Small Town Country Girl Becomes A Stripper in the City

[AvroAnsonXIX]

But writing sex scenes can be daunting ...

“Good writers borrow, great writers steal.” -- T.S. Elliot

"Hey, could you help me get these tights off ..."

"Sure thing ... My but don't you look nice tonight ..."

"ZAPP!" "WANG!" "POW!" "KERBLAM!!" "PLATT!"

"Oh, man ... That was great, Batman!"

"You know, we can do it again tomorrow, Robin."

"Same Bat-Time, Same Bat-Channel," said the announcer.

 

[Hypoxia]

When you grow up in a "one horse town" the only thing to do is each other.

And all too often, "each other" includes family, especially aggressive fathers, uncles, brothers, and cousins. I know IRL country girls who ran to the city to escape sexually abusive relatives -- but those stories are difficult to tell on LIT because rape and underage. We can report but not describe the abuses, and then narrate the ensuing consequences once they're 18.

So let's have Michelle suffer the attention of her male kinfolk but for some reason (work it out, authors) she's stuck on the farm or in an equivalent limbo till she's 18. The city has no use for her farmgirl skills other than the handjobs she's good at because milking cows.

She takes a job as a stripper as a last resort. The club manager discovers her handy expertise -- she knows how to direct squirts at targets -- and assigns her to the VIP lounge where, instead of aiming streams of milk from udders to cats' mouths, she aims spews of semen to the mouths of kinky recipients. She's promoted as the Annie Oakley of Sex. Fame and fortune ensue, right?

 

[AvroAnsonXIX]

And all too often, "each other" includes family, especially aggressive ...

A sad story, one of the more persistent "trolls"/"stalkers" that I have acquired is apparently unaware that the problem in her past is that she was raped, not the identity of her rapist. (A much older male relative she never lived with and who held a position of societal authority independent of their familiar relationship.)

I honestly feel sad for her that at an age where she had a difficulty processing what happened she was taken advantage of. Sex is a beautiful thing and she misses out on enjoying it just as she would hate chocolate had she been force fed Cadbury's finest as a child. It's also incredibly sad that society has told her that since she was intrinsically valueless -- being just a vessel to hold her virginity -- she cannot get past this thing in the past that cannot be undone.

She has told me (repeatedly, that she is "triggered" by my incest stories (which she presumably reads each and every one of, probably each word of, probably repeatedly.) I also feel sad that she tortures herself. I don't enjoy certain things in life. I avoid those things to the extent possible.

Certainly "fathers, uncles, brothers, and cousins" can be abusive. They can also be wonderfully loving and supportive. As adult women we should have the right to have relationships of whatever kind we choose with willing "fathers, uncles, brothers, and cousins" (and mothers, aunts, sisters and grandparents.) Degree of consanguinity is not ever an issue. Coercion is, and its reprehensible.

The stupid "rules" aren't the site or the owner of the site's fault. This anti-sexual society is insane. Age and relationship based restrictions protect abusers and not victims. Preventing an "underage" person from working keeps them dependent and in poverty. The lives of the abused already sucks (and not in the good way), making it a criminal matter makes it suck more. Making it impossible to talk about rape and underage sex perpetuates abuse and ignorance.

In theory one can "report but not describe the abuses, and then narrate the ensuing consequences once they're 18." In practice this isn't always the case, the robot picks out words not context. I have beta read many rejected stories where the robot's complete lack of comprehension leads to long delays, rewrites and new authors going elsewhere.

Real people "suffer the attention of" male and female abusers, some are "kinfolk," ignorant laws against consanguinamorous behavior divert resources from dealing with coercive behavior. I'm certain that in the real world there are those "in limbo until (he or) she's 18." Where society "has no use for her (or his) skills other than the hand jobs (he) she's good at because of her (him) milking cows."

Where I grew up sex workers were generally bored housewives and divorcees, not abused or trafficed teens. Erotic dancing, strip teasing, or prostitution doesn't have to be and shouldn't be "a job of last resort." Prostitutes who deliver exactly what they offer for sale rank pretty high in my ethical standards book compared to most salespeople who over promise and under deliver.

I am at heart a very giving and sex-positive person. I have never been a tease and have basically fucked any of my many friends who wanted to. Men and women should have autonomy. The idea that a woman should preserve her virginity because it makes her more valuable is just another way of saying that she is not a person but a biological support system for her sexuality or her virginity.

It is this belief that a woman who is sexually actualized and able to choose her sexual partners freely on her own is somehow "wrong" that divides all women into two camps, the sexless Madonna, and the wanton Whore. Society controls all of us by teaching both men and women that they should want the impossible:

That we (men and women) should be completely ignorant of all things sexual and the man should lead. He should seduce his sexless Madonna, who somehow is thereby "converted" to worship that one dick owned by one woefully ignorant guy. That he should work himself into an early grave trying to be everything to one person of the opposite gender and she should give up everything for that one person.

This leads to horney teenagers -- ignorant of how easy it is to avoid getting pregnant -- getting pregnant, to unhappy relationships, and marriages between people who don't communicate their needs. People who judge their partners based on unrealistic expectations. That he should be Prince Charming and she the Virgin Mary until she gets under the sheets and becomes the Whore of Babylon (but just for him).

 

[Tailaka]

Just for fun, how about reversing the idea?

have the big city stripper retire to the small country town?
what could possibly go wrong?.

Now that is a fantastic plot. So much fun to be had, so many categories it could end up in!

 

[CuttingEdge]

“Good writers borrow, great writers steal.” -- T.S. Elliot

That is just plain disturbing, and can say I really don't agree with that at all. I believe that is called plagiarism and is dealt with by international law.

Writing is part of the creative arts, and if you cannot wordsmith and have to steal your words, then you're not creative at all; you're just a thief.

There are ways to get out of a plot/character/scene jamb by getting yourself to think creatively.

 

[Hypoxia]

That is just plain disturbing...

But it's reality. Shakespeare stole stories a-plenty, and reworked them. Plagiarism is copying another's words. Creativity is twisting those words into a new construction. As an exercise, rewrite Genesis from the serpent's POV. Start with any biblical translation. Don't copy. Much.

Back to topic. Envisage an 'innocent' young farm-town girl (her folks run the feed store) fleeing rural boredom for excitement in The Big City as she's seen on cable TV. Scantily-clad urban women are portrayed as having lots of fun. The most fun in her previous life was watchin bovines mate in their pastures. What can she do for her own fun? Guess what she Googles up...