The Captive

[makofin]

Mako stared at the goodlooking captive kneeling on the floor. He ignored Dana's hateful glares, listening to Paul's talk about ransoming the rich bitch captive off. He really didn't care, one way or the other,what happened to her...but she had seen their faces, and knew their names ! Therefor....

" Will you look at that !" Mako exclaimed, "Her nipples are getting hard !"

" Thats because I'm cold, you fool !" she declared, with a defiant look on her face.

" YOU ARE YOU CALLING A FOOL ?" Suddenly Mako was on his feet, glaring down at her. Angelique bowed her head, looking away from him, saying nothing.

" I think you need to learn a little respect...miss high class...maybe your rich husband spoils and pampers you...but he ain't here now, is he ?" Mako sneered, reaching down to yank her to her feet ! He then sat back down, pulling her across his lap...and with a grin, he raised his hand....

 

[angelique127]

It all happened so fast...one moment I was on my knees on the floor, freezing...and the next thing I knew, I was across this..this monsters lap !!!
" OH NO...PLEASE DON"T....I"M S-SO SORRY I SAID THAT !"
I felt the first slap sting my ass cheeks...I could only twist and squirm, the handcuffs preventing me from doing much else...
"OH....MY GOD !!!! HOW DARE YOU !!!" I cried, suddenly angry...and humiliated !
Then I heard him laugh, and I felt my panties being pulled down to my knees....exposing my butte cheeks for all to see. I closed my eyes, trying to hold back the tears...and tensed, waiting for the next slap...


" Oh please...I said I was sorry" I pleaded,when nothing more happened....

 

[RadicalFlower]

dana

OHH for crying out loud.!! All i do is shake my head ..and go and grab a beer...
Looking over at Paul again and shaking my head... Thinking to myself PLEASE dont let him Damage our insurance to become rich...Staying out of it Like paul Wanted me too..But Cant help it .. I bite my bottom lip and keep to mysefl ..Trying so hard as to not Stop mako From Hurting her too bad...Mako What the hell man !!!...looking The captive in the eyes seeing her Fear and Pain..Thinking again..What if that was me...just staring ..What should i do ...??

 

[poohlive]

Paul kneeled down, taking the captive's head in his hands, and wiped a single tear from her cheek. She had a youthful look, young, innocent, he could almost see her in a summer dress on some front lawn having a business party with a martini in one hand, and a cigarette in the other.
It almost made him sick.
"Sweetheart," He spoke softly, calmly, "We're not at your country club, all right? This isn't a casual get together, and you definitely weren't on the invitation list. You're crashing my party, and I think you, of all people, know how party crashers are supposed to act if they want to stay at the party."
He motioned for Mako to stop, and helped the woman up to her feet. He didn't think for the moment she felt like sitting, her ass as red as a baboon's at the moment. It almost completed the rest of her outfit. She was looking more and more like a submissive bitch as time went on.
"You be nice, you treat us with respect, even throw in a Sir... or Mister from time to time, and I'll make sure we're as sweet as pie to you during your visit. Mako has a real eye set on you, and if you think the shit you're wearing now is bad... I'd ask you to speak outright again, and we'll just see what other little toys he might bring out."
Paul poured himself another drink, getting one for the captive as well.
"You still haven't told me your name..."

 

[angelique127]

" Thank you for s-saving me from that b-b- brute." I said, nodding towards a smirking Mako, " M-my name is Angelique Lewis, and as I told you, I am married to a very w-w-wealthy man..we live in Riverside...in a large mansion ! My husband will pay alot, to get me back...unharmed of course ! And if you let me go...I PROMISE NOT to tell anyone who you are."

I could only hope that they believed me, and would release me...but I was not very sure if they would even consider the ransome offer...they had ALOT of money already, from the bank robbery. Still...I could only hope that their greed would sway their decision.
" Please...sir", I addressed Paul, " I'm so cold...couldn't I at least have something ...anything to wear ?"
Mako snorted, and I was aware that my nipples were hard...and I did not like the way he was looking at me...I felt so vurnable....

 

[poohlive]

Paul rolled his eyes, looking at Mako as he shook his head, although a slight smile was on his face. The man was notorious for his actions, and sometimes Paul couldn't help but just stand back and let the man do his work.
Although, this required a little bit of delicacy. If it were some bitch, he'd let Mako have his way with the woman, but she did hold some power after all. Not soo much the money, he didn't give a shit, but a few local calls to her sphere's of influence, and they'd be nothing more than a blip on the police radar.
Angelique... she was Mako's play thing after all. He unbottoned his own shirt, letting her drape it around her shoulders.
"Sounds good enough to me. I don't know about Mako though. You see, we're all different people, and you need to convince us in different ways. Dana here is all about the money, she has a couple of million on that table, and more in the car, but it's still not enough for her. Whatever we can get out of the deal for you will be all the sweeter for you...
"Now, I on the other hand, just don't want to be running from the law all my life. I would rather have this little incident go away as fast as possible. You can do that, so you convinced me..."
Paul took a swig from the bourbon, not bothering to put it into a glass anymore. He sat down, looking at her stand in that awkward way, almost reminded him of the way a woman stands when she's been fucked good and hard.
He felt himself stir a little bit.
"But, then, we've got Mako here. He doesn't care much about jail, I'd imagine he's been in and out of jail most of his life, and the money... while it's good to have it, he doesn't really care. Mako's always had one thing on his mind... and one thing only."
Paul shrugged his shoulders, as if this were fate, and nothing he could do about it, "What have you got to convince our little psycho biker that we should let you go unharmed..."

 

[makofin]

Mako dissappeared into the back bedroom and grabbed his stolen digital camera from the dresser. He hung the strap around his neck, before returning to the living room. He walked directly over to the table, and with a swipe of his arm, knocked the piles of money onto the floor, clearing a space on it.

" Okay...Angel...climb on top of the table !" Mako demanded.
Angelique looked horrified..." What for ?"
" Because I said too ! NOW GIT YOUR HIGH CLASS ASS ON UP THERE !"
" I can't...my hands are cuffed, you moron !"
" WHAT DID YOU CALL ME ?" Mako shouted, moving towards her...
Paul stepped forward, and removed the handcuffs, " I think she meant to say 'SIR'...didn't you ? Now come on and climb up there. Do what he says."
Paul assisted her...actually picking her up and placing her in a sitting position on the tabletop. Angelique , being able to finally use her hands, immediately covered her breasts...and gave Mako a defiant look.
Mako laughed, bringing the camera up to his eye, and aimed it at their unco-operative captive...snapping a picture. " Alright, take those hands away from your tits, before I cut em off...and smile purty now !"
Angelique obeyed, dropping her hands...but refused to smile, instead giving him a hateful sneer...
Mako snapped the picture anyway...
" I know you can do better than that...now I want you to smile this time...remember, your hubby may see these...pretend I'm him !"
The flash went off again...
" Okay darling...spread those legs for me...show us what you got !" Mako instructed....

 

[RadicalFlower]

Dana

Watching Paul with Angelique Hearing his kind words to her...I just sat and watched..Cause there was nothing i could do these two guys Would Beat me a pulp...All i could do is Watch as Mako Humiates her more and more...

Walking over ..come you guys.. Stop for a little while let her be... Stands in front of the cam and in between them and Angelique
Turning to face Her..smiling..hi..i thought maybe you would like something to eat and drink..Handing her a Sandwich and glass of Soda... Here ya go take it ..i promise it is ok..Nodding my head.. Still smiling...Go ahead....

Looking back at mako and paul.. I will be out of the way in a min..Just let her keep her strengh..up..

 

[RadicalFlower]

Bump.~~~ We still playing this one...

 

[poohlive]

Angel seemed to have left us.
While we're stopped for the moment, Makofin, could you take it a little easy controlling other characters? I find it a little odd when I come back and read my character did a bunch of things.

 

[makofin]

When Dana interupted the next scene by getting in the way...it was too much for Mako to handle ! First off...here she comes...walking in here like she owns the fucking place...throwing the money around, like it was half her's...when she didn't even participate in the course of the robbery !{ Which is a good thing in itself...she had wanted to drive the getaway car...but Mako had forbid it } and now she was interfering with his fun, by blocking his photos...cuddling up to their captive, for Christsakes !!!

" HEY PAUL...DO SOMETHING ABOUT YOUR GIRLFRIEND... BEFORE I DO !" Mako shouted. " Who the fuck cares if she is hungary...this ain't NO picnic !"

Mako was pissed...he had tried his best to ignore Dana, but it wasn't working.

"She is probably just jealous." he muttered...

 

[angelique127]

Sorry about the confusion, perhaps it is all our fault.

I find it impossiable to continue with this thread because...we are tired of hurting everyone's sensitive feelings...taking to much control of other's characters...as if it hasn't happened to us, a time or two !

This started out as a FANTASY thread...role playing, I think it is called...maybe we did not explain the facts...but Makofin and I are married { in REAL life } and DO share the same computer ! So when we BOTH play on the same thread, we usually see what EACH other ends up writing, before it is even posted...in other words, Poohlive, if he wants to move the story along in a certain FANTASY direction, it is OKAY with me....

So from now on, before we get involved, we will print a set of RULES that everyone will PLAY by...in fact we will have our post proofread before we post it ....to see if it meets with your approval first !

 

[makofin]

Makofin pulled the 357. mag from behind his jeans, and pointed the barrel within inches of Dana's head ...and delibertly squeezed the trigger...her pretty little head exploded...splashing blood and other matter across the room....

There was a STUNNED silence....Angelique's mouth hung open in pure horror....her face covered with blood !

" Dumb bitch..." Makofin laughed, before turning the weapon upon a very startled , shocked Paul... who fell to his knees...

" WHAT THE FUCK....HAVE YOU DONE ?"
Paul asked , amazed at the turn of events....his hands clutched in front of him, as if praying !

Mako sneered..." This ain't nothing but a mercy killing !!!"

Paul's head exploded like a watermelon...and his body actually slumped over, and after a few seconds of hesitation... hit the floor with a loud thump...

Angelique screamed....

" What the hell are you crying about ? Look at all that money we got !!!" Mako said, wiping the blood from his face....
" And that's what happens, if ya git pussywhipped ! "

 

[RadicalFlower]

Unknown to dumb ass, Dana is constently protected from evil By her goddess With a reflective protecting shield, So Just before the bullet gets to my head it is reflected and Bounces back to blow your fucking head off . turning and Smiling at the wasted pile of human flesh laying on the floor.. Shakes her head...Looks over at paul and smiles...... Then back at the captive..Leaving her sitting there...i was not in for JUst the money And leaves the money ..Says to paul Lets go you ready ...Leaving the captive and the money behind....

And walking Casuraly out the door..Still a big smile in my face...

(gotta love role playing..HAHAHA..it can be stoped.)

(OOC)Ok that was retarded...I thought this was role play ...and i dont know what i did ..i was just playing a chac..I didnt Play anybodys chac...and i think pooh sayed it nicely...He didnt say it in a sarcatstic way i dont think..Atleast he is not doing stupid shit like taking guns out and wanting to kill the other chacters And crap

but it is all cool...

Nods ... and besides you didnt half to think you were killing my chac off..I would have left that was not a problem..mako and angel... Shaking head...That was Sad...Gawd!!!...PPL!!

anyways Pooh had fun Role playing with you i hope to see you around..*waves*

 

[poohlive]

I don't have a problem with that at all. This is your thread, you said so in the beginning, they are your characters, you two can figure out what you want to do, control things in advance, hell, have fun, that's what we're all here to do anyway
But the problem is, Radical and I here aren't married, and we're just along for the ride. I mean, why did you ask for someone to play Paul if you were just going to control him anyway? If you and your wife just want to have some role play fun, you can do it in other places.
Honestly, in this RP forum there are some rules and guidelines, one of them being to not control other characters, and set some boundaries.
How would you like it if I had Mako start cooking lunch, or unchained Angel and let her go outside to get the mail and then come back? You'd think to yourself "Hey, this isn't what my character would do. That's not normal"
I'm just saying, we have more fun if we respect each other, and if you wanted other people to join the thread, you should really accept the fact that other people are joining, and not just control their characters anyway... that's pointless.

 

[angelique127]

I know what you mean, but I went back over the story and searched , looking for the offending control of your character and all I saw was where you helped me up on the table....if that is what you are refering to, you could have easily PMed us and it could have been edited out...we also assumed from your previous post that you would also like to move on in a sexual direction now !
Poohlive...I consider you a very fine writer, good luck in your future endevers. I am finding this stuff is extremely difficult to do...