story keeps getting sent back

[doggypussy]

I have submitted a story 3 times, and had it edited twice, and still sent back a third time within an hour
with the same generic message, " read how to get characters to talk." This is the 9th story I have submitted had never had this problem before.
can anyone explain please.

 

[Jada59]

Interesting. Could you post a small snippet? Like 500 words or less of the characters talking? Assuming there is talking. In one of mine, it’s all about me. No other characters.

Perhaps if we could read a bit, we might get a clue.

 

[_Lynn_]

I have submitted a story 3 times, and had it edited twice, and still sent back a third time within an hour
with the same generic message, " read how to get characters to talk." This is the 9th story I have submitted had never had this problem before.
can anyone explain please.

Post max three paragraphs (per Lit guidelines) here for others to see and possibly find the problem.