The intruder ( Looking for new co-writer in female role)

Jon moves to kiss her so his top lip is on her lower lip and he starts to give her quick little kisses over and over (butterfly kisses I think they are called). While letting his hands tease her body.

Jon knows shes not in a good mood. Something inside of him tells him she will run soon as she can get to her car. The predator en-stinks tell him to keep her here..... He teases her body willing not to have sex with her just yet... Something inside of him is telling him to tease her and punish her. Make her beg for it. Make her beg for you to please her only the way he can....

Jon knows by now a bear or something got wind of the moose kill that was left at the cabin.. He smiles and says "The moose would have drawn predators, not safe for a few days" then he goes back to kissing her and teasing the hell out of her sexually.

Jon isn't worried about food. He plans to keep her here for a hour or two then take her to the dugout with smoked meat is... Where his clothing is still hidden along with his knife and hatchet. Sure he can kill most any animal with his hands other then a bear and he knows they are not in bear country. If they where to run into one he knows how to deal with them with out fighting..
 
Debbie's Final Protest

Jon's kisses all over Debbie's lips shows her that he will not let up on her. Her feeling like she is his captive and his number one priority is to use her sexually. Jon doesn't talk much, so she doesn't feel much of a connection, he just wants to use her sexually. Jon also doesn't listen to her at all. He has broken her ground rules and seems to totally disrespect her.

Debbie continuing to feel his hands over her, caressing her and knowing he is going to use her sexually again. While her body continues to react her mind is pissed at Jon for holding her here.

When Jon tells her that she cannot go back to the cabin for a few days due to predators from the moose, Debbie angrily responds, "I have to go back, I'm not sleeping out here in some dugout with you. I need to go back to my cabin today, I don't care what animal is there, just take me back. Now let me up and leave me the fuck alone."

Knowing those are scary words to use against him, but also knowing she has to take a serious stand now. Hoping she shocks Jon with her outburst and he sees that she is completely serious about going back to her cabin.
 
Jon gets up for a second and turns her face down. He then drops hard on top of her. His hard cock pressing down to the ground. The shaft rubbing her cunt lips. He grabs her by the hips and starts to pull her hips up as he thrusts down....

He plans to make her beg still.
 
Debbie's Losing Battle

Debbie hating that Jon totally ignores what she said as he flips her on her belly and gets on top of her, Debbie feeling his massive muscular weight. Knowing she cannot fight him off as she is pressed to the ground.

Feeling his hard cock pushing against her cunt lips. Debbie tries to close her legs, but then feels his hands on her hips and pulling her hips up as his cock is forced into her. She grunts, not only from the shock but of her feeling defeated as he is about to raped her again. Debbie feeling like a piece of meat as he traps her and begin to rape her on the hard ground.
 
After the 7th thrust along her cunt lips Jon moves a hand to her clit pushing his palm into it and guiding his cock into her. He dose long low stroke. Pulling back so his cocks head is at her cunt lip before sinking back into her depth. He enjoys the slow pace while his palm still is crushing her clit. He takes his other hand grabbing a hand full of her hair at the neck an pulls her head back while pushing her down into the dirt with his forearm on her shoulder blades.
 
Getting Methodically Fucked

Feeling the long slow thrusts of his cock inside her cunt as it feels like Jon is punishing her instead of fucking her for pleasure. Debbie now knowing that Jon seemingly wants to prove that he controls her and not the other way. Her hating the fact that she said she wants to leave and now she is pinned to the ground on her belly and being methodically raped.

Her body again reacts to his hand on her clit combined with the slow thrusting of his cock inside her. Jon seemingly wanting to drive her to the edge but withholding her from cumming. Debbie feeling confused as she knows she is being raped, but she also wants to cum so badly.

Debbie feels him grab her hair and yank her head back as she feels her body pushed hard into the dirt. She yells out, "You bastard, you will be sorry". Knowing her ass is now forced upwards more and also knowing that at this point she is nothing more than an object for him to fuck and abuse. Her anger and hate mixed with her being sexually edged only confusing her more.
 
With her outburst Jon smashes her clit harder with slower thrusts of his hips. He hopes this drives her crazy as punishment. He don't want to hurt her. He wants to brake her spirit, make her want him and beg to be with him.

He silently thrusts. The only sounds in the room is coming from her... Her cunt and the moans or groans with the griping. He is feeling grate deal of joy dominating her. Knowing she don't want him but part of her is craving him. The love/hate she has for him with in her. He is enjoying fucking her as well the entertainment of her fighting with her self. Her spirit and will is her worst enemy.
 
The Sweaty Orgasm

As Jon methodically thrusts inside her, the sounds her cunt juices are making is embarrassing for Debbie. It's like a giant warning flag with the words broadcaster on it, "I'm Very Sexually Excited". But there is nothing Debbie can do about it, she is excited and miserable this is happening to her. That she has no control and is his captive.

Debbie moans are mixed with groans and grunts as Jon roughly presses into her clit as his thrusts are enough to drive her crazy. She feels herself about to cum again and begins releasing again onto Jon's cock. Her legs shake and Debbie moans loudly feels another gush of cum pouring out of her cunt. Her moans of pleasure quickly become groans of regret as he has forced her to cum again, just what he wanted. It's totally humiliating for her to cum again, knowing he won. Her body is totally exhausted now and she feels defeated, drained and weak. Debbie lays against the ground with Jon still on top, feeling completely soaked with sweat and hating herself.
 
Hammer time

As she starts to cum on his hard cock he shifts from long and very slow to fast short and hard thrust. His hips slapping hard into her hips. The jarring rubs her clit into his palm and also causes short little yanks of her hair. He is so not done with her. He needs to punish her good.... He now starts to bite softly on her neck and back of her shoulder.
 
Debbie's Protest

The orgasm for Debbie was very intense and exhaustion has taken hold, she is sweating and uncomfortable and just wants to rest and have her own space. With him on top it's suffocating.

She feels him biting her softly on her neck and shoulder, him seemingly being romantic, as much as the wild man can possibly be. Or he is starting up again and she will be raped again. Knowing she can only take so much, she is already sore and needs it to stop.

She blurts out, "Jon, you need to stop fucking me, NOW. I need to rest, you are gonna kill me if you continue to fuck me, so stop". The tone in her voice is angry mixed with frustration. She adds, "You have to get off me and let me up. I cannot stay like this, you cannot keep me captive."
 
Riding the wave up da-nile

Jon hears her being firm trying to assert her self over him. He growls as he starts to softly bite/nibble on her lower ear. His breaths blowing into her ear.

He keeps short/fast hard thrusts into her. Soon as she sounds like she is getting close to cumming he stops for a minute then picks up just as fast. He keeps working her near orgasm to stop and be stiff as a board.

If he cant fuck her and brake her he is going to try to drive her crazy by getting her so close and not letting her cum. He keeps the fun game up 8 times. On the 9th he lets her cum. As she is about to cum he whispers into her ear "my gift".
 
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Sexually Controlling Debbie

Jon just growls at Debbie's angry words and instead begins thrusting his cock into her cunt, from slow to fast and hard. With his now fast thrusting Debbie feels herself getting close to cumming again, her moans of pleasure mix with groans of frustration and wonders why is he continuing to do this to to her.

With the palms of his hand rubbing her clit and his deliberate slow but hard thrusting inside her cunt she is again about to cum. But then he stops just as she is about to release. Debbie moans in frustration as she was seconds away from cumming. Jon remains still with his cock inside her for a few minutes and then begins again, slow hard thrusts into her cunt again. With each thrust her hair is yanked and Debbie's mouth opens as she grunts, the thoughts of him taking her like this and being like a cave man are very real.

Again Debbie is close to cumming and he stops as he again remains inside her. Repeating this as Debbie knows his goal is to control her sexually. Debbie begins thinking maybe he won't let her cum, but then he says "my gift" and on the 9th time he lets her cum and she feels herself gush cum onto his cock. Feeling total ecstasy as well as relief.

Despite the intense sexual feeling, Debbie hates that Jon has controlled her like this, knowing he did it to frustrate her and show her that he owns her physically, mentally and sexually. Debbie stares straight ahead nearly in shock and wonders what he intends to do next, sexually and every other way as she lays there with her body coated with sweat.
 
Carrot or the stick?

Jon pushes his made down so her body is trapping his hand under her over her clit. He lays on top of her as he is sweaty. He takes his teeth and hold her lower earlobe firmly but softly in his teeth letting his tongue slowly flicker over her skin playing with her ear. Jon has lots of energy in him, but he wants to give his mate time to recover. To see what her actions are like. He is doubting she is willing to stay with him so quickly.

Jon thinks back on how much fun it was to get her so worked up and then stop. He is going to have to remember that as a form of driving her crazy.

After about 10 seconds for her cumming. He now starts to kiss her neck and shoulder area. He can feel some life coming back into her body from her rage doll limp state.
 
Debbie's Desperate Plan

Again Jon begins kissing Debbie's neck and shoulder, her knowing he is going to get her excited again despite her protests and telling him enough. She is sore, exhausted and sweaty as she thinks about escaping. Making a run for it out of the dugout and into the woods and search for her cabin and drive off in her car. Debbie decides against that idea for a number of reasons, one she doesn't know her way back, two she would be having to run and hide from Jon while she is naked and in the woods that is probably not a good idea, three she probably cannot escape his grip on her and four he may very well kill her or keep her chained up if she is caught.

But she thinks of a new idea, to make Jon think she likes him and wants to be with him forever. She realizes that is worth a try and she thinks she will easily succeed in convincing Jon she is in love with him and wants him around. It will take some convincing but Debbie is willing to do whatever is necessary to get out of this situation.

While Jon is kissing Debbie's neck, she looks at Jon and says, "I want to make you feel good, I want to suck you and make you cum in my mouth. I know you will love how it feels and it's my gift to you. You have been so good to me. Jon I want to be with you forever, you are special to me, I want you to be happy and I want to live with you forever"
 
Jon is shocked by the change of her attitude. From saying how she was going to leave and he would never see her again. To how she wants to be with him. Jon roles to his back pulling her on top of him. He lays on his back trying to think.

He wanted to listen to her. He was having a hard time with it from the massive shift.
 
Debbie's Tongue

Now rolled over and Debbie laying on top of Jon as she is held. She sees that Jon appears confused by her abrupt 180, but she continues with that plan, "Jon, I just want to show you how much I am in love with you, I want to make you feel really good. Let me do that for you"

With that Debbie scoots down towards Jon's cock and first touches it. He is extremely hard, so she caresses it some and then lowers her mouth unto it, but just licking the tip start. Hoping Jon reacts how she wants him to and he realizes that she would not do this if she didn't love him.

Debbie feeling confident her plan will work.
 
Licking is fun

With her down by his legs. Jon sits up and looks down at her. He watches as she licks his cock teasing him. He grabs her hips and pulls them around so shes now over him. Jon starts to kiss the inside of her thighs as he gently tug at her ankles so she lowers her hips to his chest.

After about 8 licks and kisses. Jon asks "can we sleep like this tonight" Jon now starts to lick her clit right after asking not waiting for her to answer.
 
Debbie Loses Her Concentration

As Debbie is teasing Jon's cock by just licking the tip, she is quickly turned around and within a second Jon is now licking her clit. She hears him pause to ask if they can sleep like this the whole night. Debbie is surprised at that request as she does not want to be licking him and being licked the entire night. She responds, "We can do this until I'm tired, I love this Jon"

She positions herself so she can suck his cock instead of just licking the tip, she takes his cock into her mouth and rides down it, very slowly. Then back up, making sure to coat it with lots of her saliva. She rides it back down, her tongue against his cock as she continues to coat it.

But with Jon licking her clit as she is doing this, she is becoming too excited and has trouble concentrating and giving him a great blow job. Instead Debbie begins slobbering as she feel herself close to cumming. She picks her head up and says to Jon, "Stop licking me for a couple of minutes I can't concentrate and I wanna make you cum Jon"
 
Jon stops his actions as he lets her do what she is planing on doing. Jon is shocked to find she is so talented with her mouth. Jon says in a moan "anytime for you."
 
Debbie Sucks Jon

Debbie hears Jon's words "anytime for you" and she knows she has him where she wants him. So after this she intends to tell him she wants to head back to her cabin, with him of course. Then her plan will go from there.

Debbie begins riding Jon's hard cock again as she grips his hips and then cups his balls. His cock is so wide it takes up her mouth. She enjoys controlling Jon as his cock throbs in her mouth. Debbie riding it up and down, slowly now and making sure she gets his cock nice and coated with her saliva. Her tongue sliding along his cock as it throbs more and she begins to taste Jon's precum. Knowing he is getting closer as she hears his moans.

The taste on his cock is a combination of her cum and his and Jon's own manly smell. Debbie continues to ride Jon's cock but now increases her speed, feeling it throb more as Debbie mouth goes up and down on his wide cock. Then feeling him cum, his first spurt hitting the roof of her mouth and then Jon releases a flood of thick cum, completely filling Debbie's mouth.

Debbie gulps and tries to breathe as the volume of his thick cum is huge. She manages to swallow some and then gulps again and swallows more. Finally Jon's cum diminishes in her mouth. She swallows again and then begins to clean up his cock with her tongue. When it's completely clean Debbie then pulls up and hugs Jon really tight and says, "I really enjoyed that Jon, now I need to rest back at my cabin, with you of course." She looks at Jon and gives him a big smile.
 
More tree spankings

Jon is very relaxed after his mate gave him a long teasing blowjob. She asks about going to the cabin and he remembers the moose laying in the cabin with no front door.. Jon says "later when safe." Jon then lightly pushes her head down and says "rest here"

Jon knows he has to go to one of his other dugouts for his clothing. If he is going to go to the cabin and make it safe he will need his hatchet and knife that is attached to his hip area of the pants with a built in sheath. As Jon lays there and rests. He thinks about how much he will enjoy running with his mate over the shoulder. He now knows the trees smacking her ass and legs will turn her on, and her aroused smell drives him wild.

He rests for a hour then scoops her up. Her head behind him as her hips is just foreword of his body so her legs hang down over his chest. This area of the forest has lots of pine trees. Jon is having fun running using her legs and but as a shield from the pines. As he gets lower the trees go from mostly pine to mix of evergreen and maple and oaks. Jon tries to make as many trees hit her in the ass or back of the legs as he can while running to where he needs to go.

As Jon runs he can enjoy her wetness grow with each tree they run past.
 
Nature's Spanking

It's actually relaxing laying here with Jon. Debbie knowing that she has convinced Jon to take her back to her cabin. Debbie turns her head away from Jon and grins a bit knowing that her plan to get back to the cabin is going to be successful. Of course she had to work for it, but it was okay as long as the end goal is escaping. But she also knows that the sex between her and Jon is mind blowing. Despite that, her need to get out from under the cave man lifestyle and Jon's attitude towards her to just take what he wants is not good for her. Her goal is simple, escape.

Suddenly Debbie is scooped up over Jon's shoulder and she knows the routine now. It will be another of nature's ass beating. Despite it stinging and hurting she gets very wet from it. She knows that Jon knows this and it's the reason why he carries her like that. Debbie knows that Jon is much smarter than his appearance or actions. But smart in a cave man like way, which since she cannot control doesn't want.

Jon races downhill as the pine branches smack Debbie's ass. The pines being soft against her ass and thighs and it feels kind of good, like a gentle spanking. It succeeds in getting her wet again. As they continue downhill the trees change from pines to lots of maples and oaks. Those feel much different on her ass and thighs, more of a stinging hard beating. Some of them whipping her ass hard, but oddly enough Debbie likes it, and a lot. She feels herself getting very excited and she knows Jon can sense it, probably by his keen smell. This embarrasses Debbie some, but regardless it's worth it because of the way her cunt reacts. She does very much enjoy Jon's way of spanking her.
 
Jon take her near his first dugout and sets her down for a second. He walks over to a near by downed tree where he grabs his pants and slip into them. He turns around with a devulish grin on his face as his eyes move up and down his mates body.

He is watching her to see what her reaction is. As he ponders to take her to the smoke house dugout.
 
Rest Stop or Onward to the Cabin?

Debbie watches Jon as he places her down and she watches him get dressed. It makes her self conscious and she covers her body with her arms and folds her legs up. Debbie feeling like she too should have clothes on. Plus she doesn't want to be in his dugout, she wants to be in her own cabin. She wants to be civilized and have her own place, that is why she purchased the cabin.

She looks up at Jon and with a firm voice states, "Jon, you are gonna take me back to my cabin now right? Remember if we are gonna have a relationship you have to listen to the things I want." Debbie hoping that Jon understands that and picks her back up and takes her down to her cabin.
 
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