Interesting, interesting. I would like to read this story, though.

Chicklet

 

[Monazwx]

Thanks Chicklet

I've been thinking about the pill excuse, and I think it's the one I'm going to work into the online. In my original draft, I have one of her friends let it slip that she wants a baby to the guy that she's sleeping with.

I think I'll put that in after they have sex.
Drama!

Thanks a bunch!

 

[Chicklet]

drama is excellent = )

 

[Tatewaki]

Bump.

-T