ViciousTease
*his personal tease*
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JennyNo1
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Pardon me, but I believe asses fall under my jurisdiction.
*hands off the ass duties to VT*
ViciousTease
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*grabs the belt*
Ahh, but it was your ass that you mentioned. Now, how do you want to do this ... ??
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Amalgamation
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Oh what a wild night! You ladies left stuff everywhere!!
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My story got published today, I guess. 3 star ratings.
SquirtnBrat
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Yay, I'll have to go vote! The comment that says you should change your name to Analgamation! Rofl!
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makemewet69
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Well it left me all hot and bothered. I rated it for you. Remember it's only day 1. Mine has steadily climbed from the 3's to a 4.12 (I think is what it's hanging at now). And you get fucktards who will 1 bomb you, which sucks.
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Oh, I'm not upset. I just enjoy the writing. Thank you though! What do I have to do to justify your rating?
makemewet69
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Oh, I'm not upset. I just enjoy the writing. Thank you though! What do I have to do to justify your rating?
Sexual favors are always nice
lol
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Sexual favors are always nice
That was implied...
makemewet69
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I'm not good with subtle lol
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Would you notice me
If you saw me passing you
On the street
Among all of the other creatures..
Would I stand out?
If my mouth were
Not on this screen
But were hailing a taxi
In your city
Would you dream of this tongue
Turning you out?
I'm ordinary.
Nothing extra special.
Invisible mostly,
Unless you see between the lines,
Because there...
In the land where brains is brawn
And thoughts are six packs
And wordplay equates
To one big, black cock,
There...
I'm special.
There, I'm the shit.
In the land where romance matters
And affection is erotica
And softness is hardcore porn
As well as cum shots and cheesy music,
In the place where eyes are the best one-liners
Where stares and gazes cause stars and gushing
I'm your Alpha Male
The creature who creates
Hell.
Otherwise,
I'm me.
Extraordinary me.
Invisible me.
Me.
If you saw me passing you
On the street
Among all of the other creatures..
Would I stand out?
If my mouth were
Not on this screen
But were hailing a taxi
In your city
Would you dream of this tongue
Turning you out?
I'm ordinary.
Nothing extra special.
Invisible mostly,
Unless you see between the lines,
Because there...
In the land where brains is brawn
And thoughts are six packs
And wordplay equates
To one big, black cock,
There...
I'm special.
There, I'm the shit.
In the land where romance matters
And affection is erotica
And softness is hardcore porn
As well as cum shots and cheesy music,
In the place where eyes are the best one-liners
Where stares and gazes cause stars and gushing
I'm your Alpha Male
The creature who creates
Hell.
Otherwise,
I'm me.
Extraordinary me.
Invisible me.
Me.
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Amalgamation
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A blatant girl, huh?
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Amalgamation
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5 stars!
You're sweet! Thank you!
makemewet69
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I submitted a story this afternoon. I wrote it back in January and never submitted it to be published. I tweaked it a little and hit submit.
I've been working on a longer piece since June that's real and very special to me. I think that's why I am having a hard time writing it. I just can't find the right words to use. I am up to 8 pages, so it's not huge, but longer than the one that is published.
I've been working on a longer piece since June that's real and very special to me. I think that's why I am having a hard time writing it. I just can't find the right words to use. I am up to 8 pages, so it's not huge, but longer than the one that is published.
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Amalgamation
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I'm not much of a story writer. I can't wait to read yours though!
makemewet69
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I'm in a writing mood. I put a poem on CJ's thread, Poetry in Motion, a little while ago. Poetry is not a strength of mine lol
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Lol. It takes all kinds!
Backdoor_Bella
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SquirtnBrat
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MMW - please let us know when you submit. I have many pieces like that. You know the point you want to make but saying it in a way to make an impact can be tough.
I have yet to submit any. Too shy and my pieces never feel finished and polished to me. I applaud your bravery.
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Indeed!
SquirtnBrat
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"In the place where eyes are the best one-liners
Where stares and gazes cause stars and gushing"
Great use of your words!
Where stares and gazes cause stars and gushing"
Great use of your words!
