Seduce Me With Your Words...

Arden said:

Wel, mbb, the criteria is mainly that the author has to write something literary... a scenario, story, poem... There is no set length for the piece... but it should be creative and well thought out.

What does it have to do to qualify for the ladied admiration? OK, Angel mentioned the word MELT, another might be SWOON... and GUSH certainly comes to mind...

The desired reaction would have the ladies becoming putty in your hands... who can resist a man of extreme talent? :D

Well, okay, that certainly spells it out a bit. Allow me to get back to you on this.

Caution: wordwright at work!!!
 
mbb308 said:


Well, okay, that certainly spells it out a bit. Allow me to get back to you on this.

Caution: wordwright at work!!!

We will all be most happy to receive your contribution!
 
Arden said:


We will all be most happy to receive your contribution!

Thank you - your hope is inspiration itself.

Busy with the physically menial this afternoon, but should get some time tonight to whack some thoughts into printable form.
 
Writers Wanted!

OK, guys... where are all of you that love to write?
 
Hi! I am new here and saw this thread. I am a lover of the words. When a man talks, I listen to what they are saying. The right words they just about own me.
 
cocksRloved said:
Hi! I am new here and saw this thread. I am a lover of the words. When a man talks, I listen to what they are saying. The right words they just about own me.

welcome to the thread love
hope you enjoy my words
hugsssssss
BD
 


Sweet Snow

by Blue Dolphin ©

Sweet snow now cover mountain tops
In guise of fresh whipped cream
As mouth-born hurricane arrive,
To lick her platter clean
Tongue do swirl around her peaks
The summit to devour
I lick and flick, now gently bite
Sweet nipple now in flower
In teeth yet soft, pulling hard
My darling to delight
Adore these breasts in wonderment
Bathed in my lovers light

Follow trace of snowflake line
Cross newly shaven mound
Hot breath upon her surface
How gentle passion sound
Heading for that chasm deep
And snow tipped rosy bud
As cream anoint her clitoris
Now filled with pulsing blood
Snow melt on down to valley deep
Pink lips so white to see
Tongue ski oer this moistened slope
To cries of ecstasy

In chasm heat does cream align
With honey pure and sweet
As finger stirs the mixture
So deep inside they meet
Ripples start theuir hectic roll
Across the valley floor
Foretell orgasmic earthquake
As passion starts to roar
The rising tide begin a flow
As river in full bore,
My precious darling angel
How could I love you more

Her head falls back, eyes do glaze
Spasmodic jerks abound.
Grasping at her nipples proud
To awesome eerie sound
Bucking hips they pound my face
As muscle twitch and writhe
Her pussy once so dormant
Now vibrant and alive
And yet, within this ecstasy
There lies an inner peace
As snow, there gently settle
Within her lips so sweet

 
Blue Dolphin you did it again.........you are such a romantic.......again and again you give us warm feelings.

:kiss: :heart: :kiss: :heart:
 


Whisper Softly

by Blue Dolphin ©


Her name I whisper softly now
As watch contented sleep
My angel born of paradise
A love so strong, I weep
She cane as in a snowstorm
To blanket my desire
All consuming passion did
Ignite my primal fire

Skin as fine as porcelain
Eyes, so diamond bright,
A nature filled with gentleness,
Oh Lord, can this be right
Do I deserve a love so fine?
This angel from above.
Who wraps her soul around me
To fit as dainty glove.

I love her more than ever now
This lady of my dreams
She takes me to such ecstacy,
My heart, it almost screams,
I will love her now forever,
Tilltime has no avail,
As her name I whisper softly
beyond this morning pale
 
She layeth now upon the cold stone floor
A shimmering pool, a puddle, once a form of life
Now in complete, total meltdown
And not minding the transformation
At all
 
Arden said:
She layeth now upon the cold stone floor
A shimmering pool, a puddle, once a form of life
Now in complete, total meltdown
And not minding the transformation
At all

kneeling
gently lapping at the warm sweet taste of Arden
drinking in her soul
swallowing her center
delighting in this erotic dream of ecstasy
sensual shivers surrounding my being
as I drown in her passion
 
Hmmm...

i am not a man, nor have i ever inspired such prose, so i have to write my own...~smile~...i hope no one minds that i simply felt like sharing...

BTW, BD, 'tis beautiful, all that i've read of yours...:rose:

Untitled 1 © spankableBelle

Love for Him ensnares my heart, my body awakening, a plea for His touch.

On my knees in His presence, by His side, a slut to cherish.

Need awakens my soul and drips between my thighs.

Every thought belongs to Him, in a moment, in hours, in days.

Longing is an ache, familiar as the air I breathe.

'Yes' brings a smile to His lips, pleasure radiating from His eyes.


Untitled 2 © spankableBelle

Joy, pure and decadent envelops me.

Erotic images float through my dazed mind.

Rustles of silk, bindings of leather, darkness surrounds.

Opened thighs, vulnerable, wet with dew.

Marks of pleasure throb in need, no doubt of ownership.

Each moment in His love, blissful and glittering.
 
Your eyes mesmorize me...your hair,flowing into the wind as we drive along the twisting and turning road, the secluded beach beckoning.

I glance at you, I gaze in both wonderment and pure amazement at your divine beauty, a beauty that I will never tire, a beauty that will last as long as the pyramids of Egypt.

Your legs, so bare, so free...once again, the beauty of you, of your body, the dress, billowing, exposing those strong thighs, the delights of your entire body...sculptured to perfection, the skin, so soft and tender...your hands, small, ones that will fit so perfect into mine as we walk along the beach, the water lapping around our ankles as we laugh and dance through the gentle rolling of tides..we will stop, I will take you in my arms, gaze into your eyes, ones that sparkle, matching the stars that twinkle from the night sky. I will hold you, silence, just the sound of the waves, the crickets nearby..looking at you, smiling, leaning to you, grazing my lips against yours...as I whisper ******

"Darling..all you can see is yours...my gift to you, my gift to the one I love with all my heart...the one I want to spend the rest of my life with...darling..will you marry me?"

I seal my words with a kiss. "I love you"
 
BRAVO!

Ukin said:
Your eyes mesmorize me...your hair,flowing into the wind as we drive along the twisting and turning road, the secluded beach beckoning.

I glance at you, I gaze in both wonderment and pure amazement at your divine beauty, a beauty that I will never tire, a beauty that will last as long as the pyramids of Egypt.

Your legs, so bare, so free...once again, the beauty of you, of your body, the dress, billowing, exposing those strong thighs, the delights of your entire body...sculptured to perfection, the skin, so soft and tender...your hands, small, ones that will fit so perfect into mine as we walk along the beach, the water lapping around our ankles as we laugh and dance through the gentle rolling of tides..we will stop, I will take you in my arms, gaze into your eyes, ones that sparkle, matching the stars that twinkle from the night sky. I will hold you, silence, just the sound of the waves, the crickets nearby..looking at you, smiling, leaning to you, grazing my lips against yours...as I whisper ******

"Darling..all you can see is yours...my gift to you, my gift to the one I love with all my heart...the one I want to spend the rest of my life with...darling..will you marry me?"

I seal my words with a kiss. "I love you"

Wonderful Ukin... a side of you we've never seen before...

Ladies, this handsome English gent is a keeper... the line forms to the left!
 
Re: BRAVO!

Arden said:


Wonderful Ukin... a side of you we've never seen before...

Ladies, this handsome English gent is a keeper... the line forms to the left!

I guess there are two sides to us all dear Arden;) I am a Gemini too :D
 
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Originally posted by Arden

She layeth now upon the cold stone floor
A shimmering pool, a puddle, once a form of life
Now in complete, total meltdown
And not minding the transformation
At all
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Blue Dolphin said:

kneeling
gently lapping at the warm sweet taste of Arden
drinking in her soul
swallowing her center
delighting in this erotic dream of ecstasy
sensual shivers surrounding my being
as I drown in her passion

Oh! drink my soul completely
Lap my sweetness into your mouth
Devour me whole
For then I may remain
Part of you
Forever...
 
Re: Hmmm...

spankableBelle said:
i am not a man, nor have i ever inspired such prose, so i have to write my own...~smile~...i hope no one minds that i simply felt like sharing...

BTW, BD, 'tis beautiful, all that i've read of yours...:rose:

Untitled 1 © spankableBelle

Love for Him ensnares my heart, my body awakening, a plea for His touch.

On my knees in His presence, by His side, a slut to cherish.

Need awakens my soul and drips between my thighs.

Every thought belongs to Him, in a moment, in hours, in days.

Longing is an ache, familiar as the air I breathe.

'Yes' brings a smile to His lips, pleasure radiating from His eyes.


Untitled 2 © spankableBelle

Joy, pure and decadent envelops me.

Erotic images float through my dazed mind.

Rustles of silk, bindings of leather, darkness surrounds.

Opened thighs, vulnerable, wet with dew.

Marks of pleasure throb in need, no doubt of ownership.

Each moment in His love, blissful and glittering.

Belle! You've just created some magnificent pieces of prose! Thank you for sharing them with us...
 
sketch #1

My fingers know the way to please your skin,
but I really want to fathom your mind
to see you from without, and from within,
to look through your eyes into what's behind,
to hear the way the flame cracks as it burns,
to smell the ling'ring fragrence of your thoughts,
to taste the sweet longing for which you yearn,
To aspire that Life bring you what it ought,
to hear your stories of past joys and pain,
and share both with your triumph and your loss,
to aid your climb to summits that you'll gain,
to gild your future, or to lug your cross.
To want your body without all the rest
is to shortchange you; flesh is still just flesh.

Not copyrighted, but do you really want to steal from a rifleman?
 
Re: Re: BRAVO!

Ukin said:
I guess there are two sides to us all dear Arden;) I am a Gemini too :D

I am one of those romantic Cancer folk, the loveable homebodies.

It's interesting that we develop different personalities, one for the professional world, and one for at home. As different as night and day. Even the telephone voice is different... :)
 
Re: Re: Re: BRAVO!

Arden said:


I am one of those romantic Cancer folk, the loveable homebodies.

It's interesting that we develop different personalities, one for the professional world, and one for at home. As different as night and day. Even the telephone voice is different... :)

telephone? mmmm :devil: :devil:

Yes..we all do the above..it's necesssary too. :)
 
Re: Re: Re: Re: BRAVO!

Ukin said:


telephone? mmmm :devil: :devil:

Yes..we all do the above..it's necesssary too. :)

I meant professional telephone voice vs. home life telephone voice. :devil:

Lord, forgive him, for his mind is in the gutter tonight! :D
 
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: BRAVO!

Arden said:


I meant professional telephone voice vs. home life telephone voice. :devil:

Lord, forgive him, for his mind is in the gutter tonight! :D

**sad face**
 
Re: sketch #1

mbb308 said:
My fingers know the way to please your skin,
but I really want to fathom your mind
to see you from without, and from within,
to look through your eyes into what's behind,
to hear the way the flame cracks as it burns,
to smell the ling'ring fragrence of your thoughts,
to taste the sweet longing for which you yearn,
To aspire that Life bring you what it ought,
to hear your stories of past joys and pain,
and share both with your triumph and your loss,
to aid your climb to summits that you'll gain,
to gild your future, or to lug your cross.
To want your body without all the rest
is to shortchange you; flesh is still just flesh.

Not copyrighted, but do you really want to steal from a rifleman?
 
Re: sketch #1

mbb308 said:
My fingers know the way to please your skin,
but I really want to fathom your mind
to see you from without, and from within,
to look through your eyes into what's behind,
to hear the way the flame cracks as it burns,
to smell the ling'ring fragrence of your thoughts,
to taste the sweet longing for which you yearn,
To aspire that Life bring you what it ought,
to hear your stories of past joys and pain,
and share both with your triumph and your loss,
to aid your climb to summits that you'll gain,
to gild your future, or to lug your cross.
To want your body without all the rest
is to shortchange you; flesh is still just flesh.

Not copyrighted, but do you really want to steal from a rifleman?

Wow, mbb, am I ever impressed! When you put those assault rifles down, you become a man with a beautiful soul...

(No, I won't tell anyone!)
 
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