Raven of the City

OOC: the time

I think we are pretty much back to the evening where the thread originally started, but it is growing late and probably within a few posts, will be turning into morning. Thanks for checking in!
 
Santiago

He felt her cumming, washing around his cock in a hot, creamy sheet, her face , wrapped in flying strands of hair was
a picture of animal abandon. Now it was his turn, now the game would reach another and mutually climactic ending.
He drew his knees up behind her and rose until they were in a sitting position, he was deep inside her, a rock hard pivot that he could turn
or twist her on.He hit a button near the door console and the sun roof slid back letting in cool drafts of night air and city sounds.
He thrust into her , holding her on his lap, tight against him for a few minutes as the Limo turned into the big park off North Shore.
Her nipples were hard tight swollen buds and he sucked and bit them sending waves of new pleasure though her body. Every nerve semed renewed in the brisk night air rushing in.
The car hit a cirb and jolted them both. They heard Dirk mumble a curse.
"Maybe he should pull over Ali," Ramon murmered through lips that were tight against her breast.
"He may kill us, we seem...distracting"
Ali laughed and dug her fingers into his scalp,
"Whatever you think..."
"Dirk, pull over when you find a good place to stop. Open the glass if you want." Santiago knocked on the
pane that seperated the driver from the passengers. "You may as well have a good time too, eh?"

"How about it Ali," He said, driving himself deep, deep within her.
"Would you like some company?"
 
Raven

At the puzzled looks on Jesse and Vince's face, Raven explains. "It's a blue powder, maybe melted down to a liquid and injected or sniffed. Not sure. Has the effect of making a person feel like they are falling into a void."
 
Tears flowing down my cheeks, I can barely understand what is happening around me. Finally, Raven's words sink into my brain.

"Wait! Yes! I have heard of a new drug on the streets - supposed to be better than anything else available. Cheap, too, from what I understand. Cecily told me about it, oh, a couple of weeks ago."

I turn to Raven -

"I don't know if you ever met Cecily? Cecily Amber? They used to call her Starling at the club. She was a bit strung out most of the time anyway, but she told a few days ago that she'd discovered this new drug that was supposedly really good. I'm sure if we go to her apartment she could tell us more about who -"

I cut off my remarks as I take in Raven's face and instantly know that something is wrong.

"Raven? Raven, what is it? Do you know something?"

I look at Vince, but his face is a mask of stone.
 
"Raven better tell you honey, I can't field this one."
Vince stands up and thrusts his hands in his pockets. He violently kicks the cracked brick wall.
"SonofaBitch!...sonofabitch."

Somewhere in the distance sirens are howling through the night.
 
Shirlene/Artemis

I step back silently into The Shadows as I listen to what is said!

I speak to Raven using My Telepathy Raven you will find the answers to the Questions that you seek but be warned that you will recieve the answers at a price!
 
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Raven

Raven narrows his eyes and sends back to the voice in his head.
all things have a price, and if you know anything at all about my kind, you know that as often as we pay, we take even more.

Raven puts a hand on Jesse's shoulder, "Jesse," he says, "Cecily was another victim of the mugger who has been hitting this city so hard lately. I saw them take her away in an ambulance tonight. I don't know if she was still alive then or not."

Raven looks Jesse straight in the eye. "I was at her apartment afterward. And I did find something. What I need to know, Jesse, is did Cecily say anything, anything at all about where she got the drug, who is dealing it on the street? Anything you can tell me will help."
 
Jesse

As Raven's words sink into my brain, the tears come faster. Cecily? Hurt? Murdered? God, I hate this stinking place! It kills off the good with the bad and stench just stays with you.

I hug myself as though cold, even though the nighttime humidity is almost unbearable. I wisk the tears from my face - tears don't do any fucking good in this place anyhow!

"I'm not sure that she used a name. I know she did mention the drug, though. Not sure where she said she got it."

I look at Raven apologetically, and am about to shrug my shoulders, when suddenly a thought crosses my mind.

"NO! Wait! She did say there was a man, new to the Zone - some one we hadn't seen before who had turned her on to it. Now just a minute......she did say that he told her he got from some one else. Name's right on the edge of my tongue - Sanchez, Santigo, Santa Cruz - NO - SANTIAGO! Yes! That's it! The last name is Santiago! But she said he doesn't deal directly, he gets others to do that for him."

I glance up at Raven, my eyes still filled with tears. I see the look on his face, and I speak up before he can say anything.

"No, Raven. I'm not staying here, nice and quiet. Some one is out there killing the women of the Zone, and he got just a little too close to me. I want to help find Cecily's murderer!"

I catch the glimpse between Raven and Vince, and wonder what plan they could be hatching.
 
Shirlene/Artemis

So at last I have finally found "The Thief of My Heritage!"

I use my Telepathy Raven This Blue Powder was stolen from My People!

It is only Meant for The Shaman of My People to use it to help them on their Vision Quests but for anybody else I do not know what will happen to them if they use it!


I Transform back into My Wolf Form I run over to Jesse and Lick her Hands to try and calm her down I lay down at Jesse's feet!
 
Raven

Raven's thoughts go out to the spirit form of the wolf though he scarcely gives her a glance.

If this is so, then if possible it shall be returned. But, I need more information about the powder, what it does, how it came to be stolen. I would prefer to converse with you in human guise, as most humans will not understand your...abilities. You would do well to not reveal much of your shifting to the people around you. I will speak with you later. For now, I wish to find out what might be on the streets about this Santiago.

Raven looks at Vince. "Santiago? A new player? You heard anything about him, Vince?"
 
Alison Chambers

“Company? Mmm, why not?” I chuckle, then moan softly as Ramon’s lips take hold of my nipple once again.

The car comes to a full stop, and then the glass partition slides open. Dirk’s flushed face fills the rectangle. His moist lips are parted and his eyes are wide and glassy, greedily taking in the action. He seems particularly fascinated by the way Ramon sucks and bites on my nipples. I can see his shoulder moving frantically as he jerks himself, and in the stillness of North Shore I can hear his every grunt and gasp.

Dirk’s excitement ignites my fire all over again. My hips pump faster to meet Ramon’s thrusts, and I’m grinding myself shamelessly against him. Sweat drips from my face onto his body. My breath is coming in harsh gasps as the excitement builds.

I toss my hair and glance back at Dirk. He is panting and grinning, and his shoulder is still jerking. “You like the show, baby? Isn’t this better than watching in the rearview?” He nods, never taking his eyes off me. His expression makes me chuckle. He reminds me of a hungry dog watching his owners eat dinner.

Just then, a wicked idea occurs to me. I give Dirk my most seductive smile and say, “Why don’t you come back here and show us how much you like the show?”

He squints at me. “Huh?”

“You heard me, Dirk. Bring that cock back here and jerk it for us. Shoot a nice load for us. We’re giving you a show, it’s only right that you should give us one, too.” I glance back at Ramon and wink at him. “What do you say, babe?”

Ramon chuckles. “Sounds like fun.” He looks up at the partition. “It’s all right, man. You can come back here. Just don’t touch the merchandise, okay?”

“Okay, boss.” In a flash Dirk is out of the car. We stop our fun for the moment, waiting for him to join us. A few seconds later, the passenger door opens and Dirk’s bulky body slides into the car. He somewhat awkwardly plants himself in the seat across from us, then takes his hands away from his crotch to reveal his stiff cock. It’s almost as red as his face. His nose twitches as the scent of our fucking hits him full blast.

With a grunt Ramon resumes his thrusting, and I continue grinding myself against him. From time to time we glance at Dirk, who looks as if he’s died and gone to heaven. I watch his hand going up and down, and the sight makes me shiver. What a kick, what an aphrodisiac it is to see a man so excited, and to know that he's excited because of me. I moan, then gasp as Ramon’s mouth assaults my nipple once more. A second later Dirk moans too.

“Mmm yeah, you’re close, huh?” I giggle, watching his face redden even more. “You like to watch, don’t you?”

“Yeah, oh yeah,” he grunts. His hand is flying up and down his cock.

I giggle again and say to Ramon, “He likes to watch.”

Ramon pries his lips from my nipple and gives me the shark grin. “Baby, who wouldn’t want to watch you? Besides, he knows that's as close as he'll ever get to fucking you.”

“Ohhh yeah, you’re right.” My voice breaks on the last word as he drives himself deep into me. I’m shooting deliriously toward the edge, and nothing can stop me. I can feel Ramon’s cock twitching, and I know he is nearly there. Then Dirk yelps as if stung, and I glance over at him in time to see him shooting his load into a handkerchief. The hankie looks as if it’s seen a lot of this type of action.

Seeing him cum – knowing that I’m responsible for it – pushes me over the brink. My belly cramps with the first spasms and I let out a long moan. My internal muscles squeeze and massage Ramon’s cock, coaxing him, urging him to explode deep inside me.
 
Vince

"I ran into two of Santiago's boys earlier tonight. Faith wasted one and I got the other.
I saw his Limo parked otside that Punk Club on
Hudson street. He could still be there if you want
a private talk...I dunno, how dyu wanna play it?"

Vince looked worried.

Raven knew and Jessie guessed there was something more.

"Ramon Santiago is not in the drug business. Don't ask how I know, but I know. Some of his boys may be streetin' the stuff but that ain't his trade."

"What is it then" Jessie asked.

"Women, girls. Live women and girls. He's got no use for dead ones."
 
Santiago

Santiago knew that Ali was getting off watching Dirk jacking off three feet away while they fucked and he was escalating right along with her. Her eyes kept going from Santiago's face to the bodyguard's pumping cock and meaty hand.

"It's Ok to watch him Baby. Just don't get any...ideas."
To emphasize the "ideas" Ramon drove himself into her with renewed fury.
As she turned her head to watch Dirk, Santaigo leaned forward and whispered...
"You cum when he does...see if you can."
Alison squeezed her legs into the small of his back and tightened down on him, getting every inch of stimulation from his thrusting, aching cock.

"OH God Ramon...hees coming...he's..."
She shuddered and clutched. Her nails tore into his shoulders. She released a hot wet sheet that covered him in liquid heat as Dirk pumped himself into the handkerchief.

Before he knew it Ramon was over the top and falling...rockets of semen were mixing with Alisons juices in a delicious chemistry that could have lasted forever...but didn't.

The banging on the cars hood brought them all very quickly out of the porno film they'd been acting out in the back seat.

"Shit!"
Ramon, pulled out of Ali abruptly and started throwing his clothes on.

"Dirk, get the fuck out of the car and waste that sunofabitch."
He didn't have a chance...

The back door was already opening and a 12 guage riot gun was filling it.

"Calm down everybody" the voice was low, soft
almost melodic.
The face that followed was unforgetable.
Handsome, beautiful, short cut auburn hair, sensuous lips, no make up needed, skin the color of mellowed parchment.
Santiago couldn't decide if it was a severely beautiful woman or a very good looking man. The voice nor the clothes offered any clue at all.

"Mister Santiago..., Miss Chambers..."
Alison was almost put back together at this point.

"My name is Leeand I can kill all of you if I want."
The short evil gun was pointed at Ramon's belly.

"It's very hot and crowded in here and smells of fucking so I'll come right to the point. I have a commodity that I must move in the Zone quickly. You have the leg men to do it."

Lee paused and held up the gun,
"Can we talk or do I still need this to make my points?"
 
Raven

OOC: Sorry for the delay; RL and this computer have been something of a bear

Raven looks thoughtfully at Vince. He's never been sure where Vince gets all his information, and is still unsure about Vince's connection to the Old Mother, but he has alwayus known Vince to be accurate in his knowledge of what was going down on the streets.

"So," says Raven softly, "that must mean there is another player in this."

Abruptly, Raven tuns to Jesse and regards her for a long moment. He doesn't like the idea of taking her with them back into the zone, but three pairs of eyes would be better than two.

Raven reaches out with his mind to the strange human, the one with the taste of Native American about her and her powers.

If you would be of help in this matter, he sends to the one called Shirley then I would ask you protect this woman tonight. As unobtrusively as possible, keep watch, intervene if need be or call for me and I will come

to Jesse and Vince, Raven says. "I think it is time to go see this Santiago, at least get some measure of what might be in the offing."

To Jesse's unspoken thought, evident in her stubborn expression, Raven nods. "yes, I think you should go with us, maybe station yourself at the Licking Lizard. I need you to watch for anything out of the ordinary. We will both go with you there, then on to find Santiago. Call from the pay phone there and let them know about this death, but don't give your name."

To Vince, Raven half grins, "Shall we go see what Mr. Santiago is up to tonight. As you've already messed with his boys, perhaps he might be of a mind to be communicative."
 
Alex

ooc: Sorry to barge in, but I'm getting tired of waiting for mornng to come. Disregard my last post about it being morning.

bic: I sighed and rubbed my palm against my forehead before pulling the blankets to my neck. Blankets? Where the hell did I get blankets?

I bolted upright, staring at my surroundings, before tonight's earlier memory floods back. Raven. He brought me here. No doubt he put a wake-up call on this room. I've been drunk before, and he's helped me before... this is nothing new. Not that I like to admit it.

One good thing, I was drunk, but not sloshed. I could function coherently. I grabbed the phone and dialed the front desk. A perky kid answered. "Can I help you?"

"You have a wake-up call on this room again, kid?"

"Yes, ma'am."

"Cancel it please. I'll be checking out tonight." I started to hang up, before calling out to him. "Yo, kid. Y'mind getting me a large coffee to go?"

"Of course, ma'am. Anything else."

I smiled despite myself. How the heck could he be so chipper? "No, thanks, Kid. You'll be tipped well."

I dressed quickly, throwing my jeans, t-shirt, and jacket onto my body faster than I ever had. Zipping up the sides of my heeled-boots, I pop an aspirin into my mouth and choke it down.

Downstairs, the kid was waiting with my coffee. Taking it, I swallowed a huge mouthful before placing a $10 tip in his palm. "Thanks," I said. "Put the room on my account here."

The kid nodded. He knew me well. Like I said, this wasn't the first time. He knew I was good for it. But it was pretty pathetic that I could put a room on a "tab." I shuddered, and made my way into the streets.

I wandered around for a while, making my routine and saying hello to those on it. Suddenly, I spied Raven talking to... was that Vince? Who's the girl... can't see her too well...?

I walked up to them slowly, sipping my coffee as I went. "Anything interesting going on, boys?"
 
Raven

OOC: *G* Welcome back, Licci! Yeah, sounds like a good idea for you to be here. Raven in character is going to have a negative reaction to you showing up, but just as part of the story

Raven turns slowly as Alex approaches. He grimaces to himself, not wanting the police involved just yet, not until he had more information. Still, she looked sober enough, and maybe it would be a good idea to bring her in on what was happening.

"Detective Castle," Raven said somberly. "We've a corpse and a puzzle here," he says, gesturing to the body. Raven debates with himself whether to reveal the information about the drugs as well just yet as Alex looks at the dead drunk.
 
Shirlene/Artemis

If you would be of help in this matter,then I would ask you to protect this woman tonight.As unobtrusively as possible,keep watch,Intervene if need be or call for me and I will come.

Raven it shall be done as you have asked it of me I would have protected her anyway!
 
Jesse

I smiled my thanks at Raven - no way was I going to stay in my apartment! I looked at the one he asked to protect me and smiled. Yes, it would be good to have some company tonight.

Just as I was preparing to leave, I noticed Dective Castle coming up to us. Not really wanting to get too much involved, I sank behind Vince, and felt his hand move protectively along my arm.
 
ooc: closing the thread

I hate to do this, but I have to take a hiatus from Literotica SRP for a while. I apologize for the inconvenience and regret leaving as I have thoroughly enjoyed writing with you all.

Since part of my hiatus involves work on more Raven stories (the first has already been accepted by a publisher and I am trying to put together a proposal for a serial) I feel it best to go ahead and close the thread for now anyway.

Again, my apologies and regrets; I wish all of you the best in your writing and the threads
 
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