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I'm happy that your story is doing well. Since I'm follow it as close as I can, here is what I've come up with to date.
I found myself staring at this woman as she flirted with a young man dressed in a business suit. She was laughing and tossing her long blonde hair. I figured if her shirt were any higher it would be a waistband. She didn’t seem to mind the young man’s hand that was constantly moving over her back. She pulled out a cigarette and he dug deep into his pockets to retrieve a lighter. I could tell she was going after the young man for his money. He wasn’t the best looking guy, skinny, sucked in cheeks, large nose, and a neck that looked like it belonged to a bird of shorts. He did, however have a European sports car, and a thick gold watch around his wrist.
How could I blame her? If I were smart, I would have been trying to find me a nice guy to take care of me. Then I wouldn’t have worry about having all of my things tossed out of the shabby apartment I lived in. Not to mention being turned down for jobs by some little twerp younger than my son. That was so humiliating.
When I thing of all the eligible guys that I let slip through my fingers, it makes me want to scream. I loved fucking the guys, but I had a job and didn’t need any man to take care of me. The last meaningful relationship I had was with my kid’s father and that ended fifteen years ago. Since then, I’ve been happy to raise my kids by myself.
I thought I was raising them very well. My daughter is the sexy young woman I know. She literally stops traffic when she goes out to the parking lot. I’ve seen men of all ages trying to pick her up. I recognized her sexy ways and had her put on the pill as soon as the doctor would allow it. I knew she would be very sexually active, but so was I. My son however worries me the most. He was such a bright student all the way through high school. I couldn’t believe it when he came home and told me he had flunk out of college. I didn’t even know that that was possible. I’m hoping that it’s just a phase he’s going through, and will get back on the right track.
I had no idea what I was going to do. I must have been on a thousand interviews over the past couple of months. No one seemed to want to hire a forty something laid-off mother of two. Maybe I should do like other women and chase down a man with money. I always looked down on women like that. How could I possibly do that? I watched women passing by in nice expensive cars and guessed that their husbands were taking care of them.
I was at my wits end and decided to pull into Los Revos for a drink. There was no way I could stop the eviction now. I had very little money left, and certainly not enough to pay the rent. I stretched my severance pay as far as it would go, and everything just seemed so hopeless.
I chose a booth by the window, so I could see out onto the street. The waitress that took my order was very nice and very pretty. She reminded me of my daughter. She was strong, and I knew she would stick by me no matter what happen. My poor son, despite his careless attitude, would sink more into the habit he developed, I feared. I drank to first one down fast and order another. I was at a lose.
I must have been daydreaming out the window, because I didn’t see the man standing at my booth. He was smiling and I guessed he had asked if he could sit down. This guy was handsome, well dressed, and best of all he had good manners. “Sure,” I said. Well at least that’s what I think I said. He was black, but not very dark. His brown eyes seem to twinkle. I noticed his watch, a Rolex. I began to pay more attention. There wasn’t a wedding ring or line where one would be. He nails obviously had been manicured.
He talked and I mostly smiled as I noticed him looking at my tits. I wished then I had worn a low cut blouse. I had been with black men many times and loved that they appreciated my ass. I remember one of them telling me that I had an ass like a black woman. I envied black women with nice round asses, so it made me feel good to hear it from a black man. White men liked my tits much better and I appreciated that to. I had been lucky in that my tits did sag that much.
He called the waitress over and she giggled as he described what he wanted. After he insisted on paying, I was beginning to get the feeling that this could be my guy. I arched my back a little more to make sure he could she the size of my tits, even though they were covered. I made up my mind that if he suggests that we met somewhere I would fuck his brains out, or suck them out.
He excused himself and the waitress shot over to me as soon as he left the table. She told me that the guy was rich and pointed out his big luxury car in the parking lot. She said that he was a big tipper and that I should snatch him up while I had the chance. I thought it was strange that she was telling me all of this, but I thanked her for the advice.
When he returned from the restroom, he bluntly asked me to go home with him. I answered so quickly I surprised myself. I made sure that I had my phone and keys, and then slid from the booth. He was so graceful when he moved, like he was walking on air. He just looked so sexy.
As we walked out to his car I could feel his eyes burning on my ass. I threw my hip a little more than usual and I could have sworn that I heard him grunt. He opened the door for me and I let my legs spread wide as I sat on the leather seat. His eyes went immediately to my panties. He shut the door and I pulled my skirt up higher before he got into the drivers seat. I could see the lump in his pants.
As we drove pass all the big beautiful homes my heart began to beat faster. They seem much larger than I thought they were. When he pulled into the driveway of his home my mouth fell open. It was beautiful, a mix of marble and stone. The birdbath had a large statue of an angel spurting out water from its mouth. The double doors saw made of heavy wood with stain glass at the arch. The doors made the air tremble as they shut solid.
The ceiling seemed to be apart of the sky. It was chilling and my nipples harden and pressed against my bra. I felt excited all over. He took me on a tour of the big house. I had never walked on carpet so think before. He told me about all the artifacts and paints as we went from room to room. I smiled when he showed me the hot tub. I could tell that he was trying to picture me naked. I imagined myself cooking on the stainless steel stove in the huge kitchen. It had pots and pans hanging over an island prep-counter.
My panties were sopping wet by the time he showed me the master bedroom. The bed looked like four people could sleep on it with room to spare. I was determined to make the very best of it. I felt like I belonged in that place as I looked at my reflection in the mirror.
I guess discussing the issues of rewriting a story is the point of this thread.
BlackSnake said:
I'm happy that your story is doing well. Since I'm follow it as close as I can, here is what I've come up with to date.
I found myself staring at this woman as she flirted with a young man dressed in a business suit. She was laughing and tossing her long blonde hair. I figured if her shirt were any higher it would be a waistband. She didn’t seem to mind the young man’s hand that was constantly moving over her back. She pulled out a cigarette and he dug deep into his pockets to retrieve a lighter. I could tell she was going after the young man for his money. He wasn’t the best looking guy, skinny, sucked in cheeks, large nose, and a neck that looked like it belonged to a bird of shorts. He did, however have a European sports car, and a thick gold watch around his wrist.
How could I blame her? If I were smart, I would have been trying to find me a nice guy to take care of me. Then I wouldn’t have worry about having all of my things tossed out of the shabby apartment I lived in. Not to mention being turned down for jobs by some little twerp younger than my son. That was so humiliating.
When I thing of all the eligible guys that I let slip through my fingers, it makes me want to scream. I loved fucking the guys, but I had a job and didn’t need any man to take care of me. The last meaningful relationship I had was with my kid’s father and that ended fifteen years ago. Since then, I’ve been happy to raise my kids by myself.
I thought I was raising them very well. My daughter is the sexy young woman I know. She literally stops traffic when she goes out to the parking lot. I’ve seen men of all ages trying to pick her up. I recognized her sexy ways and had her put on the pill as soon as the doctor would allow it. I knew she would be very sexually active, but so was I. My son however worries me the most. He was such a bright student all the way through high school. I couldn’t believe it when he came home and told me he had flunk out of college. I didn’t even know that that was possible. I’m hoping that it’s just a phase he’s going through, and will get back on the right track.
I had no idea what I was going to do. I must have been on a thousand interviews over the past couple of months. No one seemed to want to hire a forty something laid-off mother of two. Maybe I should do like other women and chase down a man with money. I always looked down on women like that. How could I possibly do that? I watched women passing by in nice expensive cars and guessed that their husbands were taking care of them.
I was at my wits end and decided to pull into Los Revos for a drink. There was no way I could stop the eviction now. I had very little money left, and certainly not enough to pay the rent. I stretched my severance pay as far as it would go, and everything just seemed so hopeless.
I chose a booth by the window, so I could see out onto the street. The waitress that took my order was very nice and very pretty. She reminded me of my daughter. She was strong, and I knew she would stick by me no matter what happen. My poor son, despite his careless attitude, would sink more into the habit he developed, I feared. I drank to first one down fast and order another. I was at a lose.
I must have been daydreaming out the window, because I didn’t see the man standing at my booth. He was smiling and I guessed he had asked if he could sit down. This guy was handsome, well dressed, and best of all he had good manners. “Sure,” I said. Well at least that’s what I think I said. He was black, but not very dark. His brown eyes seem to twinkle. I noticed his watch, a Rolex. I began to pay more attention. There wasn’t a wedding ring or line where one would be. He nails obviously had been manicured.
He talked and I mostly smiled as I noticed him looking at my tits. I wished then I had worn a low cut blouse. I had been with black men many times and loved that they appreciated my ass. I remember one of them telling me that I had an ass like a black woman. I envied black women with nice round asses, so it made me feel good to hear it from a black man. White men liked my tits much better and I appreciated that to. I had been lucky in that my tits did sag that much.
He called the waitress over and she giggled as he described what he wanted. After he insisted on paying, I was beginning to get the feeling that this could be my guy. I arched my back a little more to make sure he could she the size of my tits, even though they were covered. I made up my mind that if he suggests that we met somewhere I would fuck his brains out, or suck them out.
He excused himself and the waitress shot over to me as soon as he left the table. She told me that the guy was rich and pointed out his big luxury car in the parking lot. She said that he was a big tipper and that I should snatch him up while I had the chance. I thought it was strange that she was telling me all of this, but I thanked her for the advice.
When he returned from the restroom, he bluntly asked me to go home with him. I answered so quickly I surprised myself. I made sure that I had my phone and keys, and then slid from the booth. He was so graceful when he moved, like he was walking on air. He just looked so sexy.
As we walked out to his car I could feel his eyes burning on my ass. I threw my hip a little more than usual and I could have sworn that I heard him grunt. He opened the door for me and I let my legs spread wide as I sat on the leather seat. His eyes went immediately to my panties. He shut the door and I pulled my skirt up higher before he got into the drivers seat. I could see the lump in his pants.
As we drove pass all the big beautiful homes my heart began to beat faster. They seem much larger than I thought they were. When he pulled into the driveway of his home my mouth fell open. It was beautiful, a mix of marble and stone. The birdbath had a large statue of an angel spurting out water from its mouth. The double doors saw made of heavy wood with stain glass at the arch. The doors made the air tremble as they shut solid.
The ceiling seemed to be apart of the sky. It was chilling and my nipples harden and pressed against my bra. I felt excited all over. He took me on a tour of the big house. I had never walked on carpet so think before. He told me about all the artifacts and paints as we went from room to room. I smiled when he showed me the hot tub. I could tell that he was trying to picture me naked. I imagined myself cooking on the stainless steel stove in the huge kitchen. It had pots and pans hanging over an island prep-counter.
My panties were sopping wet by the time he showed me the master bedroom. The bed looked like four people could sleep on it with room to spare. I was determined to make the very best of it. I felt like I belonged in that place as I looked at my reflection in the mirror.
I guess discussing the issues of rewriting a story is the point of this thread.
BlackSnake
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Yeah, this is what I'm sayin.
The reader now get's a chance to know the characters "In their own words"
Explaining things like why Gloria does not close her legs or adjust her skirt in the car. Great job! Thanks Lex.
The reader now get's a chance to know the characters "In their own words"
Explaining things like why Gloria does not close her legs or adjust her skirt in the car. Great job! Thanks Lex.
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Linnet and I both work on GMT which is five hours ahead of Eastern Standard Time and she was posting at 09:27am.BlackSnake said:
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Re: Re: I have no shame
I read both of these stories and liked both of them in different ways.
I think the two of them are in bed together or is that just my lustful mind working overtime nice stories Chick and PLS
Love Lin
sirhugs said:
I read both of these stories and liked both of them in different ways.
I think the two of them are in bed together or is that just my lustful mind working overtime nice stories Chick and PLS
Love Lin
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Amanda's story
I hope you like this as it is my interpretation of Black Snakes story from the daughter’s point of view I have tried to get the detail right but I am sure that someone will tell me if I haven’t.
This story was written with the express permission of the original writer and there is no breach of copywrite.
Hello my name is Amanda Thompson, I have just turned twenty and am looking forward to what ever life has to offer, I live Shallow Woods apartments with my mother Gloria and my baby brother Steven, he isn’t really a baby he is eighteen but as he is the youngest we all refer to him as the baby.
The apartments are a bit run down but Doug the janitor try’s his best to keep the place safe for the kids that are constantly running up and down the hall ways, hell listen to me it was not that long ago that I was one of those kids.
My mom used to work for a company called Kellser and is looking other work I think today she had a shift as a nurse’s aid at our local hospital but as it was Thursday she normally went to the Los Revos bar and grill for a few drinks, so why should this night be any different, well it wasn’t but as things worked out the events of that night affected me and our family in ways I could never imagine.
When the telephone rang at nine I was surprised that my mom was on the other end of the phone, “Hi Amanda look we have had some bad news at work so I’ve met up with a friends for a drink, I will be in late if you want order a pizza and leave a bit for me you know how hungry I get after a few drinks.”
“Ok mom, see you when I see you.” I was glad mom was having some fun she deserves to enjoy herself, I thought to myself. I ordered the pizza from our normal shop on the corner; I was pleased it was Darrel who served me as he always gave me extra toppings. I think he fancy’s me so I always flirted with him much to the dislike of his farther who owns the shop he always looked down on my mom as she was a lone parent and had two children I think in his eyes this made my mom a whore or something.
I walked back to our apartment block passed and passed the janitors apartment just as he poked his head out the door. “Hi there Amanda is your mother in.” He asked in his normal pleasant manor.
“No, she won’t be in until late. She has met up with some friends at Los Revos.”
“Ok but I have the part for your air conditioning and if I don’t fit it tonight it will be another week before I get the chance to do it.”
“That’s ok my brothers out so come and do it now if you like.” I didn’t see anything wrong with this as I had known Doug for five years since we moved into the block and I used to sit in his workshop while he tinkered with refrigerator or a washing machine cursing under his breath how stingy the owners of the apartments were for not replacing the unit.
He was 24 and tall 5’9 and his dark skin made him look so sexy with his hazel eyes and his short dark hair made him look a lot younger than he was. I remember once he told me he had been a civil engineer in the UK but he originally was from Kenya, I had asked him many times to tell me what Kenya was like but he always changed the subject so I never pushed it.
I went over to our apartment and left the door ajar for Doug to come in when he was ready and I sat down and started to eat my pizza with my feet up on the table, the knock on the door startled me but as it opened I saw Doug standing there so I invited him in offering him a slice, “After.” He said and I wondered what he meant by after.
Doug started to work on the air conditioning unit and soon it was pumping out cool air that made my nipples stick out through the material of my dress, Doug noticed this to my embarrassment but he smiled and I began to relax. He sat down and began to eat his pizza and we began to talk he commented on how much like my mother I looked and I said “Thank you.” As I always thought my mom looked very good especially in her nurse’s uniform.
I got us both a beer and we sat on the settee shouting the breeze it was amazing how attractive I found this man and slowly the conversation degraded in a fun way down to sex he told me how he walked in on Miss Clay in number 32 lying in her bath with her hand inside her pussy and the time he walked in on Mr. Hilliard in number 4 on his knees in his wife’s clothes licking away at his step daughters shaven pussy.
All this talk had got me quite exited and I could feel my sex dampening the more detail Doug went into. And by the time he finished his drink my knickers were quite wet and soon Doug and I were in a tight embrace on the settee with his hands working over my body, I got up and took his hand saying, “Come with me you wont regret it.” With that he took my hand and I led him into my bedroom were he was to be my nights entertainment.
His hands were all over me and he was pulling my t-shirt over my head the second we got in the room he pushed me onto the bed and his hands were over my arse and he began to pull my knickers down, I tried to get him to slow down but to no avail my knickers were off and he had pushed his length deep into my pussy and was ramming away like a piston on a steam train. With each thrust of his mighty cock, he shoved me an inch or so further up the bed until I had my arms bracing myself against the headboard of my squeaking bed. I was moaning enjoying every second and every inch of his monster, I had been with a few boys but never a man so virile and so powerful.
“ARGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGH.” Came from my gut as he released his seed deep into my pussy, I could feel him pulse as he thrust into me again letting another jet of his cream gush into my body.
“I am sorry, I couldn’t help it.” Doug said has he pulled his glistening cock from my contented sex. I fell on my side and watched as his massive member shrank back into his pants.
He got up to leave but I said. “Don’t go we have hours before my mom will be home.” But he turned and blew me a kiss as he walked out the door. I decided to jump in the shower and turn in I striped the remains of my clothes off and used them to wipe the cum that was seeping from my puffy sex and turned on the shower and stepped into the hot stream of water and began to lather myself up as I let the water wash the soap and the cum from my body.
I felt tired after my shower and I retired to my bed thinking about the way I had behaved with Doug and fell asleep, I awoke as the sun shone its light through my window I got up and pulled a T-shirt on and walked into our lounge.
The pull down bed was there and the usual heap of bed clothes were in the middle of it so that meant my brother had got home some time during the night, so many times as we were growing up I found him standing naked in my room playing with him self as I lay on my bed. But where was he today I didn’t know I looked into my moms bedroom her bed was empty “What the fuck”
I reached for my cell phone and checked my messages but there was nothing, so I thumbed through my phone list and found my mother’s number then pressed call.
“Hi Mom I wasn’t expecting you to be this late,” I said jokingly.
“I am glad you rang, can you come and pick me up.” The reply down the phone.
“Yea no problem, your car is at Los Revos and then I need to come to the Sandy Hills estates, what you doing there casing the joint. Ok mom I will be about an hour, Doug has got to fix the air con.”
I knew the houses well I had been to a frat party there a few months ago and put on a floor show that the boys wound never forget, but first I wanted Doug’s monster reaming me just to start the day off right. I put on a pair of shorts and tied my T-shirt in a knot at my waist and walked out into the morning sun I made my way down the block to Doug’s workshop and poked my head around the door, I could not see any sign of life but as it was unlocked I knew he would not be far away.
I walked around the estate till I found him at Mrs. Graceland’s apartment; she was an old lady who had difficulty moving around so Doug had fitted various devices around her apartment to make life easer for her to do things for herself.
I popped my head in the door and sure enough Mrs. Graceland was sitting in her chair watching some rerun on HBO, “Is Doug here.” I asked in my butter wouldn’t melt in my mouth voice.
“Oh hello there dear he is in the bathroom fixing a tap thing, go on through.” She said quite happily.
I walked into the bath room that was quite large compared to the box we had in our apartment, Doug was in his usual overalls tied around his waist with a vest on bent over the bath. I could not help myself, I walked quietly up behind him and slipped my hand into his pocket to find it was not a pocket it was just a access vent to gain access to you clothes underneath the only thing was that Doug hadn’t any clothes underneath and my hand found his masterful cock. This startled Doug and he shot up banging his head on a cupboard above the bath.
“What the fuck are you…” he stopped mid sentence as he realized it was me.
“Sorry you seem pleased to see me.” I said with his hardening cock still in my hand. I moved my hand down its length and it started to spring up standing to attention like all good boys should do.
“Stop that.” Doug said. But I continued stroking his ever hardening meat. I wanted it so bad that I could already feel my wetness forming in my pussy, but instead of fucking me he forced me to my knees and took out his masterful cock and pushed it into my mouth smacking it to the back of my mouth in one thrust. I gagged immediately.
I had sucked cock before, and hell the local basketball team loved it in the shower after a game if Melanie and I were there. But I had never been taken like this before he was harsh and so forceful, with every push I had to swallow an inch more of him until he was all the way down my throat he seemed to the fact that with every thrust a bit more of his member vanished into me.
He let a grown as he released his seed into my mouth and down my throat I swallowed as much as I could, but some of it dribbled out the side of my mouth as he forced himself into me again. “Are you all right in there?” Mrs. Graceland’s said her voice coming from the front room.
“I am ok.” Doug shouted with his cock still in my mouth, I pulled back my head releasing his shaft he let out another moan that seemed to echo around the bathroom.
He put himself away and I walked out into the lounge where Mrs. Graceland was still sat in her chair saying to Doug, “I will see you this afternoon for a service ok.” Then said good bye to Mrs. Graceland and walked off still trying to get the remains of his cum out of my teeth.
I noticed that a few drops of cum had splashed my T-shirt so I decided to go home and change my clothes, as I would hate to make the wrong impression I thought to myself.
Looking in my wardrobe I decided the sexy look was the order of the day so I picked out a pink tank-top that showed of my belly ring and I decided wearing a bra was not an option. I found a pair of white knit shorts that looked more like knickers than shorts the wave of the material made them go transparent when wet but as there was little chance of rain I decided that I didn’t need to put any thing under them, the low cut hip further highlighted my tight tummy, and high thigh showed my legs off to perfection. The seam in the front creased my pussy making my pouting lips more visible through the light cloth. I found a pair of platform sandals that set my outfit off and as I looked in the mirror I said to myself “You are a hot fucking bitch.”
Los Revos was a twenty minute walk from our apartment so I set off in the direction hopping someone I knew would give me a lift, but the road was empty and I got to my moms car and set off in the direction of Sandy Hills, five minutes later I turned onto the drive of the house where she said she was. It was massive, there was a big black Mercedes with tinted windows on the drive and I started thinking what the fuck has mom done.
I got out of moms rusty old Oldsmobile and got my first good look at the place, it was massive. It had heavy wood double doors with a stained glass arch that helped to show off the marble and stone that the house was mad of. There was a large statue of an angel spurting out water from its mouth into some kind of birdbath that seemed to be made out of the same marble that the house was made from.
I rang the bell that seemed to echo as if the house was empty but as I went to push the bell again my mom opened the door and showed me into the kitchenette where my mom’s new man was stood, “let me introduce you, Amanda this is Kenneth, Ken this is my daughter.”
“Hi,” he said as he held out his hand to greet me, he was not the most attractive of men as he was quite skinny, with sucked in cheeks, and a large nose but he was tall and his body looked very firm.
I walked strait up to him and flung my arms around him and planted my mouth full on his lips pushing my body against his and running my legs hard up against his crotch getting a good feel of his masterful prick, it felt massive and it seemed to harden as I rubbed my body against it.
I turned to look at my mom and said “I really fancy this man, mom.” I was half joking when I said this but even though I had just met him and I wanted him in me as soon as I could. I looked around and I my remark made her blush this was very unusual as my mom never showed any singe of embarrassment ever.
I said to Kenneth “This is a very nice home you have here,” as i slowly released the grip I had on him.
“Thank you, would you like a tour?” he asked.
“Sure,” I said turning to my mom and giving the thumbs up.
The ceiling looked a mile away and even this room was bigger than our lounge. I walked over to my mom and I saw Kenneth give us both the once over. I had always been darker tanned than my mother, but the two of us stood together must have really turned him on as I saw him fidget and then the lump in his trousers seemed to twitch and I knew he was interested.
My mom said for us to carry on as she had to make a phone call. I knew that she wanted to try and see if she could put off our eviction that had been threatened.
I was still thinking about the feel of Kenneth’s prick so I made sure that every movement I made would send his head reeling with lust. I walked a step ahead of him and went up the stairs not really sure where I was going but he followed obediently, oh so pussy whipped.
I think Kenneth had almost forgotten about my mom with my arse inches away from his grasp, I just wanted him to grab it and force me to the floor and fuck me there and then. As we walked into one room I stopped in the doorway and Kenneth banged into almost knocking me out the way.
I said. “Wow, this room is so big our whole apartment could fit in here.” I said excitedly hell it was massive, my eyes then fixed on the king sized bed and I went over to it. It was so firm, nothing like the thing I had back at Shallow Woods.
I could see that Kenneth’s mind was else where he was not listening to any thing I said but his eyes told me exactly what he was thinking, as they were fixed on my arse and nothing was going to distract them from that.
I jumped on the bed then got on my hands and knees and pointed my arse at Kenneth. “I would love to sleep on a bed like this,” noticing where he was looking.
I then saw the open closet and hoped off the bed. “My stuff would easily fit in here,” hell this was bigger than my bedroom. I turned around to look at him then posed in the doorway.
Kenneth seemed to gulp for air and said. “The other rooms are about the same size he said,” but I could tell he was finding it hard to hold any kind of intelligent conversation.
“Really show me,” I said as I walked over to him and took his hand and I griped it tight as I held it against my arse as we walked into the next room.
I could feel his fingers on the cheeks of my arse so I stopped again to look around the room. Kenneth started to stroke my arse cheeks as I held his hand tight against me.
We went into another room and this time I lead him over to the bed in the room and slowly removed my hand from his and to see what he would do and sure enough his hand stayed firmly where I left it.
I knew he would not be able to resist, and as I expected he started to rub his hand over my arse. I slowly moved around on the bed like I had done in the other room this time his hand moved against my arse just as I wanted it to. Kenneth by this time got the hint and slid his hand under me and started massage my hot cunt through the flimsy material of my shorts.
“Its nice isn’t it,” I said.
“It sure is,” as his hand pressed a little harder on my cunt.
I was hot for it, but with my mom down stairs I couldn’t really fuck her new boyfriend with her there. I had to think up some way to get rid of her for a while so I could use this man without the fear that she would walk in on us and mess up the whole thing. I crawled off the bed and took hold of his hand again. This time I draped it over my shoulder resting it on my breasts as he continued to show me all the delights of the house.
The last room had a window that looked out to the back lawn I could see the hot tub on the deck. We stood in the window and I pulled his hand down on to my tits. Kenneth didn’t need any directions from there and he took my soft flesh in his hand. I moved my other hand behind me finding his large prick once again feeling exactly how big it was. I slid my hand over its length as Kenneth reached around with his other hand and began to massage my crotch getting me wetter all the time.
We stood in the window for a couple of minutes before then I pulled my hand away from his cock and removed his hand from her tits. “We better get back to mom,”
He knew I wanted to fuck him and from his actions I knew he wanted to fuck me just as much and from that point I knew it was inevitable that I was going to have this man some time during this day. We got back to the kitchen jus as mom was hanging up the phone with the words “Fuck you!”
“Mom what’s wrong!” I said shocked to here her swear as it was something I had never heard her do. Mom just dropped her head into her arms on the kitchen counter.
“What was that all about?” Kenneth asked again seeming concerned.
“That was the leasing office for our apartment. We’re being evicted. She blurted out trying to fight back the tears. Kenneth moved over to her and put his hand on her shoulder.
“I can’t stand back and watch this happen.” Kenneth announce as if he was on some sort of crusade, I must admit he looked good trying to show he was the greatest guy on earth. Then it came Kenneth said what I hoped he would from the moment I had walked into his hose an saw the place.
I couldn’t believe it, mom started to argue saying that she could not impose on him. ‘Hell mom shut up. I thought don’t blow it.’ In the end mom gave in and Kenneth said. “Get your son over here.” I offered to go and get him hoping my mom would want to do it herself and I was right, and Kenneth and I was on our own.
Kenneth and I stood in the doorway waving to my mom as she drove away. Kenneth’s hand his hand hard on my arse and was running his finger up and down my crack as he massaged my cheeks. As soon as mom had cleared the driveway Kenneth shut the door and I leaped into his arms. I was amazed how he just caught me and begun to carry me up the stairs. “Which room?” he asked.
“The closest one to your room,” I replied. And he smiled as he ripped my clothes off and pushed me toward the bed, I pranced around on the bed then I got on my hands an knees as I did earlier he seemed to like the view as Kenneth didn’t waist any time getting his clothes off. He gripped his long black prick and started to rub the head along the length of my pussy until he found the opening. He pushed it a little then pulled me back on to him hard. He plunged into my pussy grunting all the time. He was taking nothing for granted. He fucked me with long fast continuous strokes, bruising me with his massive length of meat.
I loved getting fucked like this. I arched my back pushing my arse back to great his strong pounding strokes. My pussy was on fire as his monster reamed my tight twat.
All the time he fucked me he was squeezing my arse I felt him press his thumb into my arsehole he pushed it in as far as he could while continuing to push his cock in and out of my cunt. I was then shocked as he pulled his dick out of my sex and left me gasping to orgasm, it was then I felt the head of his dick at my arsehole and with an almighty push his thumb was replaced by his long black length.
I tried to relax as his cock thrust into me. Kenneth pulled my arse back as he pushed his cock in with all his strength.
I screamed as ring burned and stretched under the force. “Aaarr!” Kenneth roared as he pushed harder with his cock until it was completely buried in my tight hole.
I had arse fucked a few guys before, but never one so big. It stretched me and filled me so much that I started to feel faint luckily Kenneth stopped to catch his breath, this gave me a chance to get use to this invasion of my sphincter before he begun pulling his cock out an inch at a time, and then thrusting it hard back in. He repeatedly made short hard strokes, grunting and roaring at the top of his lungs.
He than told me to shout at him and talk like a whore. So I started to shout “Yeah! Fuck! Fuck! Yeah! Fuck!” through my clenched teeth. I reached out and gripped the covers then pushed my burning arse back on his long black intruder.
“You’re a hot bitch aren’t you?” Kenneth grunted, while he pumped away at me increasing the pace of his assault with every stroke.
“Yeah I’m a hot fucking bitch!” I said and Kenneth fucked me harder than ever and I gave it right back at him. His dick felt like a piston as he drove it in her arsehole.
“You like fucking me don’t you!” I shouted at him.
“You like my white little arse!”
“Yeah! Yeah!” Kenneth shouted pounding my arse as if he wanted his prick to pop out of my head, then his balls let go there fluid flooding her arsehole with his thick creamy cum. He fell on top of me. My arse was sore and I was glad when his dick slid out of my cum filled arsehole, but as it did I felt so empty.
I rolled over underneath him and smiled, batting my eyelashes at him. He laughed and said. “You’re something else.”
We talked for a while and I joked about my mom would like to fuck me, he told me that him and my mom were getting together and I said, “Well you had better fuck us both then.”
He told me he liked my sexy outfit and he would give me an allowance to wear sexy outfits like this all the time, but I was not to wear bra’s or knickers. I jumped up at him kissing him on the neck I felt his hands all over my arse again. We broke our embrace and he suggested we showered and got dressed. I picked up my clothes and followed him into his bedroom.
We showered and Kenneth made arrangements to get our things moved on the phone. I sat on the sofa next to Kenneth and I started to suck on his big black cock while his fingers were in my shorts playing with my slit. “Sit on it,” he said pushing my mouth away from his cock. I didn’t hesitate pulling off her shorts and kicking them across the room I straddled Kenneth on the sofa. I held his thick pole straight up then I slid my pussy down on it. I began to roll my hips he buried it deep inside me
Kenneth leaned back on the sofa in ecstasy as my hot pussy wrapped around his cock. He had just closed his eyes and I was getting into a rhythm when I heard cars pulling up the drive.
“Fuck.” I shouted which brought Kenneth back to earth and then I quickly hopped off his cock and pulled my shorts back on while Kenneth struggled to stuff his hard dick into his trousers and just as he got his shirt tucked in, Gloria and Steven walked in the door.
“This is my son Steven,” mom said, walking towards us. I saw Steven smiling as he looked at us both then realized the wetness in my pussy had soaked through my shorts, I tried to conceal the fact, but then I noticed my mom looking at the two of us and it was then I realized they both knew I had been fucking our host.
The pair of them greeted each other as though they had known each other for years. “You like my pad then, Amanda can show you around while I talk to your mom.” Kenneth said smiling at my mom.
“Lead the way sis,” Steven said. and mom took Kenneth’s hand and went into the study and shut the door behind them. My wet crotch had started to itch and Steven had noticed how tense I was and he kept dropping hints that he knew I had fucked mom’s new boyfriend and when I sat down at the bench press Steven bleated out “Busted and pushed his hand into my crotch making the cum soaked cloth even more visible.
“What the hell do you think you’re doing?” I snapped at him trying not to raise my voice.
“You’ve been fucking mom new boyfriend haven’t you?” Steven said accusing me.
“Are you crazy, you can’t tell mom that?” I retorted trying to look offended at what he said.
“And why not,” he said. I was stumped for an answer.
“OK, what do you want?” I asked.
“What do you mean,” he replied.
“You wouldn’t threaten to tell mom anything unless you wanted something,” I said to him trying not to give him any more ammunition to use against me.
“You want to drive my car don’t you?”
“What will I do with a car?” he said laughing.
“Then what do you want?” I asked. Then I saw him looking down at my crotch, then he smiled.
“You have finally smoked too much of that shit,” I said realizing what he wanted.
“There is no fucking way am I am going to fuck you my own brother.”
“OK,” he said trying to freak me out turning towards the door as he reached the door and was turning the door knob I chickened out totally.
“Ok I can’t believe I’m doing this.” I told him pulling my shorts off once again and sat down on the bench.
He had his prick out faster than any man I have been with and for the first time I saw my kid brother in a totally different light he had his swollen prick in his hand, I hoped he changed his mind but as I looked into his eyes I knew it was the only way to shut him up so I lay back on the bench letting my legs part.
He grabbed my legs and wrenched my knees up towards shoulders as her forced his cock into used pussy. One thought kept running through my mind and that was, ‘I’m not fucking my brother.’ then she felt the full length of his cock inside her it felt just as big as Kenneth’s. I was amazed that my pathetic brother had this monster cock hiding in his trousers.
Steven pounded his cock into me fast and as hard, I pulled my top over my head as I was fast approaching orgasm. I wanted to scream but I clenched my teeth instead doing my best to enjoy the passion of my brother’s sex. A few more seconds and he was shooting his wad deep into my hot snatch and I was dragging my nails down his back trying to hold back my orgasmic screams, I was totally blown away.
I knew this was going to happen again and if he was half as good the next time I would love him forever, I heard something moving on the stairs and Steven was out of me and pulling on his clothes, I got my top on and my cum stained shorts pulled back up my legs covering my sopping wet pussy as best I could as the door opened. In walked my mom and Kenneth announcing he was taking us out shopping.
My mom looked at me knowingly and patted me on the arse then whispered. “Who is the best fuck?” and I just smiled and walked past her as she shut the door on the work room.
love linnet
I hope you like this as it is my interpretation of Black Snakes story from the daughter’s point of view I have tried to get the detail right but I am sure that someone will tell me if I haven’t.
This story was written with the express permission of the original writer and there is no breach of copywrite.
Hello my name is Amanda Thompson, I have just turned twenty and am looking forward to what ever life has to offer, I live Shallow Woods apartments with my mother Gloria and my baby brother Steven, he isn’t really a baby he is eighteen but as he is the youngest we all refer to him as the baby.
The apartments are a bit run down but Doug the janitor try’s his best to keep the place safe for the kids that are constantly running up and down the hall ways, hell listen to me it was not that long ago that I was one of those kids.
My mom used to work for a company called Kellser and is looking other work I think today she had a shift as a nurse’s aid at our local hospital but as it was Thursday she normally went to the Los Revos bar and grill for a few drinks, so why should this night be any different, well it wasn’t but as things worked out the events of that night affected me and our family in ways I could never imagine.
When the telephone rang at nine I was surprised that my mom was on the other end of the phone, “Hi Amanda look we have had some bad news at work so I’ve met up with a friends for a drink, I will be in late if you want order a pizza and leave a bit for me you know how hungry I get after a few drinks.”
“Ok mom, see you when I see you.” I was glad mom was having some fun she deserves to enjoy herself, I thought to myself. I ordered the pizza from our normal shop on the corner; I was pleased it was Darrel who served me as he always gave me extra toppings. I think he fancy’s me so I always flirted with him much to the dislike of his farther who owns the shop he always looked down on my mom as she was a lone parent and had two children I think in his eyes this made my mom a whore or something.
I walked back to our apartment block passed and passed the janitors apartment just as he poked his head out the door. “Hi there Amanda is your mother in.” He asked in his normal pleasant manor.
“No, she won’t be in until late. She has met up with some friends at Los Revos.”
“Ok but I have the part for your air conditioning and if I don’t fit it tonight it will be another week before I get the chance to do it.”
“That’s ok my brothers out so come and do it now if you like.” I didn’t see anything wrong with this as I had known Doug for five years since we moved into the block and I used to sit in his workshop while he tinkered with refrigerator or a washing machine cursing under his breath how stingy the owners of the apartments were for not replacing the unit.
He was 24 and tall 5’9 and his dark skin made him look so sexy with his hazel eyes and his short dark hair made him look a lot younger than he was. I remember once he told me he had been a civil engineer in the UK but he originally was from Kenya, I had asked him many times to tell me what Kenya was like but he always changed the subject so I never pushed it.
I went over to our apartment and left the door ajar for Doug to come in when he was ready and I sat down and started to eat my pizza with my feet up on the table, the knock on the door startled me but as it opened I saw Doug standing there so I invited him in offering him a slice, “After.” He said and I wondered what he meant by after.
Doug started to work on the air conditioning unit and soon it was pumping out cool air that made my nipples stick out through the material of my dress, Doug noticed this to my embarrassment but he smiled and I began to relax. He sat down and began to eat his pizza and we began to talk he commented on how much like my mother I looked and I said “Thank you.” As I always thought my mom looked very good especially in her nurse’s uniform.
I got us both a beer and we sat on the settee shouting the breeze it was amazing how attractive I found this man and slowly the conversation degraded in a fun way down to sex he told me how he walked in on Miss Clay in number 32 lying in her bath with her hand inside her pussy and the time he walked in on Mr. Hilliard in number 4 on his knees in his wife’s clothes licking away at his step daughters shaven pussy.
All this talk had got me quite exited and I could feel my sex dampening the more detail Doug went into. And by the time he finished his drink my knickers were quite wet and soon Doug and I were in a tight embrace on the settee with his hands working over my body, I got up and took his hand saying, “Come with me you wont regret it.” With that he took my hand and I led him into my bedroom were he was to be my nights entertainment.
His hands were all over me and he was pulling my t-shirt over my head the second we got in the room he pushed me onto the bed and his hands were over my arse and he began to pull my knickers down, I tried to get him to slow down but to no avail my knickers were off and he had pushed his length deep into my pussy and was ramming away like a piston on a steam train. With each thrust of his mighty cock, he shoved me an inch or so further up the bed until I had my arms bracing myself against the headboard of my squeaking bed. I was moaning enjoying every second and every inch of his monster, I had been with a few boys but never a man so virile and so powerful.
“ARGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGH.” Came from my gut as he released his seed deep into my pussy, I could feel him pulse as he thrust into me again letting another jet of his cream gush into my body.
“I am sorry, I couldn’t help it.” Doug said has he pulled his glistening cock from my contented sex. I fell on my side and watched as his massive member shrank back into his pants.
He got up to leave but I said. “Don’t go we have hours before my mom will be home.” But he turned and blew me a kiss as he walked out the door. I decided to jump in the shower and turn in I striped the remains of my clothes off and used them to wipe the cum that was seeping from my puffy sex and turned on the shower and stepped into the hot stream of water and began to lather myself up as I let the water wash the soap and the cum from my body.
I felt tired after my shower and I retired to my bed thinking about the way I had behaved with Doug and fell asleep, I awoke as the sun shone its light through my window I got up and pulled a T-shirt on and walked into our lounge.
The pull down bed was there and the usual heap of bed clothes were in the middle of it so that meant my brother had got home some time during the night, so many times as we were growing up I found him standing naked in my room playing with him self as I lay on my bed. But where was he today I didn’t know I looked into my moms bedroom her bed was empty “What the fuck”
I reached for my cell phone and checked my messages but there was nothing, so I thumbed through my phone list and found my mother’s number then pressed call.
“Hi Mom I wasn’t expecting you to be this late,” I said jokingly.
“I am glad you rang, can you come and pick me up.” The reply down the phone.
“Yea no problem, your car is at Los Revos and then I need to come to the Sandy Hills estates, what you doing there casing the joint. Ok mom I will be about an hour, Doug has got to fix the air con.”
I knew the houses well I had been to a frat party there a few months ago and put on a floor show that the boys wound never forget, but first I wanted Doug’s monster reaming me just to start the day off right. I put on a pair of shorts and tied my T-shirt in a knot at my waist and walked out into the morning sun I made my way down the block to Doug’s workshop and poked my head around the door, I could not see any sign of life but as it was unlocked I knew he would not be far away.
I walked around the estate till I found him at Mrs. Graceland’s apartment; she was an old lady who had difficulty moving around so Doug had fitted various devices around her apartment to make life easer for her to do things for herself.
I popped my head in the door and sure enough Mrs. Graceland was sitting in her chair watching some rerun on HBO, “Is Doug here.” I asked in my butter wouldn’t melt in my mouth voice.
“Oh hello there dear he is in the bathroom fixing a tap thing, go on through.” She said quite happily.
I walked into the bath room that was quite large compared to the box we had in our apartment, Doug was in his usual overalls tied around his waist with a vest on bent over the bath. I could not help myself, I walked quietly up behind him and slipped my hand into his pocket to find it was not a pocket it was just a access vent to gain access to you clothes underneath the only thing was that Doug hadn’t any clothes underneath and my hand found his masterful cock. This startled Doug and he shot up banging his head on a cupboard above the bath.
“What the fuck are you…” he stopped mid sentence as he realized it was me.
“Sorry you seem pleased to see me.” I said with his hardening cock still in my hand. I moved my hand down its length and it started to spring up standing to attention like all good boys should do.
“Stop that.” Doug said. But I continued stroking his ever hardening meat. I wanted it so bad that I could already feel my wetness forming in my pussy, but instead of fucking me he forced me to my knees and took out his masterful cock and pushed it into my mouth smacking it to the back of my mouth in one thrust. I gagged immediately.
I had sucked cock before, and hell the local basketball team loved it in the shower after a game if Melanie and I were there. But I had never been taken like this before he was harsh and so forceful, with every push I had to swallow an inch more of him until he was all the way down my throat he seemed to the fact that with every thrust a bit more of his member vanished into me.
He let a grown as he released his seed into my mouth and down my throat I swallowed as much as I could, but some of it dribbled out the side of my mouth as he forced himself into me again. “Are you all right in there?” Mrs. Graceland’s said her voice coming from the front room.
“I am ok.” Doug shouted with his cock still in my mouth, I pulled back my head releasing his shaft he let out another moan that seemed to echo around the bathroom.
He put himself away and I walked out into the lounge where Mrs. Graceland was still sat in her chair saying to Doug, “I will see you this afternoon for a service ok.” Then said good bye to Mrs. Graceland and walked off still trying to get the remains of his cum out of my teeth.
I noticed that a few drops of cum had splashed my T-shirt so I decided to go home and change my clothes, as I would hate to make the wrong impression I thought to myself.
Looking in my wardrobe I decided the sexy look was the order of the day so I picked out a pink tank-top that showed of my belly ring and I decided wearing a bra was not an option. I found a pair of white knit shorts that looked more like knickers than shorts the wave of the material made them go transparent when wet but as there was little chance of rain I decided that I didn’t need to put any thing under them, the low cut hip further highlighted my tight tummy, and high thigh showed my legs off to perfection. The seam in the front creased my pussy making my pouting lips more visible through the light cloth. I found a pair of platform sandals that set my outfit off and as I looked in the mirror I said to myself “You are a hot fucking bitch.”
Los Revos was a twenty minute walk from our apartment so I set off in the direction hopping someone I knew would give me a lift, but the road was empty and I got to my moms car and set off in the direction of Sandy Hills, five minutes later I turned onto the drive of the house where she said she was. It was massive, there was a big black Mercedes with tinted windows on the drive and I started thinking what the fuck has mom done.
I got out of moms rusty old Oldsmobile and got my first good look at the place, it was massive. It had heavy wood double doors with a stained glass arch that helped to show off the marble and stone that the house was mad of. There was a large statue of an angel spurting out water from its mouth into some kind of birdbath that seemed to be made out of the same marble that the house was made from.
I rang the bell that seemed to echo as if the house was empty but as I went to push the bell again my mom opened the door and showed me into the kitchenette where my mom’s new man was stood, “let me introduce you, Amanda this is Kenneth, Ken this is my daughter.”
“Hi,” he said as he held out his hand to greet me, he was not the most attractive of men as he was quite skinny, with sucked in cheeks, and a large nose but he was tall and his body looked very firm.
I walked strait up to him and flung my arms around him and planted my mouth full on his lips pushing my body against his and running my legs hard up against his crotch getting a good feel of his masterful prick, it felt massive and it seemed to harden as I rubbed my body against it.
I turned to look at my mom and said “I really fancy this man, mom.” I was half joking when I said this but even though I had just met him and I wanted him in me as soon as I could. I looked around and I my remark made her blush this was very unusual as my mom never showed any singe of embarrassment ever.
I said to Kenneth “This is a very nice home you have here,” as i slowly released the grip I had on him.
“Thank you, would you like a tour?” he asked.
“Sure,” I said turning to my mom and giving the thumbs up.
The ceiling looked a mile away and even this room was bigger than our lounge. I walked over to my mom and I saw Kenneth give us both the once over. I had always been darker tanned than my mother, but the two of us stood together must have really turned him on as I saw him fidget and then the lump in his trousers seemed to twitch and I knew he was interested.
My mom said for us to carry on as she had to make a phone call. I knew that she wanted to try and see if she could put off our eviction that had been threatened.
I was still thinking about the feel of Kenneth’s prick so I made sure that every movement I made would send his head reeling with lust. I walked a step ahead of him and went up the stairs not really sure where I was going but he followed obediently, oh so pussy whipped.
I think Kenneth had almost forgotten about my mom with my arse inches away from his grasp, I just wanted him to grab it and force me to the floor and fuck me there and then. As we walked into one room I stopped in the doorway and Kenneth banged into almost knocking me out the way.
I said. “Wow, this room is so big our whole apartment could fit in here.” I said excitedly hell it was massive, my eyes then fixed on the king sized bed and I went over to it. It was so firm, nothing like the thing I had back at Shallow Woods.
I could see that Kenneth’s mind was else where he was not listening to any thing I said but his eyes told me exactly what he was thinking, as they were fixed on my arse and nothing was going to distract them from that.
I jumped on the bed then got on my hands and knees and pointed my arse at Kenneth. “I would love to sleep on a bed like this,” noticing where he was looking.
I then saw the open closet and hoped off the bed. “My stuff would easily fit in here,” hell this was bigger than my bedroom. I turned around to look at him then posed in the doorway.
Kenneth seemed to gulp for air and said. “The other rooms are about the same size he said,” but I could tell he was finding it hard to hold any kind of intelligent conversation.
“Really show me,” I said as I walked over to him and took his hand and I griped it tight as I held it against my arse as we walked into the next room.
I could feel his fingers on the cheeks of my arse so I stopped again to look around the room. Kenneth started to stroke my arse cheeks as I held his hand tight against me.
We went into another room and this time I lead him over to the bed in the room and slowly removed my hand from his and to see what he would do and sure enough his hand stayed firmly where I left it.
I knew he would not be able to resist, and as I expected he started to rub his hand over my arse. I slowly moved around on the bed like I had done in the other room this time his hand moved against my arse just as I wanted it to. Kenneth by this time got the hint and slid his hand under me and started massage my hot cunt through the flimsy material of my shorts.
“Its nice isn’t it,” I said.
“It sure is,” as his hand pressed a little harder on my cunt.
I was hot for it, but with my mom down stairs I couldn’t really fuck her new boyfriend with her there. I had to think up some way to get rid of her for a while so I could use this man without the fear that she would walk in on us and mess up the whole thing. I crawled off the bed and took hold of his hand again. This time I draped it over my shoulder resting it on my breasts as he continued to show me all the delights of the house.
The last room had a window that looked out to the back lawn I could see the hot tub on the deck. We stood in the window and I pulled his hand down on to my tits. Kenneth didn’t need any directions from there and he took my soft flesh in his hand. I moved my other hand behind me finding his large prick once again feeling exactly how big it was. I slid my hand over its length as Kenneth reached around with his other hand and began to massage my crotch getting me wetter all the time.
We stood in the window for a couple of minutes before then I pulled my hand away from his cock and removed his hand from her tits. “We better get back to mom,”
He knew I wanted to fuck him and from his actions I knew he wanted to fuck me just as much and from that point I knew it was inevitable that I was going to have this man some time during this day. We got back to the kitchen jus as mom was hanging up the phone with the words “Fuck you!”
“Mom what’s wrong!” I said shocked to here her swear as it was something I had never heard her do. Mom just dropped her head into her arms on the kitchen counter.
“What was that all about?” Kenneth asked again seeming concerned.
“That was the leasing office for our apartment. We’re being evicted. She blurted out trying to fight back the tears. Kenneth moved over to her and put his hand on her shoulder.
“I can’t stand back and watch this happen.” Kenneth announce as if he was on some sort of crusade, I must admit he looked good trying to show he was the greatest guy on earth. Then it came Kenneth said what I hoped he would from the moment I had walked into his hose an saw the place.
I couldn’t believe it, mom started to argue saying that she could not impose on him. ‘Hell mom shut up. I thought don’t blow it.’ In the end mom gave in and Kenneth said. “Get your son over here.” I offered to go and get him hoping my mom would want to do it herself and I was right, and Kenneth and I was on our own.
Kenneth and I stood in the doorway waving to my mom as she drove away. Kenneth’s hand his hand hard on my arse and was running his finger up and down my crack as he massaged my cheeks. As soon as mom had cleared the driveway Kenneth shut the door and I leaped into his arms. I was amazed how he just caught me and begun to carry me up the stairs. “Which room?” he asked.
“The closest one to your room,” I replied. And he smiled as he ripped my clothes off and pushed me toward the bed, I pranced around on the bed then I got on my hands an knees as I did earlier he seemed to like the view as Kenneth didn’t waist any time getting his clothes off. He gripped his long black prick and started to rub the head along the length of my pussy until he found the opening. He pushed it a little then pulled me back on to him hard. He plunged into my pussy grunting all the time. He was taking nothing for granted. He fucked me with long fast continuous strokes, bruising me with his massive length of meat.
I loved getting fucked like this. I arched my back pushing my arse back to great his strong pounding strokes. My pussy was on fire as his monster reamed my tight twat.
All the time he fucked me he was squeezing my arse I felt him press his thumb into my arsehole he pushed it in as far as he could while continuing to push his cock in and out of my cunt. I was then shocked as he pulled his dick out of my sex and left me gasping to orgasm, it was then I felt the head of his dick at my arsehole and with an almighty push his thumb was replaced by his long black length.
I tried to relax as his cock thrust into me. Kenneth pulled my arse back as he pushed his cock in with all his strength.
I screamed as ring burned and stretched under the force. “Aaarr!” Kenneth roared as he pushed harder with his cock until it was completely buried in my tight hole.
I had arse fucked a few guys before, but never one so big. It stretched me and filled me so much that I started to feel faint luckily Kenneth stopped to catch his breath, this gave me a chance to get use to this invasion of my sphincter before he begun pulling his cock out an inch at a time, and then thrusting it hard back in. He repeatedly made short hard strokes, grunting and roaring at the top of his lungs.
He than told me to shout at him and talk like a whore. So I started to shout “Yeah! Fuck! Fuck! Yeah! Fuck!” through my clenched teeth. I reached out and gripped the covers then pushed my burning arse back on his long black intruder.
“You’re a hot bitch aren’t you?” Kenneth grunted, while he pumped away at me increasing the pace of his assault with every stroke.
“Yeah I’m a hot fucking bitch!” I said and Kenneth fucked me harder than ever and I gave it right back at him. His dick felt like a piston as he drove it in her arsehole.
“You like fucking me don’t you!” I shouted at him.
“You like my white little arse!”
“Yeah! Yeah!” Kenneth shouted pounding my arse as if he wanted his prick to pop out of my head, then his balls let go there fluid flooding her arsehole with his thick creamy cum. He fell on top of me. My arse was sore and I was glad when his dick slid out of my cum filled arsehole, but as it did I felt so empty.
I rolled over underneath him and smiled, batting my eyelashes at him. He laughed and said. “You’re something else.”
We talked for a while and I joked about my mom would like to fuck me, he told me that him and my mom were getting together and I said, “Well you had better fuck us both then.”
He told me he liked my sexy outfit and he would give me an allowance to wear sexy outfits like this all the time, but I was not to wear bra’s or knickers. I jumped up at him kissing him on the neck I felt his hands all over my arse again. We broke our embrace and he suggested we showered and got dressed. I picked up my clothes and followed him into his bedroom.
We showered and Kenneth made arrangements to get our things moved on the phone. I sat on the sofa next to Kenneth and I started to suck on his big black cock while his fingers were in my shorts playing with my slit. “Sit on it,” he said pushing my mouth away from his cock. I didn’t hesitate pulling off her shorts and kicking them across the room I straddled Kenneth on the sofa. I held his thick pole straight up then I slid my pussy down on it. I began to roll my hips he buried it deep inside me
Kenneth leaned back on the sofa in ecstasy as my hot pussy wrapped around his cock. He had just closed his eyes and I was getting into a rhythm when I heard cars pulling up the drive.
“Fuck.” I shouted which brought Kenneth back to earth and then I quickly hopped off his cock and pulled my shorts back on while Kenneth struggled to stuff his hard dick into his trousers and just as he got his shirt tucked in, Gloria and Steven walked in the door.
“This is my son Steven,” mom said, walking towards us. I saw Steven smiling as he looked at us both then realized the wetness in my pussy had soaked through my shorts, I tried to conceal the fact, but then I noticed my mom looking at the two of us and it was then I realized they both knew I had been fucking our host.
The pair of them greeted each other as though they had known each other for years. “You like my pad then, Amanda can show you around while I talk to your mom.” Kenneth said smiling at my mom.
“Lead the way sis,” Steven said. and mom took Kenneth’s hand and went into the study and shut the door behind them. My wet crotch had started to itch and Steven had noticed how tense I was and he kept dropping hints that he knew I had fucked mom’s new boyfriend and when I sat down at the bench press Steven bleated out “Busted and pushed his hand into my crotch making the cum soaked cloth even more visible.
“What the hell do you think you’re doing?” I snapped at him trying not to raise my voice.
“You’ve been fucking mom new boyfriend haven’t you?” Steven said accusing me.
“Are you crazy, you can’t tell mom that?” I retorted trying to look offended at what he said.
“And why not,” he said. I was stumped for an answer.
“OK, what do you want?” I asked.
“What do you mean,” he replied.
“You wouldn’t threaten to tell mom anything unless you wanted something,” I said to him trying not to give him any more ammunition to use against me.
“You want to drive my car don’t you?”
“What will I do with a car?” he said laughing.
“Then what do you want?” I asked. Then I saw him looking down at my crotch, then he smiled.
“You have finally smoked too much of that shit,” I said realizing what he wanted.
“There is no fucking way am I am going to fuck you my own brother.”
“OK,” he said trying to freak me out turning towards the door as he reached the door and was turning the door knob I chickened out totally.
“Ok I can’t believe I’m doing this.” I told him pulling my shorts off once again and sat down on the bench.
He had his prick out faster than any man I have been with and for the first time I saw my kid brother in a totally different light he had his swollen prick in his hand, I hoped he changed his mind but as I looked into his eyes I knew it was the only way to shut him up so I lay back on the bench letting my legs part.
He grabbed my legs and wrenched my knees up towards shoulders as her forced his cock into used pussy. One thought kept running through my mind and that was, ‘I’m not fucking my brother.’ then she felt the full length of his cock inside her it felt just as big as Kenneth’s. I was amazed that my pathetic brother had this monster cock hiding in his trousers.
Steven pounded his cock into me fast and as hard, I pulled my top over my head as I was fast approaching orgasm. I wanted to scream but I clenched my teeth instead doing my best to enjoy the passion of my brother’s sex. A few more seconds and he was shooting his wad deep into my hot snatch and I was dragging my nails down his back trying to hold back my orgasmic screams, I was totally blown away.
I knew this was going to happen again and if he was half as good the next time I would love him forever, I heard something moving on the stairs and Steven was out of me and pulling on his clothes, I got my top on and my cum stained shorts pulled back up my legs covering my sopping wet pussy as best I could as the door opened. In walked my mom and Kenneth announcing he was taking us out shopping.
My mom looked at me knowingly and patted me on the arse then whispered. “Who is the best fuck?” and I just smiled and walked past her as she shut the door on the work room.
love linnet
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Bravo MsLinnet. There are parts in the retake that clearly shows Amanda's feelings. Totally awsome effect. This was definately worth it.
I will post Kenneth's POV as soon as I'm finished.
You're the hottest, babe. Thanks.
I will post Kenneth's POV as soon as I'm finished.
You're the hottest, babe. Thanks.
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MsLinnet, Chicklet, Lexium if you ladies be interested in a Lit-party in Atlanta. Sept. 20-22 see the general board
Yo guys if you can get to Atlanta it would be worth your time. See the general board.
Yo guys if you can get to Atlanta it would be worth your time. See the general board.
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Like the idea and want to contribute.
Hello Blacksnake. Loved the idea of contributing to this story. Would like to write from the sons point of view. you can send anything you think relevant my way. Will submit back to you to get your ideas on what i write.
Hello Blacksnake. Loved the idea of contributing to this story. Would like to write from the sons point of view. you can send anything you think relevant my way. Will submit back to you to get your ideas on what i write.
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Here's the start of Steven's POV:
‘Shit, my balls ache,’ I thought as I put another CD in my player, “I got to stop jerkin so much.’
OK so I jerk off a lot.
Do you blame me? I live in a crummy apartment with my mom and sister so I see a lot of skin, all the time. Boy, would I like to hump that sister of mine, and I wouldn’t say no to mom as a pinch hitter for sis. Come to that I wouldn’t say no to Popeye’s grandma, I’m getting so little at the moment.
OK I’m getting zilch.
Head down and back to the music and a joint; maybe that’ll ease the blue balls.
Suddenly the joint was gone from my mouth and the ’phones off my head. I started to protest when Mom cut in with, “You got any idea what’s going down?”
“Yeah, yeah. So we’re being thrown out. So what? Something will work out, no sweat.”
I put the ’phones back on. Mom snatched them off again and started on at me, “Something did workout and …”
I interrupted with “See. No worries,” and reached for the ’phones again. Mom slapped me upside the head.
“Steven. Listen. I met this wonderful guy and he’s going to let us move in with him.”
I seethed with jealousy for a moment. Some guy was banging her enough to want her all the time. Out loud I laughed, “Cool. You found us all a sugardaddy.”
Mom stormed at me, “Steven! Will you listen to me?”
I tried to calm her down but she was really mad at me, God knows why.
“Please, please, Steven don’t blow this for us.”
Hey, she likes this guy’s dong, or his wallet more like.
“I need you to promise,” she nagged.
Calm her down is the way to go, so I say, “I’m cool babe. No worries. I’ll be like a mouse,” but inside I want to grab her and shake her and say “Fuck me instead of him.”
“Get dressed. He wants you to meet you.”
Mom turned with those gorgeous tits bouncing and went out the door with and arse-wiggle that has me aching even more. Time to finish my joint before getting dressed to meet the dude who’s banging my Mom. Knowing my luck he’ll bang my sis as well.
‘Shit, my balls ache,’ I thought as I put another CD in my player, “I got to stop jerkin so much.’
OK so I jerk off a lot.
Do you blame me? I live in a crummy apartment with my mom and sister so I see a lot of skin, all the time. Boy, would I like to hump that sister of mine, and I wouldn’t say no to mom as a pinch hitter for sis. Come to that I wouldn’t say no to Popeye’s grandma, I’m getting so little at the moment.
OK I’m getting zilch.
Head down and back to the music and a joint; maybe that’ll ease the blue balls.
Suddenly the joint was gone from my mouth and the ’phones off my head. I started to protest when Mom cut in with, “You got any idea what’s going down?”
“Yeah, yeah. So we’re being thrown out. So what? Something will work out, no sweat.”
I put the ’phones back on. Mom snatched them off again and started on at me, “Something did workout and …”
I interrupted with “See. No worries,” and reached for the ’phones again. Mom slapped me upside the head.
“Steven. Listen. I met this wonderful guy and he’s going to let us move in with him.”
I seethed with jealousy for a moment. Some guy was banging her enough to want her all the time. Out loud I laughed, “Cool. You found us all a sugardaddy.”
Mom stormed at me, “Steven! Will you listen to me?”
I tried to calm her down but she was really mad at me, God knows why.
“Please, please, Steven don’t blow this for us.”
Hey, she likes this guy’s dong, or his wallet more like.
“I need you to promise,” she nagged.
Calm her down is the way to go, so I say, “I’m cool babe. No worries. I’ll be like a mouse,” but inside I want to grab her and shake her and say “Fuck me instead of him.”
“Get dressed. He wants you to meet you.”
Mom turned with those gorgeous tits bouncing and went out the door with and arse-wiggle that has me aching even more. Time to finish my joint before getting dressed to meet the dude who’s banging my Mom. Knowing my luck he’ll bang my sis as well.
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Re: Like the idea and want to contribute.
Charm is handling the son's POV, but thanks alot. Have you read the original story yet. If so, what do you think of the idea of the reader being able to get all of the character's version after hearing the story from someone else?
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Charm is handling the son's POV, but thanks alot. Have you read the original story yet. If so, what do you think of the idea of the reader being able to get all of the character's version after hearing the story from someone else?
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My Opinion!
Some may say that it is the same story told over and over. But believe me, a story told from different POV's can be very exciting and stimulating. We often only read a story from the first or third person. But to see a story and have each person tell it from their own point of view does not make it redundant. It sometimes makes the story all the more exciting. Imagine! a man can tell how it feels as he is enjoying a woman. But he can not know what she is feeling as he enjoys her. Only she can describe the things that she is feeling. Only she can tell if his dick is giving her the pleasure she craves and needs to be complete. and when you have this type of story, to be able to know what each person is thinking and feeling as they explore their different partners is very exciting. The passion that each person feels for the person he is fucking and how it effects him adds much flavor to the writing. Well like I said, this is my opinion and as we all know, "Opinoins are like computers! Almost everyone has one!"
It was a great story and i can't wait to see it put all together. Would like it sent to my email so that i could read it before it is posted. Thanks and let me know when you'er starting up another one.
Sam
Some may say that it is the same story told over and over. But believe me, a story told from different POV's can be very exciting and stimulating. We often only read a story from the first or third person. But to see a story and have each person tell it from their own point of view does not make it redundant. It sometimes makes the story all the more exciting. Imagine! a man can tell how it feels as he is enjoying a woman. But he can not know what she is feeling as he enjoys her. Only she can describe the things that she is feeling. Only she can tell if his dick is giving her the pleasure she craves and needs to be complete. and when you have this type of story, to be able to know what each person is thinking and feeling as they explore their different partners is very exciting. The passion that each person feels for the person he is fucking and how it effects him adds much flavor to the writing. Well like I said, this is my opinion and as we all know, "Opinoins are like computers! Almost everyone has one!"
It was a great story and i can't wait to see it put all together. Would like it sent to my email so that i could read it before it is posted. Thanks and let me know when you'er starting up another one.
Sam
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Re: Re: Like the idea and want to contribute.
Please, don't hold back on my account. As a strait-laced, non-pothead 63-y-o from the UK I'm finding writing an 18-y-o US pothead difficult to say the least. Fun but difficult.
Spanker may be able to do it much better.
spankersam[/i] [B]Hello Blacksnake. Loved the idea of contributing to this story. Would like to write from the sons point of view. you can send anything you think relevant my way. Will submit back to you to get your ideas on what i write. [/B][/QUOTE] [QUOTE][i]Originally posted by BlackSnake said:
Please, don't hold back on my account. As a strait-laced, non-pothead 63-y-o from the UK I'm finding writing an 18-y-o US pothead difficult to say the least. Fun but difficult.
Spanker may be able to do it much better.
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Re: Like the idea and want to contribute.
You heard the man...go for it.
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You heard the man...go for it.
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Feedback
When you get feedback from readers about what we are doing her, just let it go. I didn't put anything on the original story to let the readers know what is going own. I am answering the emails where they are making their email addresses available.
When you get feedback from readers about what we are doing her, just let it go. I didn't put anything on the original story to let the readers know what is going own. I am answering the emails where they are making their email addresses available.
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replys of the nutters.
I did my best and i am glad you liked it black Snake
however this is the first coments i had back from the idiots.
It is strange its anonymous as always.
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you do realise that you reissued a story by blacksnake don't you, the amanda
thompson story?
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As you stole this tory...please remember in the USA we use the terms cunt
and ass...what is this arse bull shit...also if you keeping the story line
ging that you stole get Amanda in some cunt munching sessions with mom..also
mom has to do anything Kenneth says so make her a cunt munching son fucking
slave
I did my best and i am glad you liked it black Snake
however this is the first coments i had back from the idiots.
It is strange its anonymous as always.
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you do realise that you reissued a story by blacksnake don't you, the amanda
thompson story?
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As you stole this tory...please remember in the USA we use the terms cunt
and ass...what is this arse bull shit...also if you keeping the story line
ging that you stole get Amanda in some cunt munching sessions with mom..also
mom has to do anything Kenneth says so make her a cunt munching son fucking
slave
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Re: replys of the nutters.
This is exactly what I was referring to. I sent readers messages about this, but there is nothing I could do about an anonymous feedback response.
I think the last respondant took the story a bit too seriously.
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Carl,
It was something I asked her and a couple of other writers on Lit to do. It was to tell the same story from each character's point of view. Having different writers doing it would as add a new prospective.
Lexium and CharmBrights are also re-writing the story from other character's POV.
I'm working on part 2 of the story. This was only an experiment for discusion
Thanks,
BlackSnake
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MsLinnet said:
This is exactly what I was referring to. I sent readers messages about this, but there is nothing I could do about an anonymous feedback response.
I think the last respondant took the story a bit too seriously.
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Carl,
It was something I asked her and a couple of other writers on Lit to do. It was to tell the same story from each character's point of view. Having different writers doing it would as add a new prospective.
Lexium and CharmBrights are also re-writing the story from other character's POV.
I'm working on part 2 of the story. This was only an experiment for discusion
Thanks,
BlackSnake
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MsLinnet said:not a problem
love lin
I love you too
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Amanda's Story (The Next Day)
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You may recall from my recent encounter with my brother, that I had suddenly become aware of something very significant. My brother was hung like a donkey and was willing to fuck me at a drop of a hat; Mom and Kenneth where going away for the weekend. I was told that under no circumstances was Steven to have a party, and I being the loyal daughter I agreed.
I knew that I had a body that men desired. The more I teased and tempted them, the more they wanted it. My brother was no exception to this. I recalled how powerful I had felt since yesterdays hasty fuck in the games room while flaunting myself in front of my brothers I remembered the look of lust and desire in his face as he peered at me when I sat opposite him at the breakfast table.
Mom was dressed in a white silk kimono that showed of her curves nicely, she had a good body and more than once I had hoped to be as good looking as her when I got to her age. As we sat there Kenneth came in wearing a black kimono that matched moms except for the colour. The first thing he did was kiss me on the top of my head and then went over to mom and rubbed his hands over her rounded arse pulling the kimono up giving us a flash of her soft cheeks, mom stepped away from him and it dropped back into place as she continued to preparer his breakfast.
Steven and I just sat at the table as if nothing had happened but I think Kenneth knew that we had seen it all. He turned around and the bulge in the kimono made me aware he was horny and looking for a piece of arse. I got up and announced I was going to take a shower and walked out of the room swaying my arse as I had done to get Kenneth’s attention the day before and when into my bedroom and removed my night shirt as I walked in. I turned on the shower and stepped into its southing stream and I showered away all of the remnants of the nights sleep.
As I washed I realised my arse was still a bit sore from the pounding it had the day before, so after I dried myself off I rubbed some KY jelly around my arse hole to stop it bruising, I was just pushing some inside my hole when I heard Stevens voice.” Just the right position for what I had in mind.” He said with a sly smile.
“Get the fuck out.” I said but only half meaning It, he took a step into my room and I tried to get up of my bed but he was to quick for me and was holding me face down with me bent over the edge.
“Now you were doing something when I came in let me help you he said.” Picking up the tube of KY and applying a generous amount over my anus.
“Oh dear with all your wriggling I have spilt loads I had better massage it in.” he said as I felt his fingers push on my arse bud and his hands work their magic on my round, peachy arse cheeks, I tantalizingly raise them to allow him better access to my rose bud, but He move his hands all over my bottom. It feels good and I tell him as much.
I turn my head to catch a glimpse of the bulge in his trousers; I knew it wouldn’t be long before his meaty length would be pounding into me once again. I reached back and fumbled with the zip on his trousers and pulled his length away from its confines, I pumped it a few times just to get it in the mood then I guided it toward my arse hole where I wanted it to plunder.
“Go on fuck my arse.” I said as I held it against my puckered little hole, I felt him lunge forward and his length began to stretch my ring, I let out a grown as the head of his monster entered my arse for the first time.
I spread my legs wide and pushed back on him as inch by inch he vanished into my personal hole It hurt a bit as the first inch of it went in, but the further it went, the easier it became. I could feel the lubrication lining the walls of my anus as he pushed his prick deep into my anus and began to get into a rhythm.
I began to grown with each forward thrust of my brother’s master full prick I reached underneath me with one hand and began to finger my pussy soon finding my clit. I began to milk it trying to make myself cum; I soon began to feel that nice hot, tingly sensation start to wrack through me. I couldn't scream, but my body shuddered as orgasmic waves pulsed through me. This caused my arse muscles to contract even tighter and that was enough to send Steven over the edge. He started to groan and then I felt his hot liquid hit my insides. He pumped and pumped at me for ages and at the same time he was calling me, a filthy whore and I knew that exactly what I was.
No one I knew would fuck there own brother but in my case it was worth it. I could feel Stevens semen trickling out of my arse as he pulled his spunk covered prick out of me, then he turned me to face him and I slipped onto my knees on the floor he pushed his prick towards my mouth then grabbed my hair and told me to suck it and I opened my mouth to let him use me as he wished.
I ran my tongue all over his length and then slipped my mouth down over it taking his once again hardening prick into my mouth as soon as it was safely inside he began to pump and it was soon sliding down my throat.
I ran my teeth down over his length and this sent Steven over the edge. He pulled back and slipped out of my gaping mouth just as a jet of white liquid came out of the eye of his penis and straight into my open mouth. “Oh baby, sweet baby, swallow it all down like the cock sucking whore I know you are” Steven pleaded.
“Hey, good shot Steven. None on the lips, all down the hole. Have you two been practising this?” My knees buckled in shock as I swallowed the last of Stevens’s semen, before looking through Stevens’s legs at the door to my bedroom in horror to see Kenneth’s figure standing in the jar.
He walked into my room shutting the door behind him. “Now if you have quite finished it’s my turn.” Steven got up and left the room and Kenneth sat on the edge of the bed opened his kimono and I started to suck on the second my cock of the day.
I looked up at him as he said "Suck it angle.” I began slowly to slurp on his big black semi hard cock it tasted sweet and I wondered if it had come just out of my moms pussy or her arse, all I knew it had been somewhere and with each suck, it was getting harder and harder until it was pushing at the back of my throat.
Stevens cum was leaking from my arse and had now a pool on the floor but he didn’t seem to care about that as he pumped in and out of my mouth.
“It feels so damn good.” He said, But a few pumps later he pulled out of my mouth and told me to get on my hands and knees, and told me to lick the pool of cum up while he takes his pleasure and as I felt his big prick enter my pussy I began to lap at the cum off the floor as if I was the cat at the cream all the time Kenneth steadily pumped away at my love slit.
It felt like he was never going to cum so I tried to push the pace by smacking my arse back towards his thrusts this had the effect of increasing his pace and the force of his assault on my pussy, it felt so good having this man in my sex hole knowing he was fucking my mom as well made the experience only more enjoyable.
Two more thrust an I felt his prick jerk inside me and a torrent of cum splashed into my pussy all three holes filed I felt well and truly fucked and fell forward on to the floor exhausted but happy.
“Where’s mom.” I asked as Kenneth helped me up of the floor.
“She has just gone to the chemist the bitch has just come on, that fucks my plans for the weekend.”
“And they are?” I asked wondering exactly what mom had got us into as we knew nothing about this man except he was loaded and loved to fuck.
“Your mom was going to entertain a couple of clients of mine, they are in town for the night and its worth a lot of money to me, so I need to keep them happy.”
“You say entertain, what do you mean exactly?” Kenneth then when onto explain exactly what he wanted, I was to join the three men in there room and show them a good time after that we would go for a meal and then Kenneth would complete his business with the two men and then we would go to a club he knew, it was that simple.
“I will do it.” I said without another thought.
“I will need to have a bit of encouragement if you want me to fuck two complete strangers.”
“You will get $300 for the night and that’s it and if you are really good, I will give you a good fuck when we get home, now dress for me.”
“Can I shower first?”
“No I want you to look like a cum filed whore for staining the carpet, you are not to shower till I say so.” I looked in my wardrobe and found the perfect outfit. It was a mix of some of my old clothes and some of the new stuff that we had bought yesterday I took the outfit in my bedroom and while Kenneth sat on the edge of my bed while I fasten my fishnet stockings to the black suspenders, then pull on my new big shiny boots, I called them my fuck me boots and from the look on Kenneth’s face as I pulled them on I think they served their purpose.
They made me feel so powerful. I started doing up the laces, all the way up to just below my knees and then I stood there looking at myself in the mirror for a few moments. Messed up my hair, all the time I was looking at the reactions of Kenneth as I put on a black lace and satin push up bra supporting a my cleavage, down to black fishnet stockings held in place by the black suspender belt, then to finish I put on A black g-string over the suspenders so that it would be easier to take off, and then I said “I look good, even if I do say so myself.” I was amazed that Kenneth had another partial erection and he pulled the kimono apart.
I left the mirror, and returned to where I left him, His cock was already showing appreciation at my attire, but I wanted to tease him. So I ran my hands over the material that covers my breasts, smoothing them down over my stomach, down to my thighs and the tops of the stockings. I move my hands back up to my breasts. He was staring at me silently all the time.
I ran my hands over the material that was covering my breasts, running them down over my stomach, down to my thighs then to the tops of my stockings. My hands moved back up to my breasts.
I pulled my breasts slightly out of the bra, exposing my nipples then I start to play with them. I start to turn myself on; I then remove my bra and take a step closer to him. He opened his mouth and I press my left breast against his mouth; he licked it and sucked at my nipple. I began moaning, I could see that he's was getting really turned on, so I pull back and stood in front of him again.
I stood there running my hands over my own body and through my hair and I knew the effect I was having on him as his big black prick was standing to attention as if he hadn’t been fucked for a month.
I turned to face him again and I placed my legs either side of him then I slowly lowered myself onto his cock, it slides easily inside me as it had only a short while earlier. He groaned with pleasure, and I move slowly up again, then down hard and fast onto my master’s hard shaft. I do all of the work, he just sat back as I began rubbing my clit against him and pressing my pussy into him. Grinding and bucking against his body, onto his cock, up and down, hard and fast, slow and gentle.
I press my breasts against his chest and he kisses and licks my skin. My movements become more urgent, as I start playing with my clit with one hand, this tips me over the edge and I hold tightly to his body as my orgasm floods through me.
I feel my juices smearing our thighs, making us sticky. This new found wetness does it for him and I feel his cock spasm and just before he cum’s I jump off of him and take his cock between my breasts so he shoots his load all over my chest. I smile, looking up at him. Now that we're finished I kiss him, while he tells me I'm the greatest fuck in the world.
What happens during the rest of the day you will just have to wait and see?
Love linnet.
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You may recall from my recent encounter with my brother, that I had suddenly become aware of something very significant. My brother was hung like a donkey and was willing to fuck me at a drop of a hat; Mom and Kenneth where going away for the weekend. I was told that under no circumstances was Steven to have a party, and I being the loyal daughter I agreed.
I knew that I had a body that men desired. The more I teased and tempted them, the more they wanted it. My brother was no exception to this. I recalled how powerful I had felt since yesterdays hasty fuck in the games room while flaunting myself in front of my brothers I remembered the look of lust and desire in his face as he peered at me when I sat opposite him at the breakfast table.
Mom was dressed in a white silk kimono that showed of her curves nicely, she had a good body and more than once I had hoped to be as good looking as her when I got to her age. As we sat there Kenneth came in wearing a black kimono that matched moms except for the colour. The first thing he did was kiss me on the top of my head and then went over to mom and rubbed his hands over her rounded arse pulling the kimono up giving us a flash of her soft cheeks, mom stepped away from him and it dropped back into place as she continued to preparer his breakfast.
Steven and I just sat at the table as if nothing had happened but I think Kenneth knew that we had seen it all. He turned around and the bulge in the kimono made me aware he was horny and looking for a piece of arse. I got up and announced I was going to take a shower and walked out of the room swaying my arse as I had done to get Kenneth’s attention the day before and when into my bedroom and removed my night shirt as I walked in. I turned on the shower and stepped into its southing stream and I showered away all of the remnants of the nights sleep.
As I washed I realised my arse was still a bit sore from the pounding it had the day before, so after I dried myself off I rubbed some KY jelly around my arse hole to stop it bruising, I was just pushing some inside my hole when I heard Stevens voice.” Just the right position for what I had in mind.” He said with a sly smile.
“Get the fuck out.” I said but only half meaning It, he took a step into my room and I tried to get up of my bed but he was to quick for me and was holding me face down with me bent over the edge.
“Now you were doing something when I came in let me help you he said.” Picking up the tube of KY and applying a generous amount over my anus.
“Oh dear with all your wriggling I have spilt loads I had better massage it in.” he said as I felt his fingers push on my arse bud and his hands work their magic on my round, peachy arse cheeks, I tantalizingly raise them to allow him better access to my rose bud, but He move his hands all over my bottom. It feels good and I tell him as much.
I turn my head to catch a glimpse of the bulge in his trousers; I knew it wouldn’t be long before his meaty length would be pounding into me once again. I reached back and fumbled with the zip on his trousers and pulled his length away from its confines, I pumped it a few times just to get it in the mood then I guided it toward my arse hole where I wanted it to plunder.
“Go on fuck my arse.” I said as I held it against my puckered little hole, I felt him lunge forward and his length began to stretch my ring, I let out a grown as the head of his monster entered my arse for the first time.
I spread my legs wide and pushed back on him as inch by inch he vanished into my personal hole It hurt a bit as the first inch of it went in, but the further it went, the easier it became. I could feel the lubrication lining the walls of my anus as he pushed his prick deep into my anus and began to get into a rhythm.
I began to grown with each forward thrust of my brother’s master full prick I reached underneath me with one hand and began to finger my pussy soon finding my clit. I began to milk it trying to make myself cum; I soon began to feel that nice hot, tingly sensation start to wrack through me. I couldn't scream, but my body shuddered as orgasmic waves pulsed through me. This caused my arse muscles to contract even tighter and that was enough to send Steven over the edge. He started to groan and then I felt his hot liquid hit my insides. He pumped and pumped at me for ages and at the same time he was calling me, a filthy whore and I knew that exactly what I was.
No one I knew would fuck there own brother but in my case it was worth it. I could feel Stevens semen trickling out of my arse as he pulled his spunk covered prick out of me, then he turned me to face him and I slipped onto my knees on the floor he pushed his prick towards my mouth then grabbed my hair and told me to suck it and I opened my mouth to let him use me as he wished.
I ran my tongue all over his length and then slipped my mouth down over it taking his once again hardening prick into my mouth as soon as it was safely inside he began to pump and it was soon sliding down my throat.
I ran my teeth down over his length and this sent Steven over the edge. He pulled back and slipped out of my gaping mouth just as a jet of white liquid came out of the eye of his penis and straight into my open mouth. “Oh baby, sweet baby, swallow it all down like the cock sucking whore I know you are” Steven pleaded.
“Hey, good shot Steven. None on the lips, all down the hole. Have you two been practising this?” My knees buckled in shock as I swallowed the last of Stevens’s semen, before looking through Stevens’s legs at the door to my bedroom in horror to see Kenneth’s figure standing in the jar.
He walked into my room shutting the door behind him. “Now if you have quite finished it’s my turn.” Steven got up and left the room and Kenneth sat on the edge of the bed opened his kimono and I started to suck on the second my cock of the day.
I looked up at him as he said "Suck it angle.” I began slowly to slurp on his big black semi hard cock it tasted sweet and I wondered if it had come just out of my moms pussy or her arse, all I knew it had been somewhere and with each suck, it was getting harder and harder until it was pushing at the back of my throat.
Stevens cum was leaking from my arse and had now a pool on the floor but he didn’t seem to care about that as he pumped in and out of my mouth.
“It feels so damn good.” He said, But a few pumps later he pulled out of my mouth and told me to get on my hands and knees, and told me to lick the pool of cum up while he takes his pleasure and as I felt his big prick enter my pussy I began to lap at the cum off the floor as if I was the cat at the cream all the time Kenneth steadily pumped away at my love slit.
It felt like he was never going to cum so I tried to push the pace by smacking my arse back towards his thrusts this had the effect of increasing his pace and the force of his assault on my pussy, it felt so good having this man in my sex hole knowing he was fucking my mom as well made the experience only more enjoyable.
Two more thrust an I felt his prick jerk inside me and a torrent of cum splashed into my pussy all three holes filed I felt well and truly fucked and fell forward on to the floor exhausted but happy.
“Where’s mom.” I asked as Kenneth helped me up of the floor.
“She has just gone to the chemist the bitch has just come on, that fucks my plans for the weekend.”
“And they are?” I asked wondering exactly what mom had got us into as we knew nothing about this man except he was loaded and loved to fuck.
“Your mom was going to entertain a couple of clients of mine, they are in town for the night and its worth a lot of money to me, so I need to keep them happy.”
“You say entertain, what do you mean exactly?” Kenneth then when onto explain exactly what he wanted, I was to join the three men in there room and show them a good time after that we would go for a meal and then Kenneth would complete his business with the two men and then we would go to a club he knew, it was that simple.
“I will do it.” I said without another thought.
“I will need to have a bit of encouragement if you want me to fuck two complete strangers.”
“You will get $300 for the night and that’s it and if you are really good, I will give you a good fuck when we get home, now dress for me.”
“Can I shower first?”
“No I want you to look like a cum filed whore for staining the carpet, you are not to shower till I say so.” I looked in my wardrobe and found the perfect outfit. It was a mix of some of my old clothes and some of the new stuff that we had bought yesterday I took the outfit in my bedroom and while Kenneth sat on the edge of my bed while I fasten my fishnet stockings to the black suspenders, then pull on my new big shiny boots, I called them my fuck me boots and from the look on Kenneth’s face as I pulled them on I think they served their purpose.
They made me feel so powerful. I started doing up the laces, all the way up to just below my knees and then I stood there looking at myself in the mirror for a few moments. Messed up my hair, all the time I was looking at the reactions of Kenneth as I put on a black lace and satin push up bra supporting a my cleavage, down to black fishnet stockings held in place by the black suspender belt, then to finish I put on A black g-string over the suspenders so that it would be easier to take off, and then I said “I look good, even if I do say so myself.” I was amazed that Kenneth had another partial erection and he pulled the kimono apart.
I left the mirror, and returned to where I left him, His cock was already showing appreciation at my attire, but I wanted to tease him. So I ran my hands over the material that covers my breasts, smoothing them down over my stomach, down to my thighs and the tops of the stockings. I move my hands back up to my breasts. He was staring at me silently all the time.
I ran my hands over the material that was covering my breasts, running them down over my stomach, down to my thighs then to the tops of my stockings. My hands moved back up to my breasts.
I pulled my breasts slightly out of the bra, exposing my nipples then I start to play with them. I start to turn myself on; I then remove my bra and take a step closer to him. He opened his mouth and I press my left breast against his mouth; he licked it and sucked at my nipple. I began moaning, I could see that he's was getting really turned on, so I pull back and stood in front of him again.
I stood there running my hands over my own body and through my hair and I knew the effect I was having on him as his big black prick was standing to attention as if he hadn’t been fucked for a month.
I turned to face him again and I placed my legs either side of him then I slowly lowered myself onto his cock, it slides easily inside me as it had only a short while earlier. He groaned with pleasure, and I move slowly up again, then down hard and fast onto my master’s hard shaft. I do all of the work, he just sat back as I began rubbing my clit against him and pressing my pussy into him. Grinding and bucking against his body, onto his cock, up and down, hard and fast, slow and gentle.
I press my breasts against his chest and he kisses and licks my skin. My movements become more urgent, as I start playing with my clit with one hand, this tips me over the edge and I hold tightly to his body as my orgasm floods through me.
I feel my juices smearing our thighs, making us sticky. This new found wetness does it for him and I feel his cock spasm and just before he cum’s I jump off of him and take his cock between my breasts so he shoots his load all over my chest. I smile, looking up at him. Now that we're finished I kiss him, while he tells me I'm the greatest fuck in the world.
What happens during the rest of the day you will just have to wait and see?
Love linnet.
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MsLinnet
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Puppi said:I've been wondering this for a while now...
I've noticed that on a few different threads you have posted "stories"... Why? Why don't you just submit them to Lit instead of taking up thread space with them?
I got a lot of stick over the last one I did. So I have posted them here for discussion and comment on structure and subject so far the emails i have recived have been very positive for both storys.
but thanks for your comment
BlackSnake
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Your story
Wow baby! and I thought I was doing something with my AV! Nice ass! Wanna fuck!
Seriously, I like the story. Sorry I've been away. Really busy, but in a great way.
Wow baby! and I thought I was doing something with my AV! Nice ass! Wanna fuck!
Seriously, I like the story. Sorry I've been away. Really busy, but in a great way.
Quasimodem
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This is not a gripe. I enjoy experimental writing, but I wonder if you realize that this type of format has been done commercially.
"The Collector" by John Fowles involved a social misfit who "collected" a girl and kept her captive in his basement.
The story starts from his point of view, and the strength of Fowles' writing is that he almost convinces you that the guy's fantasy may actually come true. The readers are almost lulled into suspending their disbelief that this is in actuality nothing less than a kidnapping, with eventual seduction or outright rape, the logical outcome.
When the POV changes to that of the girl, we are quickly disabused of our error, turned about, 180 degrees, to see just how vile what we had been tricked into enjoying, really is, from the victim's POV.
One of the things that you might consider, if you try this form again, or if you recall and reissue this as a single collective, is breaking from one POV to anther POV before getting all the way through to the end.
In that way, even though the reader has been led through 2, 3, or even 4 dissimilar impressions of the same event, the story will maintain it's suspense until the end, when you reveal one vision of how it came out -- bang -- another different vision of how it came out -- bang -- an even more different vision of how it came out.
By careful manipulation of the order of introductory POV, how much you hold back, and -- again -- the order in which you reveal the various POV conclusions; the fact that you are covering the same event more than once can strengthen the suspense, rather than dilute the story.
"The Collector" by John Fowles involved a social misfit who "collected" a girl and kept her captive in his basement.
The story starts from his point of view, and the strength of Fowles' writing is that he almost convinces you that the guy's fantasy may actually come true. The readers are almost lulled into suspending their disbelief that this is in actuality nothing less than a kidnapping, with eventual seduction or outright rape, the logical outcome.
When the POV changes to that of the girl, we are quickly disabused of our error, turned about, 180 degrees, to see just how vile what we had been tricked into enjoying, really is, from the victim's POV.
One of the things that you might consider, if you try this form again, or if you recall and reissue this as a single collective, is breaking from one POV to anther POV before getting all the way through to the end.
In that way, even though the reader has been led through 2, 3, or even 4 dissimilar impressions of the same event, the story will maintain it's suspense until the end, when you reveal one vision of how it came out -- bang -- another different vision of how it came out -- bang -- an even more different vision of how it came out.
By careful manipulation of the order of introductory POV, how much you hold back, and -- again -- the order in which you reveal the various POV conclusions; the fact that you are covering the same event more than once can strengthen the suspense, rather than dilute the story.
