Tanka Very Much!

bronzeage said:
I don't take anything serious, but myself. :rose:
AROUSED - just in case anyone was paying attention..]

Actually Poppy, he didn't make that up, but I did forget to mention it. However, this is my thread and Bronze is co-moderator, so, if he wishes to make a rule, so be it.

I like the challenge. :heart:
 
babygrrl_702 said:
AROUSED - just in case anyone was paying attention..]

Actually Poppy, he didn't make that up, but I did forget to mention it. However, this is my thread and Bronze is co-moderator, so, if he wishes to make a rule, so be it.

I like the challenge. :heart:

Okey dokey! :D

I'm just gonna watch for a while longer. LOL. Thanks for the invite and encouragement, bronzeage...but I just can't get it...at least not today.
 
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babygrrl_702 said:
Consumed by your eyes
my heart melts like chocolate
yet still beats, harder.
Under your gaze, your fingers
your body, I am aroused.

If I cannot have
your eyes, give me your mouth - please
Softly mobile -
teasing, so tantalizing
imagination aroused.

Aroused and ready
for your delightful pleasure,
and hunger, I need
no lessons or recipe
to prepare the meal I bring.
 
bronzeage said:
Aroused and ready
for your delightful pleasure,
and hunger, I need
no lessons or recipe
to prepare the meal I bring.


Bring me nothing but
an unadorned love to be
my very own. And we
shall lie together always,
day after day, forever.


:cool:
 
Remec said:
Bring me nothing but
an unadorned love to be
my very own. And we
shall lie together always,
day after day, forever.


:cool:

Forever - never
sweeter than in your strong arms
nestled on your chest.
Your heart thunders in my ear
and fur caresses my skin.
 
Skin has dreams that make
me Scream as I detox in my
Way...Romantic no...
But I keep working on it
i hoped for help here

Ok...I followed the rules...lol
 
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babygrrl_702 said:
Forever - never
sweeter than in your strong arms
nestled on your chest.
Your heart thunders in my ear
and fur caresses my skin.

Skin me alive, flay
me without mercy if I
ever release you from
my embrace. Your place is here,
held tight, never to leave me.
 
Me...last one I write
We all focus on the me in us
Well...I gave you some
You did not want to see it
I do not blame you so much

:)
 
Much is far too much
To ask from me on this night
When all that we are
Can be taken so swiftly
With naught left to give but trust

I will meet the next challenge ;)
 
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slyc_willie said:
Much is far too much
To ask from me on this night
When all that we are
Can be taken so swiftly
With naught left to give but trust

I will meet the next challenge ;)


Trust in my sweet words,
have faith in my beating heart -
be soothed by my smile.
My hands are held out to you
step surely into my arms.
 
AnadaAtSea said:
Trust in my sweet words,
have faith in my beating heart -
be soothed by my smile.
My hands are held out to you
step surely into my arms.

Arms are tools that bind
and hurt and maim and destroy
Yet not without reprieve
they may hold, heal and support
and with enough strength, may love
 
Welcome slyc and Anada!

slyc_willie said:
Arms are tools that bind
and hurt and maim and destroy
Yet not without reprieve
they may hold, heal and support
and with enough strength, may love

Love me with your words
I hear sensual promise
Love me with your hands
I feel your firey heat
Love me with your heart - I do.
 
babygrrl_702 said:
Welcome slyc and Anada!



Love me with your words
I hear sensual promise
Love me with your hands
I feel your firey heat
Love me with your heart - I do.

Do I dare believe
my weak words have broken through
your heart's walled city?
At the citidal I stand.
I will entrench and besiege.
 
bronzeage said:
Do I dare believe
my weak words have broken through
your heart's walled city?
At the citidal I stand.
I will entrench and besiege.


Besiege my heart with soft
words and precious, lovely gifts;
You'll soon gain perch on
unguarded battlements, and
breach disinterested walls.
 
Walls are broken down
Steel bands around my heart break
You have opened me.
Unfolded like a flower
before you I am exposed.
 
babygrrl_702 said:
Walls are broken down
Steel bands around my heart break
You have opened me.
Unfolded like a flower
before you I am exposed.

Exposed and open
flowers catch more sun and rain
feeding the color
that pulls hungry humming bird
to taste, stabbing his tongue deep.
 
OMG....

bronzeage said:
Exposed and open
flowers catch more sun and rain
feeding the color
that pulls hungry humming bird
to taste, stabbing his tongue deep.

Deep ocean blue
waves crashing relentlessly
on the sandy shore
remind me of your loving
Roaring, pounding on my ass.
 
babygrrl_702 said:
OMG....



Deep ocean blue
waves crashing relentlessly
on the sandy shore
remind me of your loving
Roaring, pounding on my ass.

Ass up and head down,
don't let me be rougher than
you like, your delighted
screams make me hammer harder,
This nail is never pulling loose.
 
bronzeage said:
Ass up and head down,
don't let me be rougher than
you like, your delighted
screams make me hammer harder,
This nail is never pulling loose.

Loose and slickery
when your enthusiastic
ecstatic labor
makes me scream, urgent for you
slower, deeper, faster - noooowwww....

*grin*
 
babygrrl_702 said:
Loose and slickery
when your enthusiastic
ecstatic labor
makes me scream, urgent for you
slower, deeper, faster - noooowwww....

*grin*

How many syllables are in nooooowwww?

Now, let me hear words
telling me lust filled desire
as your ear hears me
voice my rhetorical whisper
demand, tell me what you want.
 
bronzeage said:
How many syllables are in nooooowwww?

Now, let me hear words
telling me lust filled desire
as your ear hears me
voice my rhetorical whisper
demand, tell me what you want.

Thanks for welcoming me! I'm enjoying this immensely. Now . . . .

Want, desire and need
I feel it all when with you
tasting, invading you
Then comes that glorious rush,
that heavenly death . . . I'm spent

(note: not specifically directed at you, Bronze. lol)
 
slyc_willie said:
Want, desire and need
I feel it all when with you
tasting, invading you
Then comes that glorious rush,
that heavenly death . . . I'm spent


Spent my last nickel
on the old-fashioned jukebox
just to hear our song
play one last time, while I drank
champagne for two and missed you.
 
Remec said:
Spent my last nickel
on the old-fashioned jukebox
just to hear our song
play one last time, while I drank
champagne for two and missed you.

You remain with me
Over time and across pain
your kiss, your sweet touch
I need it still, I crave it
Soon, we shall share it again

(This one's for Charlotte)
 
There are some lovely tankas here gentlemen. :kiss:

slyc_willie said:
You remain with me
Over time and across pain
your kiss, your sweet touch
I need it still, I crave it
Soon, we shall share it again


Again it is time
to reflect on desire -
what I want and how.
Slow, sweet and scintillating
Or rough and raw, so urgent?
 
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