GentleValkyrie
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The Dark Wilds (closed)
There was so much wrong with this. She was running through the woods at night. Everyone in the village knew not to go into the woods at night - the monsters were here and they were shy in the light, but they owned the darkness. It was wrong to go into the woods at night.
But she had gone. Fighting with her brother always made her reckless, made her braver than she should be. He was next in line to be Governor of their village, the little clutch of houses between dark wild woods and dark wild sea, clinging to the mountain under the bright sky. The only home she had ever known. The place of eternal safety that had been the same for all human memory, season after season. The village clung to survival, fishermen and hunters going into the wilds to one side or the other, women staying close and tending the growing things, children and tamed plants.
Her brother, the hunter, saw himself as the protector and thus the owner, of the village. He dreamt of making changes, pushing back the woods, laying his stamp on the world instead of letting the world teach him how to live.
She had gone into the woods to clear her head, align herself with the peace in the great trees, the hush and stillness of the eternal riot of nature. She didn't intend to go far, not out of where she could see the village, climb up to the overlook and watch the village from above, where she could see the ocean, see the houses laid out like toys, tiny sparks in the gathering darkness. It looked so perfect from here. Peaceful.
Everyone knew not to run in the woods. Not at all, not at night. These were not tamed plants, but great old trees, churned up earth and roots that tripped. This was not a forest that was kind to interlopers, and at night it was owned by things that hunted man more often than they were hunted by them. And hunters liked to chase.
She ran anyway, even knowing that she could be drawing eyes of yellow and green and red. Even knowing that the path was twisted and the ground could draw her down in a sprawl in an instant. None of this stopped her. She ran, heart pounding, long legs pumping, feet thudding, long blond hair streaming behind her. No time to worry about any of the things she had known since childhood.
She needed to be back in the village now. She never should have left. That's what she knew from what she had seen from the overlook. Tonight was a new night in the village. Tonight the village was full of flames and every hand would be needed to put them out. Her talents with healing would be needed later on.
She got closer and couldn't understand the chaos she was seeing through the trees. There didn't seem to be a water brigade set up at all. No line of buckets passed hand to hand from the well to the houses. Only screaming and running and men in armor. Fighting.
Raiders.
Raiders had come to the village. Raiders were the stories of travelers from distant lands, they hadn't come this far north since her grandfather was a boy. The notch in the mountain, the forest and the ocean kept the village safe. Until tonight. Tonight the village was full of flames and fighting.
Her footsteps slowed, smoke beginning to burn her nostrils as she breathed. Raiders in the village. They seemed bent on destroying everything they touched, killing old men and little children, encouraging the flames to devour every building, panicking the animals. A lone woman with a knife wouldn't save the village at this point. Nothing would.
She turned to move back into the darkness of the trees, dazed and thinking of hiding, perhaps. The rough, strong hands closed on her arms and her screams joined the rest, rising in the air like smoke.
There was so much wrong with this. She was running through the woods at night. Everyone in the village knew not to go into the woods at night - the monsters were here and they were shy in the light, but they owned the darkness. It was wrong to go into the woods at night.
But she had gone. Fighting with her brother always made her reckless, made her braver than she should be. He was next in line to be Governor of their village, the little clutch of houses between dark wild woods and dark wild sea, clinging to the mountain under the bright sky. The only home she had ever known. The place of eternal safety that had been the same for all human memory, season after season. The village clung to survival, fishermen and hunters going into the wilds to one side or the other, women staying close and tending the growing things, children and tamed plants.
Her brother, the hunter, saw himself as the protector and thus the owner, of the village. He dreamt of making changes, pushing back the woods, laying his stamp on the world instead of letting the world teach him how to live.
She had gone into the woods to clear her head, align herself with the peace in the great trees, the hush and stillness of the eternal riot of nature. She didn't intend to go far, not out of where she could see the village, climb up to the overlook and watch the village from above, where she could see the ocean, see the houses laid out like toys, tiny sparks in the gathering darkness. It looked so perfect from here. Peaceful.
Everyone knew not to run in the woods. Not at all, not at night. These were not tamed plants, but great old trees, churned up earth and roots that tripped. This was not a forest that was kind to interlopers, and at night it was owned by things that hunted man more often than they were hunted by them. And hunters liked to chase.
She ran anyway, even knowing that she could be drawing eyes of yellow and green and red. Even knowing that the path was twisted and the ground could draw her down in a sprawl in an instant. None of this stopped her. She ran, heart pounding, long legs pumping, feet thudding, long blond hair streaming behind her. No time to worry about any of the things she had known since childhood.
She needed to be back in the village now. She never should have left. That's what she knew from what she had seen from the overlook. Tonight was a new night in the village. Tonight the village was full of flames and every hand would be needed to put them out. Her talents with healing would be needed later on.
She got closer and couldn't understand the chaos she was seeing through the trees. There didn't seem to be a water brigade set up at all. No line of buckets passed hand to hand from the well to the houses. Only screaming and running and men in armor. Fighting.
Raiders.
Raiders had come to the village. Raiders were the stories of travelers from distant lands, they hadn't come this far north since her grandfather was a boy. The notch in the mountain, the forest and the ocean kept the village safe. Until tonight. Tonight the village was full of flames and fighting.
Her footsteps slowed, smoke beginning to burn her nostrils as she breathed. Raiders in the village. They seemed bent on destroying everything they touched, killing old men and little children, encouraging the flames to devour every building, panicking the animals. A lone woman with a knife wouldn't save the village at this point. Nothing would.
She turned to move back into the darkness of the trees, dazed and thinking of hiding, perhaps. The rough, strong hands closed on her arms and her screams joined the rest, rising in the air like smoke.
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