So lonely, cant sleep...

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I need. I crave. I hunger. I'm so lonely, I can't sleep...

It has been too long since I have felt like a woman. Too many nights I lay awake in a cold and lonely bed thinking about the possibilities. Days have turned in to weeks and weeks into months and months into years, till I no longer remember the sweetness of a kiss. I am working hard to change my circumstance. I long for the day when I will belong to someone who will appreciate all I have to offer. I hunger for that special attention that only a generous and caring Sir can give...
 
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Hello,

I've sent you a PM. Not quite what you're looking for I guess, but I hope you will understand once you read it...
 
Lonely? That empty lonely feeling. The burning desire to love and be loved. I feel what you are feeling. It's a terribly place to be. I have a big strong arm and a warm chest for you to lay your head upon. YOU WILL feel my warm body wrapping itself around you. A burning passionate fire that will awaken your inner flame. MY mind WILL consume your lonely thoughts. And take you to places undreamed of. MY words WILL lift you up. Embrace you, captivate you, enslave you, and liberate your spirit! You will sleep at night embracing my words. And dream of mystic realms where anything and everything is possible. But only if you respond. YOU WILL RESPOND
Won't you?
 
Lonely? That empty lonely feeling. The burning desire to love and be loved. I feel what you are feeling. It's a terribly place to be. I have a big strong arm and a warm chest for you to lay your head upon. YOU WILL feel my warm body wrapping itself around you. A burning passionate fire that will awaken your inner flame. MY mind WILL consume your lonely thoughts. And take you to places undreamed of. MY words WILL lift you up. Embrace you, captivate you, enslave you, and liberate your spirit! You will sleep at night embracing my words. And dream of mystic realms where anything and everything is possible. But only if you respond. YOU WILL RESPOND
Won't you?

Nice... Vera nice indeed... I love it! A man who can write passionate words with a measure of depth etched into each... mmm hmm yess:kiss:
 
I am

I am the bird sitting upon her perch, trapped in a gilded cage, dreaming of times long past when she would soar, a free spirit, unencumbered, unabashed. You sit from a distance; you see her beauty and you admire her song. Would you keep her thus, or would you set her free, to watch her joy as she takes to the air with wings spread wide? Would her joy be yours as well? Would you stand there, with sure confidence (like a falconer), knowing that she will return to your hand?

I am the dog that was beaten, weary and cautious, toeing the edge, ready to lash out. Will her fierceness detour you? Are you brave enough to approach her, knowing that she might bite? Will you back her into a corner, using your dominance and force of will or will you entice her in to taking those first few timid steps in your direction, using kindness and patience? Looking at her, you know she will make a fine pet. However, trust is earned and I wonder how will you earn mine?

I am the cat who may not come when called, but rather, when it pleases her to do so. Will her free spirit and defiance frustrate you? If you move to fast, the cat will run; but with patient persuasion, the cat will curl up in your lap and purr beneath the soft caress of your hand. Will you be the master of a cat, who may not obey every command, yet will adoringly warship at your feet, rubbing against you with feline grace, taking in your scent and marking you with hers?

I am the woman who knows her worth as a lady, a mother, a lover and friend. She is the most challenging of prey with her emotional nature and her keen intellect. She will not bow down at your feet, simply because you say so; you must earn your place as her Lord and Master. Meaningless flatteries, they are a dime a dozen, they will not woo her. To hunt her, you must be consistent, you must stimulate her mind, you must seduce her spirit and you must challenge her on all levels.
 
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Beautifully written. However, the bird part was a case of mixed metaphors; you can't be a songbird AND a falcon.

The bird and the cat metaphors are in direct contradiction; falcons cannot be lured with seduction, they are allowed to fly free AFTER they learn to accept the hood and the jesse, and they come back for the treat, not for the falconer. Raptors are not affectionate, and wild-caught adults cannot be trained to return, so you're setting yourself up for serious misinterpretation :)
 
*Friendly poke*

Beautifully written. However, the bird part was a case of mixed metaphors; you can't be a songbird AND a falcon.

The bird and the cat metaphors are in direct contradiction; falcons cannot be lured with seduction, they are allowed to fly free AFTER they learn to accept the hood and the jesse, and they come back for the treat, not for the falconer. Raptors are not affectionate, and wild-caught adults cannot be trained to return, so you're setting yourself up for serious misinterpretation :)

Thank you soo much Krotos. Im happy that you got the medaphor even if you don't agree with and/or understand the contradiction. What you have said in your post is very true.

I like contrast. I myself, have a hard time walking the middle ground. I tend to go from one extreem to another. Maybe it's a personality flaw, but there are many aspects of my personality which do indeed contradict eachother. Maybe it's another reason I have a hard time with relationships. I need the hard and the soft because each on their own does not satisfy me.

Truthfully speaking, I don't really like birds. When I say seduction in connection to the falcon metaphor, it is simply because of the care, the time and the effort that the falconeer puts forth in the training. I say it because the falconeer must have great determination and great patience in order to develop the bond of trust between him and his bird. Care. Time. Effort. Determination. Patience. Trust.
 
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